I Loved You The First Moment I Saw You!! [Chapter ~ 8 Pg:19] - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Amazing update dear..!!
Love the way Viren is feeling bad and jealous..!😃
Update soon..
Thanx for the pm..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Do I smell something burning?
Of maybe viren 🤣
God he is sooo jealous and this is getting more interesting now!!!
Thanks for the updates and the PM!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Who's jay ????
Awsame update
Loved viren's feelings for jeevika...
Jeevika called him "VIRENJI" hayeee
superb
fabulous
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
commented check


the very first comment😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Now, mujhe poora vishwas hai ki
Jai is Jeev's brother...



continue ssooonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
awesome update
feeling bad for
viren
he is started
to love jeevika
seeing both of them
close
viren hear is broken
for so many times
he asked who is that
but the answer
not came at all
viren is feeling very bad
who is that guy
total
amazing
superb
fantastic
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Chapter ~ 6

Author's POV

Jeevika And Jay Got Down From Jay's Car, While Viren Was Waiting For Her On The Stairs.
Ja - "Jeevs, Want Me To Pick You Up Afterwards?" Jay Asked As They Climbed Up The Stairs.
Stopping By Viren's Side Jeevika Said "No Jay, You Might Be Busy Right? So It's Okay I'll Come Home..."
V - "I'll Drop Her Jay Don't Worry..." Viren Interrupted.
Ja - "Okay Thank You Viren! Meet You At Home For A Cup Of Coffee Then?"
V - "Sure!!" He Smiled.
J - "And Today You Gonna Make It For Us And Yourself Too!" Jeevika Ordered To Jay.
Ja - "What In The World Did I Do That You're Making Me Compensate!" Jay Exclaimed.
J - "Well Tell You Later At Home..." She Hugged Him Lightly..."We'll Head Inside Now, You Also Leave. And Please, Don't Make A Mess In The House! Take Care..."
Ja - "I'll Take Care...Bye..." He Said Getting Downstairs To His Car And Waved A Bye To Jeevs And Went Off, While Viren And Jeevika Headed Inside The Court.
It Was 6 In The Evening When Jeevika And Viren Stood In Front Of Jeevika's Door.
Ja - "Good Evening Guys..." He Greeted Them As He Opened The Door For Them.
J - "What Took You Ages To Open The Door Little Monster?" She Questioned Her Brow Arched Up Is Suspicion.
Ja - "Nothing Really You See...He Said As He Gestured The Two To Enter.
J - "Holy God! When The Hell Did You Bring These Here???" She Said As She Glanced At The Pics Which Were Hanging All Around The House. While Viren To Was Adoring Them.
Ja - "I Thought That It'll be Better To Get Those Old Good Memories In This House Of Ours!!" Jay Replied.
J - "Damn Another Reason Why I Love You My Boy!" She Hugged Him Lightly. While Viren Turned His Attention Back To The Pictures. Not Wanting To Get More Hurt By Seeing Them.
J - "Okay You Guys Have Some Talks I'll Make Coffee..."
Ja - "I Think I Was Gonna Make It...?!?" He Exclaimed.
J - "For What You Did, I'll Treat You Today With Coffee And Your Favorite Dishes For Dinner!" She Said As She Left For Kitchen.
Ja - "That's More Like My Jeevs!" He Said As He Smirked.
Viren Stood There Taking In All The Words Of Jay's And Jeevika's Conversation, While He Stared At A Picture With A Little Girl Say 6 Years Playing With A 5 Year Old Boy.
Ja - "That One Is Jeevika's Favorite!!" He Exclaimed As He Saw Viren Staring At The Pic.
V - "And Why Is That?" He Asked.
Ja - "Because That's Me And Her. When We Were Kids I Remember Calling Jeevs 'Di' She Would Take Care Of Me Like I Was Her Real Brother. But Unfortunately I Ain't. She Denies It Even Though She Knows It's The Truth Deep Down...Jeevs And Jiya Di Never Treated Me Like Someone Ordinary. Nor Mom-Dad. Even After Not Being There Family Part In Reality, They Never Made Me Feel Orphan." Jay Revealed The Past To Viren As A Lone Tear Escaped His Eye, While Viren Stared At Him Completely Blank As To What Should He Say Now? He Thought Jay Was Someone Who Loved Jeevika And Jeevika Love Jay Too. But He Never Knew Their Love Was Nothing Else But Something Like This. "After I Started Understanding The World, And After Knowing The Truth Myself I Had Decided That Not To Trouble Them Anymore. It Was Jeevs Who Made Me Changed My Mind. I Remember She Hadn't Talked To Me For Almost A Month! She Straight Away Refused To Even See My Face Unless I Changed My Decision Of Going Away."
J - "Oye Rondu, Tu Ab Bhi Nahi Badla?" She Interrupted. "Stop Crying Jay. And Remember What Was The Deal You Made With Us?"
Ja - "Yeah I Remember!" He Said As He Wiped His Tears And Smiled At Jeevs. Taking A Cup He Passed On To Viren Who Smiled Back.
J - "Achha Sunn, Let's Go Out Tomorrow?"
Ja - "But Jeevs This is Chandigarh Not Mumbai. You Don't Have Any Sea Here...Then Where You Wanna Go?"
J - "So What? We Have River And Lakes Here, We Can Go There..." She Said.
Ja - "But I Ain't Free Tomorrow Nor Are You I Guess...?" He Questioned.
J - "Ya Actually..." She Exclaimed Sadly.
V - "What's This Sea Thing??" Viren Interrupted.
Ja - "Nothing Much, Just That She Loves The Beach!!" Jay Replied To Viren While Jeevika Smiled.
J - "Okay I'm Running To Make Dinner. Viren Ji Would You..." Viren Cut Her Off In Middle.
V - "As Much As I Would Love To Share A Dinner With You Two, I'd Also Get Scolded By Mom For Bugging You...Though You're Offering It...But Still...I'll Take Your Leave." He Said As He Placed His Mug On The Cabinet Below The Photo. While Jeevika And Jay Just Shared A Little Giggle.
J - "Okay. I'll Drop You By Your Car..."
Ja - "Yes! You Really Should!" He Grinned At Viren. "But First Go Put This Cups Away..."
J - "I Can Do That Later...!!"
Ja - "No, No Do It Now..."
J - "What!? But Why??" She Inquired.
Ja - "Because I Say So!!" He Said Pushing Her. Than Turning Towards Viren He Spoke, "I Think You Should Tell Her..."
V - "Tell Her What??" Viren Asked Confused.
Ja - "Tell Her What You Feel For Her..." He Replied.
V - "Is It So Obvious That You Guessed It?" He Said Baffled
Ja - "I Bet She's The First To Know About Your Feelings!" Jay Exclaimed.
V - "What??" He Got Another Shock From Jay.
Ja - "I Know My Jeevs Really Well! She Can Easily Get To Know What's Going Around In A Person's Mind. By The Way They Behave, Their Little Gestures, Through Their Eyes..."
V - "But Than Why She Never Told Me About It...?"
Ja - "I Don't Really Know..." He Said Shrugging His Shoulders.
J - "What's Brewing Between You Two?" She Asked Entering.
V - "Nothing...We Were Just Talking About These Pictures..." He Said Smiling. "Anyway I'll Leave Now..."
Jeevika Dropped Viren Outside.

