Short FF: Crossroads - Completed - Page 6

Originally posted by: sughra2

arei mai aapkei liye kuch prepare kar rahi hoo...samjha karo naa..w.aisei khafa hokar jaaogei kahaahumsei...hum woh khushboo hai jo saanso mei bas jaatei hai...apni saaso ko rok paaogei kaisei

Awwwieeeeeeeeeee, mere liye........ aye haye...!!! Accha theek... abhi nahin ppoochoongi ok??😊

Meri Lafzo Ki Malikah....a narration that gave me goosebumps.. its so delicately and beautifully penned.. jaaan...

transported me to the exact crossroads.. that he was standing on.. Imagine it with The King...each and every word and emotion is power packed.....

Jaan! yeh tere talent ko hamara salaam....
just beautiful.....I have printed it.. am gonna read it again.... thanks jaan.. sorry for the delay in replyin 🤗

that was a very sweet story!!!!!!!!!!! short but very well written!! totally loved it!

Originally posted by: hansam

Meri Lafzo Ki Malikah....a narration that gave me goosebumps.. its so delicately and beautifully penned.. jaaan...

transported me to the exact crossroads.. that he was standing on.. Imagine it with The King...each and every word and emotion is power packed.....

Jaan! yeh tere talent ko hamara salaam....
just beautiful.....I have printed it.. am gonna read it again.... thanks jaan.. sorry for the delay in replyin 🤗

Awwww, Iffatttt!!!!!! I feeel soooooooooooo 😳 when you call me that... Mallikah thing... its makes me feel all fluttery eyed... Now you pamper with your praise , dont ya.. and I am addicted to them... I love them dearest,,.... I dont deserve them.... and I know I am yet worthy of such high praise... but it nevertheless feels awesome hearing them... from you when you say... mallikah and all... princess eh? BTw, did you know my nickname is that? !!! 😆

The members of this forum have been too kind and woonderful and have pamperred me tooo much with the praise... unworthy though I am, try to do jusitce , I do! 😊

Awww, am sooooooo glad you liked it.... so happy.... I am happy I could pen it exactly the way I picutred it and able to convey it across, the same way!

Touche'... Thank you... *bows humbly!*

Originally posted by: Numera*

that was a very sweet story!!!!!!!!!!! short but very well written!! totally loved it!

Awwww, thank you sooooooooo much Numera!!! So very glad you liked it! Yep keeping it short was intentional as I was dealing with jus one emotion... and am so glad you liked it!!! Thank you for the kind words!! 😊

Tareef...iska matlab kya hai...tareef kuch aisei shabd hotei hai kisii khaas insaan ke liye kahei jaatei hai kuch khaas wajah ke liye kahaa jaata hai...laikin aapki tareef mei mai kya kahuu...aap to apni har ek asdaa se chauka deytii hai hum sab ko...kabhi ek shayar,kabhi ek leykhak,aur kabhi ek video-maker...gurujee aap na har kisii ke muh par taala lagaa deytii ho...cheers to u
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Yeh to hui aapki tareef...aur ab baari hai aapkei FF kii....dii mai kya kahuu..it was mind b lowing...superb...fabulous...haai i could i magine my iqqu seeing that sun set...feeling the loneliness without gauri...and reading that crossroad thingy made me remember ur poem madhyaantar...sachmei gurujee...i could feel as if iqqu is standing infront of me and he was near the window...and seeing the beauty of nature and comapring it with his loneliness...the way he was regretting that he couldnt tell gauri that he loved her and ...and he calling gauri angelic...haaaaaaaaaai...mai sadkei jawaaa......i am going hyper...so ab bas kartii hoo mai bhi...hope u can understand what i feel😳