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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...anu, aaj aapne kamal kar diya!👏👏👏
Aaj geet me chipi hui aurat jaag gayi hai...ab duniya ki koi takat use maan se milne ke liye nahi rok sakti...jis tarha se wo maan pe chillati hai...aisa lagta hai...wo maan pe haq jata rahi hai...aur haq to apno pe hi jataya jata hai na?... Loved it!!

GHSP ki date yaad aa gayi...jaha geet, maan ko kaheti hai...kya muje phirse pyaar karne ka haq hai? Aur maan javab deta hai...haq hai geet...ha...haq hai! Phir maan kaheta hai...geet, tum se jyada pavitr kon hoga? Aaj aapke update me bhi vohi jazbaat hai...vahi mahesus hota hai! Aisa lagta hai aapke update ke baare me likhti hi jau...

Aapne story naam bahut achha rakha hai...Essence of love! Kisi bhi chiz me flavour lane ke liye bas uski ek hi bund chahiye...usi tarha pyaar ki ek bund maan geet ki jindgi ko khubsurat banane ke liye giri hai...jo undono ki jindgi ko maheka degi!
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Posted: 11 years ago
jaldi update karo dis update was awesome lovd d confession
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
emotional
finally both confessed their love...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update. finally they both confessed to each other.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update. Very very well written. The intensity of feelings was brought out so well. No matter what, Geet cannot hold back annymore. They feel for each other so much that it cannot be denied.
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Posted: 11 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-8/part-114/11/12/2013



Part:-114

In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein
Pakiza Se Riste Hain
Koi Kalma Mohabat Ka
Dohrate Farishte Hain

He took her in to his embrace hugging her tightly letting her frustration and all pain on him. She sobbed and sobbed hiding her face in his chest and he embraced her in his arms not allowing to move assuring her secure comfort . He kept kissing her on her head to sooth her pain.
He let her wat ever she want to do to flush out her pain, suffering, depression ,everything ,because he thought that it is necessary ,... necessary for her to open up to someone. It is the first step towards his destination. She has to clear all her under ki dard then only she can think about herself.
Kaise Yeh Ishq Hai
Kaisa Yeh Khwab Hai
Kaise Jazbaat Ka Umda Salab Hai
Din Badle Raatein Badli, Baathein Badli
Jeene Ke Aandaz Hi Badlein Hai
In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein
Pakiza Se Riste Hain


Haa,... she has to think about herself first... wat she want? she has to decide herself wat has to do? she has to come out of her shell. She has to decide weather she want the relation r not? she has to now which is important to her life...her love?r society r her family? Because he know there is so much to come ahead, so many hurdles they have to overcome. He needs her support to fight against everything. Without her support he can not do anything . He has to bring her out of her shell and make her to move towards their destination,.. of course he will be with her in every move in each step he will be with her.But she herself have to stood strong beside him like a pillar then only he can do anything.
"Ab wakth agaya ki wo khud jaanna hoga ki kya maine rakhtha hai inki zindagi me, uski pyaar ya her family ya ye samaaj?kya chahtha hai wo? kya zindagi bhar ise samaaj ki dar se bandhan me apne aapko dabake isi berukhi zindagi bithana chahthe hai ya,.. in saare hadkadi thodeke zindagi meri saath khush jina chahthe hai ,.. ye thair karna hoga.

Geet looked at him cupping his face "mere pass kuch nahi hai Maan,.. mai aapkeliye laayak nahi hu,... mai apavithre hu. aap keliye bane hue ye bhog ko ek kutte ne apavithre kardiya,.. ab ye bhog bhagvaan ki nivedan nahi karsakthe,.. mai apavithre hu, sadh chukihu mai ,.. aapki laayak nahi hu mai,...

Aap bahut acche ho maan , bahut nake insaan ho aap, badi raham dilki,... aap ne kabhi mujhe meri ateeth ke baareme nahi sawaal kiya,... kabhi ye nahi pucha ki mai koun hu? mera path koun hai? kaha hai? ise sawaal aap mujhe kabhi nahi pucha,.. aapne kabhi yabhi nahi socha ki mai ek shaadi shuda hu do jawaan bachhe hai,aap ne mujhe mere ateeth ke saath apnaya ,.. per mujhe furge bantha hai aap ko sab kuch bathaneka,... aap jaana jaruri hai ki mai kaise yaha ayihu,.. aur mera pati ,...Maan kept his finger on her lips stopping her,...
"Geet, pehle tum ye jaanlo ,..mereliye tum pavithre ho,.. jitna pavithre ho jab tum paida hue tab utnahi ,..aur mereliye ye maine rakhtha hai ki ab tum kya ho? mujhe kitna pyaar karthe ho? mere saath deneki tayaar ho ya nahi? ye maine raktha hai. baaki cheezon ko mujhe koi maine nahi raktha.
Geet:- per aap ko jaana jaruri hai maanji,...
Maan"-mai jaantha hu geet, mai sab jaantha hu bahut pehle hi mai jaanliya sab kuch ,tabhi jab vicky ka hadsa hua tab mai prasant se sab jaanliya.Ab aur kuch nahi hai jaanekeliye. Aur tum ye jaanlo ,.. sab kuch jaan kar hi mai tumse pyaar kiya. Mukhe tumse isliye pyaar hua ki ,.. itna kuch hone ki baavajoot tum apni himmat nahi khoyi,.. zindagi se viswaas nahi khoyi, ummid nahi choda,..badi himmat se taakath se apni jimmadaari uthhaya aur nibhaya. Apni dono beti ko pala ,posa,..badakiya aur vyah bhi kiya, aaj tak mai ek isi himmat waali aurat ko nahi dekha. Tabhi hui mujhe tumse pyaar mai tumhe bahut chahtha hu geet. Bahut se bahut jyaada. mai tumhe kho nahisaktha. ,... chahe tho saari dunia,. ye business name fame dhan doulat sab kuch,.. sab kuch chodsaktha,.. lekin tumhe nahi chode saktha,...ji nahi saktha tumhare bina,...


Kyon Hai Yeh Arzoo
Kyon Hai Yeh Zustzu
Kyon Dil Bechain Hai
Kyon Dil Betaab Hai )... (2)
Din Badle Raatein Badli Baatien Badli
Jeene Ke Andaaz Hi Badle Hain
Geet looked him flabergasted to his open cofession,..full of emotion and un controlable joy and pleasure she became speechless to his confession and she hugged him ,...hugged him giving herself to him to engulf her in to him
with chocked voice .. nuzzling her face in her chest she continued,...per aap ye nahi jaantha hoga ,.. shaayad,... mai ek kaathil hu maanji,.. she cried loudly,... maine ek insaan ko maara,...she looked at her hands ,.showing him her hands,.. in hathonse,..in haathon se maine ek aadmi ko mara,.. khuni hu mai,.. gunegar hu mai maanji,.. phasi ki laayak hu mai ,.. meri jaise aurat is dunia me nahi rahna chahiye,...she said crying bitterly.
He stunned hearing her and caught her by her shoulder in rage ,.. haa,.. he got angered hearing her khuni hu mai,.. he shooked her vigorously,..

"Tum khooni nahi ho geet,.. tum kisiko khun nahi kiya, tum khuni nahi ho samhji tum?.. He shooked her again trying her to make her understand.
Nahi maan mai kahraha huna maine wo,... usse ek pattar se jor se mara aur wo margaya,..
Maan:-nahi wo mara nahi,.. wo jinda hai,...
Geet looked at him puzzled,.. aap kya kahrahe ho?aap kaise jaanthe? aapko kaise pata?
Maan looked at her tumhe yakin nahi haina tho dekho khud tumhari ankhonse dekho,.. he bring out his cell fr. his pocket and searched fo ra video clipping and showed it to her.[ remember kaka bring some tapes and vedioes once,. along with naintaras]
Maan:- dekho,.. pehchana ,..ye ussi aadmi hai jisse tum mara pattar se aur samjha wo margya. pehchanlo,..thikse,.. but geet didnt recognised him lagbhag 25saal ki baath hai aurwo aadm iuskijaan pehchan ki nahi hai.
Maan:- ye wahi aadmi hai..jisko tumhara wo jaanwar pathi tumhe becha,.. ye wahi hai tumhari saath bathameej ki... dekho is picture ko aur sunlo wo khud ye baatharaha hai,..usne kya kya kiya tumhare saath,... He showed her next vedeo,.. in that that aadmi is admitting his crime to a man.
Maan:- dekho ,... see wo kisse baath karhe hai? pehchana ise?
Geet:- kaka,..she gasped,..
Maan:-haa,... maine kakase sab enquiry karwaya.aur mai ye isliye karwaya ki humari age zindagi me isi ateeth ki kala dag waapas na aye. Mai tumhari saari ateeth ko mitana chahtha hu,..taaki hum age ek khushaalsi, shaanthi si zindagi ji sake. tum, mai, humari bacha ,humari pariwaar humari betia unkibache kesaath shaanthisi araam ki zindagi jisake. isliye ye sab kiya maine.

Tum dekhna chathe ho wo tumhari so called southeli maa kya karrahi hai? he showed her another video that her step mother is sitting on the roadside begging.
He showed her house which more loking exactly like that when she lived with her father. her step mothers daughter and her husband throwed her fr.the house and she is begging for bread on roads.
Geet:- looked him suspicious,.. kya ye sab aap ne karwaya?
Maan:- haa,.. maine karwaaya khunki wo meri geet ki zindagi barbad ki,.. meri geet ko bahut takleef kiya uski zindagi se kheli wo,.. usse mai chodunga nahi,..kabhi nahi.
Geet:- aur ,...wo,...wo,... she is hesitating to ask about,...
Maan understand wo kiske baare me puchna chahthi hai,..
wo abhitak lapatha,.. bus ek baar ,..ek baar wo mujhe milne do,... mai use ye haal karunga,...ye haal kaunga,.. ki wo khud ki moth keliye tumhari kadmome aake tumse bhik mangega,..aur ye Maan Singh Khurana ka waada hai geet.
... uski itni himmat ki wo meri geet ki zindagi se khela,.. he said with furious blood red eyes spitting fire through his voice.


Geet kabhi nahi dekha iski itni gussa,...
she cupped his face with her hands pulling him close to her and kept her lips on his lips kissing him soothing and cooling him.
He cooled imeadiately loosing himself in her hugging her to himself tightly giving himself to her ,..loving to be loved by her. They shared a lovable moment in each others arms forgetting all around in their newly found love land.


After some time geet break ther kiss, ma iye sab nahijaanthi hu maan, ye sab karna nahi chahthi hu mai uske saath. us wakth mere pass aur koi raastha nahi tha. Mai nahi jaanthi hu ki mujhe me himmat hai ya nahi,.. viswaas hai ya nahi,.. itni taakath hai ya nahi,.. bus ek hi hai mere pass ek maa ki mamtha,... meri mamatha ,meri bache keliye, mujhe se ye sab karwaaya,.. ek hi tamanna hai meri bacchonka zindag meri jaisi nahi honichahiye ,..wo ek khuhaal si shaanthi s izindagi ji na hai,. bus uskeliye mai itna kuch kiya,. ladliya zindagi se,.. ladliya haalaathse,.. ladliya apni takdeer se,.. ladthiraha,.. ladthiraha,.. puri zindagi ladhayi hai meri,.. mai thag chuki hu lad ,lad kar,.. thag gagyi hu bhagthe ,bhaagthe, zindagi se ,..ab mujhe me aur koi taakath nahi hai ladneka,...aaj mai jo bhi hu ,..sir aur sirf mere bacheki waje se hu,... agar wo nahi tho shaayad mai itni himmat nahi karthi. maa ki mamatha mujhe se ye sab karwaya,... meri bachhon keliye meri mamatha,...
Maan:_humari bachhe,..wo sirf tumhari nahi ,.humari hai ,..hum dononka,.. humara bachha.
Geet hugged him again listening him owning her children his also. she over welmed by his words"our".

