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didnt write till now nahi araha hai koi thought , aur karthik mas ki puja upwass waigaira waigaira,.. lagtha hai tumhe aur intezaar karna hoga sorry,for delay.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...finally maan realized the truth about pammi...do continue soon.
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-8/part-110/18/11/2013




Part-110

Arjun@ Annie who r coming to his room stood rooted shocked seeing him walking with the help of geet.
Annie:- bhai,.. aap walk kar rahe ho? dr. ne aap ko kuch aur din araam karne ko kaha thana?
Maan:- nahi Annie mai thik hu mujhe jaldi thik hona hai, bahut saara kaam hai mujhe khud dekhna hai.
Arjun:- jiju,.. aap kyu takleef utha rahe ho? mai huna mai dekhlunga sab jiju.
Maan:- nahi arjun,.. ye mera kaam hai mai hi dekhna chahtha hu, aur kisi per mai bharosa nahi karpaunga.
Arjun and Annie looked puzzled to his reply,.. kya hua?kiske baareme wo isa baath karrahehai?
Maan:- Arjun mujhe zara garden tak lejao, mujhe kuch kaam hai.
Arjun:- ji,. jiju,.. and he hold him and led him to garden and made him sit on the bench.
Annie:- bhabhi kya hua ? bhai kyu isa baath kar rahehai?
Geet:- pata nahi Annie ,wo isa kyu hai?
Geets s.t.:- wo isa kyu baath karrahe? kisi per bharosa nahi karpaunga... kya hua and she remembered hisp[osition when she returned to his room" kayi ye maaji ki baath tho sunanahi'


