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Thank you all for such tremendous feedback. I loved reading all your comments and have responded to few (only because of lack of time)
Also apologies for delay and lack of response as office was very hectic this week but here is another chapter which is very close to my heart. I had visualised this whole sequence even before I started typing this FF so I am myself in love with this part and this song.
I am a little nervous too as i know this song is very special to all Maaneetians. It is a very different take from what we had in the serial but I wanted to bring the emotion of deewanapan, samarpan and devotion and hence I used this song in this sequence.
Krati5 - Thanks a lot dear. Your words were very motivating and I am so glad you loved this update so much.
Alpha01 - Thanks dear...I guess we all try to find Maan...
Shruthe - Thanks darling. I sorely missed Geet's parents in GHSP at the time of wedding so this was my own sweet revenge.
Ash I am glad you liked it so much. Dhaba scene was one of my fav too...even then it was about her happiness and even here...
--aarthi-- - sorry dear, I remembered somebody asked me but I couldn't recollect the name.
Annbell - Thanks dear for such motivating words
Lakshmi - That line about tears was inspired from a song - "This is a story of the girl who cried a river and drowned the whole world"...it used to come non stop on radio when I was in US and we used to make so much fun of it. Even I didn't know I could use it in such a positive way...
Thanks for your lovely comment...muaah
Also what a wonderful pic with the caption - "pyar se bhi pyaar"...loved it completely
Hinal - Thanks dear. Yes I so wanted her parents to be back but they got good for nothing daarji...
Mina - Thanks dear. Maan and Geet will fight the whole world...I guess that is what i always liked about GHSP as well.
Scorpiodreams - Thanks dear. Yes I love exploring other relationships with respect to Maaneet and i am glad you liking it too
Ramykrish - What can I say. Your comment truly touched me. Yes, Maan was a very respectful character at least in the beginning. Till end, they never showed him with any other girl, and in a way he was always worried about Geet. His only vice was his temper. Also a big thank you for such nice words about Winter sonata and Vivah. I will definitely write if I feel readers are truly enjoying the story. But sometimes, we just start self doubting with lack of response.
Jasraj - I am just glad you liked my surprise
Drashti10 - thanks dear for your kind words
Maansee - Thank you dear...I also want to hug you for such cute comments...
Mayashrisawant7, snowflakes - Thanks both of you for such kind words
Jenn - Thank you dear. Yes, even I always wanted her parents to be back, even if only for once but alas...i am glad you liked the whole sequence so much
Avi - thanks dear...yes I love this song too. It is one fo my favourite and meaning is so simple and deep...
Rituja - Koi baat nahi yaar I understand. Thanks for such lovely lines and your sweet comment...now it's time for Geet's expression of love...
Tellyme - Anu, you don't need to say sorry yaar...mein khud gayab rehti hoon aaj kal and seriously I understand. Thanks for your wonderful comment. I completely agree. I think that is what I always liked about GHSP. Both Maan and Geet were respectable, honest people.
Nivedithachand - Happy Belated Birthday dear
Meesocute - Thanks dear. I always feel that people are usually nice, but sometimes, we just don't notice or appreciate it enough
Twilightsparkle - Thanks dear for commenting on both parts. Yes Geet's wanted to express and will express in this part how much she loves him...I hope you like that too
All - Thank you so much for your comments. Purely due to lack of time I am not able to respond to all of you but thank you very much.
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Chapter 66 - Deewani...Teri Deewani
(all pics credit to Nandita and Geet Pictures gallery)
Apne pyaar se pyaar bhi kitna kare
Unki mohabbat ki ibadat bhi kitni kare...
Har pal to unke pyaar se dil bhar aata hai
Rab se upar koi kaha jo unke jitni unse ibadat kare...
By mishtitritu
They started back with Geet still very emotional. She clasped her hands to his and Maan was very happy seeing her taking lead in their relationship. She gave a glance to her surroundings as they started their journey back...those lush green farms, children playing, water running out of tube well...saying bye to her village silently as the car zoomed out
...
It was raining hard outside. They have already crossed into Haryana and were near Karnal when hailstorm started and soon enough it became dark. Water was logged on the streets and driver tried to avoid big pools carefully.
A tree had fallen on the main road and they were forced to take a detour via a country road. Maan rubbed Geet's arms gently as she anxiously looked outside at thundering darkness.
"Bas Geet...we will reach main highway in some time. If weather doesn't improve, we will take break in Karnal."
Geet smiled and just nodded her head when car spluttered and stopped. It started again but made weird noise and was not taking race.
"Kya hua Ramesh?"
Ramesh checked and confirmed that water seemed to have entered the engine.
"Sir...app yahi rehiye, mein dekhta hoon"
He came back after some time to inform them that he has found about a garage some two kilometres away.
