Thrd:2 MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story last chapterPG7 28/12 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Faria.

GOSH its ended
cant believe it yaar- kaise kaise ek aur story khatam hogayi.

sighhh i so loved this story- it was totally a fairytale. may be it wont happen in real but who cares at least we got a pure love b/w to ppl through this FF. here mayank was simply a gem , the ESP power of nupur.very beautifully written the pregnancy part of nupur. u know the staircase part was similar to mjht story of np8 where nupur was sacred abt her child that if she fall frm the staircase then what will happen?? loved the way mayank support nupur in her each and every step.
loved and adore their bonding. u are simply awesome dear
loved this one as usual like other FF. why not?? ap likhte he itna accha..HUG HUG
plz do write new FF on MAyur
Keep wrting

sukar ker allah allah ker k yeh story khatam ho hi gai

true it hardly can evr happen in real life ..
i know if u have read my note beneath the update u would have know tht i have mentioned it there clearly tht it has ben taken frm a story as i loved it... i never take things without giving them there deserving credit..
thanks alot for liking and loving the story ...
no new ffs cuming need to finish my old ones frst...
thanks alot for reading always

Originally posted by: Lenco

wonderful dear
loved this whole FF
please do start a new ff

thanks alot dear
thanks for staying here

Originally posted by: ratibob007

Amazing story beautiful ending.

I loved this whole story.

It shows that love & trust can take you to places, it can make you free from all apprehensions & insecurities.

With the true love being on your side you can win the world, nothing is impossible when you are in love.

Thanks for this beautiful and different story.

thanku so much
really gad tht u loved the story and the way it ended
im really happy with the fact tht u jst pointed out the essence of this stroy
thanks alot ...

Originally posted by: Pia-

loved this FF so much

thanks alot

Originally posted by: Dalia.

mayur are living happily with thier cute child
i loved the way their son utter bah bah- so sweet

thanks alot dear
yup the got there happily evr after
thnks for staying n liking it

Originally posted by: pihu.

beautiful ending of a beautiful FF
its called fairytale
awesome

thanks alot dear
yup it is and i m glad u felt so

Originally posted by: tasnim.

fantastic part
loved it so much Api
you are just brilliant
plz come back with new mayur ff

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Your love give me strength to live day by day
To enjoy my life to the fullest forgetting that painful past behind
To understand that life is a journey
And that we can travel it together
Your love teaches me thet love is unconditional,
And that our love will never die
It will go through many changes,
Just as our lives are in constant motion
You have taught me to be secure in our love
The way u love me give me butterflies
I feel strangly light headed
I look forward to your touch, the sound of your voice
The comforting words you offer
And your undying support
You have taught me that love can last a lifetime
And that you must work at it
Something this precious cannot be given up
The way you love me lights my life
And burns a fire deep inside

Wonderful n perfect ending api...
This is one of the best n most beautiful n pure lovestory I have read... mayank n nupur both face a lot but with the help of their love they handle everything very well.
My fav scene hmmm that one month both live together ... q ka ose doran to nupur feel like a normal girl ..they way mayank treat her... n second they wedding night part..sach api ro pari thi me os part ko pardh kar...matlb mujhe kitna intezar tha os part ka n jb wo aya to meina jo socha tha osa totally different .. nupur ka dard oska emotions apna itna acha sa describe kiya ka ... is ff ka sab sa best part h wo..n heads off to u to write it soo well 👏 👏
N third nupur n samraat scenes I really like it very much.. specially the scene when nupur gifted him..
N forth one is nupur pregnancy part mayank reaction u have h heart in ur stomach awee soo adorable... n that stair scene I love the most mayank actually feel like father who is protecting his frightened baby...apiii ap kase har choti choti chiz itna acha sa describe kar lati ho...I soo wish me apse atleast ek bar zaror mila life ..taka apko hug kar sko..for giving us sach a beautiful stories..
I m going to miss this ff very much..ek attachment se ho gyi h is ff sa ..jaise Ardhagani sa hui thi.. abi tk os ff ko bhol nhi ski me almost 50 time pardh chuki ho osa still feel like reading again n again...
Plz api ff likhna kbi mat chorna .. n comeback with new ff abi nhi to kuch time bd per zaror ..thk h
Love u n thanku again for giving us such a beautiful ff..waise mera dil ko abi b nhi lg rha yeh ff end ho gya h..sighhh

thanks alot dear..
im really glad tht u loved it
and u did summarized in beautiful way with those beautiful poetic words

i m really glad u liked the wedding nte part at tht was the most diffcult and my one of favt parts
i m really glad dear that u loved this ff so much .. and im honured always whn my readers says tht they are still reading sum of my old ones... it really means alot
hope to see ya like this always on my wirting
thanks for staying here liking and enjoying
love ya

Originally posted by: GauriLuvsRP

FINALLLYY THE BEAUTIFUL STORY OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL COUPLE COMES TO AN END...😳😳😳

Dont know whether to be happy or sad...

THIS FF WAS ONE OF UR BEAUTIFUL N DIFFERENT WRITINGS FIZA...

When i started reading it as a silent reader I had no idea that i will be able comment on this beautiful FF...

But i am glad n privileged that I did it...😃😃😃

I have always loved all ur writings Fiza...😳😳😳

Please never stop writing dear...😊😊😊

THANKS ALOT FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY...🤗🤗🤗

HOPE TO SEE MORE BEAUTIFUL FF'S FROM U FIZA...😳😳

thanksa lot dear for liking this story so much and staying here
i m really glad u actually did start commenting as it always help a writer...
i hope i do cont writing
thnks for staying here ... thanku