An NRI’s Poem-Persisting in the Present - Page 2

brought tears to my eyes it reminded of the happy times i spent there...the twelve years of joy....and the best part was the mango i crave for it but what i get here is sour bitter tanned mango pulps... 😭 just eagerly waiting for my vacations to begin so i can go back and have a blast...good job 👏 👏 👏

Sheena,

That was beautifully penned! It was one of the best piece of poetry that I've read. (I also write and read a lot of poetry though most in Urdu/Hindi/Punjabi). It was really touching as I'm also away from home (Pakistan). Though, not an NRI, I call myself NRP (Non-Resident Pakistani) lol!

That poem totally shows what this forum has really done for so many of us. I've made many good friends here and found the three best friends whome I love the most in this Forum.

However, I must say, we also must thank Ekta because if it wasn't for Ekta, I would've never watched KS (as I only started watching becaues 1)Ram was making a comeback and 2) it was a Ekta Kapoor serial), otherwise, I wouldn't have been so active on this forum.

Again, very beautifully penned. Loved it. Thank you for sharing with all of us!

Anam

hiya

dinno know u had a thing for writing poetry..am not into poetry, but i know when sth good comes by..
tho i've moved out of india, i still dont feel like an NRI..share few of d feelings u've mentioned..u've sketched ur thoughts melodiously in verse..d words just flow along n transport me back n forth..
sheena, u r kewl..minus d cats n lobsters..

Awwwwwwwwwwwww...Sheenaaaaaaaaaaaaa such a lovely poem... 👏 UR so good with words sweety...but must say parne ke baad bhook bahut lagi mujhe, mentioning all them fruits!! 😆 😆

I liked ur poem so much that once all the decor in my house is down, will print this poem off and frame it!!! 😃 😃 😃

Taz!!

Aww Sheenu, such a beautiful poem!!👏........definitely a compliment cause I'm not into a lot of poetry!😕

P.S. did I read right - banyans?.........is their a reason for this word because honest to God I'm getting images of Jai when he woke up after June 19th😆.........for someone who's stinking rich, his nightwear and undergarments are eeeks!