Originally posted by: atif4ever
T.H.I.S W.A.S A.W.E.SO.M.E
I LOVED IT...!
UPDATE SOON...!
thank you so much😃
will update soon
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Originally posted by: atif4ever
T.H.I.S W.A.S A.W.E.SO.M.E
I LOVED IT...!
UPDATE SOON...!
awesome update..
love the family's bonding..they are so outspoken..zeenet's tease were so cute..asad blushing..zoya teases him along..update soon..
Originally posted by: shishiksg
Nice update
Waiting for ajmer
Update.soon
Originally posted by: BeYourself
hi...
sorry for being so late to comment...
i liked the teasing part a lot..i myself enjoy teasing newly wedded couples...😆
very nice update...please update soon...😊
it is ok.. no problems...
thank you so much😃.. for ur comments...
Honey moon special: a bit mature- read at ur own risk... co authored by Navi 55
As they back from their Ajmer trip, asad and zoya winded up all their office commitment s for the month...everything was set .. for their honeymoon... both of them looking forward for it... as in those few weeks.. it will be just asad and zoya... and their build up passion for each other... for last 5 years.. both of them had dreams and imaginations of how they will spend their time with each other... only with each other.
Khan villa:
Zoya was sitting in the lounge and was looking at the door, as if she was eagerly waiting for someone to come. Not just zoya , zeenat, Dilshad and asya were also waiting for their new guest. Asad has gone to the airport to pick their new friend... as soon as zoya heard the sound of asad SUV... she went and opened the door to see asad with their new friend..
Z: hai navi nice to see u ... in person... and took navi for a hug..
Navi: the pleasure is all mine... sorry i was little late.
Z: no problem... i know how hectic of life is...
Ze: i already liked ur OS.. on these two... it was pretty good...
Navi: thank u so much..., r u guys ready for ur honeymoon...
A: yup... our flight is another 2 hours... thank u so much for suggesting bali... it is a lovely place...
Navi: yeah... have a good and hot time there... enjoy...
A: you too navi... hope i get someone.. who will support me...
Navi: yeah pretty soon...magdhingra is really feeling bad that everyone is taking zoya side and not urs...
A: thanks vaishu... at least u care about me... among all these zoya fans...
A: hope u had nice stay at our home.. with asya and my family... sorry we have to leave now.
Navi: it is ok.. enjoy ur honeymoon... as i have written it for them... it is going to be one hot ride for u guys...
Take care...
Over to navi
Location Bali.. time evening
She walked out to the balcony to enjoy the beautiful sunset. The cool breeze caressed her face and body gently like a lovers caress. Unmindful that she had just woken up from a deep slumber and that her hair probably resembles a bird's nest she continued watching the amazing display outside. What a kaleidoscope of colours she thought, a warm and vibrant red to an amazing auburn and then changing to a magical magenta. This sunset was surely a representation of all the colours of love she thought dreamily.
She looked around the room finally noticing that she was the only one present here "I wonder where he could have gone" she said to herself. She investigated more closely her present surroundings. The room was gorgeous, it was light and airy. The grand bed dominated the room with sheer curtains draping it in warmth. She walked into the large bathroom and stared in awe at the giant bathtub that probably could seat four comfortably. The shower stall was just as huge surrounded by chrome buttons and dials. She walked back out to take a look outside the bungalow and was further astonished to see a private spa area with a huge Jacuzzi at its centre. The entire area was surrounded by fragrant blooms and tall palm trees. It looked so inviting and exotic. He had spared no expense and it seemed as if this was her very own piece of heaven.
She stopped admiring her surroundings as she realised that it was getting later and he still had not arrived. She thought that she should go outside and look for him but first she should make herself presentable "Wouldn't want to scare anyone" she smiled to herself. She took a long leisurely shower using the bath products that the resort had so generously provided. She came out smelling fresh and like the roses that adorned their garden in their home back in Bhopal. It made her feel nostalgic thinking about her home and her family. Brushing aside her thoughts she dressed in a little white floaty dress that she knew he would adore, added minimal makeup and strappy red sandals to complete her look. The only jewellery she wore was a pair of simple earrings and her engagement and wedding rings.
She walked out the bungalow enjoying the cool breeze that skimmed over her body and the scents of the exotic flowers around her. She enquired at the reception of his whereabouts and the pleasant staff had replied that they had seen him taking a walk earlier, he probably would get himself a drink at the restaurant they finished helpfully. She made her way towards the restaurant garnering looks of appreciation from the males and one of hostile admiration from the females present there not noticing their arms locking possessively on their partners and totally oblivious to her stunning beauty.