"Sir, I will take the car till garage slowly but umbrella broke in the rain. Also there is a hut just few feet away on the right side. I checked it. No one seems to be there but it should be able to provide shelter. There is nothing near the garage and who knows how much time it will take to fix the car. Aap yahi rehiye sir and I will bring back the car once it is fixed. Also, mobile is there sir...so you can call me if you need anything."
Maan nodded and asked the driver to take them right in front of the hut. Giving him some money, Maan came out with Geet taking a torch and made a dash towards the hut while driver took away the car slowly.
Maan entered inside surveying the inside with torch light. As he turned around, his eyes fell on Geet who was shivering a little with cold.
Even though they had been out for only couple of seconds, her suit was quite wet. Winter was already setting in and rain had made temperature dropped even further.
He was wearing a blazer which was also wet and useless. He deftly removed it followed with his shirt as he took in the details of the small room.
There was a bare cot lying in one corner and some broken utensils on one side. There was a fireplace with some wood in it and a lantern next to it.
Geet looked perplexed as he lifted the cot straight facing towards the wall and then came to her with his shirt
"Geet tumhaari kurti bilkul geeli ho gayi hai. Jao wahan cot ke peeche jaake change karlo. Meri shirt pehno...kaafi had tak sukhi hai. Aur salwaar...ummm shirt will be long for you and you can drape your chunni underneath it...mein...mein nahi dekhunga...promise..."
Geet shyly took his shirt but was worried for him "aapko thand nahi lagegi"
Maan smiled at her innocent care "I will burn fire...tum jaake change kar lo..."
"Mujhe andhere mein dar lagega"
"Acha...let me see...I will try to light that lantern first."
Maan luckily found a box of matches close to lantern and lighted it. Also he poured some oil onto wood and lit that as well.
He turned around to ask Geet to go now but words stuck in his mouth. She was glowing in the warm yellow light of fire. His gaze burned his insides as it followed a pearl drop hanging at the corner of her hair, falling down on her forehead, travelling down her nose onto the corner of her lips. It seemed he had never seen a more beautiful sight as his eyes just took in the sexy vision in front of her.
Geet saw his desire filled eyes on her and instantly heat flooded her. Her red cheeks just added to her beauty as Maan took her in leisurely. Her sneeze was the one which broke his trance and he immediately turned around trying to control his shallow breath.
Geet silently walked behind the cot but with her eyes still looking at him through the holes.
She took off her wet kurti and turned to see what he was doing.
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She looked on as he fidgeted with the fire concentrating on it wholly to avoid seeing her even by mistake.
Every ripple of his arm and shoulder muscle fluttered in her heart. He was wearing a black vest and his own skin looked alluringly tempting to her as he played with flames in front of him. For just a moment, he looked back to ensure if she was ok and their eyes locked for a second before he turned back again.
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Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QArN3LDeHRs
preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi
ho gayi main matwaari
bal bal jaaun apane piya ko
he main jaaun vaari vaari
mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki
yeh toh jaane duniya saari
bebas aur laachar phiru main
haari main dil haari
As he removed his gaze, more than passion, pure love gripped her heart. This man, who knew that she is just putty in his hands, knows that she can not deny him anything, loved her like mad and although was clearly attracted to her would not let down his morals to glance at her, even as she stood partly naked just behind him.
Woh kehte hain humse, viswaas karo mera
Koi sawaal hi kahan, jab saamne khuda ho mera
She was already shaken by today's event and like a reel of a movie vision of pasts played in front of her eyes. That first day when she walked in his cabin and slipped in his arms. She smiled remembering how she had again fallen on him while doing decoration of the party.
Woh toh humesha mere saath chalte rahe chup chaap...kabhi girne nahi diye mujhe...tutne nahi diya. Us din bhi party mein, meri izzat ko apne coat se dhank liya tha aur us din bhi...
A slight shudder went through her as she remembered that night with Rahul but warmth of Maan's care and gesture afterwards had truly taken away that pain and today his words spoken on that day had a whole new meaning. That day also he asked her to have faith in him. That day also he asked him to believe in herself, in him and in them.
"I have full faith in you. Never think that you did anything wrong.
You can not stop living your life or moving ahead because of what happened.
Don't pity yourself and don't hide either. Tumhari is sab mein koi galti nahi hai and you have to believe it from your heart."
Do you trust me to allow to take that action on your behalf?"
...
"You are a brave girl Geet. It is me who is fortunate to know you."
She removed her wet inner and slipped on his shirt. It almost felt like he had embraced her. His essence...his smell lingered in it and Geet found herself snuggling into it.
tere naam se jee loon
tere naam se marr jaaun
teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
He always supported her without asking anything in return. He himself told her that he had felt something for her since the day he had set his eyes on her but yet, he just selflessly stood behind her if not with her. He may brush it as nothing but today she was independent and studying because of him. He made her dreams his...
Sapne jo maine bune the tumne unhein apna bana liye
Ab is har sapne ko moti bana ke hum zindagi ki ladi mein piroyenge
Humara har aansun tumne hansi me badal diya
Ab is har khushi ko daaman mein kas ke hum baandhlenge
Na koi sapna tutega na koi hansi chutegi
Raat bhi aaiyi to usmein pyaar se subah ki laali hum bhar denge
She remembered that night when everyone had found out that she was a widow. She had run and he had taken her to mazaar. When she had asked why this was her fate he had not let her take blame but instead told her "Pata nahi Geet...woh toh bas use pata hai. Haan, lekin itna pata hai...tab tak tum mujhse nahi mili thi.
"Kitni aasani se sab kuch apna liya...mera ateet...mera dard...sab kuch"
That day first time she had realised what her feelings meant for him. What her respect was for him. Why she was drawn to him like a moth is drawn to fire...why
Shayad isiliye when Brij Veerji came in their life, she was able to share with him everything.
"Sab kuch bata diya unhein...woh bhi shayad jo mein apni maa se tak na keh saki...us waqt jab veerji ki talwar unki taraf uthi toh laga jaise zindagi hi khatam ho gayi ho...
Lekin kitne dukh diye maine unhein..."
She saw him through the holes, still waiting patiently for her. Staring at him she removed her salwar and put it with her kurti...
"He confessed his love to me...aur meine...unka dil dukhaya...unhone mera intezaar kiya...pehli baar kisi ne meri marzi ki izzat ki aur maine unse dur jaane ki koishish karke unka dil toda..."
His painful eyes swam in front of her own eyes as he had left her after that interview. And then his accident. His lifeless body lying on the stretcher because of her...
ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye
haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye
ishq ka jaadu sar chadha kar bole
khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole
Geet muffled a sob as tears made way...she quickly wiped them away knowing he will be troubled to see them...
"Yeh kya kar rahi hai jhalli...us din ki wajah se hi shayad unke man me dar baitha hoga ki mein unhein kahin chod ke na chali jaoon. Isiliye us din, unhone mujhe woh kasam maangi thi
"I want a promise form you Geet...tumehin meri kasam...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...bhale mere liye hi sahi kyon na tum yeh faisla lo...lekin ek baar mujhe meri baat kehne ka mauka toh dogi...aise bina kahe mujhse dur jaane ki koshish naho karogi...promise me Geet...please promise me."
Geet came out slowly from behind the cot. He was still turned away from her. She recollected when he had put those glass bangles on her hand and then how in front of Daadima and God he had made her his...only his. And today, he asked for her hand from her parents.
"Pyaar toh bahut log karte hain par itni izzat...khud mere khuda hoke mujhe apna sab kuch bana liya
Lekin maine, unke is pyaar ki izzat nahi ki...ki hoti toh unhein aaj bhi mera yuon intezaar na hota
Waqt ko toh mein nahi badal sakti lekin aaj itna jaanti hoon ki meri izzat aap hain...mera wajood aap hai...meri jaan aap hai...mera sab kuch aap hain...hum mein koi duri ho hi nahi sakti...yeh duniya...iske log...iski rasmein...koi bhi...kuch bhi mujhe aapse alag nahi kar sakta..."
yahi ishq di marzi hain
yahi rab di marzi hain
tere bin jeena kaisa
haan khudgarzi hai
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
She opened her hair just the way he liked it and as if in trance moved towards him...
Maan heard her anklet as she stepped closer to him. He smiled and looked at her but stopped short. His eyes widened as he saw her wearing his shirt...just his shirt. Her naked legs were gleaming, enticing his passion to come out. Maan removed his gaze abruptly standing with his back towards her. Vision of her milky legs clouded his eyes but he somehow controlled
"Yeh kya hai Geet...tumne chunni kyon nahi pehni..."
Geet just came forward and hugged him from behind.
"Dil chahta hai ki aaj aap ko bahut bahut pyaar karoon Maan...sab kuch vaar doon aap pe..."
he main rang rangeeli deewani
ke main albeli main mastani
He struggled to keep himself steady as her warm soft body engulfed him from behind
"Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum Geet...kaise rokunga mein apni mariyada ko"
"Geeli ho gayi hai thodi si...aap sukhane mein madad kariye na"
Maan took a deep sigh to get some semblance of sanity before turning towards her. She gave him two corners of the soft cloth and walked backwards till the dupatta stretched between them. It was sparsely wet and Geet moved her hands up and down to dry the light cloth.
