Arshi TS : Dil Bhi Kitna Pagal Ha Part 2 page 19 :) completed

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: -BlueEyes-
RESSS :O
*Edited*

And you said that you couldn't write well? 😆 You crazy girl! I loved it. 😳 The whole aura you created by those beautiful lines and the impact of each and every word. The timing of that kiss was perfect and the way you showed Arnav and Khushi was fantastic. Khushi's belief, her trust on Arnav was very well explained and i could understand how hurt she must be feeling, and how she must have consoled herself that Arnav would come. Listening to others say that he wouldn't come was disheartening but she would never lose her trust on Arnav. She still had hope, till the very end that he would be back, he had to come right?

Very well written 😃 & Keep it up 😳 👏 I can't write long comments like you and plus your post was very small. I want longer updates Superb!

Keep writing and take care 😊😉 Love youu 🤗

Manjari 😎

manjari 🤗thnks for d awsm cmnt aftr being busy wid ur studies and exam u still read dis 😲😲 cmntt or long doesnt mattter😳😳 appreciation doo😃😃

dis upd8 wil be long one😆😆

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: ssyahoo
What a nice surprise.. A two shot from you :)

First of all congratulations to Astha for getting married and happy birthday Vandana! And a hi to cheesemad too 😊

Very cute love story. Khushi has full faith that Arnav will return for her and so do I! I am sure he has a good reason for not contacting her, but hope you update soon! Thanks for the pm :)

Dii😲 😲aap v idhar😆😆 😆i m soo glad u lovd d cncpt 😳

according to me d reason is fair enough nw upto u ol to decide whether its good or nt😕😕

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ArshiAms

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf
raat ko kiddo pakka😳😳

raatko?!!!mai nai rahungi😭😭😭

hmmm its ok

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: aishu3003
Hola 😃
Hope u remember me 🤣
Finally got a TS from u 😉
Awesome start 👏
Arshi n luv 😳
Arnav leaving her to study n harvard
Y he din contact her 🥺
Moi eagerly waiting for d update 😉

Yupp hum apko bhool jaye ntt possible⭐️

u wil knw soon aishu y he didnt contact her

thnks for liking it 🤗

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: ArshiAms

raatko?!!!mai nai rahungi😭😭😭
hmmm its ok

main likh rhi hu kiddo wil take some tym

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Dil Bhi Kitna Pagal Hai

It was the same day when she confessed .. The day she had met him for the last time ..
The very day since when he didn't try to contact her. However today khushi was feeling different she didn't know but she
had a feeling that everything would be changing today for good or bad she
had no idea of it... And to calm down her nerves she arrived at the
same place where she knew she would find peace of mind and she could think of him.

It was almost mid noon when she returned back home.. And was surprised and
shocked to find him sitting in the middle of the sofa with two ladies
each side and on the side sofa, a man wearing specs was sitting .. She didn't understand what
was happenning all she knew was, he was here in front of her eyes..

After what seems like ages she finally saw seeing him. Was this hallucination
or a reality she didn't know neither she tried to know ... She just ran to him
and hugged him tightly with all her strength as If she would leave him he
would disappear and she wouldn't get him back... She was crying on his
chest mumbling something which no one could understand .. And then all
of a sudden she broke the hug looked angrily towards him and left from
there.. To the same place she had just returned from..

Everybody was watching them .. And then arnav spkoe " I will bring her
back... I know where she is now"
...

Khushi sensed him when he was following her .. She didn't change the
way she was going because this was the chance when she could get her answer
from him ... For all those years when she was waiting for him , the
believe she had shown in him and he didn't even bother to
look back once... She was angry hurt sad yet she couldn't believe he
was here..

"Khushi ...!!! Khushi ..!! Stop running and listen to me once please
khushi ...!! He knew the damage he had done and he was ready
to pay anything .. Becasue somewhere he knew, he was wrong,
he shouldn't have agreed to the condition four back years..But
he was helpless that time..

''I LOVE YOU KHUSHI...!! LOVE YOU MORE THEN MY LIFE''

''Where was your love in these four years Mr.Arnav ...?? Did you ever
think about me, about us, about our love in these four years ...??''
She was angry and in anger she didn't even realize what all she was saying
and what effect it was having on arnav he stood still listening to her
accusition.. Doesn' t she know how much he loved her, he thought.

Taking a deep breathe .. He decided it was neither the time nor the place to
argue whether he loved her or not ... Right now he had to make her
understand without revealing the reason why he didn't make any contact to
her in four years..

''Khushi do you trust me and my love for you ...??''Arnav asked ''What kind of
question is that ofcourse i do ..!! Khushi replied while crying but
not looking at him ,..''I hope you do remember i dont like you crying
and what i did last time when you were crying'' Arnav tried to lighten
the mood and make her smile.. Khushi lips automatically turned into an 'O' listening to him teasing and she instantly stopped crying,..

''I dont want talk to you i will also make you suffer for four years
like you made me suffer .. ''Never say that again samjhi tum..Do
you have any idea how i lived without you.. No you don't know!

''Khushi look into my eyes! do you really think i can cheat on you.. ON
MY KHUSHI WHOM I HAVE LOVED MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE IN THE
WORLD...Khushi all i want to say is that just leave the past and see the
present and future.. We are meant to be together and thats all i know
about us ..''

