Thrd:2 MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story last chapterPG7 28/12 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Angle.

congratulation for new thread
Awesome part

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Fabulous part

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Awesome

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Congo for second thread
beautiful part

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Osom part

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Congratulation APi

u r awesome writer
i loved all ur FF
very nicely written
Do cont soon

Originally posted by: pihu.

Lovely update
Mayur and Sanu are awesome

Originally posted by: Faria.

hayyye janu


I m really very happyyy.
I wanna HUG u sweetu.

thankz for giving us many wonderful FF.

anyway coming to this update
this update was superb as usual
fantastic part
Loved mayur a lot and also loved the way sam accepted nupur from his heart which made nupur so happy
and i also loved the way mrs. Sharma also thinking to give her a chance- so nice of her.
but i wonder that Mr. Sarma didnt create any scene - may be he dont want media to make any hot news of this issue😛

loved mayur as usual...mayanks naughtiness was so sweet. maza agay. hehehe



beautiful written..

Loved it to the core

please yaar hume continue update dete raho
and btw do u have any new concept in ur mind??
then plz jaldi likh.. :D

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

congragulations api 🤗

this is one of my fav ff.. totally diff concept...nupur char is very close to reality bohat se larkha h real life me jo nupur k tarha kise wajha sa aisa kam karti h but unki k life me mayank jaise koi nhi ata ..mayank char is totally fiction..n u very beautifully merge reality with fiction n give us such a beautiful n pure love story...👏

now about update ..its awesome api

n I just love nupur dress goshhh I can imagine both kitna hot lg rha h n this mayank na kitna naughty h always make me bush ☺️..

shilpa start liking nupur nicee..n I really love nupur n samrat scene in this update..their bond r getting strong n adorable ..but I wonder mayank ka dad na kuch nhi kiya ...

very nice update ...

continue soon

Originally posted by: GauriLuvsRP

Congratulations fiza for the new Thread...🤗🤗🤗

Awesome update...😳😳

Loved mayur...

loved that Samrat has accepted Nupur..😃😃

Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

Continue soon!!

Chapter 33

Few months later...almost 2 yrs of their marriage

Sarah: aren't u happy ma'am

Nupur: I don't know sarah ... I really don't know tht I shud be or not...its not simple.. its upto mayank.. its upto my luck tht wht will b there...plus I m even not sure myself. Anyway.. I m going .. if mayank cums home just handle things

Sarah: are sure ma'am u will b okay alone...

Nupur: yes..

Sarah: be careful ma'am..

...

Dr: its positive nupur... ur pregnancy report is positive ur indeed going to be a mother

Nupur: are u sure

Dr: yes I am... don't u want this..

Nupur: its not like tht ... actually there are things tht im scared of

Dr: ur husband

Nupur: yes him to... but sumhwere I know if he won't be happy he will not even ask me to abort.. he is not tht kinda person...its just tht... im scared of me ...myself

Dr: a little scary evry women is ...

Nupur: its not tht..

Dr: meaning

Nupur: sigh... u have done my cheakups.. donot u know..sigh...actual I have been a prostitute.. for 8 long yrs of life... And

Dr: oh thts wht it appears.. nupur ur rite... I wont say ur pregnancy is smooth... u have to be very carful spl in the frst trimester... I srsly cant guarantee tht ur body will retain the fetus or not... it has healed.. yet still I donot want u to over look the slight chance of miss hups.. u have been on pills n so many other things u know wht I mean...

Nupur: ya ... okay..

Dr: donot take stress.. its not tht aweful tht u cant conceive or fetus cant remain in u... its just u need to be alittle more careful thn anyother mother.. and no stress... talk to ur husband ASAP so tht if u want to abort or sumthing... But if u will ask my opinion I will not recommend.. not because it has any issue to ur health.. but cause it might not give u another chance to conceive...

Nupur: thank u...

Dr: hope to see ya next month..

She smiled and went back to home... straight to her room ... she was scared .. with so many things in her head.. she does not know tht how mayank will react... she herself isn't sure abt this how cum she can expect him to... They have never talked abt this.. his equation with his family.. everything was running in her mind.. the doctors call tht it maybe her last chance... the fact tht she was honored to be selected my lord for being a mother... she was scared more for many things... but frst she is scared of mayanks thought on this... she is praying tht he will not ask her to do sumthing she believe he will not.. and moreover wht kinda future as a mother she holds ... She just cant imagine tht

Whn he reached home it was pin drop silence in the house... seems like no one was there... Its nite and nupur never leave home like this... she was appearing gloomy from pass two days and whenever asked she will just shrugged him off.. but today god knows why he is feeling worried... he moved straight to his room and find it dark to...

He gasp sum air to make him stable..

Mayank: nupur.. he whispered... and switch on the lights... she was lying on the bed and he rushed too her

Mayank: wht happened dear ur oky... he placed his hand on her forehead and she open her eyes ... and he gasped her eyes were horrifying.. sumthing or so much in thm pain, questions mist... Nupur wht happen.. whts wrong

Nupur: nothing is wrong mayank I was just tired I was out all day ...

Mayank: ur lying I know ..pls tell me pls..

she sat up beside mayak.. his concern eyes where making her better to tell him everything...

Nupur: maaynk I went to doctor today

Mayank: y whts wrong n why didn't u told me

Nupur: I want to b sure about all this...he was searching for anwer in her eyes... she lowered them and close them ... and than looked up to him to say ... mayank we are pregnant..

She looked upto him to know the correct expressions ..and wht she expected.. was there..Confusion... his mouth open n close like fish yet he wasn't able to summarize his thoughts to tell her wht he is feeling ...

She waited for his answer... and whn the silence was not getting over she has to speak yet again

Nupur: mayank .. its oky u can say it... I mean if...if u donot want this child or its just

Mayank: I donot know nupur.. its just tht I donot know..

Nupur: u .. u want me to.. u want me to..

Mayank: no for god sake .. im not murder .. its just tht..sigh... nupur I donot know how father has to be.. I just donot know how fathers are meant to be.. I never thought myself.. or sumthing like tht cuming life.. its just I donot know I even have tht in my gene to be a father...

Nupur: u will make a great father mayank I know tht...

She said herself relived from all tht was running inside her..placing her head finally tired of all the thoughts on his shoulder... and thts when he realized she must be going through loads of apprehensions..

Mayank: do u thought tht I will never want I child of ours...

She was quite

Mayank: god nupur tell me... do u really thought I will think of u now like this .. when ur my wife ... my love everything... sumtimes it feels I have never been able to pull u out of all tht.. im have failed

Nupur: no u haven't mayank.. it isn't the thought abt u.. its just.. I donot know.. whn u didn't said anything I was going through all the possibilities and one was this too.. n im sorry it shouldn't be .. I was just scared I guess... I mean even I donot know wht kinda mother I will b.. I donot know how I m gonna face them... There questions... if she will b a girl I donot know how I will protect her and if he is boy than... I donot know

Mayank: shh calm down.. he said enclosing her in him rubbing her ... u know how to love and thts whts important princess...

Nupur: tht u know better thn me.. than y ur afraid..

Mayank: u know the reason... I have seen a worse father... whom I have hated evry min...

Nupur: and tht will make u know wht u should not do

Mayank: not wht I shoud do

Nupur: u will learn .. the moment u will feel ur a father I m sure u will...

Mayank: see u are already behaving as one mother... he smiled and she to smiled

After this news for the first time she felt like smiling

Mayank: congrats... he kissed her and felt her tears... wht happened nupur...

Nupur: there complications... she said on his lips.. and moved away..

Mayank: wht do u mean by tht... we r seeing a doc tomorrow I need to know

Nupur: I went today... She said not like tht to my life or sumthing but tht I will retain the fetus... I told her all.. and she said body has healed.. but still... the three months will decided.. and due to all of the things had happened to it might be my ultimate and..

Mayank: shh .. clam down.. frst tell me ur not lying of the fact tht its not gonna harm u

Nupur: I m not stupid mayank.. I m not leaving u on any cost..

He hugged her tightly... and kissed her head... cursing himself of all the time he took and already she was so stressed , he gave her more..