Arjun:- kya hua jiju,.. aap kuch pareshaan lagrahe ho? kya baath hai?jiju office ki kaam ke baare me pareshaan honeki jarurat nahi ,waha sab kuch thik hai,aap bas araam kijiye aur jaldi se thik hojayiye. Aap mujhe per bharosa kijiye.
Maan:- pata nahi arjun mai kis per bharosa rakhun,.. aur kis ko yakeen karun? koun apna ya koun paraya, koun sagi ya koun southeli?
Aaj mujhe pata chala ki mai ktina akeli hu, mera koi apna nahi hai is ghar me. ye saare log jisse mai aaj tak apna samjha, wo kabhi mujhe apna nahi maana, wo abhi tak mujhe southeli samjhathe hai aur mujhe dhoke me rakha. Aaj mera aankh khul gaya ,sacchayi saamne agayi, aur mujhe is sacchhayi ko sweekar karna hoga.
Arjun:- jiju,... ye aap kya baath ka rrahe ho? koun kaha ye sab aapse? kisi ko itna himmath kaise ho aap se isa baath karne ka?kya geet di ne aapse kuch kaha?
Maan:- mat lab tumbhi jaanthe ho in sabki baare me? tumhe kisne bathaya?
Arjun:- haa,.. jiju mujhe nakul ne bathaya aur aapko kaisa pata kayi di ne aapse kaha?
Maan:- wo kyu bathaye gi ye sab arjun? wo isa kabhi nahi karegi, kuch nahi bathaya wo,.. mai khud mere khanonse hi sunaya maaki muh se ,..ye,.. saare kadvi such and he explained him.
Arjun,... kya galat ki maine kyu mera saath hi isa horaha hai arjun? kya hai meri guna?kis janm ki paap ki saja mujhe milrahe Arjun? mai ne kabhi kisi ko jaanbuch kar koi na insaaf nahi kiya kisi ke saath anyaay nahi kiya,.. per mera saath hi kyu? jisko mai aaj tak meri apni sagi maa samjha tha,.. wo mera saath isa kaisa karsakthe hai?mai ne usse humesha meri apni maa samjha per wo mujhe southeli beta samjhi. kyu isa horaha hai mera saath? kya kami ki maine mera bhaionko aur behanko?Dev ko aur Vicky ko mai kabh koi anyaay nahi kiya,.. vicky ne jo kiya uskeliye usse saja milnahi chahiye aur wah kiya maine.Kabhi maine Annie aur tumhe paraya samjha? mujhe samaj me nahi araha hai ki kya hai meri galathi? kyu maa ne mujhe itna paraya karthi hai? kyu wo geet aur unki family ko maarna chahthi hai?
Arjun:- jiju,.. maaji jobhi kahe wo sirf unki man ki baath hai,.. Dev Annie aur vicky kabhi aapko southeli nahi maanthe ,.. wo aapko bahut pyaar karthe hai jiju, aap jaanthe hona annie aapse kitna pyaar karthe ,wo apni sagi bhai se badkar aapko pyaar karthi hai aapko bahut izzat karthe hai ,. aur dev bhi aapse bahut pyaarr karthe ha, bus thoda laparwahi hai , bus aapko bahut izzat dethe jiju, aur raahi vicky ki baath wo maa ki lad pyaar se bigadahua hai, lekin wo aapko bahut izzat dethe wo sab aapk apni sagi bhai maanthe hai jiju.
Maan :- per maa kyu ise sochethe hai Arjun?
Arjun:- ye sab aapki pyaar aur parwarish hai jiju jise unhe bigadnahi diya,maa ki pyaar unhe bigada. wo bhi aap ki khoon ki hisse hai jiju aapki papa ki khoon, chahe maaji galath hosakthi hai lekin bacche nahi.
Maan:- per wo geet ko kyu maarna chahtha hai?
Arjun:- jiju,.. di,.. aur unki family ki hifazath keliye maine saare inthezaam kiya,.. saare security rakhliya,.. b.gds bhi rakhliya,.. aur police se mere baath hue ,..kaka bhi unkesaath hai,... hume di ko kuch nahi hone dunge jiju,.. aap chintha math kijiye hume di aur unki family,...
Maan cut him middle saying" unki family nahi arjun,.. ab wo meri family hai,... wo mera bachha hai,.. meri family ,.. meri apni family"
Arjun:- haa,.. jiju,... aapka family aapka apna family,... thik kaha aapne,... ab jaldi se di ko apnayiye aur unhe ghar le ayiye,... shaayad tabhi ye saare pblms khatam hosaktha hai,... jiju,.. aap kahe tho mai aaj hi Prasant se baath kartha hu,
Maan:-nahi Arjun,... pehle mujhe Geet se baath karne do. hume jaana chatha hai ki wo kya sochthi hai,.. kya hai uski man me ?mai jaantha hu ki wo bhi mujhe se pyaar karthi hai,... bahut chahthe hai mujhe , nahi rahsakthi hai mujhe dekhe bina, phir bhi imai ye sab uski muh se sunna chahtha hu,wo khud apni pyaar ko elaan karna hoga,.. bina koi shak ,hicthhahat,..wo khud apni pyaar ko izhaar karna hoga. jald baaj me hume isa kuch bhi nahi karthe jisse sab bigad jaye,. tum jaanthe ho na wo kitna naadaan hai,.. wo maa ki dhamki ki wajese mujhe sameera ke saath shaadi karneka manana chathi hai,apni pyaar ko apni dil ki under dabake ,marke mujhe kisi aur ke saath shaadi karna chahthi hai,..
mai isa nahi karne dunga, mai use uski pyaar ka ehsaas dilaunga
au kisi bhi tarah mai usse apnaunga.
Arjun :- thik hai jiju,.. jaisa aap chahe,.. tab tak mai wait karunga,.. bus aap thoda jaldi karo hume jyaada der nahi karna chahiye,.. kya pata maaji kya karegi? kaise hum usse rok sakthe?
Maan:- bus do di aur Arjun zara mujhe thik hone do phir karunga,... tab tak tum pura dhyaan do thum hari di ki safty per. Arjun:-ji jiju,.. aap befikar rahiye. mai huna ,.. mai sab dekhlunga,...
After two days.
Maan came fr. wash room after bath, he is getting ready to office He is in his west and pants trying to dress up. His heir is full wet dropping water.
Geet came inside seeing him like that " Aap kya karrahe ho?'
Maan looked at her Geet mai office keliye ready horahahu.
Geet:- office,... aapko pata haina aapko kuch aur din araam karna hai.
Maan:- nahi,.. bahut hogaya araam mujhe bahut saara kaam hai, mujhe office jana hai,bus aur discussion nahi.
Geet sighed , " ye kya hai,.. aap apni baal thik se nahi sukhaya? di jiye mai sukhathi hu, she took towel fr. him and made him sit on bed ,came very close to him to wipe his hairs and started wiping his hairs.
Her nearness close to him raised his heart beat making him loose himself in her scent. Her closeness and the clear view of
her sleek ,slender waist milky white smooth soft stomach with a small ,tiny belly button provoking his tongue and inviting his lips to play with it inviting him to take it in to his mouth and suck it . Her saree pallu, which is lifted by her hand movement giving him a clear veiw of her mountains and valleys showing a perfect veiw of her cleavage provoking him to take the mounts in his palms and cup them, feel them , squeeze them, suck them giving all erotic thoughts which arosing him between his legs creating havoc in him which he never felt before.His throat get dried and he gulped his saliva to satisfy his thirst.
The Greate M.S.K who never gave a damn look to anyother woman or young ladies who r ready to throw themselves on his with their high revealing dresses and seducing., here loosing himself to a simple woman in a simple saree, not even a single pinch of flesh exposed, surrendering to a simple lady . He so much wanted to hug her and make her to know his need of her , want to express his love to her and want to claim her then and there.
Geet first started to wipe his hairs as casually , but slowly she came to grasp the position in which she is slowly registering her compramising position , her act become slow and stoped,again her heart mind and body become a team to dominate her and demanding her to feel him, to more close to him . His scent his after shave smell and shampoo smell driving her crazily to go near him and she moved close to him unknowingly and now she is in between his legs only mere inches away fr. him. Her hands droped fr. his head to shoulders feeling his biceps slowly carassing them. Her heart is pestering her repeatedly to hug him to her chest making her more vulnerable. She is waiting to be hold by Maan as she felt that her knees r becoming jelly and she may fall She badly wanted to hold by him anticipating his next move.
Its highly impossible to him to control himself his hands slowly moved to he waist to hold her feel her. His hands about to reach her waist little bit trembling, he looked at her to see her reaction. She looked at him biting her lower lip which is trembling in anticipation of his next act. He slowly pulled her to himself and hugged her by her waist keeping his face on her belly in which 1000s of 1000 butterflys flying in her belly creating a sweet havoc in her whole body She gasped feeling his face on her sensitive parts all ticklish fr, top to toe passing sweet currents as he nuzzled his face on her belly to feel her more. They r completely in another world , a world of love all drowned in passion,... when Pammi enter in to his room,...

