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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting eagerly for your new story please do pm me. Thanks
Coming to eol. Hope they both confess to each other. Hope maan is able to convince geet that not to go for Sam and he can only think of her
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waiting for new ff
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lovely updatewhen will meeneet will be one waiting
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Anu, aap kaha ho?
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-8/part-113/4/12/2013





Part:-113


And they reached to guest house. Geet looked awed by the interior of that house.

"Jayiye,.. fresh hoke ayiye Mai aap keliye kuch banathi hu. Aap ne kuch khaya nahi hogana?

Maan looked surprised how did she know that?

Geet:- shaam tak aap office me hai, aur ab tak yaha hai kaha milega aap ko time dinner keliye haina?

Maan noded his head to yes.

Geet- jayiye,.. mujhe kitche dikhayiye mai kuch banadethi aapke liye. He showed her kitchen and went to fresh up.

He came out of the room after fresh up. his legs lead him to the kitchen as the aroma of her food kheechraha usse. He came to her as she is preparing his fav.dish rizwana. He bend over her shoulder inhaling the aroma of dish.

Maan:- Ummm,.. missed so much this.

Geets.t.:-[ umm,.. jannab line pe araha hai,. thoda push kartha hu]

" isiliye kahrahi hu,.. jaldi shaadi karle , aapki biwi har roj aap ki pasand ki khana banake aap ko khilayegi.

Maan s.t.:- [ Umm,.. gadi line pe araha hai,.. thoda push detha hu],.. Geet mujhe shaadi nahi karni.

Geet:- kyu nahi karni hai,.. isa akeli kab tak rahthe hai aap? shaadi kyu nahi karthe? Maan ji age zindagi bahut mushkil hotha hai,... is umar me ek saathi ki jarurat padthi hai, jisse hum har baath baat sake. Humari har suk , dukh me shaamil hosake. Hume asara bansake, kabhi akela mehsoos nahi karsake. Isa kayi baathe hothe hai Maan ji jisse hum aur kisi se baath na sake. sirf ek jeevan saathi sehi kah sakthe hai kya pata aje kya hoga? aap ko bhi family hona chahiye . Biwi, bacche honi chahiye aapki apna ghar pariwaar honichahiye and etc,... etc,.. she is going to continue but Maan stoped her,...

Maan:-chalo mai maan bhi jaau, shaadi keliye , koun raaji hoga mujhe se shaadi karne keliye is umar me?

Geet:- kyu nahi raaji hoga aapse shaadi keliye ? kya kami hai aap me?Badi bussiness man ho, acchi khaandaan ki ho, name , fame paisa, sab kuch hai aap ke pass, aur aap bahut handsome bhi ho, aap ko dekhke kisiko pata nahi chaltha aapki umar kya hai. kisi bhi ladk iraaji hogi aapse shaadi karnekely,.. waise hume kisi aur ka kya jarurat hai Sam,... maan cut her here..

Maan:- Tho kya tum kar sakthe ho mujhe se shaadi?

Geet stunned by his words .Her heart stopped at once hearing this. She didnt believe her ears.

Maan:- "Bolo geet kya tum karsakthe ho mujhese shaadi?

Geet:- "ye aap kya bolrahe ho?

Maan inched towards her near her looking deeply and she moved back. Maan took steps towards her and she backward still she met the wall. She looked him puzzled by his nearness. His nearness always effects her.She knew she cannot stand still by his effect she will loose herself in him. she feared and she tried to move to the side. Maan kept his hand preventing to go. She moved to other side Maan blocked the other side also trapping her between him and the wall . She looked helpless.

Maan:- Bolo geet ,.. kya tum karsakthe ho mujhese shaadi?

Mai badi businessman hu, acchi khaandaan ki hu,name fame paisa sab kuch hai mera pass. Aur tumhari hissab se mai handsome bhi hu, mujhe dekhka rmeri umar pata nahichaltha. bolo geet kya tum karsakthe ho mujhese shaadi?[ lol,.. geet tho apni hi jaal me phas gayi,... wah ,.. maan babu,.. wah,.. tumhe tho lajawaab hai,.. acchi tarh jaanthe ho kaise geet ko phasana]

He came more near he rmere inches fr. her. She is now almost touching him fr. top to toe. He bend more towards her face.

" zindagi bhar akeli jina mushkil hotha hai geet. Age zindagi aur mushkil hotha hai. Is umar me ek saathi ki jarurat padtha hai. Isa kayi baat hothi hai geet ki hum kisi aur se nahi baat karsake siva ek jeewansaathi ke alawa,...

Aur mujhe isi ladki nahi chahiye jisse mera paise name fame se pyaar hai , mujhe sirf mujhe se pyaar karne waali chahiye. jo mera har baath har jarurat bina kuch kahe, bina kuch puche samaj sake bilkul tumhari tarah.

He kept his face on her face His breath is falling on her making her weak and weak. She feared she may loose her control to him. she tried to make distance fr. him. She kept her hands on his chest to create distance fr.him and push him. But is that possible? is her body ever fallowed her command khaas karke in his proxmity. He leaned on to her face"Tumbhi akeli hona,.. tumhe bhi ek jeevan saathi ki jarurat hai geet, he spoke in her ears she turned her face in fear of loosing her self.He nuzzled her face in that side fr. forehead to her eyes , ears, cheeks jaw line and up to her neck with his nose creating a sweet havoc on her body.