Samay Ne Yeh Kya Kiya
Badal Di Hai Kaya
Tumhe Mene Paa Liye
Mujhe Tumne Paya

but still in confused ,.. not at beleiving her fate,...kya ye sab thik hai,...? kya mujhe phirse jine ka haq hai? mujhe aapka pyaar paaneka haq hai maan? aur ye samaa j ,.. log kyakahega? aur aap ki pariwaar kya sochega aap ke bareme? kya wo humare rishtha maanthe? aur log kya kahega aapse ? wo aapko sawaal karega,. aap ko beizzat karega,.aap per ungli uthayega,.. koi aap ko kuch kahe, ungli uthaye ,..ye mai bilkul bardaash nahi karsakthi maan,.. aur aapki maaj ine,..
He cut ther in mddle,...saying,..Geet,..hum ye saare baath baad me baath karenge. Mai aaj humara baare me baath karna chahtha hu. sirf humara,. mai aur tum sirf hum,.. hum baath karenge ki hume kya chahiye? pehle hum ye pyaar ki khubsurath ehsaas ko mehsoos karenge. Mehsoos karo geet ye khubsoorat pal ko, ji bharke mehsoos karo. jilo ye lamhaa,... dill ki under ki jasbaath ko bandhan ki hathkadi thode ke baahar anedo. aajaadi ki saas lenedo in jasbaathonko. yaha sirf tum aur mai aur koi nahi hai ,.. ye pyaar ki kubsurat ehsaas ko tumhari dil me anedo. math roko khud ko geet.
He sat leaning on the wall spreading his legs taking her in to his laps. she came on to him like a small child drowning in his passion forgetting everything. She sat on him .,he embrased her like his life is in her still kissing her on her forehead and head , shoulders making her loose herself in him closing her eyes feeling the devine love to the fullest.


Khamosh Si Hai Zameen Hairaan Sa Falak Hai
Ek Noor Hi Noor Sa Ab Aasman Talak Hai
Nagmein Hi Nagmein Hai Jagti Soti Fizaon Mein
Husn Hai Sari Adaon Mein
Ishq Hai Jaise Hawaon Mein
Ishq Hai Jaise Hawaon Mein...Back ground me ye song playing"In lamhe ki daaman me,..paakija se rishthe,...[jodha akber] is the curtesy of my dearest and dearest friend Sheetal,.. photeos bhi inka tha all credit goes to her only
Finally ,.. finally he did it,.. he did it successfully,.. kyu nahi,.. aakhir koun hai,...? humara The Greate MSK,..The Perfectionist,.. Mr. Perfect. . He knows how to knock,...whom to knock,... where to knock,... when to knock,.. and he knocked the door of geet heart at right time,.. in right sence ,.. and in right way and he get a warm welcome there. A grand welcome which lead his life to the heavens with geet.
And he succeeded in his first move with great victories,..she accepted his love he already won half of the battle and the remaining he can easily won with the help of her.

Mile Dekho Aise Hai Hum
Ke Do Sur Ho Jaise Madham
Koi Jyada Na Koi Kaam
Kise Aag Mein
Ke Prem Aag Mein
Jalte Dono Hi The Tan Bhi Hai Maan Bhi
Maan Bhi Hai Tan Bhi
Tan Bhi Hai Maan Bhi
Maan Bhi Hai Tan Bhi

Mere Khwaabon Ke Is Gulistaan Mein
Tumse Hi Tum Bahar Chai Hai
Phoolon Mein Rang Mere The Lekin
In Mein Khusboon Tumhi Se Aaye Hai



Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ypee me first 😛

beautiful at last geet accept maan love and he is true MSK dis-troy geet enemy wow
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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Maan destroyed Geet's step mother...

at last Geet accepted his and her love...

Maan is right...baaki baatein bachchon ko kaise manana hai...Maan ki maa, Naintara, Sameera ko kaise handle karna hai...yeh sab baad ki baatein hain...first of all they should decide what they want from life... everybody gets single life...if others have right to have happiness then Geet and Maan also have...they will not get another life to rejoice their love...mainly her children should realize this truth...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Aakhri geet ne maan ke pyaar ko apna hi liya!
Maan ne sahi kaha...sab ko bhul jao...aaj bas main aur tum...
Past me jis ne bhi geet ko taklif de...maan ne sabhi se badala le liya
Ab geet ke ex husband ki baari hai...
Ab maja aayega...dono hatho me hath leke sab ka samna karenge...pammi...sameera...sab ko sabak sikhayenge!
Abhi to dono Simla me do teen deen rahege ki nahi?
Geet ko manane me maan ne kitne papad bele hai...ab sab se dur akele me dono ko thode deen rahene do!!!
Eagerly waiting for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic and beautifully written and portrayed the emotions of both maan and geet and what a beautiful confession and am glad geet is starting to accept that maan loves her and she deserves all the love she is getting...him accepting her daughters as his too also made her feel so blessed...
waiting for them to start breaking all barriers and all future troubles together...

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