She made her way towards the bar only once locking eyes with a man sitting at a lone table nursing a drink. He smiled and she dismissed him immediately without a second thought. She placed her order of a tropical drink and waited for her errant husband to find her.
As she took a sip of her drink she felt a presence beside her. It was the man from the table.
"Penny for your thoughts?" he said.
"I'm afraid you might be out of pennies by the time I share all my thoughts with you" she replied
"No problem, I'm a rich man" he responded. "By the way I have to tell you. You are very beautiful" he added.
"Thank you. But my husband might not thank you for that comment. He's very possessive. You see" she said to him.
At those words the man looked crestfallen. "You are married?" he asked.
"Yes" she replied and walked off. She had not gotten far, just far enough to be surrounded by the heavy foliage and some large boulders when her senses went on high alert. She was not alone. Before she could turn around and face the person behind her, a huge arm caught her and held her tight.
She turned in the embrace and looked at the person holding her and whispered "You". It was the man from the bar. And before she could utter another word he smacked his lips on hers and kissed her. She tried to make him leave her, she tried to not respond to his kiss but all her efforts were in vain. He was too strong for her and his grip too tight and his kiss was so delicious that unconsciously she responded by closing her eyes and kissing him back. All thoughts of her missing husband banished from her mind.
He tasted of mint and the fruit from his drink. Her nostrils flared as she inhaled his body's cologne. Her senses drank him in, the taste of his mouth, the smell of his body and the touch of their bodies shooting sparks of electricity through her body. She was losing her senses in his arms. As he pressed his body against hers she could feel his hardness against her stomach and a tingle slithered down her spine. She could feel herself turn liquid.
He left her lips to kiss her neck. He blazed a trail of scorching kisses down her delicate throat and onto the tops of her breast revealed by the gaping neckline of her dress. He proceeded to kiss her through her dress just above her heart. He noticed that she was just as aroused as he was because her nipples turned hard like pebbles and jutted against the fine material of her dress. He kissed her there once, twice and then suckled her breast through the dress making it wet and translucent. She threw her head back and moaned in pleasure, her hands tangled in his hair.
They were both caught up in the moment and paid no heed that they were outside and that anyone could probably spot them if they decided to take a closer look. Oblivious to their surroundings they continued their pursuit of each other. He continued to kiss her and she ran her hands over his muscled body fascinated with the contours she encountered.
He unzipped her dress and it slithered to the floor leaving her in nothing but a white lacy underwear and those sexy red sandals. She tried to unbutton his shirt but he caught her hands in his strong ones and just gazed at her in desire. Her body flushed with his kisses melted even more with that look. No one had ever stared at her in that way before with so much veiled animalistic desire.
He pushed her against the large boulder and dropped to his knees unmindful of the earth beneath him. He kissed and laved his way down her body. He circled his tongue around her belly button and bit down on it gently. His hands travelled down her legs and coasted their way back again playing with the delicate fabric of her underwear and then removing it completely leaving her standing there in her ridiculously red high heeled sandals. He kissed her on her thighs and in between her legs seeking her moist heat with his lips whilst she moaned in pleasure and touched her breast trying to soothe the throbbing that he left in his wake. He continued to kiss her in her most sensitive of places until she stiffened and spasmed around his fingers and mouth. She stifled her scream against her hand biting her knuckles.
With her climax over and her heart still beating erratically he got up from the floor and kissed her passionately. She tasted herself on his lips and once more became aroused and rubbed her body against his delicious hard length. He was still aroused looking for his completion. She tore his shirt open and scratched his chest with her fingers, playing with his nipples until they grew hard. She kissed her way across his chest and wherever her wandering mouth could reach. Unable to take any more of the torment that she was delivering he shucked his pants along with his boxers to the floor. He lifted her up against the boulder and spread her legs and impaled himself into her hot wet heat. He thrust into her furiously his hands holding her hips tight, so tight that it surely would leave bruises on her delicate fair skin. She did not care, she matched him stroke for stroke. The only sounds to their furious coupling was their muted moans and groans and the distant buzz of the insects in the night air. A few thrusts later she felt herself stiffen once again and this time she was not alone, she watched his neck tauten in pleasure as they both found their release, they both falling in a deep abyss of colour and life.
As they both became aware of their surroundings their bodies relaxed and replete after their exertions they looked at each other with a secret smile.
"Welcome to Bali Mrs Khan" said the deep baritone voice.
"Why thank you Mr Khan. It surely is a pleasure being here" she whispered.
"Oh no Mrs Khan. It's only our pleasure being here" he whispered back naughtily in her ear.
And with that brought the next two weeks filled with so much pleasure and fun in the sun.
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