She felt that her knees become jelly and she may fall down .She tried to hold him by his shirt with her fist want to stop him but invain. He turned her face by nuzzling it by his face towards him. She trembled like a tender leaf, her lips shivered in desperate of beeing captured by him and he fulfilled their wish.

He took her lips in his" I love u geet" hesucked her lips. I can not live without u Geet. he nibbled her lower lip .I want to live with u geet. Mai tumhara saath jina chahtha hu geet . Aur haa,.. geet tumbhi mujhese pyaar karthe ho geet nahi jisakthi mere bina.tumhe ye pahchan na hoga geet tum mujhe kitna pyaar karthe ho.Tum meri ho geet.He said in husshed voice bursting the crackers of delight,pleasure , contentment ,passion and all and other feelings in her heart. A heart that waited for a long to hear these 3 magical words. Saalonse, saalonse tadapthe hue dil me , he droped these words like rain on dried and barren land. Never ever heard these 3 magical words fr. anyone in her all life. She feared at her thumping heart as if it will stop. . Tears formed fr. her eyes soon ready to rain.

Aakhir wo bhi ek naari hai. Ek woman . He awaked her woman hood inside her which died long before lagbhag30 saal pehle. She felt contented and complited. Haa,... now she felt that she is a woman and has all the feelings and desires ,passion every thing that an aam aurat me hothi,.. and he made her complete. She submitted herself to him in reward to his confession. She let him to take wat ever he want . He chewed her lips grasping the nectar. He want her response.But she dont know how to respond even.He asked the prmission to enter her mouth , and she gave in. He intruded into her mouth tasting her each and every corner of her mouth giving her immense pleasure ,... the pleasure which drived her to get more and more by taking him and she started to take him. Her hands snacked his neck and she fisted his hairs pulling more and more to herself. Tears still flowing fr. her eyes in a great dilemma,... haa,.. her state of mind kuch hum explain na sake,... ek taraf wo bilkul khush beeing loved by him and dusere taraf,...,.. is she right? dilemma,.. which never leave her in peace confussion,..is she doing right? will it be acceptable ,. every thing,.. everything,.. taking toll on her ,.. and she pushed him away making him shocked,...

"Kha the aap itni din? ab kyu aya aap mere zindagi me?She pulled him again and slammed her lips on him kissing him madely ,.. actually nibbling,.. nahi,... biting him ,. letting all her frustration. destress depression , pain ,.. everything,.. everything on him, she moved back,.. jab mujhe aapki sakth jarurat thi aap nahi the,.. ab kyu aya? bahut der kiya aapne,patahai aapki geet ke saath kya kya hua? kaise barbaad hogayi mai, kaise tut gayi mai,..she took him again flushing out all her pain frustration depression and dard humiliation she got fr. the so called society,.. everything,.. that she faced till now. she whined like a small baby who complaint o her dad." kuch nahi hai mere pass ab aap ko dene keliye,barbaad hogayi aapki geet, satya naash hui mai.

Ab mai aapko kuch nahi depaungi, kuch nahi hai mera pass aapko denekeliye badnami ke alawa , beizzathi ki alawa,mai badnaseeb hu. She sunk down crying bitterly. Jis pyaar keliye wo apni zindagi bhar tadaprahi hai wo ab usse milgayi,.. lekin unki kismat wo pyaar ko paanese usse rok rahe hai.



Link for my second ff Izhaar ,...Pyaar ka,...:-ww.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3829025&PID=96809609&#p96809609

link for part-114 of Eol:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97514037



Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
fiinally dey confesses.awesome update
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OMG I was literally crying at the end of the update...

transformation of care into love and then guilt...u expressed it into words is amazing...

Maan confessed his love for her and she poured out her pain her longing in front of him...

now it is upto him how will he make her realize that still there is life for them...still she can get love...she can be truly loved by someone...she can see and fulfill her dreams...

I really feel very bad when I see even women can't see other woman happy...men can marry as much time as they can but women can't even get free from abusive relation...if she gets free somehow then she don't have right to live and love again...she has to burn in memories of that 🤬 ...

baaki pariwaar kaise react karega that is another thing,, first Geet has to understand that she has all the rights as other human being...her life is not finished yet...

there is one incident happen in our neighborhood...a family has only son...he got married to a widow with 2 small daughters against his parents wish...so they discarded him from their family...he went away with his new wife and daughters...when I get this news I tell his parents not to care what others say...they should consider their son's feelings not what society thinks...society gives respect to what our family supports...but they didn't care...they just care about society...when I tell my husband he said---what wrong he does by marrying a widow...he did good by giving love and shelter of his name to those daughters also...what is wrong in that...

point is that society has both type of thinking...some thinks this way some that way...if we support our family member then the people having same thinking from society will also come in support...if we think to not support our family members decision then the people in society who think same way will support...it is upto us what type of people's support we want from society...

and the irony is that women is woman's biggest enemy...see Tejpal rape case...his wife, his daughter supporting him...even his lawyer is woman...

kitna bada comment...but that is because today I am very happy with update...Anuradha u also removed ur hesitation about showing a middle aged people in love...and I am happy about that...

thanx for pm...


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hot cute emotional update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally!!!
This was the exactly same reaction I expected from geet!!
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awesome😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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