FF: From Rags to Riches...From Hatred to Love( ch3-pg25) 12.05.2014

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*~Prologue~*

A man,nearing his 30's,is standing in his cabin,leaning on to the window sil,looking the city which is known as the city of dreams.

''Mumbai.. Sapno ka shehar... Iss shehar mein har ik insaan aata hai apne kismat azmaane keliye... Kisiki jeet hoti hai ya kisiki haar... Mumbai shehar mere dil ki bohut kareeb hai... Yahaan se shuruat ki thi maine apni zindagi... Ek anaath larka thha,jiske upar mere teen behno ki zimmedari thhi... Aksar log kehte hai ki jab bhi koi ek ameer insaan kisi garib ko dikhjata hai,toh uss garib insaan uss ameeri ki lalach mein aajata hai... Uss ameer hone ka bhoot sar pe sawar hota hai... Main bhi uss waqt jab bhi koi ameer insaan dekhta tha,mujhe bhi ameer hone ka shauq thha,par,main apni zindagi aur apni teen behno ki zindagi daav pe laga nahi sakta... Mujhe bheek mein mili ameeri nahi,khudki khoon paseene se mili ameeri chahiye thhi... Tab hum ek anath ashram mein rehte thhe... Ek Church ki Mother ne humein wahaan rehne di... Mother humse bohut pyaar karti thi.. Humesha hum chaaro ko ek nazaar se hi dekhti thi. Ekdin ek insaan aaye humare anath ashram mein.. Mother se suna ki woh insaan aur unki biwi hum chaaro ko goud lena chahti hai,kyunki undono ko kabhi baccha nahi honewala hai... Bohut acche insaan thhe.. Hum chaaro ko undono ko pehle nazar mein bhaa gaye... Undono ko bhi hum chaaro bohut bhaa gaye... Bohut nek dil aur pyaar karne wale jorey thhe... Phir kya... Humari zindagi mein ek bara morh liya... Hum chaaro ke naam se unka naam jurh gaya... Unhone hum chaaro kabil aur layak insaan banaya,acche sanskaar diye aur acchi shiksha di... Kabhi kabhi sochta hu ki,main,kabhi anath hi nahi thha... Bohut khushnaseeb hai meri teeno behne aur main ki hum chaaro ko Mr.Pratap Damsingh Rathod aur Mrs.Padmini Damsingh Rathod jaise mata-pita mile... Aaj indono ki wajah se,main,Sameer Damsingh Rathod aur meri teeno behne,Shanaya Damsingh Rathod,Megha Damsingh Rathod aur Riya Damsingh Rathod,issi kamyaab mukaam pe hai...

Rathod Group of Industries... India ki business industries ranking mein no.1 aur world ranking mein no.2 ka Managing Director aur CEO,aur mere Babasaa,Mr.Pratap Damsingh Rathod,issi company ke chairman and founder... Ek saccha aur pakka Rajput ka beta aur apni Maasa ka ladla beta... Yeh hai meri kahaani..''


*~Charecter Sketch~*

1) Sameer Damsingh Rathod: son of Pratap Damsingh Rathod and Padmini Damsingh Rathod... Managing Director and CEO of Rathod Group Of Companies.


2)Shanaya Damsingh Rathod: A sweet,bubbly and chirpy girl of 25 years old... Loves her Sameer bhai a lot.. Her Mumma and Papa are her Life... Owns a NGO named after her Dadasa. Eldest daughter of the Rathod family.

3)Megha Damsingh Rathod: Sweet and chirpy yet short-tempered. 2nd eldest daughter of the Rathod family.. Loves her sisters',brother and her Mumma and Papa a lot... Shares a good chemistry with her Papa... Her Papa is her best friend and partners' in crime. Obedient to her brother,sister and her Mumma and Papa. Gold Medalist at rifle shooting... Currently working as an ACP of Mumbai Crime Branch.


4)Riya Damsingh Rathod: Ever-smiling,happy,cheerful and happy-go-lucky girl... Lucky charm for her whole family... Padmini mumma is her best friend.. Cant tolerate crimes against women... Her dialogue, ''Aurat ki kabiliyat pe kabhi shaq nahi karna chahiye'',seals everybody's mouth,if anyone tries to misbehave with her aur with any woman. Recently,completed her studies from Oxford University and is now in Mumbai to help her Babasa and Bhai in the family business. Loves kids a lot.

5)Mrs.Padmini Damsingh Rathod: Sweet,caring and loving person. Mother of four children,who excelled in their respective fields.Loves her family a lot. Wife of Pratap Damsingh Rathod. Pakka Rajputani lady,who loves to follow all the traditions and loves to cook.. Owns an orphanage in the name of her parents'.

6)Mr.Pratap Damsingh Rathod: Ex-Brigadier General of Indian Army.Pakka Rajput... Owner of the Rathod Group of Companies and a proud Father of four children... Loves his family a lot. Big fan of his wife and eldest daughter,Shanaya's cooking... Loves to play tennis with his son and daughters'. A big coffee lover like his youngest daughter,Riya.


(other charecters will be added,as the story progresses).
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index:

CS and Prologue: CS and Prologue

Shekhawats' charecter sketch: Shekhawats' charecter sketch

Rawtes' Charecter Sketch: Rawtes' Charecter Sketch

Chapter1: Chapter1

Chapter 2: pg 19

teaser for chapter 3: pg23


next update after 50+ likes..
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone...

Please start posting ur comments and let me know abt ur views.

Next update after 50+ likes... If i dnt see enough likes and comments,then,i will stop writing this FF right here...

So,start placing ur lamba wala comments and thoko like,in Siddhu ji's style.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb CS & Prologue...!!! Loved Rathod's POV...!!
Awesome title...!!!
Looking frwrd to it...!!!
Can't wait to read be first installment...!!!!
Continue asap...!!
Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb cs and prologue
Update soon ZD
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg dear this is awesome

When I read about rathore and other was orphans I felt bad but when this twist change everything and now they r one of the richest family...love to read

Cs is awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome prologue n cs.. Love it.. Thanks for pm aks..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you rock zebbie👍🏼👏
awesome prologue dear.
i am sam , shanaya and riya sis..
lovely.
loved my mom dad..
hum annatho ko zindagi di..
lovely.
continue soon...
and thanx anku for the pm.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice cs n prolauge..

Plz continue soon

Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful dear
Amazing
Loved it
nice character sketch n prologue
Thanks fpr the PM
Waiting for this story to start 😊

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