MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ty 4 ur likes & comments...it means a lot 2 me...willl update soon part 10
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awesome update...love it...maan taking geet out making her happy...
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PART 10
Geet was shocked to see the person sitting opposite to her...
"Rohan..."
Geet was looking at him in shock where as rohan was looking at her with a wide smile...
"Hey geet...welcome to my restaurant..."
"Your restaurant...means you own this place...oh.. like then you with me why... I mean..."
"Geet relax...ammm...we can talk later about that but what you doing here...new client huh..."
He does his one eyebrow up & smiles. geet was feeling uncomfortable but she couldn't do anything so she just smiled.
maan was talking on phone with prem.
"Prem come directly on 3rd floor...waha there is a restaurant name as khanna chef's...I & geet are sitting there ohk..."
"Ohk yea I got that...me just parking will be there in 5 minutes..."
"Yea fine...take your time..."
Maan comes back. He saw a guy was sitting opposite to geet...he was confused but thought that may be some friend...
"Geet..."
Maan smiles at geet & saw her worried expression.he looks at the person who was sitting over there...as he saw rohan his face also lost colours.
"Do we know each other?"
"Not really but yea...I know geet very well...right geet..."
Geet just smile.maan noticed get was not comfortable over here so he thought to do something but he have to be normal as lot of people where around them..
"By the way...hi rohan & this is my restaurant..."
"Oh...really...hmmm I must say nice place rohan...good going bro...but as we are your guests today I would like your special attention & as geet is your friend too...so what say.."
"Ya why not...surely...would never mind serving such a beautiful lady today..."
Maan was aware of rohan's bad intension but he don't want to create more problem for geet & he have to make here happy not sad...
by the time they chat manager comes to rohan...
"Sir... your wife is calling on your phone what shall I say to her..."
"Rohan your wife.. oh...amazing here can I get the phone please...rohan aaj tua mey teri wife se teri tarif karuga jo tu nahi bhulega..."
The manager thought that rohan was sitting with them for so while they must be friends so she gave the phone to maan...
"Hello bhabhi ji namaste...I am maan rohan's friend boyfriend...I am here in his restaurant...rohan is doing lot of tarif of yours bhabhi ji...
I must say kafi control mey rakha hai aapne rohan ko...
but bhabhi ji...do you know rohan can never improve...you must be knowing his flirting habits & they are increasing day by day.. right rohan..haha..yes bhabhi ji...ya bhabhi ji take care...ji mey khud rohan ko bhej duga as it is he is not doing any work as of now right rohan..."
Rohan just nodes as he know that what is maan upto...he just doesn't want to make his image down so he smiles.
"Rohan bhabhi ji want you home...bye..."
"Bye maan...bye geet..."
Rohan gets up from the sit & was leaving...he again turns back...
"Geet I must say you have a protective boyfriend & more over he very well know how to handle the situation...bye..."
In all this the only person was in full shock was geet... geet was not aware what just happened & rohan left... maan is laughing more over rohan is married & oh god she was so confused...
"So geet...how was it..?"
"Huh..."
Geet was still in confusion...
"Geet...I asked you how was it. . He just ran away fadu that na...I.know I am a superb actor...after all I want to be a director superb tua hona hi chahiye..."
"Maan you saved me from rohan thank you.but now what how will you save me from others...maan don't bother much yaar...I mean leave me with it...I have to face all this &..."
"Geet... first I am your friend second I won't bother you but yes I would always save you & till I am with you no one can harm you so chilll"
"Maan why are you so nice..."
"Because I have done a small contract with your heart that from now I am going to give your heart all the happiness it deserves..."
Maan smiles...till the prem comes with alvina.
They had some snacks and start with some shopping.
Alvina got geets company & geet was comfortable with alvina.alvina pulled geet to shop & geet first hesitated but seeing maan assurance geet took her steps forward with it...
geet & alvina almost shop what ever they liked even maan & prem did some shopping.

Precap:maan is in love...
4 next update I want equal likes & equal comments...

Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago
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w8 i hv nt completed
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oye abhi paad...😆
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ha ha Rohan biwi ke darr ke maare ghar bhaag gaya...