''I dont know arnav what to say but i know one thing for sure
I LOVE YOU TOO... And i cant imagine living without you anymore..
Please don't leave me and go this time arnav...''

...

Soon they were walking back to the Gupta's house hand in hand .. Arnav
didn't leave staring at Khushi's face for a second also... And this made
khushi blush more blabbering ''Laad Governor'' under her breath she
kept looking down ,... She knew why Raizadas was here and was now
waiting for khushi answer...

But before that khushi father spoke to arnav '' I hope arnav you have
confessed the truth to khushi'' Shashi knew from the sparkle of
happiness in her eyes arnav must have not uttered a word to his
daughter about the condition he kept infront of arnav on the last day
when he was leaving for his studies ..

''No uncle .. And i think you should also forget about it was for the
good of everyone.. Kam se kam mujhe pata toh chala
mujhe kitna miss kiya jata hai'' He said looking towards khushi...

''No beta i know what you are doing but she has the right to
know the truth ..Why didn't you contact her .. My
daughter loves you and the extent of her love cannot be measured ..But
you also have suffered along with her..''

''Bhaat is happening...?? Koi humka explainiayega kya ..?''Said arnav's mami

''Manoramaji i knew arnav loves khushi ...And when my child confessed
her love for him in front of me ,..I went to arnav
and kept a condition infront of him ...That if he loves khushi .. He
will never try to contact her until and unless he proves himself worthy enough for my daughter t.. Prove me he will provide her security for her rest of life.. I know i was wrong to do this b...''

''But you were a father of a daughter uncle''Arnav spoke And every father does get worried for their children's future.. I will
say that your condition made me do more hard work
and just because of your condition I am ASR for the world now!

''You are ASR'' Khushi spoke for the first time after returning ..
''Yup The Arnav Singh Raizada'' Arnav replied proudly looking at
everyone smiling faces

''Khushi I know you will be angry on me but I didn't want to ruin your

relationship with your dad..''Arnav said looking at khushi face..

''But what about me Arnav? You and dad both kept this hidden from
me..'' Khushi was hurt ..

'' I am sorry beta .. I am at fault..'' Shashi spoke middle

''No uncle...Please don't say this.. Khushi why don't you see the
brighter side.. It was your dad who brought the marriage proposal of
yours to my family...'' Arnav tried to make her understand

Now this was another shock for khushi. The truth she came
to know today was something she didn't even dream of.. Khushi was in her
own world that she didn't realize ki arnav have come near her and now
was holding her hand..

He took her in the room and slammed his lips on her he was unable to
see her like this was the main reason he didn't want to speak the truth
to her... ''Speak to me khushi .. I don't want our past to rule our
present.. I want to have a future with you ..''

''I hope you know what I want ..We have waited for so long Khushi .. I
don't wan to wait any more now .. Say your answer soon ..''
''I am waiting outside don't take another four years like me''

...

''By the way you know Arnavji what preeto use to say in those four
year when I used to talk about you'' Said a grinning khushi..

''What...??

''Arnav puran''

''What the ...?? What Arnav Puran ...??

''Arnav Puran... Arnavji .. Because whenever she use to say that you
won't come I never believed her and used to talk about those times,
those promises we had spent with each other,...''

''And now what does your friend presto say after we are married?''

''That I was a true lover who believed in you inspite of everything''

''Never leave me alone Arnavji ..Hum apke bina nahi reh payenge...And
thank you for showing me the correct way..Shayad hum apki jagah hote
toh aisa kuch nai kar pate... Aap bohot ache hai Arnavji..''

''I Love You''

''I Love You Too''

Won't you express your love to me like our first night...'' Arnav winked at Khushi and kissed her passionately

...

Thanku for such a awesome response... 🤗 trust me when i say dis i hve never ever gt dis type of response ever😳😳

Even though the last update was short i tried to make dis a long one

P.S Cheeni thnkuuu 🤗😳

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Cheeni

Edited:)

Loved the chapter, it was truly awesome!

SO this was the reason he didn't contact her?! He was doing this for her own good.

That was sweet😳

I cannot say that Shashi was wrong, he did this only for his daughter and any father would do that. I am glad that ASR understood that😃

Khushi was not wrong too, in all these things she had to suffer the most. May her dad should have told her about the condition. In this way everything would have been better.

Aww they got married:)

I demand a new SS! :D

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Didi

Such a beautiful update Barfi...
Totally loved it... 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️

I had a big smile on my face when Khushi hugged him after seeing him...
Beautiful moment... ❤️

And then when Arnav explained her his feeling...Simply wonderful...

And the best line was "Kam se kam mujhe pata toh chala
mujhe kitna miss kiya jata hai" Hayyeee mera Arnav kitna cute hai...

I was overwhelmed after knowing the reason behind Arnav not contacting Khushi...
Hatts off to him... 👏 👏 👏

Jitne Pyaare Arnav Khushi, utna hi pyaara unka pyaar and usse bhi pyaara ye TS... ❤️
Loved it yaar...

I wanted to read more Barfi...It was not enough...

Hope u will fulfill my req soon...

And I forgot to mention in my last comment...The song used was beautiful...

Hope u will come back soon Barfi...
Love u...

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago