SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] #2 | CH 14 - PG 20 : 25th Feb' 14

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^^by thegameison, K.

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Alright. I can't. believe. this. is. second. thread. now!

I have not to much to say except, thanks to all those who supported my through out the previous thread and showed their love and interest towards this story. It is all because of you we have reached second thread because frankly i once had thought that this story would be a big flop but i guess, i was damn wrong!

God, i am so happy we have reached second thread of season 2 already!

Thank you, every single person who contributed towards this story even with a single like in entire thread. Thanks to all, lovely readers. 🤗

Yes, i hope i get exact same amount of likes on this post like i got huge amount on the post in previous thread because i love first few posts always full of likes! *show off i am* 🤣

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Character Sketches


Whenever i will introduce any new character then i will add it up here.



Swayam Shekhawat

He is a managing director of Shekhawat enterprises which was owned by his dad and now his. He is a great business minded person but his business never over took his personal emotions or his heart. He is a very unpredictable and caring person, but when he gets bad then no one can be bad them him. He hates betrayers and sometimes he is very reserve too. He can go to any limit to protect himself from any emotional hurt.


Sharon Raiprakash

She is a normal and sweet Mumbai girl. She is orphan and has been living in orphanage till 18 years old. Currently she is working in Swayam's office as his father's PD. Swayam and she are not so close but good friends with each other. Swayam's dad see her like his own daughter and rather lots of time she has to eat together with him and his family at their house. She is very passionate about her work and take work very seriously.


Deepika Raiprakash

Deepika aka Deepy and Nugget for everyone is a cute, small 6 years old girl. Someone left her in orphanage with she was few days born. Sharon found her for the first time in the garden of orphanage and till that time she is so attached to her. When Sharon moved out of so she was just one year old but the lady who owned the orphanage let Sharon take her away with her as she knew no one can love her and take care of her like Sharon can. Sharon gave her name Deepika and she gave her sir name to her. Deepika calls her Di but somewhere she finds her mom in her.


Reyaansh Singhania

He is Sharon's close friend and knows her since childhood. He too is orphan and lived in same orphanage with Sharon. He is married to Swayam's sister, Kriya. He and Swayam are very much of close friends from school times, he was there with him in all ups and downs when. He is like a brother to Swayam.


Kriya Singhania

She is a total full loving and full of life girl. She is Swayam's younger sister and Swayam's dad adopted her when she was just 3 years old because he think a baby girl can brighten their lives. She loves his brother a lot and at least spend few quality hours with him in a week and lots of times she gets her hands on Sharon too. She is a complete package of beautiful wife, friend and sister.

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I n d e x .


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Jab Dil Miley [Season # 1]

Thread 1
Thread 2
Thread 3


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Kahi Ankahi [Season # 2]

Thread 1 (Chapter One - Chapter Eleven)
Chapter # 12 - Below.
Chapter # 13
Chapter # 14




-M.






Edited by blush. - 11 years ago
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Note : Alright, i don't know if you guys were expecting a way long update then sorry to burst lots of bubbles here! But i promise you will be smiling all the time reading the regular 2000 words i have written. Lots of you may know i am going through a very disturbing eye infection and also my internet is pain in the butt nowadays so i was going to update on 11th only but my internet was closed and besides i have asked my friend sweetcherry95 to leave a informing note from my see but she didn't. I will see that betrayer in private! 😈

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Chapter # 12



"Happy birthday!"

It was an understatement to say Swayam was shocked. He wasn't. He was pleased and got emotional somewhere in his heart. The entire farm house was decorated with every possible beautiful thing. It was literally a small bash time for him. A small table was placed between the large room draped in white silk clothe with a nice white cake placed on it. It could be the best surprise, rather shock by Sharon ever or by anyone. No one has does this for him for all his life. His father had celebrated his birthday but it was nothing like this. He used to buy his cakes and took him to his favorites amusement places. All he had to laugh and share his words with was Kriya was actually younger than him and who definitely never understood any joke he crack or any word he said but still she used to smile and hug him every time. Thus, this today was different, something he knew he would never feel in his life. Like people smiling at him, wishing him and going something for him to make his day special. He shook his thoughts and look at Sharon wearing a pretty white dress, reaching to her knees, letting candles on the cake. "Is this all for me?" Swayam asked slowly looking at Sharon. There were others people there, close to him. Rey, his sweet baby sister Kriya and that little angel, Deepy but all he could see right now was his wife, Sharon.

