I Loved You The First Moment I Saw You!! [Chapter ~ 8 Pg:19] - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
finally u updated as well...
I loved it ..
something is cooking.
nd I m loving tht !!!
hope tht person doesn't do anything wrong...
cont soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: millee18

finally u updated as well...
I loved it ..
something is cooking.
nd I m loving tht !!!
hope tht person doesn't do anything wrong...
cont soon :)


Shhssshhh... 😆
Don't Worry He's Really A Good Person You Know..! 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
OMG got update after months👏👏👏
ahh... how much i missed this story😭
i want an next update right now 😊😉
wanna know who's that???😆
hope its jeevika's brother😊
and NO one else😆
i cant see anyone around her except viren 😆😉
the update is too awesome👏⭐️
loving the bond they share👍🏼
everything was so perfect👍🏼
too good thank u for wonderful update
by the way we should get bonus from u as u didn't gave any updates from months😉😆
so can we have next update already???😊😃


well being very greedy i know 😉
take ur time 😊
but if possible😆
post it soon😊😳
i m waiting😊😃

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
wow...amazing update..!!😊😊
Wanna know who is the new person coming in..!!😲😲
And Virat was going to call Jeevs Bhabhi..!!😆😆
Update soon...!
Wanna read more..!!!
Thanx for the pm..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
it was just wonderful
wondering who that man is...
I think its his brother.
Let's see!!!!
update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
after so many day
you updated the story
it was an awesome update ya
i liked the whole update
i think viren is liking jeevika
first he called and invite him
and he came and invite
and that time viren is going to call bhabhi
but after words he stopped
and he showing so much concern on her
now her past is coming to live with hope full
he is gud guy and dont want that may be he
is jeevika boy friend or anything
or else viren feelings will not come at all
outside
total
amazing
superb
fantastic
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Chapter ~ 5

Author's POV

Viren Got Out Of His Car To Find A Tall Guy Standing In Front Of Jeevika's Door. He Climbed Up Those Few Stairs And Stood Behind The Man. Tapping On His Shoulder Making Him Turn Around "Hey, You're..."

The Guy Replied "I'm Jay..." Just As The Two Extended Their Hands, Jeevika Opened The Door Grabbing Both's Attention.
Without Saying Jay And Jeevika Shared A Deep Hug. Viren Stood There Shattered. He Had A Feeling That Jeevika Loved This Guys To No Extent. And that She Can Never Be His Now. Yes! Viren Had Developed A Feeling For Jeevika While She Worked With Him. Helping Him With Minor Things To Assisting Him In Cases. His Chain Of Thoughts Was Broken By Jeevika Who Requested Him To Enter The House.

J - "Jay You Go Upstairs And Settle Your Self There. Freshen Up And Get Ready. Need Coffee?"
Ja - "Yes! Just Like I Love It! How Much I Missed Your Coffee!" He Said Side Hugging Jeevika.
J - "Then What Took You 8 Longs Months Huh?" Jeevika Smacked His Arms. "Viren Sir You Need The Coffee Too?"
V - "Huh? Yeah Sure." He Replied. "Uhh Jeevika If You Don't Mind You Can Just Call Me Viren When We Aren't In Office Or In Court..."
J - "How About I'll Just Call You Viren Ji" She Smiled. Viren Nodded. Jay Left For His Rooms While Jeevika Left For Making The Coffee.

