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Posted: 6 hours ago
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Author's Note

Thank you so much to everyone who is reading The Girl in the Bookshop - whether you comment regularly, occasionally, or quietly read every update and disappear again. 🤍

Chapter 10 felt like such an important milestone for Maan and Geet because their wedding is deliberately nothing grand or dramatic. It is messy, intimate, impulsive, emotional, and very them - Geet wearing her mother's saree, Maan completely losing his composure when he sees her, the painfully unromantic registrar's office, Mehek crying, Vikram slowly accepting Maan into the family, the mangalsutra and sindoor they choose for themselves, and then all the complicated emotions waiting for Geet at home afterward.

I know there are quite a few silent readers here who read/like the chapters but rarely comment. 😄 If that's you, consider this my very gentle invitation to come out of hiding for this chapter. Even a couple of lines, a favourite moment, or just telling me what you felt while reading genuinely helps me understand what is landing with readers.

I'm especially curious:

Which Chapter 10 moment stayed with you the most?
Maan seeing Geet in the blue saree? The registry? Mehek and Geet? Vikram with Maan? The mangalsutra/sindoor moment?

And one bigger question:

At this point, do you feel happy for Geet... or are you already nervous about what Maan still hasn't told her? 👀

Would genuinely love to hear from the quiet readers too. You don't need to write an essay - one sentence absolutely counts. 🤍

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 6 hours ago
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Posted: 6 hours ago
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A little disappointed with the rushed wedding with no ceremonies. Under the circumstances it was a must. Glad she had a nice outfit for it. Being her mother's sari made it more nostalgic.

The mangalsutra was a nice touch. It gave Geet a symbol and it came from his heart. Added a bit of realism to it.

Sunita will be shocked out of her wits. But in Maan's presence, she might not say much.

Edited by coderlady - 6 hours ago
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Posted: 6 hours ago
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Maan has not be too open about wanting that land for his project. But I don't think he will be unfair to her. He will get her the right to control her destiny the way she chooses. Maybe his dream will become hers too.

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Posted: an hour ago
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Great update finally geet n maan r married looking forward for next update

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Posted: an hour ago
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beautiful simple just like geet....

and so not maan...not grand....

but i am surprised he did not tell his family yet....hmm

so glad vikram and mehek were part of the wedding....so sweet of geet to want sunita for the lunch....

terrified of wht happens next....

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