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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mwep


i m masoom frm india😃
m a medical student 1st yr

hi masoom
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update loved it was Amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
good going i really like your writing.keep going
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav at his ever best!!!
AWW... i just love this couple to bits... bas!!!
fab update Deeps n thank you so much for giving us an uninterpreted updates for the entire week... love u D :D :D :D
looking frwd for the wedding aaannnd the SR :) :):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Today is Thursday so update milega kya
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey its thursday!!!😊
i guess it update tym yipeee!!!!😃
update soon dear!!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
yepieee its Thursday...we will get update...

payal and akash marriage...and our lovebirds teasing s and many more...

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cheers..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally thursday has arrived.
Eagerly waiting for the wedding of payal & aakash. Update soon dear.
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THE dAWN OF THE dAWN
Chapter 42 - Part 1

Khushi stepped into hot shower after ending their steamy Haldi session abruptly, thanking Aman who just knows how to mess with her romantic life. Surprisingly, Arnav had to leave her on the bed for his second wife, who apparently happened to be male, none other than Mr. Aman. Before he left the room to meet Aman, Khushi made sure her husband heard her oath of firing Aman the moment she steps into office the following day, only to receive a hearty laugh from before he left.

Gently scrubbing haldi off her cheeks and arms, she blushed imagining how his fingers were all over body smearing the aromatic yellow paste, wondering how he knows her desires before even saying a word. Ever since they ended the session abruptly her mind kept racing thinking about all their encounters on the bed. She never felt so desperate for him as much as she did that moment. Halting everything she is doing, she simply stood under the shower and closed her eyes to get control over her dirty thoughts. The way he tortured her sweetly with his kisses and his lips flashed infront of her closed lids. She opened her eyes dismayed by the change in her thoughts filled with nothing but his passionate kisses and lustful touches. She hurriedly stepped out of the shower to engage herself something more productive to stop thinking all these.

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Sir, here is your complete itinerary. Everything is all set. If you could let me know what time you will reach the airport, I will inform Mark.

I am thinking close to midnight, right after the wedding. Ask Mark and crew to be all ready and wait for us. I dont want any delays.

Yes Sir.

Everything all set at Nadi?

Yes Sir. I have given instructions to Mark. He will handle everything there.

And the baggage?

Sir, Raghu is going to hand over the baggage to Mark at 8.

And what about the dress from Studio?

Sir, Its all packed well. Raghu is on his way to pick it up.

Thats most important. I do not want to see even a thread ruptured. Handle with care.

Yes Sir.

Run a final check on everything. Nothing should go wrong.

Sure Sir.

Anything else? Arnav asked going through the travel papers.

Happy Honeymoon Sir!

Arnav raised his eyebrow and looked at him sternly.

Uhh...I, I will take your leave.

Arnav continued looking at the papers acknowledging Aman with a subtle nod.

As Aman was about to leave, Arnav prompted in his growling voice, Remember absolutely no calls after we board.

Yes Sir.

I will try to check with you as I find time.

Yes Sir.

You may leave and ... Thank You!

Sir?

I said GO. Arnav walked away leaving Aman shocked. Another thanks?

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Everybody is going around crazily checking the last min details. Arnav rushed to Akash when he got frantic call ranting about his wedding jitters.

Bro, why do people need to marry. We were better off in living relation. This whole thing is sucking me out.

Relax Akash. You are acting like Bride. Behave like groom.

Do you think Fatty is also going through the same thing?

Possible! Arnav said reading through the emails.

Bro, tell me what happens after marriage? He asked nervously.

Arnav looked at Akash raising his eyebrows. Normally people will celebrate their first night. How will you know? You followed all rituals in reverse order. Arnav chuckled looking at Akash puppy face.

Thats already done at our end. What else will happen?

W.e.l.l. Your parents dont know so they might arrange for one.

Nahi yaar, apart from first night. How do they behave after marriage? DO they really get bossy?

If you behave like an a*s, I am sure Payal will not leave a chance to spank you.

Hehehe I love spanks.

Arnav rolled his eyes. Sudhar ja...Dump your pervert brain somewhere. You are graduating to parenthood. Start acting like one. He said before picking up Khushi's call.

Arnav, where is that duffer Akash? Khushi barked as soon as he answered.

Why did you call me if you wanna talk to Akash? A possessive husband on the roll!!!

Arnav I am not able to reach his cell. I tried several times.

Arnav sensed Khushi's voice shivering nervously.

Khushi calm down. First take deep breath and tell me what happened.

Listen, Payal just threw up. We managed saying marriage jitters but she is very scared. Wedding is in 2 hrs and I am afraid if she will be OK till then.

Let me talk to the doctor.

No wait, Akash has pills. That duffer forgot to give today's dose. Can you get it? She will be alright if she takes it.

Do you have Payal medication? Arnav turned to Akash and enquired.

Oh shoot. Yes. Akash got up to dig in for his wallet carefully tucked in his sherwani.

Arnav gave him kick on his leg angrily. Cant you do one task properly?

Kya Hua? Did she throw up? Akash asked worriedly.

Khushi give the phone to Payal. Akash wants to talk.

No Arnav, she is rounded by all elders. Get the medicine ASAP and tell Akash nothing to worry.

Arnie, I will come with you. As Akash was about to go with Arnav, his parents came to check on him to tie Sehra and get prepared for baraat. Arnav sighed him that he will handle and rushed to Payal's room.

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Arnav mentally thanked Khushi for making it easy for him to cross the hallway of women who were bragging about the jewels as if there is nothing important than that. Arnav knocked on the door and Khushi opened the door. She swiftly pulled him in and craned her neck out to see if anyone is coming.

Fatty, How are you feeling now? Arnav went and sat beside her.

Before Payal could answer, Khushi interrupted. Arnav first let her take the pill. She grabbed the medicine pack and tried to open the pack with her hands shivering. He stood up and caught hold of her palms.

Relax. Why are you so tensed?

Arn..

Shhh. Sit down. He took the pill and gave it to Payal. While Payal was taking medication, he turned to Khushi and gave her a glass of water, and He took the seat next to Khushi and held her hand as she shivered nervously..

Are you OK?

Khushi nodded settling against the chair.

Fatty, do you want me to call doctor? He asked holding Khushi's hand.

No, I think I will be OK in 20mins. Thanks Arnie.

Why the hell Akash has your pills? Arent you suppose to carry?

I was afraid if I will get caught..So....Payal felt embarrassed and upset for being a bit careless about it.

Sensing her mood, Khushi got up and hugged her. Its OK yaar. Hota hai! She said giving warning looks to Arnav.

Cookie, can you keep this pills in your handbag. I dont want anyone to find it.

Sure. Khushi took the pills and while keeping it in her bag. She remembered her own medication.

Look, I was giving you lecture, mein khud bhool gayi. She swallowed her medication while Arnav looked at her all confused. When she was taking the medication with water, the pack slipped through her hands and fell on Payal's lap and she picked it up to see what it is.

Meanwhile impatient Arnav barked on her rushing to her in one strode, Khushi whats wrong? Are you not feeling well? He started checking her throat and forehead for temperature.

Oh this is just for my acne. Nothing to worry. She let out nervous smile before gulping water.

But Cookie, these are contraceptive pills. Payal said looking at the pack while Arnav looked shocked at Khushi.

Contraceptive pills? Arnav asked holding Khushi'e elbow.

Birth control pills. Payal clarified with smile leaving Arnav shocked.

Feeling embarassed, Khushi for a split second bit her tongue and opened her nervously closed eyes to meet his piercing gaze.

I was having blemishes on my face for last one month. So my doctor put me on these pills for 3 months.

