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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

EPILOGUE

I think I donot have much to say about this story just tht nobody choose to be wht nupur was, no girl evr wants to nor a girl will ever want to be always stuck there... its just the misery the misfortune tht makes one ends there... Fortune turned into misfortunes by sum respectable so called people than y cant they can actually turn the misfortune into fortune... no body does tht..

The moment I actually saw tht girl saying the report " ap keray gay mjh se shadi" was a moment tht I cant just take away from my head... it was such surety in her voice tht nobody nobody will ever its just a joke tht her life can be really a life to live and she can be loved not being used like a trash...

I wish they too find there fairy tales... Wish we all find one and can make our simple ordinary life a fairytale.. and can actually make others too

Thanku for being part of this ff... many of u were not comfortable with nupur being a pr*** so was i... yet u all stayed here for an year.. and appreciated and loved this ff... thanks a lot ..

Waiting for ur views on this FF... will love to know wht was ur best part or moment in this ff...

Silent readers a word frm ur side will be really honor for me ..

Fiza Ahmed

Edited by drfizaahmed - 11 years ago
drfizaahmed thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42


two mins dear
😊
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
It ended...
and ended on a very good note
a happy ending..

This story was something very unique from your other stories..
All this story centered on the LOVE
if LOVE is with you
it doesn't matter who you are..
it took away all your fears and
take you land where you actually smile..
and happy from inside from soul.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

It ended...

and ended on a very good note
a happy ending..

This story was something very unique from your other stories..
All this story centered on the LOVE
if LOVE is with you
it doesn't matter who you are..
it took away all your fears and
take you land where you actually smile..
and happy from inside from soul.



thanks alot dear
for staying on this story
yes its differnt frm my others and my way of writing to... yet i enjoyed it as u all supported it so much
it was a fairytale... so love needs to conquer all odds

thanks for summarizing it so beautifully
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
perfect & happy ending fiza
it is a different mayur story ..loved this mayur ..it's very challenging to make their life into a fairytale ..but they did it with the support of each other
thanks for the pm & story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
A very Beautiful Story Fiza.it was really a tough subject but you done your job really well.Keep it up good work,i'll wait for ur new FF.:)
About your question .i liked all the initial chapters most.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
At last I completed reading the whole story.😃😃

First of all,I wanted to confess that I want to kick myself a number of times I wish to miss such a wonderful story which is so away from the show.I beg of you,please forgive me.I hope you will.😳😳

Now coming to the story.As you have confessed so Iam also not hiding the fact that I also disliked the fact of Nupur being a prostitute,but then I realized that its a kind of reality,girls being prostitute,some on their will and some being left with no option left.I also realized another fact that,all stories need not have to be like fairy tales and sometimes you have to face the harsh truth.The beauty lies when you take out the beauty from a worst thing and for that hats off to you!👏👏

Npur was at first raped by her step-father😡😡That part of update was really horrible.😡😡Huh!Now even in some cases a girl can't trust her biological father,there are ample of examples to that where a girl is raped by her own father,which is the most disgusting thing🤢🤢Parents are the only one to trust blindly,but now the word TRUST brings another question with it ON WHOM?😭😭

But yes,some girls are not so lucky like Nupur.At last GOD smiled to her and she got a family with a husband like Mayank.She never desired for anything in her life,but its said that if God punishes than he himself fills their life with happiness and thats what happened Nupur.😛😛After passing those horrible 8 years,at last now she is happy forever with her own family.😊😊

Lastly the disgusting Mr and Mrs Sharma😡😡I wish if that bas***d woyuld have been stabbed by Mayank when he was talking ill about Nupur.Its said na SAU CHUHE MAAR KAR BILLI HAJ KO CHALI.Kutta,kameena,saala suwar,gutter mein sar sar ka mar ja tu.Iam soory Iam using such words but Iam helpless because that filth desrves it and yes Mrs Sharma,you woman,at least you should have supported your son's decision and moved on with them,I would have much more happier.She can't see person behind tag,but what about her own husband,isn't he a ruscal behind the tags,at that moment when she was staying with her hubby even after knowing the truth,where her morals gone?I hate that woman too.😡😡

The verbal slap to Esha,bi***,but yeah I loved it.👏👏

While concluding,I must say its very tiresome to read the whole story at one go,so I promise to read regularly according to your updates,for my sake of understanding the story better.So please please send me PMs wheneer you update your story.😃😃

Thanks for giving us such a wonderful story.😊👏

One question,why did you choose this title?Does that resemble your story?Iam unable to understand that.😕😕
Edited by -Paulomi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



thanks alot dear
for staying on this story
yes its differnt frm my others and my way of writing to... yet i enjoyed it as u all supported it so much
it was a fairytale... so love needs to conquer all odds

thanks for summarizing it so beautifully



The story itself is so mesmerizing that words formed itself...
Waiting for your other stories also

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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
GOSH its ended
cant believe it yaar- kaise kaise ek aur story khatam hogayi.

sighhh i so loved this story- it was totally a fairytale. may be it wont happen in real but who cares at least we got a pure love b/w to ppl through this FF. here mayank was simply a gem , the ESP power of nupur.very beautifully written the pregnancy part of nupur. u know the staircase part was similar to mjht story of np8 where nupur was sacred abt her child that if she fall frm the staircase then what will happen?? loved the way mayank support nupur in her each and every step.
loved and adore their bonding. u are simply awesome dear
loved this one as usual like other FF. why not?? ap likhte he itna accha..HUG HUG
plz do write new FF on MAyur
Keep wrting


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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
wonderful dear
loved this whole FF
please do start a new ff

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