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love this update a lot
nw maan will def make geet knw her feelings
MSK in action wow
update soon di
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Posted: 11 years ago



oh Geet is also drowning in those feelings...

she started taking bold steps...

Maan's closeness is making her vulnerable...

and Pammi entered and saw them...

i am sure she will be furious to see them so close...she will blame Geet... she have threatened Geet to pressurise Maan to marry Sameera and here Geet is in his arms...

and now as Maan knows about his mother's intentions, how will he react and save Geet from Pammi's ranting...

very interesting...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Dono ek dusre me kho gaye...ek duje ko feel karte hai...
aur pammi ka aa jana...😡

Agar pammi nahi aati to...!!??😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
love it now what will pammi do plzzz maaneet ko eak kar do waiting
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love it what will pammi do now plzzz maaneet ko eak kar do waitinggg
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-8/part-111/23/11/2013



Part-111
When Pammi entered in to his room calling '"Maan beta" stood rooted seeing the position in which they r,...spitting fire fr,her eyes fuming with anger ready to blast on Geet,"wat the hell r u doing here"
Maan senced that she isup to something, he know now Pammi never leave geet fr. ranting ,he hasto do something,...something that show pammi her place , and show her the place where geet is in her heart.,so he,..
"kuch kaam tha? yaha tak aneki koi jarurat nahi, kisi se kehdena".Pammi shocked by hearing his dry words to her, itni berukhi shabd mujhe derahe ho? she baffled by the words of Maan.
"Mai bilkul thik hu,.. mere liye chintha honeki koi jarurat nahi hai, Geet haina mere saath wo meri khayaalrakhegi, wo meri dhyaan rakhegi, he placed his hands on geet shoulders embrassing her to him possessively, and looked at pammi like u may leave.
Pammi stunned by his behavour and words too cold towards her. Not even he once called her ,...Maa,... Maa tho durr he even didnt adress her as"aap"how much dryness in his voice never ever in her dreams she heard. She totally became numb and baffled ,shocked all this by his cold behaviour.
"Wat happened to him? kayi is geet ne kuch kaha tho nahi meri sharthonki baare me, is ki itni himmat? dekhthi hu,..mai abhi,.. she looked at geet with furious looks like she maysmash her into ashes and left fr. there.
Geet also stunned by the events. wat is she doing? she came to here to convince him to marry Sameera,.. and here wat is she doing in his arms , mai apne aap ko isa aise khosathi hu in ki baahoome.Maaji jaryr mad atme, kayi ye mere family ko kuch kiya tho? babaji ab kyahoga? aur Maan ji ,.. wo kyu isa baath karrahe unki maa ke saath/kya hua unhe?kayi unhone such jaanliya?, she looked at him confused.
Maan know she felt bad for Pammi, but it is needed, aur mujhe se aur bardaash nahi hoga ye geet ko kuch aur sunayi tho. Ye jaruri hai ki unhe unki aukaat dikhana hoga. he dont want to tell this to geet so,.. he
'"Geet mujhe office keliye late horaha hai,.. mera kapde nikalo"
she looked at him still confused.
Geet mai tumhe kuch puch raha hu, mera kapde nikalo"
She snapped fr. her confusio n went to bring clothes fr. cupboard.
She took out his shirt, waist coat, tie all exactly how he dress up in that exact combination. She came near him ,he spread his hand like asking her to wear it to him. She weared the shirt ,thinkinghimto ask about his behaviour. she took step back and tried to ask "wo aap kyu maase,...
he again cut her saying"ab ye buttons koun band karega?he asked her shutting her mouth in a bit loud voice.
She came to him gain murmering,"kaise pharmaish karrahe,.. jais mai inki biwi hu".
Maan" mujhe sunayideraha hai"he smirked seeing her bitting her tongue registering wat she told. He so much wanted to eat her alive all pinky, pinky blushing looking so cute.
"She will surely kill me one day with her antics" he thought feeling difficult to control his urge to have her right then.
He gave her his tie,.. she tied it to him feeling difficult to control herself in his proximity. She confusedby his act ,.. why he is asking her to do allthis and why she is fallowing all his orders,.. where all this is leading?He gave his comb to her and sat on bed looking her.
She combedhis hairs exactly howhe tugg them, she gace mirror tocheckhecked it and smiled at her like good./He searched for his keys,.. pho,..etc,..etc,.. and"chale Geet"?
Geet:- mera gaadi hai, mai chalijaungi,...
Maanlooked at her intently like will u fallow me ,.. stoping all this,.. she looked his intence guage and quitely fallowed him.
They r in car Maan driving and geet inpassenger seat. She is thinking deeplyb about his talk and want to ask him,...
Maan watched her, still thinking.
"Geet itni jore math dalo apni dimak per,.. wo pehle hi pea sized hai,.. aur bhi chota hojayegi.
Geet opened her mouth in "o" shaped Haa,... kya kaha aap mai,.. mai,.. pea sized brain hu?" pouting her mouth by his taunting and teasing.
Maan laughed seeing her pouting nahitho kya?kyu itna soch rahi ho/
She sat quite all pouting by his teasing,she nowunderstand that he dont want to discuss about that, that is why he is doing all this, she sighed.
Maan looked at her like wat?
Geet:- mujhe do din keliye simla jaana hoga, bachhonko leke excursion lejana hoga, she told him, its more like asking his permission rather than telling.
Maan:- snapped "tum kahi nahi jaarahe ho. samjhe tum?
Geet asked pouting"lekin kyu?"
Maan:- kyuki mai kahraha hu ki tum nahi jaaogi tho nahi jaaogi.
Geet told him like pleading , Suniye,..[hai,.. Maan thogaya,..]pehlehi mai bahut chutti leli ab simla bhi mana kardiya tho unhe bura lagegana? please aap samajneki khoshishkijiyena,...
no doubt if he say no she will not go, but she has to go.
Sirf do din ki baath hai,. she again pleaded him.
He feared to send her away fr. him he dont know wat is in pammis mind. she will deffinitely do harm to her as after todays incident , it is difficult to him to protect her if she is not with him he want to keep her with him. how can he protect her there/but he will not den her plead also so he,... o.k. sirf do din aur tum mujhe tumhari saare tour programme ke baare me batana,.. matlab kab jaarahe ho,.. kaha rahthi ho,.. kya,.. kya,..dekhna hai,.. sab,..sab,.. details mint to mint mujhe dena hoga,..thik.hai?
Geet :- ji,.. mai aap ko sab dedungi.
Maan:- kab nikalna hai?
Geet:-aaj shaam 6.o"clock baje.
Maan:- thik hai mai ajunga,.. tumhe sendoff dene lkeliye ,.. aur suno ,.. mujhe promise karo ki tm waha tumharikhayaal rakhthi ho, dhyaan rakthiho. u take care urself,...Geet ji,.. mai apni dhyaan rakhungi, aur khayaal rakhungi.
He half heartedly agreed to her to send her simla. mujhe saare security arrange karna hoga aur b.gds ko bhiarangekarna hoga he decided in himself.



Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
waiting 4 shimla episode

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