Short FF: Crossroads - Completed - Page 5

sareeta dii

i wont spoil the moment with my stupid words...so i'll just say

it was beautiful

Originally posted by: anika22

sareeta dii

i wont spoil the moment with my stupid words...so i'll just say

it was beautiful

Awww, thank you Anika! But you know, your words are not stupid.. dont ever say that yaar! Cmion... it means a lot to me that ya'll come and pitch in your comments and take the time and are patient to read all my ramblings and actually connect and relate and leave comments behind! It sure means a lot... so keep that criticism coming in hun... am waiting!!!! I know you all are tooooooo kind to say anything negetive abt what I write... you are such sweethearts...😳 but I am aware too , of where I mess the plot... so will try to better next time... ek aur chance mere liye!! ???!!! 😉

OMG!!!!!! diii......wht hav u done.......u left me speeechless.....dammit....where was i ? how did i not read it b4? ....ohhh dii....it simply touched my heart....i cud feel his pain n the restlessness he was goin through........very beautifully woven..........diii agar mai purii raaat tak likhtii rahu........tab bhi khatam nahi hogi.... ur a blessin to this forum dii!!!! 👏 luv u......... 🤗

kya gurujee ...apan ko poori story khallaaas honei ke baaad bataaya ...apan exam likh raha tha to iska matlab ye nahi ki apan ko bataayegi hi nahi...chal tension not...bataaya to sahi...aur apan jald se jald saarei papers print kartii hai...parhtii hai...aur 15 minute mei waapas...wo kya hai naaa...kamrei mei bed pe leyt kar parhnei se masst maajaa milta hai...chal apan time waste nahi kartii...ktunki apan ko association bhi join karnii hai...toh apan chaltii hai par waapas aayegi tarefo ke bahaar ke saath...boley to tension not..!!

Originally posted by: nazrinkhan

OMG!!!!!! diii......wht hav u done.......u left me speeechless.....dammit....where was i ? how did i not read it b4? ....ohhh dii....it simply touched my heart....i cud feel his pain n the restlessness he was goin through........very beautifully woven..........diii agar mai purii raaat tak likhtii rahu........tab bhi khatam nahi hogi.... ur a blessin to this forum dii!!!! 👏 luv u......... 🤗

Awwwwww, Naz, you are such a sweetie pie! Speechless.. aur tu...cmaaawwwn now... speechless bolke , itna kuch bol diya tumne!!!! I dont know how you missed it ... hmmm.... par glad you liked it yaar!!! So happy!!!

Actually I did want to write only abt Shiv Kapoor and I was imagining IQ as Shiv and the expressions on his face and the story flowed....

Awwww... this forum is a blessing to me... if it wasnt for this forum , I would have never realized, I could write NAz... 😊

Originally posted by: sughra2

kya gurujee ...apan ko poori story khallaaas honei ke baaad bataaya ...apan exam likh raha tha to iska matlab ye nahi ki apan ko bataayegi hi nahi...chal tension not...bataaya to sahi...aur apan jald se jald saarei papers print kartii hai...parhtii hai...aur 15 minute mei waapas...wo kya hai naaa...kamrei mei bed pe leyt kar parhnei se masst maajaa milta hai...chal apan time waste nahi kartii...ktunki apan ko association bhi join karnii hai...toh apan chaltii hai par waapas aayegi tarefo ke bahaar ke saath...boley to tension not..!!

Will wait for your comments my dearest vinamr cheli.... jaldi padke aaa!!! 😉

Suggi ki bacchi.... waaapas hi nahin aayi.... dekhloongi tere ko.... 😈

Kuch baatien kehne ko nahin hoti...

Toh kuch sune ko.

Kuch yaadien bhoolne ko nahin hoti...

Toh kuch yaad karne ko.

Kuch log dekhne ko nahin hote...

Toh kuch rishtey chootne ko.

Lekin kabhi kabar, dhoop mein tapti hui reth bhi hawaon ki rehmat par asmaan ko mesoos kar leti hai... Aisi hi hai humaari ye hasrat. Aapke lafzon ke sadke, hum kahin door ek ajnabee, par kareeb duniya mein udh jaate hai. Ek aisi duniya, jisme sunane ko toh bahut kuch hota hai, par usse shayad kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahin hoti... Kyun ki woh dil se sunni jaati hai... Ek aisi duniya, jahan shabdon ke anokhe roop, jeevan ko ek nayi pehchaan, ek naya nazariya milta hai...

Di... for now, that is all I can say. You're words are enchanting... Enough to captivate the senses of one who sees through the eyes of a blind, a lips of a mute... Surreal...

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: sareeta

Suggi ki bacchi.... waaapas hi nahin aayi.... dekhloongi tere ko.... 😈

arei mai aapkei liye kuch prepare kar rahi hoo...samjha karo naa..w.aisei khafa hokar jaaogei kahaahumsei...hum woh khushboo hai jo saanso mei bas jaatei hai...apni saaso ko rok paaogei kaisei

Originally posted by: desi chic

Kuch baatien kehne ko nahin hoti...

Toh kuch sune ko.

Kuch yaadien bhoolne ko nahin hoti...

Toh kuch yaad karne ko.

Kuch log dekhne ko nahin hote...

Toh kuch rishtey chootne ko.

Lekin kabhi kabar, dhoop mein tapti hui reth bhi hawaon ki rehmat par asmaan ko mesoos kar leti hai... Aisi hi hai humaari ye hasrat. Aapke lafzon ke sadke, hum kahin door ek ajnabee, par kareeb duniya mein udh jaate hai. Ek aisi duniya, jisme sunane ko toh bahut kuch hota hai, par usse shayad kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahin hoti... Kyun ki woh dil se sunni jaati hai... Ek aisi duniya, jahan shabdon ke anokhe roop, jeevan ko ek nayi pehchaan, ek naya nazariya milta hai...

Di... for now, that is all I can say. You're words are enchanting... Enough to captivate the senses of one who sees through the eyes of a blind, a lips of a mute... Surreal...

Cheers,

dc

*hand on heart, faints...*

That was soooooooo touching DC... yaar tum bhi na... ..... 😳 Hosh ud gaye mere!