Getting Back She Lacked The Door Behind, Finding Jay Watching TV. She Settled Next To Him On The Couch. Jay Glanced At Her For A Moment And Decided To Talk To Her.
Ja - "Jeevika..." He Called Grabbing Her Attention. Switching Off The TV He Continued, "Viren Likes You Very Much..."
J - "So That's What You Guys Were Talking. Did He Say Something To You? Or it Was You're Intelligent Brain?" She Said Getting Hyper.
Ja - "So You Knew About His Feelings? And It Was Me..." He Spoke Calmly.
J - "Jay I Hope You Didn't Tell Him Anything More Than This! Right?" She Inquired.
Ja - "Errmmm..Uhhh..." He Stuttered.
J - "Cool! That Means You Did! But What?" She Was On Heat by Now.
Ja - "I Just Told Him To Confess His Feelings To You...And..."
J - "And What Jay?" She Was Super Angry By Now.
Ja - "And Told him That You Knew About His Feelings As You Have That Unique Quality In You..." He Siad It In A Low Tone Audible Enough To Her.
J - "Thanks My Little Brother! Now Good Night I'm Going To My Room. Need Some Sleep! If You Wish To Have Dinner Make It Yourself!" She Said Storming To Her Room. While Jay Sat There Thinking About What's Going Around In Jeevika's Mind.

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Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
thank u thank u thank u !!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
love u lots!!!!❤️
this was fabulous as usual👏⭐️
u know how much i love this story😊
this story is unpredictable to me😆
i cant even predict what to came next?😉
not a single clue😆
god u write it amazing😊
the writer which makes the reader love his story from his first word is what u call a writer😊
and u r one of that dear😃
i read every single word and i actually feel that's happening here around me
i can imagine all things happening
why is jeevika reacting like this???😲
i think its bcoz she too loves him 😳 and now she will not be able to face him as he knows tat she too loves him 😆😉
may be????😕
i told that its unpredictable for me😆
i m getting confuesd and getting many thought😕
and yes yes yes😊😳
thank god jay is her brother and nothing else😳
and viren he is super cute ☺️
jay too know that he loves jeevika😃
and jeevika too😃😳
now i really wanna know how will jeevika face viren by knowing that viren knows that she know he loves her 😉or anything else is in stores😆
god!!! its making me super excited!😊
enough of my bak-bak!!😆
i am loving it!❤️
that's it
take care😊
love u 🤗
continue soon😊
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
why u making my lil mind work so much... I wanna know wht happened to jeevika...
nd thank god... like seriously finally viren came to know abt jay nd jeevika relationship !!! such a relief... I wanna read this more !!
cz this is rely an amazing piece of writing !!
me wanna read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: millee18

why u making my lil mind work so much... I wanna know wht happened to jeevika...
nd thank god... like seriously finally viren came to know abt jay nd jeevika relationship !!! such a relief... I wanna read this more !!
cz this is rely an amazing piece of writing !!
me wanna read more


Milee!!!! 🤗 Love You!! ❤️
But Sweetheart If It Were In My Hands I Would Have Updated For You All My Few Awesome Readers Like Right Now, But I Don't Have The Updates Written Honey!! 😕 But I'll Sure Try Updating Soon!! 😊

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