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Posted: 11 years ago
Great. Waiting to see what happens. Will pammi trouble her. Will maan be there for her
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Posted: 11 years ago


Pammi ki to bolti band ho gayi...

she is fuming in anger...she may have thought that Geet ne saari chugli kar di hai...warna Maan aise kaise behave karega but she don't know that if Geet have told him then there is some space for doubts but Maan has heard everything from his own ears and he now knows every reality of Pammi...Naintara he already knows what type of woman she is and Sameera is nothing for him so these three evils are now Maan's target...

waitig for Simla trip...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan ne aasani se pammi ki band baja di !
Pammi sochti hi rahe gayi ki maan ko kya hua hai?
Ab Simla trip...yeee !!
GHSP me Simla trip romantic thi...yaha kya hoga...!!??
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story. read in one go, looking forward 4 ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-8/part112/26/11/20




Part-112

Finally after a lot of drama fiasco of geets daughters to stop her fr. going, after a lot of manofying session geet managed to go simla. They gave her a list of wat to do and not to do and after lot of warnings fr. Maan especially,... she went.
Maan arranged all security and b.gds without her knowledg . They can give information of her 24/7mnt to mnt to him.
1st day in simla[ guys here i am not going to give detailed tour programme as i want to move the story farward as some of u asking] Geet and party[ pupils @ coleague] came back to their camp at 6'o'clock as this place highly snow fall at nights not safe staying outside . Fr. morning Geet is observing some people r fallowing them where ever they went . First she thought them as tourists like them but her doubt increased as they r fallowing them closely roaming to their aas pass observing them.She suspects their attitude and now they fallowed them to their camp. Now her doubt has been confirmed. She thought them as child kidnappers. She imeaditely went to reception and take the police no. and called them informing them that some r fallowing them and her suspicion.
The police imeadiately took action and arested them on child abduct case and started using their 3rd degree treatment on them they snatched their mobiles even.They didnt gave any chance to explain them.
Here Maan Arjun and prasant r discussing on something, Maan is continuously trying to talk to geet fr. last 3 hrs. but she is not answering the call. he also tried to reach the b.gds. but they too r not responding.
Maan:-'ye Geet po. kyu nahi utta rahe hai? wat the hell she is doing?why dont she lift the pho., he throwed the pho on table. 'wat these b.gds doing? why they didnt gave any information fr the last 3 hrs ?he throwed his hairs in disgust. He is hell worried for her safty. Prasant looked at him as he is puzzled by Maans behaviour " kyu Maan sir itni chintha horahahai maa keliye?
Maan took again ph. and once again tried her no.
This time she answered,hellow'
Maan:-Geet;,.. where r u? why r u not answering my call dammit:,..he shouted on her in his rage and disgusted state. R u o.k.? he asked in worry and anger voice.
Prasant astonished seeing his worry and anger.
Geet:- wo,.. sorry i. am o.k. actually here something happened and i am little bit busy in that but i have solved it now.
Maan:- wat,...wat,... happened tum thik tho ho na?
Prasant felt strange to see maan talking with geet as if he owned her.
Geet:- ji,... mai thik hu actually subha se ,...she told every thing to him,. but ab koi pblm nahi hai maine unhe girafdaar karwaya,... mujhe bahut dar lagi,.. kayi ye bachhe ko kidnap karetho?,...and she is going on and on,...
Maan:- kya,..? tum unhe giraftaar karwaya? geet tumbhina,... he hit his head " my god" he didnt know wat to sat to her,.. "acha thik hai, mai dekhtha hu iskibaareme.. konsa police station hai wo?
Geet:- ji,...xyz,.. hai.
Maan:- o.k. mai dekhtha hu,.. tum araam karlo.
Geet:- ji,.. thik hai,.. aapne dinner khaya?
Maan:- nahi,.. mai abhitak office me hu.
Geet:- abhitak office me ,.. aap ko araam karni haina jaldi ghar jaanahai ,. jayiyena ghar aap ki tabhiyat abhitak thik nahi hai,..
Maan:- ummm,.. thik hai .good night.
Geet:- good night
Maan kept the pho. here both arjun and Prasant r looking him with questioning eyes.
Yaar Prasant tumhari maa itni intelligent kyu hai?
both:- kya hua?
"Jin logonko hume uske peeche uski security keliye rakhwaya, unlogonko wo girafdar kaarwaya child kidnapers samajke"kya karu usse? aur police unper 3rd degree use karrahe.
Arjun bursted in to laughter,.."di bhina,. kaise kaise ideas ate hai isse? my god jiju ab hum kya kare?
Prasant :- ji ,..sir ab hum kya karenge. he now hell worried for her.
Maan:- mai abhi nikal raha hu simla jake dekhtha hu kya karna hai.
Arjun:- haa,.. jiju aap ne thik socha jake sab thik karke ana. he winked at him emphasising sab word.
Maan glared at him like shut up.
o.k. mai chaltha hu u. carry on and he started thinking ,.. challo acha hua is bahaane mai usse akele milkar baath karsakthahu, shaadi keliye unhe mana saktha hu.
He reached simla at midnight and straighway he went to police station and sorted out the pblm appoiont new b.gds. to her this time warning them to be more careful. he went to her camp as he is missing her very much, one day without her.
here in her room geet also missing him" patanahi dinner kiya ya nahi, unhe unki parwanahi hai,. unki khayaal kabhi nahi rakhthe humesha koi na koi unke pass hona chahiye' isa sochrahi hai standing by window she didnt slept till then.