"Everything," Sharon said taking slow steps towards him and wrapped her around his neck, whispering Happy birthday, Swayam' in his ear while Swayam smiled and lifted her up in the air a bit. "Thank you, Sharon. Thanks for doing all this for me," Swayam said placing her down on her feet earning a huge smile from her. "You are worth it. Beside I wanted to do something else but then I couldn't because of short time so I am sorry. Adjust with it," Swayam said looking at him. "Are you crazy? Adjust? I love it, really!" Swayam said to Sharon, "Aw, we wouldn't have like to disturb this cute moment but since we are also here and I can't stand any more minute. My foot hurts, bhai!" Kriya said aloud, pouting like crazy. Swayam looked at his sister and laughed at her with Sharon. "Kriya! Come here!" Swayam said and engulfed Kriya is an emotional hug. "No bhai, don't get to sad because now I really do understand whatever you say to me unlike my childhood but I still can hug you anytime!" Kriya said and kissed on his cheek, breaking the hug. "You sure can, Kri!" Swayam looked at Rey and goes to hug him, "Happy birthday, Swayam!" Rey cheered and hugged his dear friend. "Thanks, you all are just too much! I was about to die with boredom in my room!" Swayam said making Sharon chuckled. "Your wife is such pain in the ass! My ass is literally sat on fire after so much work and falls from stool!" Rey said sitting on the couch.

Swayam felt a tug on his jeans, looking down he found Deepy standing there with something in her hands. He gave her big smile and picked her in his arms. "Happy birthday," Deepy greeted and kissed Swayam's cheek. "Thanks, sweetie," Swayam said and kissed her cheeks back. "Now what is this in your hand?" Swayam asked, "I made it for you myself." Deepy said and handed Swayam a small packet and a card as well. Swayam opened a card and looked at it. He could do all the awe at the moment if he had words to speak. He was touched. Deepy had made an entire card out of raw macaronis of different shapes and it looked creatively beautiful, really beautiful. She has painted those into blue and white colors, matching the boy like color theme she put in the card.

Happy Birthday, Swayam jiju'

I love you and you are the best jiju in the world.

Di scolds you sometimes and even I too but then we love you and sorry for not letting you to leave the room.

You are the best friend I have. (After DI)

Deepy,

It was written in the card with silver glitter pen. There were glittery macaronis everywhere with blue tint of color splashes. It was a masterpiece by a small little girl of age 6 only. "You made it?" Swayam asked to Deepy while she hesitated. She nodded. "I love you too, Deepy. It is beautiful, I loved it." He said and kissed her head, tightly engulfing her in a dearly hug. "Hey wait, when did you make it? And how do you know my birthday?" Swayam asked raising a brow at her. Deepy giggled but didn't reply, "Come one, out with it little Smurf!" Kriya said to Deepy with a smile and stood next to her. "When I and Sarah were coming here last night someone send a cake for you from your office as in advance birthday wish so that way I got to know that you have your birthday today." Deepy told making everybody do Oh'. "It was a stupid cake, black and ugly!" Deepy said scrunching her nose. Before Swayam could answer Rey said, "Must be from some business client who has a crush on his hot body!" He said, earning a glare from Swayam and Sharon giggled. "You have a hot body? Are you feeling hot?" Deepy asked innocently to Swayam. Everybody looked at her and burst into fits of laughter. "Oh, I did not say some joke!" Deepy said, jumping from Swayam's arm and putting her hands in her hips. Total Miss. Hitler! "Wait, little Siren! Ah...you just said... I mean of course we didn't laugh at you! Your words remind us of something!" Swayam said holding her arms and placing her on the table like she was a pillow. "I am not a pillow!" She said to Swayam who actually felt she was because of her weight. He took a huge breath and looked at her head, then her back, then closely in her eyes. "No X-ray machine" He said to himself.

Sharon clapped her hands cheerfully, "Now is a cake cutting time!" She announced and Swayam, her, Deepy and Rey and Kriya walked towards the small, individual table with now a cake on it since in meanwhile a chat Sarah had put the place back into the fridge. Sharon lit the candles again, "Here you go, birthday boy!" Sharon handed him a small knife. Soon after Swayam was blowing the candles with everyone singing birthday tune for him while Deepy sang like it is a last time she can sing in her life. Swayam cut the piece of the cake and feed it first to Deepy and then others. "Aw, I have got a present for birthday boy," Rey said like a total Santa and handed Swayam a box. "Thank you, my Santa!" Swayam said and punched in his stomach. "Thank God it wasn't me who was Santa!" Kriya said and looked at her pregnant belly! "Ah, I would have never done that!" Swayam said making everyone laugh. "Ok, enough now. Kriya you want to give something?" Sharon asked catching everyone's attention. "Hell yes!" Kriya said. "Language!" Swayam said to her, making her bite her tongue and then he looked at Deepy who was just looking at her frock, cleaning the creases over it like a princess. Thank God she didn't hear. "I did hear," Deepy said slowly not raising her head.

Kriya winked at Deepy when she winked at her, "You are too good, lady!" Kriya said while Deepy ran to the dining table and took her favorite seat. "Make it quick. I am hungry!" Deepy said allowed. "Are you like 20?" Swayam asked to Deepy getting surprised by her day by day. "No, I am not but my brain works faster than any stupid lady of aged 50 even. I am even smarter then you because I know that you and di..." Before she could complete it Sharon ran and stopped her by closing her mouth with her hand. "Me and di what?" Swayam asked raising his eye brows. Deepy tried to say something but it got muffled over Sharon's palm, "She wanted to say that she knows that you and di are... hungry! Yes, hungry! So let's eat!" Sharon squealed at everyone. "Alright yes, I am quiet hungry right now." Swayam said turning to Rey and Kriya. "You know bhai when Sharon bhabhi told me you have fever I got scared but still I managed to convince her to let you eat a normal dinner today then you can again do to your healthy diet from tomorrow!" Kriya said shook her head as if she had done something extremely proud. Swayam couldn't but grinned widely at Sharon like a chiseled cat. "Only for tonight!" Sharon said and left for the dining hall of the farm house.

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Sharon came out of the hall to inform that dinner is served and everyone followed her into dining hall, except Deepy who flew there... on Swayam's back! "What a jackpot! There is lots of variety, I see! Sharon thanks for it." Swayam said sitting on the chair and Sharon smiled at her. Soon enough they had done with the amazing dinner with more than half a dozen different food. "Here goes the cake," Kriya said while giving a small Barbie plate to Deepy with the cake in it. Sharon took two plates with cake and took seat next to Swayam, eating. "I love this cake. It is so yummy!" Deepy said, "When you do never loved the cake, by the way?" Swayam asked teasing her. Deepy made a thinking face, "I must have some time but I don't remember. I will think tomorrow and tell you." Deepy said and showed him her tongue. "You..." Swayam rose to catch her but Sharon stopped her. "God, you act like her age with her all the time!" Sharon said and made him eat his cake. After some time they all were in TV launch, opening gifts.

Swayam opened Kriya's gift first and it was a cell phone, brand new IPhone 5, "Yu have already used 4 from long time. It was time to jump to 5 so yeah I bought it!" She said confusingly. "Oh, I love it. Actually I was actually thinking to buy it whenever I get time. Thanks for saving more than a Lakh of mine!" Swayam winked at her, making her laugh. "Alright, enough now my gift," Rey said handing him her gift, actually an envelope. Swayam took it and tore the opening. He took out something like tickets from it. Those were honeymoon tickets to Singapore and Hong Kong for Sharon and Swayam. "What the f**k?" Swayam yelled in shock. "Swayam!" Sharon hissed at him. "Sorry, Rey, what is this?" He asked to Rey who was looking everywhere but him. "What happened?" Sharon asked. "He has booked tickets for us to Singapore for honeymoon!" Swayam told and poor Sharon who was drinking Pepsi chocked on it. "Come on guys! You guys haven't been to your honeymoon and it already like 5-6 months to your marriage. You have to go and besides you have to accept the gift. Kriya agreed to this plan!" Rey said to both of them. "Of course she does!" Swayam said.