Arnav grabbed her elbow and pulled her to the side away from Payal. Are you sure you are not hiding anything? I mean who will prescribe these pills for face? He asked worriedly.

Are you doubting me?

Khu..

What do you wanna hear? That I am using these to run an affair behind your back. She said teasingly.

He gripped her elbow tightly and growled, Dont you ever talk sh*t like that to me! I was just trying to find if you were having any other problem.

Arnav, I am just joking.

Well sorry to disappoint you, I didnt find it funny. He shrugged her hand and walked out angrily.

Khushi turned around and looked at Payal, Do you really have to use that word infront of him?

How do I know? You should have told me. Payal teased.

Now it will take me ages to convince him.

I dont think so, not if you are taking it for...

No Ma'm. I wasnt taking it for any contraceptive benefits. Genuinely for last one month my hormones got whacked up and my skin was breaking out causing blemishes. So I am put on 3 month medication. Clear or anymore questions? She said rolling her eyes and grabbing her bag away from Payal.

Last one month? Looks like your hormones are acting up weird ever since you met Arnav. Payal fluttered her lashes giggling hard.

Khushi creased her forehead and seriously gave it thought. Payal was right, Khushi went to meet her GYN to find the reason behind the sudden emerge of pimples on her face.

By the way people say that, your hormones act up weird if you drool too much on anything or anyone. Payal giggled thoroughly enjoying the blush on Khushi's face.

Khushi threw pillow on Payal, Shut Up. You already created hurricane in his brain. Now I have to bear the consequences.

Such consequences always turn out to your advantage. Payal giggled further embarrassing Khushi. Waise Cookie, is everything done?

What do you mean by everything? Khushi turned away and tried to hide her unstoppable wide grin.

Wahi...ahem ahem...

Thats none of your business. Khushi smiled taking her clothes to get ready.

Aww, bathana...dont give attitude... Payal persisted.

No Ma'm. You are not getting any inside details. She winked at her. I am going to get ready. You be ready. Beautician is on her way. Khushi rushed to bathroom to avoid Payal's banter. She pulled her phone out and called Arnav. But he didnt pick up. Idiot!!! Possessive Soul. She smiled. Buckle Up Khushi, another rough night ahead.

She texted, Sowwiieee. I didnt mean it that way.

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Arnav came out the shower drying his hair and noticed several text messages from Khushi. He read each one of them but didnt relent to her SMS pleas. He remained firm and fumed recalling the whole conversation. He threw the towel wondering who takes birth control pills for skin problems. He just couldnt connect the dots and wondered if she preparing for their night. A blushing smile appeared on his lips thinking his wife is way too advanced if what he is thinking is true. Then came another SMS,

Sowwiiieee...How many times more do I have to say? <with pout, if that melts you>

He smiled imagining her pout. Drama queen! He muttered and got dressed himself to the perfection in his indowestern Black Suit.

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Has your pati parmeshwar cooled down?

Do you think he will that soon? He didnt reply to any of my messages. Khushi pouted sadly, fixing Payal's lehenga. Looking at it carefully, Khushi screamed, Payal, this is not your lehenga.

What?

What are you wearing? This is not your lehenga. I have seen it in the studio.

Relax, I changed my mind. I liked this better than that. Payal spoke convincingly.

Are you nuts? That one was out of the world. Have you seen it properly?

No thanks. Akash selected this one from Arnie's collection. So I will be wearing this.

But Payal, he worked so hard for that piece.

Payal felt bad for hiding it from Khushi and cursed Arnav for making her bad person. She spoke in very convincing tone. It was too heavy for me Cookie. So, I hope you...

No no, thats all right. I understand. Khushi didnt argue further but felt a bit sad that Arnav worked so hard for that master piece only to be rejected. She wondered why Arnav didnt say anything about it to her.

Payal bitiya, Baraat is here. Are you ready? Payal's mom rushed inside looking nothing less than a wreck.