Soon Enough Jay Got Down And Settled Near Viren.
Ja - "Uhhh, I Don't Really Know You, Nor Do You Know Me..." He Extended His Hand Forward "Hi. I'm Jay Singh. Jeevika's..."
J - "Here You Go. Your Coffee." She Said Entering The Hall And Handing The Coffee Mug To The Two.
Ja - "Thank You! Waise Jeevs You Didn't Introduced The Two Of Us..."
J - "Oh Yeah...Viren Ji This Is Jay, And Jay, This Is Viren Ji Under Whom I Work."
V - "Well Actually It's I Who Work Under Her...She's The One Bossing Me, We Should Do this We Should Do That.."
J - "It's Nothing Like That Jay. You Didn't Tell Me When You Got Back From Stanford? And How Did You Gotta Know I Shifted Here?"
Ja - "I Got Back A Week Back. When I Got Back Home I Thought You Might Be Still In Mumbai, But I Found The Villa Locked Up. Te Guard Informed Me That You Shifted Here. Hopefully You Didn't Change Your Number So Contacted You After Getting A New SIM Card Then Contacted You."
J - "Hmmm...Okay...Viren Ji? I Think We Should Leave By Now. Jay Go Get Ready..."
Ja - "Okay Mummy Ji Jaisa Aap Kahe. Will Catch You In Few Mins. But Where Are We Going?"
J - "Jay, I'm Elder By Just One Year Doesn't Mean You'll Call Mi Mummy After Mom! I Wish Di Was Here She Would Have Made You Quite Withing Seconds! We're Going To Viren Ji's House. For Holi Celebration Budhu."
Ja - "Did I Actually Forgot Today's Day? Jeevs I Need The Puran-Poli's You Made!"
J - "Jay We'll Talk About It Later, Go Get Ready First!"
V - "You Know To Make Puran-Poli's? How?" Viren Inquired.
J - "Actually Our Neighbors Back There Were Maharashtrians. Aunty Had Made Me Learn This Special Sweet Dish."
V - "Wow! Make Sure You Send In Some For Me Also!"
J - "Definitely..." She Replied Giggling. While Jay Entered.
V - "Let's Leave..."
J - "You Guys Go Ahead I'll Call Manvi...! Jay, Lock The Apartment? Keys Are..."
Ja - "As Always On The Dinning Table?" He Smiled. "Still Haven't Got Rid Of that Habit Huh?"
J - "Stop It Jay...Some Things Can Never Be Changed. And Habits Are Tough To Be Gotten Rid Off!" She Left The Apartment And Headed Next Door To Call Manvi.
V - "You Guys Know Each Other Really Well!" Viren Complimented Wit Heavy Heart.
Ja- "The People Who Are Destined To Be Together Even For A Short Period Of Time Know Each Other Better Then Themselves!" Jay Replied.
V - "Yeah. Lets Move Out."

Viren Settled In The Driver's Seat Waiting For Jeevika Manvi While Jay Settled Behind. Jeevika Settled Next To Jay Disappointing Viren While Manvi Settled With Viren. The Journey Continued With Jeevika Jay And Manvi's Conversations While Viren Silently Drove The Car.

In The Vadhera Mansion, Jeevika Introduced Jay To Everyone. jay Was The First To Apply Color On Jeevika. They Had A Tom And Jerry Play With jay Running Behind Jay And Finally Jay Gave In And Jeevika Applied Color On His Face. After All The Happy Holi Playing Though Not For Viren Jeevika Jay And Manvi Left. Viren Dropped Them Back Accompanied By Virat.

Jay Manvi And Virat Got Down From The Car, While Jeevika Was Stopped By Viren. They Got Down From The Car.
V - "Jeevika, I Had A Question." Viren Glanced At Her
J - "Yes You Can Ask Me Viren Ji..."
V - "Who's Jay?"
J - "Ohh...He's My..."
Ja - "Jeevika..." Jay Called Out Making Jeevika Turn Her Attention To Him.
V - "I'll Be Waiting For The Answer...Uhh I'll See YoU In The Evening?"
J - "Sure Viren Ji..."
Viren Left Informing Virat That He Would Come And Pick Him Up later At Night.

It Was 10 PM When Jay Sat Watching TV, While Virman Studied. Jeevika Was In The Kitchen When She Heard The Doorbell.
Calling Out Jay She Told Him To Open The Door. "Jay, Open The Door. It Must Be Viren Ji..." Hearing Her A Smile Crept On Viren Face. Yeah He COuld Hear Her Outside The Door. She Was Loud Enough. Jay Opening The Door Gestured Viren To Come In.
Ja - "Sit Here I'll Go Call Jeevs Out..."
V - "Jay, No It's Fine. Anyhow She Knows I'm Here So She'll Come Out Whenever She Gets Done With Her Work. You Sit It's Fine I Can Wait...We Can Talk..." Viren Replied.
J - "Jay, Go Call The Two Out...I'm Done Placing The Food On Table..."
Ja- "Okay..." Jay Left.
J - "Viren Ji? Why Don't You Settle On The Table Till Then?"
V - "Jeevika, Uhhh I Think Maa Must Be Waiting For Us For Dinner. We'll Have It Home..."
Vi - "Bhai I Just Informed Maa, She Said It's Fine..." Virat Said As He Entered With Jay And Manvi.
V - "Par Virat..."
Vi - "Bhai, You Have Never Had Jeevika Di Made Food Have You? Taste It Today, I'm Sure You'll End Up Eating Food Made By Her For The Rest Of Your Life!" Virat Giggled Along With Manvi While Jeevika Smiled.
Ja - "Agree With Virat." He Edged Towards Jeevika And Side Hugged Her. "Remember I Said The Same Thing Long Back To Mom?" Jeevika's Eyes Shaded A Lone Tear Wiped Off By Jay. "Okay Chalo Lets Have The Dinner Before It Gets Cold."

After Dinner The Guys Settled On The Couch And Jeevika Manvi Brought In The Sweet Dish Jeevika Prepared.

Vi - "Mmm...Puran-Poli Is Really Tasty!!" Virat Said Complementing.
V - "I Agree. Even The Food Was Amazing..."
Ja - "Jeevs I Think You Forgot To Put The Cardamon Powder.." Jay Complained.
J - "Yeah I Know. I Purposely Never Added That..." She Grinned.
Ja - "Just Because I Made You Make The Poli's At A Short Span Of Time!?" Jay Giggled. "Jeevs I Must Say You Still Are The Same Jeevika I Left!" He Said Continuing To Eat.
J - "Yaa Whatever..." She Showed Him Her Toungue. "Viren Ji, I've Packed Some More In A Tiffin Box, For Everyone In The Mansion...I'll Bring It.."
V - "That Wasn't Needed..." He Said As He Placed His Plate Down.
Ja- "Jeevs I Need One More..."
J - "Enough You Already Had Three Jay. Go Sleep Now."
Ja - "Yeah, Need To Start Tomorrow..."
J - "Wait What? Don't Tell Me You Got The First Contract Already? So That Explains You're Presence Here. If You Never Had The Contract Here, You Wouldn't Even Find Where I Was!!" She Said Getting Upset.
Ja - "I Knew You Would Say The Same Thing!" He Said Getting Up. "Jeevs Please Now Don't Break Down Alright? You Know Me Right? And It's Because Of Whom I Took The Contract. I'm Here For You. Not For The Contract!" Jeevika Hugged Him Sobbing.
J - "You Ain't Lying Just To Please Me Are You?" Jeevika Questioned Him Glancing At Him. Jay Nodded A 'No'. "Okay. Then Go Sleep." Jay Left. Jeevika Brought In The Tiffin And Handed To Viren. Turning To Virat "All The Best! And Don't Worry You Guys Have Studied Hard, So You Both Will Be Fine With The Paper. Don't Panic Okay?" She Said As She Stood In Between VirMan. They Both Hugged Her Sideways Lightly. "Thank You Di" They Said In Unision.
J - "Okay Chalo Now Rush Back To Home, And Sleep Don't Be Up More. It's Already Late... Take Care!" She Said As The Three Walked To The Door. "Manvi, I'll See You In The Morning. Good Night Dear." Turning Towards Viren "Viren Ji, I'll Meet You At The Court?"
V - "I Can Come Pick You Up. Your House Is On The Way To Court." Viren Asked.
J - "I Think Jay Will Drop Me. But If Not I'll Manage Viren Ji. You've Been Taking Enough Troubles.."
V - "It's Never A Trouble" He Replied With Heavy Heart. "Good Night..."
J - "Good Night." She Replied Viren With A Smile. "Good Night Virat" She Said Grabbing Virat's Attention Who Was Talking To Manvi.
Vi - "Good Night Di...See You Tomorrow Evening..."

Viren Virat Left. Jeevika Got Back To The House. While Manvi Went To Her House.

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Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
yipeee... me first!!!!!🥳
wooohooo its gr8 to comment on ur story first!!!!😊
pleasure!😃
feels blessed!😊❤️



coming to an update😉
riddhi no no no...😭
why u do this to me????
u dont tell who's jay???
now i have to wait for for ur next update😉
my poor viren😭
i m thinking that he must be his brother😆
but NOTHING else😆
my virika should unite soon😊😳
by the way i love the bonding between jay and jeevika😊
but my viren 😊
he is too sad😔
and jealous too😆
haaayyyeee... VIRENJI❤️
Muuuwwwaahhh... riddhi i love u❤️🤗
hope i got to know about jay who is he in next update😉
and even viren also😆😉
by the way i m loving the suspense😊



i m speechless...❤️.👏
such brilliant update👍🏼
continue soon😊
very soon plz😉
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
res!
*unress!!
nooo im seconddd
sweetttyy y did u take my placee!!!
😭
riddhiii!!!
wowww
hats off too u
luv it
awww he was guna tell but stopped coz jeevika came
awww they r enjoyin soo much
blesss
its wonderful
superb
amazing
excellent
👏
y r u always perfect for??
just fab
epic
loved it
cont soon
update sooon plllzzz!!!
thnxxx!!

Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
I m seriously in love with ur stories..
u write so well...
I loved this part !!!
hope viren came to know abt jay nd jeevika soon :)
it was amazing...
loved it.
cont soon :)

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