They all kept their argue mission for half an hour while Deepy had a bowl in extra buttered and cheese pop corns as she sat and watched her cartoon and also giggling at the stupid comments any of them passed. It was not easy to convince Swayam and Sharon both but they did agree when Kriya started black mailing. Thank God they didn't booked tickets for the same day though. There flight was tomorrow night so that means Swayam could wrap few of his office work too but then tomorrow was Sunday and they decided to stay one more night here and even convince Rey and Kriya to stay with them. They looked almost all night, having fun. Rey told how Sharon knew it is Swayam's birthday and only this morning she had call and told all about this plan and because of this they have practically locked Swayam in room. Deepy told that whenever he would sleep in those 8 hours she would to go her room in here and made that card as she had her school bag with almost every stationary thing in it. They watched a comedy movie too late night. Swayam never had such a nice birthday ever. It seems like his family is complete now. Around in 5:00 in morning Rey and Kriya went the room Swayam showed him to stay at and Swayam had already tucked Deepy in her room around 2:30 as she was not willing to leave them and now both Swayam and Sharon went to take a small refreshing sleep before clock strikes 9:00.



No, note today. Me not in mood!
Just 15 pages of spamming, good amount of likes and comments! 😎
Edited by blush. - 11 years ago
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Done. You all can reserve if anyone wants.
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res
edited
firstly sorry for not editing the comment
itna time ho gaya that i reserved and forgot.
mujhe kabhi kabhi khud pur hasi aati hai
if i did not see your note
i would have never edited
so thanks for reminding

secondly
what can i say about the update
it was so sweet
wish mera birthday aisa hota
unfortunate me, mere birthday pur mujhe
exam preps our exams likhne padte hain

deepy is so cute
i literally am begging for a cute sister
to my parents, wish har insaan ko
deepy jaisi saali mile.
the card, every kid makes it
its lovly to see such things

i loved the kriyam bond
kriyaansh were amazing too

and honeymoon
its awesome
im just wondering ye log
kaise spend karenge isse

and
swayam ki mumma kahan hai?????/
i want to see that lady,
dissapear kyu ho gayi?///

what i love the the most about this ff
of yours is the personal touch
you gave to it, without destroying the fiction
we can relate our lives.

p.s update jaldi
want to read more
nidhi

Edited by nidhi1998 - 11 years ago
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congo
Awesome update 😊
Swayam's birthday was well penned
Every thing associated was adding to glorifying the update
emotions n actions were well described
Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res 😳
Unres 😳
What should i say am speechless
Mein joh kuch bhi kahungi is less
Becoz i know aap kitni mehnat ker rahi ho itni awsum stories likhne mein
As always its awsum amazing zabardast perfect
I luved it alooot se bhi bohat zyada
I really luv seeing deepy's and swayam's bond getting stronger and stronger by every update
The way swayam become chota bacha wid deepy is sooo adorable
I always keep smiling read their part
I always want that part to never end
Hahahha i was laughing so loudly when sharon came to know that what rey gifted to him and she choked her drink
Cant w8 for their honeymoon track
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
Thanx for the update
Take care
And get well sooon (for ur eye infection)
Edited by sadafarsha - 11 years ago
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Hey Marium 😊
Firstly Heartly Congratulations for second thread 🤗🥳
May your this wonderful story complete many more threads 😳
and Secondly the update was simply awesome,amazing
loved it to the core ❤️
from the start till the end is was just amazing
it is penned very beautifully 👏
swayam's birthday celebrations nice
deepy's gift to swayam a hand made card was soo adorable (best gift)
really loved swayam and deepy bond ❤️
and rey's gift honeymoon tickets was great and sharon choked the pepsi on knowing what is rey's gift was funny 😆
splendid job 👍🏼
i loved this story a lot
it feels great to read how story is progressing i mean i really loved the way how u r unfolding the story
so can't wait to read further
plzzz update soon
thanks for the PM and do PM me
and came to know about your eye infection
so GET WELL SOON and take care...
Edited by dashinggirl - 11 years ago
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res
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plz plz get well soon
i was happy tat you finally updated
congr8 for ur new thread
i luved the way you showed swayam's budday party
swaron spending some quality time wit rey kriya n deepy
deepy's gift was really the best among all
i luv tis deepy - swayam bond its more like a father-daughter relationship
finally swaron are going on a honeymoon
looking forward to how the story will unfold from tis point
do write more 😊
Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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