I Loved You The First Moment I Saw You!! [Chapter ~ 8 Pg:19]

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Heya Peeps!! 😆 Here's me Again Starting A New Story!! 😉

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Chapter ~ 1 (Jeevika's Introduction)


Jeevika's Point Of View

I Stood There Next To The Window Gazing Far Away Into The Horizon; While Tears Kept Flowing Down My Cheeks. As Far As I Remember I Stood There Numb, Still As Statue Not Disturbed By Anyone For The Past Few Hours. Rather Who Would Be There To Disturb Me?

It Was Too Difficult For Me To Absorb The Reality Right Now. Wasn't The Almighty Happy Enough By Taking My Di Away From Me That Today He Totally Made Alone By Snatching My Parents Away Too?? The Only Reason I Was Surviving Di, Was Only My Parents. And Now?? I Was Abandoned Why All The Three Most Important People In My Life. I Was All Alone. Left To Suffer This Agony. I Kept Crying Till I Could See The Day Dawning. Sun Rose High And Still I Was Into My Into My Parents Room. It Was The Last Time I Would Be Here. I Remember Dad's Last Words Be Here.

The Last Words Of Dad Still Reverberated In My Ears As He Lay Hapless On The Hospital Bed ~ "My Child, Promise Me Even After I Die, You'll Live A Better Life, Be Successful, Be A Better Human Being, And Won't Keep On Crying Over Your Past. You Have To Be Strong, Stronger.Than Ever! Face The World All Alone, Complete The Purpose Of Your Life, You Ambitions, Dreams. Make Us Prod Promise Me Dear!"

I Sat There Still, Without Any Expressions...He Said Again "Promise Me Jeevika!"

I Had No Other Option But To Promise Him. If You See Me Alive Right Now, It Is Only Because Of Dad!


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Done With The Starting!
Let Me Know Whether I Need To Continue Or Stop Writing It The Very Moment! 😆 😕

Comments, Likes, Tomatoes, Chappals, Suggestions All Welcomed! 😆

Will Update My Story Name Soon!! 😆 🤪

Take Care All! 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index

Chapter 1 - 98065205
Chapter 2 - 98299830
Chapter 3 - 98675728
Chapter 4 - 103605453
Chapter 5 - 103747226
Chapter 6 - 104027752
Chapter 7 - 105892001
Chapter 8 - 111088023
Edited by Protego_Maxima - 10 years ago
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im first
whooo
superb
amazing
fantastic
it is so gud
u write fantastic
fabulous
want to read more
bless jeevika
continue soon
thnx for the pm

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riddhi...
again a story.
I just loved the concept!!!!
amazing.
cont soon.
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Originally posted by: millee18

riddhi...
again a story.
I just loved the concept!!!!
amazing.
cont soon.


You Said it Affirmatively?? 😆 I Swear To God I Won't Annoy You Guys With New Stories!! 😆 I'll Discontinue All Of It!! 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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New story 😊
love the new concept
continue soon
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Originally posted by: RiddhiTacker



<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">You Said it Affirmatively??😆I Swear To God I Won't Annoy You Guys With New Stories!!😆I'll Discontinue All Of It!!🤣</font>

don't u dare to stop... I will bang ur door... come inside ur room nd kill u 🤣
u know u r the next big writer in if...
I loved the way u write!!!!
very much impressed
don't u think abt stopping
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Originally posted by: millee18

don't u dare to stop... I will bang ur door... come inside ur room nd kill u 🤣
u know u r the next big writer in if...
I loved the way u write!!!!
very much impressed
don't u think abt stopping


Muummyy I'm Scared!! 😕 😔 Now How Will I Write Something!! ?? 🤓
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Originally posted by: RiddhiTacker



Muummyy I'm Scared!!😕😔Now How Will I Write Something!! ??🤓

by using ur brain nd hands... 🤣
I want ur updates now..
plzzz... give na
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Let Me Think At Least!! 🤢 😆
And I Havent Even Thought Of Updating Any Of My Stories Yet!! Besides This! I'm Working On it!! 😕 🥱
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago

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