The reception gil came and told her that some body came to meet her. She wondered, here in simla koun hosaktha hai jo mujhe milna chahthe hai, wo bh iitni raat? shecame to reception. he stood there facing his back to her waiting for her.
She looked him, her face lighted like 1000vts bulb. She screamed in happy " AAP' she came running to him like a small child who would come chirpily to his father running and jumping.
She so much wanted to hug him tight as she is missing him badly. Here Maan ka haalat bhikuch waisehai, he also want to take her in to his arms and crush her in to bones. His heart danced in delight seeing her enthusiasm and bublyness on seeiing him. Her happiness all matters to him.
Geet:- Aap,..?aap kab aya ? kaise aya? shaam tak tho office me hai ,delhi me,.. aur ab simla me kaise?
Maan:- ummm,.. ek meeting keliye aya hu kal ki.
Geet:- ooh;,..mujhe kyu ph. nahi kiya?
Maan:- smilingly surprise,... kaisa laga mera surprise?
Geet:- Bahut achha laga, she smiled kaisa hai aap?
Maan:- umm,.. achi hu,.. geet chalo hum baahar chalthe,..
Geet:- kaha?
Maan:- tum chalo pehle mai batha tha hu.
Geet:- per mujhe tho bachhonke saath rahna hoga, unhe isa nahi chodethe.
Maan:- bacchonka fikar tum math karo mai saara intezaam karliya unhe kuch nahi hoga wo bilkul safe hai
Geet:- thik hai mai ek baar mera coleague se baath karke ,change karke athi hu.
Maan:- umm,.. jaldo avo,.. she went inside thinking ,.. chalo acha hua ab wo yaha aya tho mai unse araam se baath karsakthi hu aur hosaktha hia ki sameera ke shaadi keliye unhe mana sakthi hu
After some time she came out "chaliye Janaab kaha jaana hai,.."
Maan:- chalo,.. they came out and sat in the car.
Geet:- hum kaha jaarahe?
Maan:- mera guest house hai yaha, hum waha jaarahe.
Geet:- thik hai,. and they travelled to the guest house talking about that days incidents . Maa didnt tell her about the b.gds. . He listened her as he very much missed her bak bak.

Precap:- shaayad aap log ki most wanted and waiting ,...their confession.
link for part-113:-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97116884

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wah! Geet ne to BG ki bhi chutti kara di!!
Aur maan ko Simla jana padta hai...

Precap dekh ke kuch likha hi nahi jata😉

Mere dil mein aaj kya hai..
Tu kahe to main bata doon...

Teri zulf phir sanwaroon
Teri maang phir saja doon...
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Posted: 11 years ago



this line by Maan--Prashaant tumhari maa itni intelligent kyun hai?...this line cracked me up...🤣

Maan in Simla...Geet ke bina raha nahin gaya so mouka and dastoor nibhane chala gaya...

Geet kabhi nahin sudhregi...Maan apne dil ki baat karna chahta hai and Geet Sameera ke dil ki...

but precap seems very interesting...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
An important note to u all readers and my buddies;-------

I am going to start my second ff on maneet very shortly .
The theme is one of mines as i posted earlier my 3 plots and yes it the 1st one mainly based on ghsp.
who want to read it , who want pms ? let me know .
And this time i will try my level best to satisfy ur hunger as it will be fully a romantic one. those who dont know my plot please go to my page and know.
am going to give prolog and c.s very shortly.
thank.u. and dont get panic i am not going to leave my first one ESSENCE OF LOVE as it is altime my favourite. i will try to give 2 updates
one on each weekly.
thank.u. very much
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Posted: 11 years ago


will be waiting eagerly...

shayad mujhe kehna nahin padega ki mujhe bhi pm bhejna...😆😊

because u urself know that I am crazy Maaneet fan so as many stories as u write u just please send me pm...
Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Muje bhi pm chahiye! Ye koi puchne ki baat hai...
Aap jo bhi , jab bhi likhe muje yaad rakhna...

Waiting for your new story...
Congrats and best of luck...too

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