Mayank: listen to me n very carefully... we r gonna meet the doc again... will ask her wht kinda of care we shud take.. and then will strictly follow it... ur not allow to take stress princess... relax.. whn lord has given this moment to us HE will protect our happiness too.. hmm.. though I m feeling butterflies.. like those I felt before my toughest exams ...she chukled... but we will clear it together .. hmm..

She nooded and yes and hugged him tight.. feeling the happiness finally letting on herself...

Mayank: but he is not gonna ask weird question like.. how he was born n all...

Nupur: she slapped mayank and hugged him more ... laughing together...

...

8 weeks

Mayank: nupur I asked u not to step down frm the bed...

Nupur: maaynk pls I stop it

Mayank: nupur u need to take care of urself

Nupur: wht shud I do tell me.. get myself glued to the bed... on pregnant for god skae not paralyzed or wht

Mayank: NUPUR... wht are u saying... Atleast watch urwords

Nupur: ya ya I need to look thing I need watch things... im sick n tired of just sting here all alone looking at these walls... feels like the will eat me up and I will be crushed underneath them.. she sobbed and tears came out of her eeyes

He closed his eyes pressing his head with his hand ... he need to clam down .. he need to do it for her..this happening to much her anger is grown heights... she has become very impulsive and he knew doc has already warn him... plus she herself is pretty inscure abt the child... he sigh and went near her..and hold her with revieng few slaps not allowing him to do so but he did hold her tightly n carefully

Mayank: shh.. relax... clam down... I know wht u feel nupur but this wht we can only do... and u know tht...

Nupur: I know.. I m sorry

Mayank: its oky sweety ...he kissed her softly u really feel so in this room

She nooded in yes

Mayank: hmm wht about we shift to the room down...

Nupur: wht will be the change another room..it oky I will manage... its 8 wk till 12 wk I have to be so so cautions na.. than I can ...

Mayank: hmm but still... if we move done

Nupur: the color of the walls will change thts it

Mayank: not exactly ... tht u will see wht will be the change... give me a day oky... will u

Nupur: yes ... she smiled widly knowing he would do sumthing amzing

The both were carefully extra cautious more thn they were taught ,deep inside sacred too.. for nupur it was a miracle for maaynk it was nupurs miracle he was guarding , he knew preetyy well if god forbid sumthing happened she will not be able to take it .. and so he was leaving no stone unturned for being carefull.. whether it is not letting nupr to roam around a lot, stoping her from climbing up down ... so in short she was isolated in a room..

The next day he asked her to close her eyes and picked her up and went down carefully... and than make her stand in the room he has changed sumthing into her way... the moment she opned her eeys she gasped with joy... The walls of the rooms were no where , they were actually two side glass walls give her apple view of the seatle and the garden area of the house... she can actually view who is cuming in and out sumthing she misses a lot... biding him good byes n welcoming him home... there was an attached room to the room

Nupur: OMG mayank this is.. she turned around and hugged him tightly... kissing him with all the love she was feeling inside... in a day he made the world upside down for her...

Mayank: anything for this bright n shiny face of my wife...

Nupur: whts tht room...

Mayank: tht is the would be nursery... the guest room wall i asked them to broke and make a nursery here...

Nupur: why are v shifting here..

Mayank: yes as after the birth even u wont be running up n down so better we shift down for good... Plus stairs are dangerous kids fall a lot from thme.. kids room should be down... he said the last words with such a huge frown

She was amzed with it...he was actually saying like a worried protective father imagining his child running on them... she chukled

Mayank: wht

Nupur: ur a protective father...

Mayank: wht?

Nupur: they way u donot want ur kids to fall .. n all

He himself thought once... the feeling of being a father was just cuming like tht

Mayank: yes I am u mind tht.. she noded in no with a grin... plus u can finalize the look and all tht u want to have in nursery so ur time will pass in a good way but

Nupur: no exaggerations I know... But I so love u mayank ur the best I can even dream of...

Mayank: feeling is mutal mother...

...