Maan promised that until he is there he will always protect Geet...

awesome update...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nimi216

Guyz any1 4 double update. ?



yes dear
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kya maan ko geet se pyar hogaya hai...magar ne jaise rohan ko bhagaya...wah...gr8 job maan...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Originally posted by: nimi216

Will update 2night...



thank you dear
waiting for update
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PART 11
Hey guys thanks a lot for your likes and comments...Please do tell me howz this and I am open if any suggestions.

Geet & alvina where really tiered & went to sleep on the way back to lonavala. Geet had kept her head on maan's shoulder. Alvina & prem were also in deep sleep hugging each other...
maan was in deep thought thinking about prem's words which he told in the mall...

MAAN'S PROLOGUE

Is he right...I mean but how & I can never be in love...I used to like natasha & geet is just mine friend nothing more then that.. prem is wrong...I just like geet...I don't love her...it can be a mare attraction...yes I am right it's just attraction and nothing else...maan you can control this I know that & geet she is innocent...you promise her you will protect her now you have to be a good friend...don't let your heart over come you...use brain maan use brain & you are good friends & will be good friends right...yes I am right...
first thing I need to do is to remove geet from that mess...yes that is my target ...& I will win it...

maan smiles & now he was clear what he have to do exactly...
but again he thinks about what prem told him...
FLASH BACK
"What you mean a client came over there...shit...maan you saved her dude...you are a real friend..."
"Yes prem...but you know what geet told me... in fact she asked me that why I am so nice...ammm & I don't have a answer I told her some rubbish stuff but I myself was confused I mean I never did this before than why aachnak...why so sudden...urggg"
"Maan look at me.."
Maan looks at prem.maan was having a blank look where as prem was having a wide smile.
"You like her...in fact if I frame it like that then you are falling for her...she is good as a person...she awesome...and...she is pretty & she understand you...your heart &..."
Maan was looking at him as if he is not interested.
But with next pair of words which he heard he was shocked.
"You love her...you are falling for her...dude you are in love..."
"What rubbish...just stut your shit...no ways ohk...we are just friends nothing else..."
"When did I say you both are having some affair...you are the one saying so..."
Prem gives a smirk to maan...maan just leave the place without saying anything.

END FLASH BACK

In the evening maan ask geet to come near the cliff as he want to talk to her...
Geet comes near the cliff.maan was sitting over there throwing stones down & shaking legs...
"What happen maan..."
"Arey geet...come sit here it's nice over here..."
Maan smiles.geet takes a sit beside him.geet was thinking something and want to ask something to him but was having fear about maan's expression & reaction.
"Geet...""maan..."
"You say first..."
Geet takes a deep breadth inside & leaves..
"Maan I need your help...help to come out of this.. "
"This..."
"I mean I don't want such life...I want to stand on my own...I want to get out of that mess..."
"Are you serious...I mean...oh yes...I was just going to ask you this itself...I wanted you to come out of it & stand up on your own...I am happy...I was thinking you won't like it & you will go against me but I was wrong...I am happy.. oh yes..."
Maan was so happy that he hugged geet so hard that she was unable to speak or breadth.
Maan's eyes got moist.
"Geet I am so happy..."
Geet could guess the happiness seeing maans face...she also got her eye moist seeing maan.
"Maan...wo...but...ye kase I mean how are we going to come out of it...bhua she won't allow me & I remember once such thing happen and bhua order her person to kill the girl... I am...how... "
"Shu...shu.. geet listen to me...I have a way out...
I am going to go to Mumbai tomorrow...I will visit bhua ji & say that you ran away from the house...I have spoken to bauji and he have told me to do so...he knows your bhua and he is with us.. you will stay here I will go for a day and will come back... your phone I will change its sim on my way so that if bhua does some inspection then to you are on a safe side... this place is very much safe as no one know about it & no one will come either..."
"Mey...maan I won't stay alone please maan... I mean alone here no maan..."
"Geet I have to visit Mumbai as if I don't go then bhua will doubt us and it will be more mess...Please understand...& it's matter of a day...Please understand...I am doing it for you..."
"Hmmm...ohk..."
"Ohk is it fine if prem and alvina stay with you..."
"Thank you...I am ohk with it..."
"Ohk so now no rona dhona we are together and will face everything together...ohk...now smile..."
Geet smiles & maan hugs her...he kiss her forehead & take her into his arms...

precap:all goes well and fine...but😉
Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago

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