Amma, you are talking as if they are coming from somewhere else. Calm down!

Her mom sat next to her and fondly hugged her. I have never seen a bride who is so relaxed. Damaadji is more tensed than you. Payal's mom teased her and they both shared few mom-daughter emotional moments.

Khushi remembered Garima who did the same thing before Khushi was all ready to become Arnav's. Break it or Make it, its all in your hands, She remembered her mother's words and got emotional thinking how far they came in the relation.

Khushi beta, can you please be with her. I need to go to welcome Damaadji.

Ofcourse Aunty. Dont worry.

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Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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THE dAWN OF THE dAWN
Chapter 42 - Part 2

Arnav walked into Akash room to accompany him to Milani and was pretty impressed with his buddy who looked no less than a king.

Dressed in gold and red sherwani, beautifully adorned with rubis and silk threads, Akash looked very charming.


Arnav walked over to his friend with huge happy smile and said adjusting his shoulders, You are looking like jewellery shop.

Are you kidding me? Is that what you say NOW?

Naa, you look just fine, in fact more than fine.

You think Payal will like it? Akash asked in his usual curious tone.

Just hold her all the time to make sure she doesnt faint at your new avatar. Arnav wrapped his arm on Akash shoulder and spoke leading him to Milani (Welcoming Baraat Ceremony) along with other family members. As everyone stood by the entrance of mandap hall, Arnav whispered not leaving any chance to tease Akash, This is it. No turning back. Sochlo freedom or spanks!

Arnie, you are supposed to help not worsen my situation. Akash rubbed his palms nervously.

Arnav stood by Akash as he was getting ready to be welcomed by his in-laws which is when he noticed Shashi and Garima walking towards them standing behind Payal parents. Instantly anger took over his playful attitude and narrowed his eyes at them remembering the scar and their parting. He looked away trying to control his anger.

While Payal's dad welcomed Akash by putting on garland, Payal's mom took his aarathi and put tilak. Since Arnav and other cousins were standing next to them, she put on tilak on all of them. When Arnav tried to step away, Aakash held his hand and sighed please to which Arnav obliged and bent his head for tilak.

After exchanging gifts in the form of cash on either side, Akash and his family finally stepped inside the hall. Arnav excused himself and walked over to Shashi and Garima who gave him a warm smile.

I am glad you are able to take some time off your busy schedule to meet your daughter. He said mockingly, his every word referring to how they kept her away all life.

Thank you for inviting. Shashi politely said with a smile understanding his indirect accusations.

I will let Khushi know, she will be happy to see you both. As he was about to leave Garima called him.

Chote!

He turned around and said narrowing his eyes, Arnav, I like to called Arnav!

She smiled and walked over to him and raised her finger to adjust the tilak on his forehead. He inched back refusing her.

She persistently walked closer, and adjusted his tilak, and spoke as her eyes welled up, I know you are now a very matured and sensible man and grown big enough to handle your life. Per itna bhi nahi ki, you cant touch elders feet and you cant let your AMMA fix your tilak.

Excuse Me? He said in disapproval at the word AMMA. He used to call her Amma he remembered.

What he didnt realize is that there is supreme force which controls his destiny and his actions. That moment a mother-in-law put tilak and welcomed her son-in-law in a whole new way without their own knowledge.

Garima! Shashi tried to stop Garima as that is not the place for any arguments.

Wait Shashi. I think he has forgotten many things which we need to remind him.

Arnav walked closer to Garima tucking his hands in his trouser pants and spoke looking at Shashi, You are right. Why dont we start with why Khushi was taken away from me?

Shashi looked at him all shocked while Garima lowered her eyes fidgeting with her pallu.

So he remembers! Shashi thought. Garima, we are in someone else wedding and this not the time to dig into the past. He turned to leave when Arnav taunted from behind.

What happened? I thought you were going to shed some light on the forgotten things.

Shashi turned around and spoke in fatherly voice, Arnav you are free to ask any question about anything but not here and not now. I dont want any public drama on my daughter's life.

Drama? Does this look like Drama to you? This is nothing compared to what you did 20 years ago in the middle of park infront of hundreds of people.

Arnav you are insulting us! Garima spoke as Shashi stood silent.

No Mrs Gupta. You are mistaken. I never insult my guests. I am just trying to understand why MY WIFE was taken away from me.

Shashi and Garima stood rooted to their spots sensing his paib and they knew this day will come soon and will not be an easy talk to elude Arnav Singh Raizada. Just then Akash called Arnav.

One week time is all you have. I need answers when we return. As Arnav turned to meet Akash, he stopped mid way realizing the need to let them know where Khushi is going to be next one week.

Khushi and I are going to Fiji for a week, tonight soon after wedding. She doesnt know it yet.

That immediately brought smile on their lips which irked him more.

I will let Khushi know that you are here.

Just let us know where she is. We will go meet her. Garima asked with smile.

He nodded and asked one the maids to take them to Payal room.

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Amma, aap yahan? Khushi jumped in joy seeing Garima.

Papa is waiting outside.

Papa is here too? She rushed to meet her dad waiting outside the room.

Papa? She hugged him. I am surprised. What a sweet surprise?

I know your mind must be bombarding with millions of questions. Before they explode, let me clarify your husband invited us for the wedding.

Arnavji ne?

How many husbands do you have? Shashi teased.

Papa? She blushed. He didnt tell me. I am surprised and am very happy that you are going to be part of it.

Its been a while Shashi and Garima had seen her so happy. Her hearty laugh reminded them of innocent giggles of little Khushi. He looked down pretending to check his phone, wiping the tears of his eyes without her knowledge.

Papa? Amma? What happened? Why is Papa sad? Khushi asked worriedly holding her father's hand.

Nothing, I am very hungry. Shaadi hain, Aren't you going to feed us scrumptious dinner. Shashi tried to change the topic.

Aap bhi na? Garima nudged him. Khushi you go, be with Payal. We will be around. We will talk leisurely after wedding.

Amma, come here, I wanna ask you something. Papa excuse us please, ladies matter.

While he stepped away leaving the ladies alone, Khushi asked hesitatingly, Do you think I dressed inappropriately?

Garima said adjusting her hair, Why are you asking me? You are married. You should ask your husband.

Wahi tho. He gifted me this and I am worried if its too much...

Then you shouldn't be worrying if he has no problem. Waise you look like an angel to me, I am not sure about him.

Amma, you too?

Chal, you look fantastic. I have to see your husband's reaction when he sees you. I am going down and taking my best seat. Garima chuckled patting Khushi's cheek.

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Khushi was texting Arnav thanking him for inviting her parents when Payal's mom rushed to Payal room and informed that Pandit ji is calling for Jaimala. She asked Khushi to bring her along.

Cookie, I am nervous yaar.

Jhoot mat bol. Khushi teased. Akash must be sweating river down there. Both girls imagining Akash situation burst into laughter only to receive warning stare from Payal mom.

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Ever since Panditji asked to bring Dulhan for Jaimala, Akash grew impatient waiting for Payal. He kept rubbing his palms nervously at the whole idea of marriage.

He finally spotted Payal coming down when he passed a restless comment "how long more..." to Arnav.

She looked like golden beauty dressed in red pink and orange lehenga, with heavy embellishments and pearl knots along the border. The reflection of its bright colors complimented the soft glow on her new mom face radiating her whole nothing less than a diva. Arnav keeping her choices and her present health in mind, meticulously designed the dupatta heavily so that she could hide her baby belly without being over conscious. Every guest gasped and looked at the bride in awe, some even felt jealous of the exquisite piece she is wearing.


Arnie, kamaal kar diya yaar. She looks like princess. Akash nudged Arnav who is not in his own real world.

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Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago

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