SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] #2 | CH 14 - PG 20 : 25th Feb' 14

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Well first of all congratulations for the new thread
Update was awesome eagerly waiting for the swaron honeymoon
And romance in that honeymoon
Loved the swayam bday party
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

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Unreserved
I loved the update it was fabulous as usual marium tere updates kab achhe nahi hote as a matter of fact..😆 ❤️.
Coming to the update I loved seeing the shocked Swayam.. He was celebrating his birthday in the true sense today.. Celebrating with family is always a lovely experience..😊. I loved the entire set up you described.. The table with a white silk cloth and a white cake over it made my mouth water..👍🏼 😛. I loved the short but adorable Swaron moment that followed it was a treat to read it..😊.
The Card made my deepy was beautiful its description made me fall in love with it superb gal..👍🏼. She is one smart ass lady bahut bolti hai and sharp ears I must say..😆. I wonder what was she telling Swayam which made Sharon stop her my putting her palm over her mouth.. Uska secret reveal karna please..😃.
I-phone 5 waah lucky guy Swayam and honeymoon tickets..😲.Sharon's reactions to it were fun to read..😆 Wow I look forward to it as I hope we'll be getting to read Swaron moments in it...
All in all the update was brilliant loved loved it marium..❤️.
15 pages of spamming means you would'nt be giving us an update anytime soon..😔. Yet I'd say update soon please..😊.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.
P.S- Congratulations for the new thread.. Get well soon gal take care..😊

Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

its is an aswom update...

loved d cute moments b/w swayam and deepy...

nd they going 2 hooneymone...dekhate ha jaye ge ya nhai...

update soon

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

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unres

OK so firstly i would say congo shongo for the second thread🤗

Coming to the update no issues with word limit as long as we get all happy moments within the word limit😛😈

it was swayam's bday😃 and how sweet of sharon to plan a surprise for him😳

i loved the description of deepy's greeting card...such a sweetheart she is😊

rey gifted them honeymoon tickets😲

and they actually agreed to go🥳

that means we will get few swaron moments right?😃

it was sad that we got such a small convo of them in this update

and wats with the black and ugly cake?😕

now pls dont tell me it was swayam's evil mom and not some client😡

may be not🤔 i'm just suspicious😛

coz i know ur such devil

u want 15 pages spamming 🤢

which means there is quite sometime for the next update...u wont be updating soon, will u?😭

anyway i'll still say update fast...will be waiting

Edited by -Chaitra- - 11 years ago

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lovely222

@lovely222

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Amazing work dear so Plan of honeymoon set and an amazing birthday party wow gr8

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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

congo for d new thread

luved d upgrade

wondering on wat deepy was going to say wen sharon closed her mouth

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

First of all congratulations for the new thread..👏🥳
thank u thank u thank u sooo much for updating this FF..😊😊
awesome chapter...totally loved it..
super excited for the next chapter...
pls update soon...
thanks for pm..

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

i loved ur ff on whole..

just read d whole ff in 1 go..

awesome chapters u write..

in love with this ff.. i know i promised i ll read ur ff this n alpha long back but again was caught up with something r other n didnt get time to read n now i completed this i ll do alpha soon..

coming to this i love deepy sajron n swayam convos n d CS of them..
swaron want to start making proper relationship than being strangers like this.. d bathrrom scene was awesomely penned.. i loved d romance in there..

swayam's mom s she even a woman who wants to kill her own blood for money:o... she s stalking them n taking pics n even hurt deepy n said its just start ...:o...

swayam's dad adopted kria n after she came to their life their life was beautiful.. kria's pregnancy tantrums n d way rey s struck to it was cute i loved those parts..

sharon's concern for deepy n deepy's past was well penned n coz of sharon's concern swayam doesn't want sharon to get worried even more by telling d truth..

b'day celebrations was awesome.. loved d family time part n deepy's n rey's gift.. swayam emotional for having d best b'day.. did his mom give that ugly black cake for him???

swayam's dad n sharon's relation was cute even though u showed it for a update.. but i loved that part..

so swayam now has to postpone telling rey abt kria's past n d danger she s in.. swayam doesn't know how his mom ll look n s now trying to find how she ll look.. loved d way u showed swayam apologizing for moving away n not for moments spend between them coz it was not mistake from his side...

from now onwards i ll comment regularly.. sorry for making u wait this long for my comment.. awesome work.. ll b waiting eagerly for next part..