Arshi TS : Dil Bhi Kitna Pagal Ha Part 2 page 19 :) completed

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Dil Bhi Kitna Pagal Ha



Khushi was sitting near the window thinking about those precious time she had spent with him. He was the only one who used to understand her every problem whether she was sad, happy, angry.

He was the sole reason of her existence and today he was nowhere to be found. She was waiting for him, after so many years she was still waiting for him. His promise, the only promise he had made to her that he will return for her only her. But her wait seemed to be never ending. It had been four year since he went making a promise to return.

"Khushi...Khushiii...Khushhiii..Kahan kho gayi tu..Phirse apne Arnav ka khyalon mein toh nai khoyi hui hai? Jo ab tak nai aya woh ab kya ayega"

"Preeto I trust my Arnav if he has made a promise then I know he will definitely fulfill it"




Kitna Pagal Dil Hai

Kaisi Yeh Mushkil Hai

Bewaja Kisi Pe Intazaar Kare

Jo Bhi Yahan Pyaar Kare

Jeena Dushwaar Kare

Jo Bhi Yahan Pyaar Kare

Jeena Dushwaar Kare

Hayeee ...!!!



"Ya Ya Ya i know, you and your arnav, made for each other types. Its not for the first time I am listening to your Arnav Puran" Preeto said rolling her eyes.

"You know na Preeto he is not just my friend but only hope, my love, my life and the only person whom I can rely on!

"Fine" Preeto saying this left Khushi in her world


Apne mehbub sanam ko dil kabhi bhul naa paye

Sath chalte hai pal pal biti yado ke saye

Chand tare bujh jayey, rat kali ho jayey

Ek bhi warna ho toh, dooniya khali ho jayey

Har lamha deedar kare, jina dushwar kare hai

Hayeee ...!!!

Har lamha deedar kare, jina dushwar kare hai

Hayeee ...!!!

Jo Bhi Yahan Pyaar Kare

Jeena Dushwaar Kare

Jo Bhi Yahan Pyaar Kare

Jeena Dushwaar Kare


Flashback

"Khushi you love me na? Say once again that you love me...Oh my god I can't believe that my shy rehne wali khushi finally confessed her love for me! I feel like jumping around the whole world. I want to tell everyone that you are mine and only mine.."Arnav said hearing Khushi confession.

You say arnav tum bhi kuch bolna chahte the mujhko isliye tumne mujhko itni jaldi yahan bulaya ab kuch bolego ya phir sirf mujhko hi dekhte rahoge, she said feeling shy after her confession

"Jeeez ..!! Yes Khushi main Harvard ja raha hu! I got selected there. I got my acceptance letter today in the morning! You are so lucky for me Khushi. So so damn lucky!!

"Today is the best day of my life. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH Khushi." Saying this he pulled her into a bone crushing hug.

"What about me? How will I stay without you? But I m happy for you Arnav! Very happy! Waise when are you leaving for Harvard university?" She said trying to change the topic

"Khushi look at me once you know I cant see you sad. If you say such thing how I m going to go and make bright future for us?"

"I m sorry Arnav for the outburst but I can't live without you for a sec and here you will go for how many years I don't have any idea how will I survive? And more over there will be more beautiful girls around you what if .." Her rest of the words never left her mouth.

Arnav sensed what was going to come and before those words came he landed his lips on her and kissed her furiously a kiss of promise, conveying those feeling which was in his heart for this mad girl

whom he loved madly crazily since the time he had met her. He have confessed his feelings to Khushi much before and he knew she also reciprocated the same for him but realization would take time. Soon Khushi's hands came around his neck and she was kissing him back fighting for dominance, tasting each and every corner of his mouth they kissed for a long time and left when breathing became necessary for them.

When arnav saw Khushi, her lips were swollen and she kept eyes down casted not meeting his smirking looks.

"Wow mujhko nahi pata tha tum itna acha kiss karti ho..!! He teased her.

Ouch..Ouch...Ouch..!!" Khushi was feeling shy and when he started teasing she started hitting him with her small palms although it didn't have any effect on him but he acted just for her happiness.

"Khushi trust me when I say I m yours that means I m only yours and I will return for you, for us, for our future.

That day they parted with a promise to meet again for their ove, their future.

Flashback ends

That was the day Khushi saw her Arnav for the last time. It had been four years and yet there was no sign of Arnav, neither did he call or tried to contact khushi



Ankho ankho se koyi teer chalta rehta hai

Iss kadar sawan me bhi jism jalta rehta hai

Pyas jitni roku mai utni badhti jati hai

Dooriyo kee bechaini mujhko uh tadpati hai

Shamo sehar bejar kare, jina dushwar kare hai

Shamo sehar bejar kare, jina dushwar kare hai

Jo bhi yaha pyar kare, jina dushwar kare hai

Kitna pagal dil hai, kaise yeh mushkil hai

Bewaja kisi pe aitbar kare

Jo bhi yaha pyar kare, jina dushwar kare hai

Jo bhi yaha pyar kare, jina dushwar kare hai

Hai hai...