Maan averted his gaze looking anywhere except at her. But it helped little as he was still fully aware that how with every stroke he could see her shirt going up and down exposing her thighs. He forced his eyes up but then groaned inwardly "she will be death of me" as he realised that she wasn't wearing anything underneath. Shape of her torso and length of her legs were driving him crazy while Geet just blushed hard realising both today - her weakness and her power for him and on him.
Soon dupatta was all dried and she took it folding it on her legs like a wrap around skirt.
Maan gulped hard and walked straightening the cot. Gesturing Geet to sleep on it, he walked away sitting on the floor.
Geet pouted thinking why he was sitting so far from her while Maan was just trying to control his wild urges.
"Aap wahan kyon baithe ho?"
"Tum so jao Geet"
"Mujhe appke paas rehna hai"
"Geet!!!!!"
Maan shouted and then controlled his anger or rather frustration looking at the flames.
Silence for few seconds...
"Itne dhyaan se wahan kyon dekh rahe ho...mein yahan hoon"
"Geet, please sleep...tum wahan cot pe and mein yahan aag ke paas...ab bahas mat karo samjhi"
Silence for a minute
"lekin mujhe dar lag raha hai akele"
Maan looked at her and said very firmly "Geet stop being kiddish...bache nahi hai hum jo tum situation ko samjh nahi rahi...so jao wahan...mein yahin hoon...isi room mein"
Silence for few minutes broken with Geet's bangles and anklets noise as she turned and turned and turned while Maan laid still trying not to burst out.
Silence for few seconds and Maan finally sighed closing his eyes
Maan's eyes flew open as he felt her sleeping next to him.
As he turned his head taking her name, she slid half on him, now in his embrace
He tried to get up asking her - "Geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho..."
"Mujhe aapke saath sona hai...yahan aapki bahon mein...cot ho ya farsh...farak nahi padta...par aapke paas sona hai"
Mein nahi jaaongi dur Maan"
gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun
he main deen dhram se begaani
ke main deewani main deewani
Maan saw a different emotion in her eyes...it was immense love...immense. He got up with Geet sitting alongside him
"Maan?"
"Haan Maan...aaj se aap mere liye Maan hain...mere Maan..."
"Dekho if you are doing all this because of what happened today then..."
"Nahi, I am doing this because of what you are to me. Aapke bina mera astitv hi nahi hai...mein hi nahi hoon...haan meine shayad aaj realise kiya par yeh toh humesha se hi sach tha"
Geet turned, touching his cheek lightly
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"Geet, yeh thik nahi hai"
"Agar yeh thik nahi hai toh kuch bhi thik nahi hai...Jis tarha Babaji ka mujh pe pura haq hai usi tarah aapka hai...jaise woh mere saath kabhi galat nahi kar sakte usi tarah aap bhi mere saath kabhi galat nahi kar sakte...
Ek din aapne mujhse kaha tha...aaj mein kehti hoon...koi bhi rasam...koi bhi rishta mere liye aapse badh ke nahi...I am all yours...completely...chahe toh chu ke dekh lo"
tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun
tere jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani...
Maan felt shiver of love running through him at the intensity of her eyes which were locked with his...
Her every word reverberated in his heart as he softly moved her hand and kissed her palm
"I love you Maan...I love...I am yours...only yours"
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Threading his fingers in her almost entangled hair, he finally let go off the last barrier between them...today they were truly one...today they had full right on each other...today they were married...
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His lips caressed hers, his tongue duelled with hers, his body rubbed on hers. He hid her in his warm embrace as they kissed passionately and without inhibition. When her breath became laborious he left her mouth but didn't leave kissing her. Sucking her chin first, he moved down trailing hot wet smooches down the column of her neck. His hands instinctively found her lush full mounds and kneaded them over her shirt. She groaned audibly as his thumb flicked over her hard bead.
"Maan"
Maan was lost in her when his lips reached her first button. He knew that all he needed was to open it but her unequivocal trust in him stopped him
"jaise woh mere saath kabhi galat nahi kar sakte usi tarah aap bhi mere saath kabhi galat nahi kar sakte..."
He sighed but now it was easy to rein in his passion. His love was far too momentous in front of his fervour.
Did he still not trust her enough?
Her eyes met his smiling face "My love is my worship Geet and I will never let anyone raise finger at it...within this society's boundaries only, with full respect I will claim you knowing fully well that you were always mine."
Holding her in embrace, he placed her head on her chest.
"Hum aise hi soyenge Geet...saath...mujhe apne pyaar pe bharosa hai"
Geet smiled and snuggled into him. It was hard at first as they both were getting a little naughty with each other but then soon they drifted off with a beautiful dream of tomorrow in their eyes.
Precap - Tere Mere Sapne
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