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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Surbhilover

Amazing update...i loved the part.. update soon please..



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Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 36:

As zoya asked for champagne... everyone were shocked... expect zeenat and anwar... And they both were smiling at zoya antics... asad observed their reaction... And felt bad.. that he didn't discuss with appi... about zoya wishes for her marriage...

As:.. it will be here in an hour...zoya...

Z:... no champagne... ohh...it is ok Mr.khan...

Most of them were smiling at their conversation, but shireen was shocked... and badi bi too...

Sh:... zoya... what are saying... U drink... what is wrong...now... u r married now.. u are a mother... Now you should be more responsible... U should change urself...ok...

Z:...jee... don't take me wrong... But... why should I change myself... I am zoya...and I will be myself... yes I know I am a mom and wife... And I will do that role to the fullest of my ability... but I will not change myself... or loose my individuality ... Bcoz of this... But I just don't know... why woman are always asked to change... And act according their husband... we both are equal partners in life... I am sure my asad never wanted to change me... do you...

A:... no sweet heart... I love the way u r... even at the age 70, with glass,.. and walking stick... I want u to fight with me standing on the sofa... and then trip and fall into my arms... I love u...the whole u... with the messiness.. loud mouth... impulsive thinking... I love everything about u...

Z:...Mr.khan... this is not fair...

A:...did I say anything wrong...

Z:...yeah... u said at 70 I will have glass and walking stick... But u will be young and energetic to carry me in ur arms... So how is it fair...

A:... Mrs..Khan... I am after all ur Jahapanah...six packs...

Z:...wow... asad... Where is the akdu ahmed khan...hiding... I am seeing a new avatar...today...

And smilingly pulled his cheeks... and everyone felt happy look at the happy couple...

A:...sorry about the champagne...ok...

Z:...it is ok asad...

A:..anwar jeeju... what is the story behind... champagne bottle...

Z:...jeeju don't ...

A:...oh common zoya...jeeeju please...

A:...ok... u guys...know... in west... we celebrate occasion with opening the bottle... and zoya loves to open a bottle... In cameron diaz style... after the movie came out... she liked it so much... she made me buy few bottles... And practiced the opened with knife... and got it perfect also... And one more thing... she loves to spray... the bottle... Like Schumacher... The F1 driver... and she said during her wedding... She will open the bottle.. her style... and share the joy of life with her husband...

H:.appi I want to see u open it...

A:... ok... then tomorrow...in our house... anyways we are inviting all u guys to our home... for dinner...

Z:...why not now... Just now u said... u will get one here...

A;... bcoz..just now I learnt... that u r planning to spray the champagne on me...too... and I don't want ruin my sherwani...u see...

Z:...so sherwani matters more then me...OCD..KHAN...

A:... No... but It was selected by my loving wife... for our wedding... And I am planning to wear it again and again... For some special occasion in our life... and she will be mad at me...if the dress is ruined... don't think...

Z:... Mr.khan... valid point... so u r forgiven...dear husband... Do I atleast have a wedding cake...

A:... That u have ... Not just one... but two... Ayaan... bring it...

A:... this two cakes are from 2 special people... they sent it with so much love...


from NNN

from linsie...


Z... do I know them...

A:...yeah... the bigger one if nnn of IF and smaller one if from Linsie of IF..

Z:... Wow .. asad...they are beautifull... Thank you guys... I love it...

Asya... Ammi... I want to eat the cake ammi...

Z:...ofcourse sweety... come...

As:.. ammi I will cut the small cake...

Asya cut the small cake ... she eat first... then fed to her parents...

AS:...yummy...chocolate cake... I love it...

Z:.. say thank u... linsie.. di...

As:..thank u.. linsie.. di...

The whole family moved towards the bigger cake... asad holded asya and zoya hand... And cut the cake... neatly in his ocd manner... and took a piece a fed zoya and then asya...

As:.this taste ...yummy to ammi...

Z:.. I love it... Thank u..nnn..for this wondefull cake

Zoya cut a small piece and fed it to asya... then she cut the cake .. and gave it to all the family members... leaving asad ...aside...

Then she took the knife... and sliced the flower on the top... a big size icing into asad mouth... and took the cream in her hand... and applied on asad cheek on either...

A:...zoyaa what r u doing...

Z:... Playing with my husband... don't u dare... wash ur face... be like that...till I say...

And then made him open his mouth... and stuffed a large piece of cake.. inside his mouth...

And asked him to eat... then she took her mobile... and captured asad... Cream filled... puffed face... And starting laughing...

Asad hands were fidgeting... to clean his face... then he took zoya hands... And held it...tight... zoya smiled at his actions... after a minute... She felt bad for him... so she took a tissue and cleaned his face... And asked him wash his face... asad gave her a grateful look and went to washroom and came... to see zoya waiting for him just outside...

He pulled zoya close to him and took her dupatta to wipe his face...(inspired by Karan... he used (real love)jenny pallu to dry the sweat in ITA and (reel love) surbhi in ZRA)

.. (mitwaa)... both of them shared their usual eyelock...

Zoya saw a small water droplet in his forehead.. and using her hand she wiped it clean... and let her hand caress his forehead,.. nose.. and then cheek... And asad was lost in zoya touch... zoya suddenly became consoius of her action... And removed her hand and shied away... only to be caught by asad hands.. she turned to look at asad...

A:...I AM ALL YOURS...MRS.KHAN...FOR THE REST OF OUR LIVES...HEARTFULLY... AND NOW LEGALLY...TOO... I AM YOUR LEGALLY WEDDED HUSBAND...ZOYA...

Zoya just realized it once agin... she doesn't have to shy anymore... he is hers... her HUSBAND... AND SHE IS HIS WIFE...

She crashed on asad arms once again... and held him tightly...with her hands... and asad reciprocated the same... both of them... had the same thing running in their mind... THEY ARE MARRIED... NOTHING COULD SEPARATE THEM NOW... with that thought zoya looked up to see...asad... and was tempted by asad lips... and went up to capture his lips... And asad responded to her kiss...their first kiss as husband and wife...

After sometime they broke their kiss... and smiled at each other... asad held in his arms.. and zoya hands,.. in asad neck... Zoya looked up at asad...

Z:... I am so happy today... Asad... I am Mrs.Khan...now... I don't want anything more...thank you allahmiya...for bringing asad back into my life...

A:... but zoya I want more...

Z:...oh really...Mr.Khan... u got married to the love of ur life... After so many hardships.of our life... but u still want more... so u love someone more then our love...

A:...zoyaaa... listen to me fully...

Z:..ok.. asad tell me... What more u want ...

A:... I want afzal too...

Z:...jee...zoya asked with a soft smile...

A:... I want afzal zoya...our prince... Too... Then only our family will be complete... And I want to be next to u... when we bring afzal into the world... I was not there for asya... I want to see my zoya pregnant... and want to pamper u...

Z:..asad... and hits up lightly in his chest...

A:...no zoya it is not my wish too... Ammi also want afzal... and I have a list of people waiting for afzal...

Z:..oh really Mr.khan... who r they...

A;.. here look I have the list of them here...they are our well wishers from IF

Iqra81,

Bulou2013

Azraa01

Devikaravish

Navi55,

Oliveira

Urvisaini

Chichi220

Latanzia

See not just me and ammi... all the above people want to see our prince...

Zoya felt shy and hugged asad... after sometime both the newly couple went to dinning hall, and the whole family feasted... the food... Asya was already feeling sleepy and slept in her dadi lap. Close to 10.00pm the khan family decided to leave back to their home.. zoya hugged her father and her sister... and they had tears in their eyes... Zoya smiled at them and dried their tears...

Z:...i am finally home... I came into india in search of my abbu...my past... But never thought this land will give me existence of my life... my asad...

She remembered the very first shayari... she said when she entered the KV. The very first time...

Aapki ghar mei mohabbat hai kis tarak chaiee huee...

Dewaree tak lover hai... konnee me mila karti hai...

But never thought... That house will turn into her home... and give her everything she ever wanted in her life...that house was filled with love... for her... it gave her mom in from of dilshad.. and sister in the form of najma... and gave her the love of her life... her asad... her husband,... and also her princess asya...

As asad stretched his hand. Zoya held his hand tightly and started her next journey of life as MrS.zoya asad ahmed khan...


note:...


liked it... let me know by ur comments and likes...

below is the link to the very first OS. i wrote in this forum...
looking back...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3659783/asya-nikkah-zoya-style-os

i could see i have improved a lot better in my writing... thanks to u all guys...

i have replied to all ur comments in the last few pages...
thank once again...

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Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first. Yippe
Beautifuly update. This shirin never change. Humesha old thinking. Love zoya's ans.
The both cakes r realy awesome. Love it.
Love asya romance. I m also want to see pregnent zoya pampered by asad and also afzal.
Thanks for pm. Update next part soon
Edited by RAJLUVASYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so nice update...

i really wana c pregnent zoya...

asad ws so rite..he ws not thr during hr frst pregnency

now he want to b wid hr to spoil hr..

waiitng fr nxt part
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!
it was mindblowing..superb it was...loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Me first. Yippe
Beautifuly update. This shirin never change. Humesha old thinking. Love zoya's ans.
The both cakes r realy awesome. Love it.
Love asya romance. I m also want to see pregnent zoya pampered by asad and also afzal.
Thanks for pm. Update next part soon



thank you...

it is not about shirin though,... i want to bring that answer... the least person i liked in that gruop was shireen and badi bi... so i used her to put forth the point...

loved the cake... i too... i e, why i used them here...

pregant zoya... after few chapters i guess...

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
plzzz cont soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
The cake was beautiful

It was really sweet of u 2 mention if members

And thank u 4 such nice FF

Keep writing like this

Love
Linnet
😃😃😃
Edited by Linnet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very sweet part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82



thank you...

it is not about shirin though,... i want to bring that answer... the least person i liked in that gruop was shireen and badi bi... so i used her to put forth the point...

loved the cake... i too... i e, why i used them here...

pregant zoya... after few chapters i guess...


waiting for pregnancy track. But first i want a hot SR of ASYA. Pls give it.
Try to Update soon
Edited by RAJLUVASYA - 11 years ago

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