Short FF: Crossroads - Completed - Page 3

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

waaaoooooowwww, Sareeta, I am just amazed by ur descriptive ability to write amking me feel i'm actually watching it, holy moly, it was superb,

If u don't mind continuing I will feel blessed to have captured the site of this topic. thanx for the warm feeling it gave me, 👏 👏 👏

Bless my soul, such kind words for me!!! Good Lord, I cant believe, you liked it sooo much!!!! Its sooooooooo deeply humbling!!! I am speechless... thank you soooooooo much for liking it .... hope you like the ending too! 😊

Will let you on a secret, this was something I had comtemplated on writing but wasnt sure , the style was acceptable... but nevertheless decided to give it a try.... thought I'd tell a lil story ... my own way!😊

sareeta the story is nice and the way u described his feelings about her is very very nice please do continue 👏

Originally posted by: sum2005

sareeta the story is nice and the way u described his feelings about her is very very nice please do continue 👏

Awwwww, thank you soooooooooo much!!!! So glad you liked it!! I jus finished it....it was meant to be a short one... it was jus a thought and I jus penned it as it came to mind... hope you like the ending too! 😊

Gosh..ye kidher se aa gaye?? i didn't even see it.. U wrote a short story??? Damn!! Damn!! Super Damn!!! I am off to reading it so everyone out there.. 3 words for y'all...


DO NOT DISTURB!! 😆 😆 😆

Be back with commentz.. 😳

Urz Sanny~

😆 will read it in a while 😳
p.s laugh is for sana di's response 😆

Originally posted by: smartc

Gosh..ye kidher se aa gaye?? i didn't even see it.. U wrote a short story??? Damn!! Damn!! Super Damn!!! I am off to reading it so everyone out there.. 3 words for y'all...


DO NOT DISTURB!! 😆 😆 😆

Be back with commentz.. 😳

Urz Sanny~

Sana babes, you are just............. toooo good!!! Do not disturb ka board bhi tangadiya... aayooo meri amma... intha serious hoke bhi nahin padna... aise bore ho rahi thi... aur sunset dekhte dekhte idea aa gaya... tho likh daala.... kuch khaas nahin.....

Aur waise bhi... tumne post miss kaise kiya re?? Hain??? 😆

Originally posted by: yamulya1

😆 will read it in a while 😳
p.s laugh is for sana di's response 😆

Yeah Amu, Sana's resposne got me into a giggleathon!!! *ROFL*.... mujhe nahin pata tha.. ki Sana mera short story itne concentration ke saath padegi yaar...

Dekh abhi tak baahar bhi nahi aayi.... !!!😆

Aur AMu meri jaan... tu bhi padke apni vishesh tippani de dena ok??!!!😆

Originally posted by: sareeta

Bless my soul, such kind words for me!!! Good Lord, I cant believe, you liked it sooo much!!!! Its sooooooooo deeply humbling!!! I am speechless... thank you soooooooo much for liking it .... hope you like the ending too! 😊

Will let you on a secret, this was something I had comtemplated on writing but wasnt sure , the style was acceptable... but nevertheless decided to give it a try.... thought I'd tell a lil story ... my own way!😊

oh dear me, just read the last part, how can u write like this, they finally got together, that was just so adorable, I did like the ending, it was the way i would've like to see in the show, aaaaaaaaahhhhh, sweeet.😳

oh my....'sigh' how do u com up wit such beautiful words?

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

oh dear me, just read the last part, how can u write like this, they finally got together, that was just so adorable, I did like the ending, it was the way i would've like to see in the show, aaaaaaaaahhhhh, sweeet.😳

Aww, thank you sooooooooooo much..... I had a different ending in mind... , a starkly different ending....but then I was asked to make it a happy ending and so I did.... 😉

The original version is put up on my blog....😉