ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

That was an amazing update!!!! Loved it😊

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: IPK..Jenny
was that to my im second post😆

Lucky u lolll par i wnt fight for res nw loll

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IPK..Jenny

@IPK.Jenny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Lucky u lolll par i wnt fight for res nw loll

😆 You wont??

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

ohh is it update time???

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that was simply amazing update...he created every single moment for her again...the best part is the relation that they (each character not only arshi) share is just beautifully penned down...i loved it...cant wait for next part...i know with diwali this week it'll be hard fr u to update but PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ try to update soonish...or i'll die waiting in anticipation😉😆

thanks for update n pm :)

Edited by jahnvi.luvs.ASR - 11 years ago

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dikshita

@dikshitamehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

The update was fab dear
All the scenes were beatufully portrayed
The last scene where Arnav was proposing Khushi for marriage
was really very touching

P.S. sorry for d late comment

Edited by dikshitamehta - 11 years ago

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Part 1 GOD Khushi is going to fire Aman 😆 what will she do when she comes to know why he disturbed them 😉 . So Arnav is still mad at Khushi 😛

Part 2: Feel bad for Shashi and Garima . I want to see what would be Arnav's reaction when he comes to know about the truth

Part 3 : waiting

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indhuza

@indhuza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

1 of all... the update loved the surpise wedding...then awesome words from ma heart to deepthi...then adavance diwaaaliiiw ishes to you all...👍🏼

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@06Pallavi_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Wow!
Zat was Beautiful Di!:)
Lol!at the arnie's sarcastic comments towards akash!:P

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redpetals123

@redpetals123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Awesome ff i loved every bit of it, beautiful concept beautifully written.

Special credit to all the romantic stuff written its just superb it was way sensual still not vulgar.

Superb superb, pls update soon and pm me whn u update.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

unRes

wow.. just wow

beautiful update deepthi⭐️

khushi is taking contraceptive pills😲😲.. lol.. her reason made me rofl😆.. waiting for her to tell the reason to arnav😉

I really loved when you shashi-garima sentiments and change they saw in arshi... well I know what they did is not right but they are parents, and parents feel over-protective when it's come to child and their loved one.. maybe because they are superstitious but what they did, it was just to protect them, as they think!!!

loved arshi take care of each other during ritual and when payal made arnav do the ceremonies.. it made me emotional too...

aww... arnav proposed again.. I was expecting that you know!!! as they were again completing the rituals, knowingly or unknowingly.. it expect this.. but this proposal is out my expectation.. it was so beautiful👏👏

now as arnav made plans for their honeymoon.. they are all set to go.. and am khushi would be very much surprised

cant wait read next chapter

continue soon😃

thanks for the pm

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago