I Loved You The First Moment I Saw You!! [Chapter ~ 8 Pg:19] - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter ~ 3

Before I Could Even Ring The Door Bell The Door Was Flung'ed Open To Me. I Entered Only To See Mess! Jesus Christ! :P

"Maanvi!!!????"
"Uuhhh, Di Before You Burst Out On Me, Let Me Clear One Thing...All This Is Beacuse Of This Chep, We just Had A Fight, And Then He Started Running Behind me And Then As You Can See, Was The Condition Of The House!" She Said Almost Hiding Her Self Behind Virat.

J - "Do You Think I'm Gonna Eat You Up? Just Come In Front And Apologize!"
Maanvi Moved Further, Hers And Virat's Head Down, And They Silently Apologized To Jeevika.

J - "Okay, Now Go Sit In One Corner, I'll Clean This Up. Till Then You Guys Can Just Check Out What All You Need Help With! And Don't Get Into Another Fight Please!"

Jeevika Got Involved In Cleaning The House While VirMan Sat There Innocently Like Little Kids.

After Say Half An Hour She Was Done And Finally She Made Some Coffee For Herself And The Two Shaitan's! She Then Helped Them With Their Problems Etc... Soon Enough Virat Left As He Received Call From His Brother. Maanvi Left Informing Jeevs That Her Mother Called Her For Dinner.

Jeevika Then Showered & Then Rested For A While.
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After The Dinner...

J - "So, I've Something To Share Guys!!" She Said A Little Excited!
K - "What Is It Beta? About Your Interview Is it?"
J - "YES!!! I Got The Job There!!!"
Krittika, Maanvi And Maanvi's Dad - Kunal Congratulated Her.
Ku - "See Maanvi...You Should Learn A Lesson From Her!"
M - "Does That Means I'll Search For A Part Time Job?"
J - "Shut Up Maanvi, You Should Back Fire Him! He's Your Dad!"
There Was A Silence For A While In The Room, I Was The One To Break It First.

J - "Uhhh...I Guess I'll Leave Now Aunty, Will Have To Join Tomorrow! So No Chance Of Getting Late! Good Night! Godd Night Uncle!" Before Leaving I Whispered To Maanvi "And Maanvi, Make Sure You'll Apologize Uncle! Good Night!"

I Returned To My House, Packed The Stuffs For Tomorrow, And Was off For Today, With Loads Of Excitement For A New Tomorrow!

Next morning!

I Was Woken Up By My Not So Cool Alarm!! Got Up From The Bed, Showered Up In No Time, And I Was Off For Office!

Entered Into The Cabin Of My Boss, Only To See The Files Not In Position!
Just As I Was About To Sort Them Out And Clean The Table, I Was Stopped By A Strong Male Voice From Behind.

"You're Will Not Be Paid For This Ms. Jeevika" He Said Walking Further From The Door And Then Standing In Front Of His Chair.

J - "But Sir, I Don't Mind Cleaning The Table And Sorting The Files Even If I'm Not Being Paid For It!" I Said Smiling A Bit.

"Okay, Well I Don't Mind Either! But I Just Said That As A Matter For My Last PA Quitt'd Her Job For This Very Reason!"

"Coming To The Present It's Your First Day, And Here Your Very First Case You'll Be Working On; With me Ofcourse!"

J - "Okay..." Just As I Said That He Called The Peon Into His Cabin.

"Here, Just Show Jeevika Her Table Please! And Also Let Her Know All The Other Necessary Place Of The Office As Well!! You Better Tell Priya To Do It I Guess! Thanks"

The Peon Just Nodded And Escorted Me Out To Priya. The Girl At The Reception. She Showed Me Around, And Then I Engrossed My Self In Studying The Case. In Lunch Time I Just Exchanged My Number With Priya. Talked To Her For A While, And Then Resumed To My Case Again.

In No Time The Day Was Over, And I Was Still Working On The Case, Only To Be Disturbed By Someone Clearing His Throat To Grab My Attention. I Turned Around To See Viren Sir Standing There.

J - "Sorry Sir, I Didn't Notice You."
V - "That's Probably Because You Were So Engrossed Into The File And Bunch Of Books...Anyways, It's Late, You're The Only Colleague Of Mine Sitting Here! Get Going To You Home! And You Can Take These Files And Books To Your House!"
J - "Okay Sir! Sir, When Is The First Hearing Of This Case?"
V - "Jeevika Ji, You're My PA, I'm Not!! You Can Check In The Dairy There! But Anyways, It's Day After Tomorrow!"
J - "Sorry Sir!" I Said & Slapped My Self Mentally For The Wrong Question!
V - "It's Okay, Can I Get Your No. In Case If I Need To Talk With You Regarding Anything..."
I Quickly Penned Down My No. On A Piece Of Paper And Handed It To Him. We Bid Goodbye To Each Other And Left The Office Building.
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Sorry Couldn't Write More!! 🤢
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Take Care! ❤️

Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
yipeee me first
fantastic update riddhi👏👏
u have described all scenes beautifully😊
jeevika's house turned mess due to fight😆
jeevika's first day of work😊
too good 👏
continue soon😊😃
i m waiting for the next now 😊
continue as son as possible😆
plz plz plz 😊😆
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
res
wow
i told u it is not SHIT, CRAP
its fab
its mind blowing
just loved it
amazing
fantastic
so sophisticated
superb!!!
cont soon



Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
it was a fab update...
I liked jeevika nd manvi convo...
they r so good with each other...
virika talked good...
they exchanged no.'s also
cool
waiting fr next one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
wow woww... janab ne number maange jeevika ji se.. hehehe :P ;)
lol... awesum n amazingg updatee.. looveddd itt.. keepp continuinggg. hoping for virika to be one soon!!! hehhe


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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
amazing update continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Great update
Superbb
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
m loving the concept
waiting fr more
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
hi riddhi plz update now
right now plz
i m waiting !!!!!!!!!!!!

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