15^th week

He came inside the house after a tiring day, more on tht fact that he thought to be on time specially knowing these days nupur is feeling really alone, he has asked gunjan if she can.. and she had said she will try asap.. gunjan he knows handle her fathers business is a busy woman but he is still expected her there ..how he wishes tht his mom would have once even once would have sumhow mentioned tht thought of being a grany he would have requested her so... but sigh .. he knew and he is oky with it ..he can only rly on sarah for the time he sint home...

The moment he enter the hosue he felt a faint name called..

Nupur: maaynk...

Tht soft and scary voice made his heart stoped for a moment.. he looked around

Mayank: sweetheart where u ..he said after checking her in the room..

Nupur: on stairs..

And he shot a glance and breath finding nupur siting on the mid of stair case.. holding on to the railing tightly

Mayank: wht happen why are u siting there.. and y u went up..

Nupur: it was raining so I thought to went up and enjoy the view.. and than I was cuming down and I got scared... I just..

Maaynk: shh I m cuming

He climbed up the stairs and he felt a strange warmth in his heart... he can actually imagine his little daughter or son siting there scared and cuddled up.. he cant help yet to hold his smile... she was actually looking like cute little child...

Mayank: he sat beside her and she hugged him.. oh come here .

Nupur: its so stupid na I was so sacred tht I will fell down

Mayank it sint stupid... everyone fears for sumthing... hmm...

Nupur: I have climbed and went down through these stairs a thousand time... its so stupid

Mayank: oye ..dont u dare call my daughter stupid.. u know whn u were siting here I can actually see my princess sting here scared... I actually felt all myself rash to protect n hold her freeing her from any worry..

Nupur: u actually felt like

Mayank: a father... he smiled and she smiled more...the confession from his side tht he really is feeling sumthing never came before... it was mesmerizing to see a dream in his eyes to... his eys actually weaving a imagination of their child... he pecked her forehead lingering his lips there for sumtime... now u close ur eeys n hold me..oky..

Nupur: oky

Hiding her face in his crok of neck , he picked her up to take her down... himself carefully placing evrystep afraid to hurt both of his loves ...he himself felt like breathing just one he placed her softly on the couch... it was all so new so much to feel ..

...

20^th week

after taking her shower she came and sat on the bed carefully...asking mayank to listen to him

mayank: wht is tht.. stethoscope..

Nupur: its different one... u place this in ur ears nah

Mayank: oky I m doing...

As soon as he did placed the hearing aid of fetal stethoscope in his ear... she placed the other end on her stomach remembering the way doc has asked her to.. she change the positing looking at his expressions and soon as the change from WHT -IS _THIS.. to O_M_G look she stoped and watched him carefully

He felt himself shiver... Goosebumps and wht not... it was miraculous to hear a heart beat not frm the heart... sumwhere tht thought was oky the baby bump and the baby but feeling the baby for the frst time actually.. the thought of sumone inside her really was... scary yet .. good one... she has two hearts inside her...weird alien yet miraculous..

Nupur: mayank u heard...

Mayank: he noded in yes

Nupur: hey ur oky... mayank... she can see his face turning pale... she just donto know wht is happening to him .. he was still n a bit cold too

She said removing it and siting back And in instant he hugged her and than moved away..

Mayank: I m gonna harm u.. nupur its.. its really weird to know ur having a heart in a stomach... he said with a huge frown on his face... actually trying to touch her than move his hand back

This made nupur laughed out loud.. she was ROFLIng at his face expressions and his talk.. he is dam cute.. the cutest evr

Nupur: god mayank ur so cute.. im not having a heart in stomach its our baby's

Mayank: ya I know but... he lyed down with her.. its really good wala scary feeling...

Nupur: a heart in a stomach.. she lyed down rolfing at him ..

Mayank: nupur I don't mean tht I mean... the though of having baby is oky but actually feeling tht.. he look beside in her eyes... Its really overwhelming... kissing her forehead ... Thanku... and he placed his hand on her stomach

Nupur: carefully my heart will stop..

He immediately removed it horrified... and heard her spited in to laughter's again...

Mayank: this isn't not done... and he cant help but to laugh on himself too... stop it nupur.. its my frst baby

Nupur: oh really its mine 15^th

Mayank: but this is really amzing... he kissed her n her womb.. and she snuggled more in to him..