How was dis plss noo rotten tomatoes nor sandals šŸ˜” comments and likes will doo😳😳.. Proofreading credit cheesemad aka meri cheeni .. šŸ˜› Tu best hai and i love u ā¤ļø

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Many reasons for wich i wrote dis šŸ˜›

  1. Cheeni wanted smthng frm me
  2. Dis is totally a random one bcz wen i was listening to d song i urgd to write it down 🤢
  3. Vandana dii i m also trying to give ur belated brthdy gift now 😳
  4. My Astha dii is gttng married šŸ˜†jao jao aapne real barun/arnav ka pass jao ab jo hai barun mera hai 😈
Plsss wish my dii in dis link


Best Wishes For New Journey Astha Dii

P.S Dis isnt over just one more updatešŸ˜Ž



Part 2
Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me

Edited:)
I am so glad you decided to write again! you know I was actually waiting for this moment:) I knew someday you would come around:P


Talking about the story, I am so happy that you wrote this one. It is absolutely wonderful and amazing.

But why did not Arnav call her even once? I believe there must be something and like Khushi I too believe in Arnav and you😃

Ask Preeto to stay away from my ASR, he cannot break his promise ever. Ahh I am loving this day. Firstly a TS from you and secondly, my friend got her iPhone back so we are going to get a partyšŸ˜›

Continue soon, can't wait:D
Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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avni didi

Kaan Pakad ke Sorry Barfi...I know u dont like me saying sorry but I will say this time coz I am the last one to comment and I am feeling bad...

But after reading this TS I am very happy... 😃
This was so so so beautiful...I just loved it... šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ ā­ļø

U wrote a TS and left it on cliffhanger...That's not fair...

But the piece was amazing...

Khushi's feelings and the little past with Arnav was wonderful...
I wanted to read more... šŸ˜”

Khushi is waiting for him since 4yrs...Superb yaar...
Now I would wait for my Arnav to come...I know he will come back for his Khushi...

Continue soon barfi...
Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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astha didi

~Unres by Astha~

OMG!!!! RG u decided 2 write again n dedicated it 2 ME?????

Beautifully written... I wonder y didn't Arnav ever contacted Khushi???

Song was beautiful n I'm eagerly waiting 4 d nxt part...

P.S. d KISS was HAWT... šŸ˜‰
Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dhanno

me...here...
thank god kisi ko yad hai main bhi hu...😭...thanks for the res basantišŸ¤—
so.so.so...pinch me plz...you are back pooji...
tell me you are...haina?

woaaa...so celebration time...

mera jiju😭...(kya kya karwaoge muj se...mere crush ko mera jiju bna dala🤣)...but khush mat ho...sath mein teri sotan bhi haišŸ˜ˆšŸ˜ŽšŸ¤£
in our style...šŸ˜‰

you are back that too with this awesome piece...hats off its so good...
kya bat haišŸ‘

seriously...beautiful...so he left her to pursue his dreams...and now she is waiting for him...4 years and he have'nt come back yet...😭

i hope its not true what i m thinking now😳
hats off pooji...beautiful piece of writing...


waiting for next part...continue soonish...😳
till then...bbye...
Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hum bhi!! 😳
Edited:
Lakhon sorry for the late unres Pooji!! 😳 I didn't know you write so well!! I am glad your cheeni pushes you to write... you should keep writing!! This is such a cute story... the bond between Arnav and Khushi was so endearing... EVen after four years Khushi is still waiting for her Arnav... because he had promised that he would return for her... Her proclamation of her love was so sweet... and loved the way he teased her about it... But why has he never called her? WHy didn't he keep in touch? Aisa kya ho gaya Pooji?? I am dying to know... will he come back for her?? ANd not with some other chick... please please answer my question!!! 😔 (This is just because you love this emo so much!!)

Update soon!! 😳
Edited by mints23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😔
Edited!

Itna short
I loved their love and its confession but felt sad when they separated :'(
And arnav hasn't contacted her, like not at all?
This better be a happy ending story!
Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now that you have res-ed, when are you planning to post the OSšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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resšŸ˜†šŸ˜†
unresšŸ˜†

Awesome!!
I am big fan of these kind of stories, where one of the lead is kind of tadaping🤣 for the other, I mean to say waiting for the other onešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Loved it Poooja😳😳kya baath hienšŸ˜‰
(credits:Komal ka postšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†)

jaldi se dusra part update kar, I am waiting😳😳😳😳


Edited by ajoop - 11 years ago

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