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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

oh my God. Oh my God.. i cant believe you're back *jumps a uand down in excitement* even though i'm wrapped up in my blanket and quilt 😆 i'm looking forward for the next update and m as excited for it as i am to watch the new episode of Sherlock :D


I can understand the virtual jumps! 😆

Updates will be more frequent for this one. Maybe not as much as your Sherlock. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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**I have replied to your comments above. Check them out if you will.

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2. Family


I was happy to be around G and her loving family. Watching a reserved Ryan indulge himself in his new portable video game and a bubbly Sneha run around the house chasing her pet cat; listening to G's loving scoldings to her children for always creating a mess around the house for her to clean up, as well as to me for not eating well; experiencing the amicable behaviour of Jeejaji towards me; all of it made me feel relaxed and at home, yet I continued my hunt for an apartment I would shift in. It wasn't hard and within a fortnight of my arrival, I found one.

It was family time when my phone rang. I excused myself and walked to the empty kitchen to answer it. "Raya!" I squealed as silently as I could. "How are you? Where are you? When are you coming?"

"Stop, stop, Di! Take a deep breath! I swear you're getting hyper by the day!" I ignored her remark and questioned her again, knowing that she still hadn't gotten over her habits of teasing me even after four years of being a married woman.

"When are you coming? I miss you so much!"

"I miss you too, Di!"

"No, you don't!" I retorted. I never wanted to hear my baby sister sound low. "You've got a husband who is enamoured with you and wants all of you for himself!" As expected, she flared up defensively.

"What is it with you and him always fighting over me? Grow up!" I laughed silently at her frustrated tone before getting serious again.

"So when are you guys landing here? I came here on your insistence and it's going to be almost three weeks! I even found an apartment and will be moving into it next week."

"I don't know, Di. His boss said he'll be given his next transfer in a month or so."

"What? Another month without you?" I couldn't help the spontaneous loud words which tumbled out of my mouth. "No, no! Give the phone to Raunaq. I'll tell him to quicken the process."

"He isn't home and he tried but no use." She sighed. "But don't worry, you'll be busy with your work. When are you starting?"

I knew she was changing the topic and I let her. "Just as soon as I shift into the apartment."

One thing led to another and I chatted with Raya until G called me inside for dinner. It would be some time before I would get to see my sister again, and it upset me a bit, but I didn't let it spoil the buoyant mood which surrounded me around G and her family.


Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
nice update, so Raya got married,interesting.
But it is very short i want long update like u used to give .😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i completed prequel... raya got married and not geet. now that is interesting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Update ..

Raya got married ...so raya & her husband will stay with geet once raunaq's transfer process will be complete ..

waiting for further updates ..cont. soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome part
How r her parents
Her sis is married for 4yrs

She didn't
But then she wanted to be there for her parents
Still curious to know abt her parents

Change in Ryan is so much true to today's his generation
Painful but then video games & iPad r awesome baby sitters now days
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Posted: 11 years ago
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raya is alrdy married...hw was it possible before geets marriage...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This one can only come from a sister's heart. She wants her here and yet she is so understanding.
You captured them perfectly in just a few lines.👏

Ryan is caught up in his little world.. Oh! I so miss the naughtiness once they get Ipad-tied.

I am sure my Dad feels the same😆

She found an apartment. Haiyee... Is it close to Jaanu?😳

Thanks for updating.
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so geet is waiting for raya and raunaq to join her
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nc part...
Bt a bit confusing...
Y is geet shifting here? N raya is married bt geet? I think no( n m happy)...
N both r going to stay together..wat abt hr family...n is she still in contact with anaya n others????

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