...

Dr: he didn't said tht ... she laughed

Nupur: yes he did... donot tell him tht I said to u...

Dr: its awesum I never came up with such cute remark ervr... So today why not u ask him to join in us sonography... let him see his child.. he has never joined us from a llong time

It has been few time tht he vested with nupur... he was almost no working in the first trimester to be there with nupur.. and then he has loads of work to make himself free in the end... so he was getting hardly time in morning to go with her checkups... it was always sarah who will be there with her... and he will be on cell with her...

Nupur: wonderful idea..

Dr: Mr Sharma...u also pls cum with us...

Mayank: sure..

He brought tears in nupurs eyes the way he stood still watching his baby with a huge smile... but moment he actually touch the screen he bought tears in her eyes.. she was not sure whn n how he will have tht feeling in him of joy yet it came ... and she was so glad it came before the birth of their child...

Sum me later whn she started to feel the kicks n movements he was making her hell annoyed with actually playing with his child

Nupur: stop it mayank or I will kill u I m telling u... both of u donot let me sleep... and whn morning cums u both sleep so soundly and im tht one who keeps awaken...huh..

He laughed and than said a sorry removing his hand... he was actually doing so... placing his hand on onside of womb and as soon as he feel the child moved to other placing there it was liking as if both of them are playing catch me.. mayank was actually giggling and enjoying annoyed was the mother who has to feel the flutters not make her sleep at all ( I use to do this with my sister... :P)

Mayank: sorry sorry ... we will sleep... GN kido... and u too mom.. cum..

Nupur: im so thankful to both of u... huh

...

Gunjan: hello mom...

Nupur: hello chachi...whn ur paying us a visited

Gunjan: just enter in the nine month me n samrat are dying to cum there

Nupur: oh so u want to visit ur newphew not me ... Very bad..

Gunjan: tht is so true im saving all my vacations for tht...

Nupur: its anytime happening u know tht...

Gunjan: yes n thts y I m cuming to ur place tomorrow.. so hold tht baby in u for a day oky

She laughed at her.. she always said tht hold tht baby until I came there

Nupur: ya baby is listening to his ant .. he will

Gunjan: lets see about he or she... I m wondering tht either brothers will loss the bet or we will... Doesn't matters the gain is always there

...

It was the day... he was actually holding the bundle of joy in his hands.. ya he lost the bet of a baby girl... yet whos complaining he is holding his son... his son...

He was there with her, though everything... he cant define the feeling it was all so puzzled up .. a happiness mixed with so much anxiety tht he felt he doesn't know how to breath... he was inside so much panicking bt he has to be strong for her.. he will be there..as promised... the moment his son was placed in his arms he was actually feeling shivers... he doesn't have words to say he just smiled fully with grumpy little nupur in his hand.. ya strangly he was a boy yet he seems to be mama's boy ... he has same eyes ... same beautiful eyes..

He softly n pretty carefully moved to a tired nupur... and sat beside her placing there son in her arms... she smile with her droopy eyes.. and he kissed her tears away... hugging her side way he just cant stop looking at the reason of there smile... it was miraculous so unbelievable...

Nupur: thank u... she said in her tears after pecking her son and thn him...

Mayank: T-h-a-n-k U... it all because of u... he is so like u ..

Nupur: she chukled... but he is grumpy like u... he has just came in the world and he wants to sleep.. just like u

Mayank: like father like son he said proudly ... But I promise u son I wont be like my father...

...

Oky the fetal stethoscope ... I hope u guys are not interested in getting in details... google it if u want to

The part of staircase I have read it sumwhere I donot remember hence not adding authors name( i think Np18)... apologized to the person... If any one does pls leme know... thugh not the whole part yet just a one line..

Next week or within this wk hopefully I will be updating this thread for the final time...

Hope to see ur comments at this chapter .. one of my favts it is..

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

thanks alot dear im glad u liked it
chalo tum ny last update k coment abhi hi day diya 😆.. itni jaldi hai khatam kerny ki
lol... han mayank with evry ff is turning naughtier
glad u enjoyed sanu too
mayank's father will never mess infrnt of media