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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE UPDATE..
THNKS 4 pm.. do keep posting.. wating 4 nxt prt 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww it just lovely...
cnt wait fr the next part...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice awsome update beta jii ziyada ushiyaari na maar kritzz ki bachi maine sare fb page par parliya waha jaldi se next update de warna tera tu to janti han mai kaisi ho tera khoon kardugi jaldi se update dede we love ur story n tu itna time lagati han or bhao khati han or waise bhi aj tu mai tere se buhot naraz or gussa ho aj aa bas phir batati ho n this story is awsome not u ab jaldi update do i m waiting n fb par jaldi se update dena ok i can't wait more so plz update fast n come n talk 2 me fb yet ok awsome story n finally i read it n comment ir sorry for late i m really really sorry for the late n short comment but kritz u still rocking update i loved it amazing update soon we are waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update kritzz...
thanks fr pm...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update

Jagat's part was hilarious 😆
Thanks for the pm n plz update soon 😊
Edited by humairaa1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guyz i will continue love birds on IF ... read it enjoy ... luv u muhaaa 😳
Love birds
Episode 6

Manyta j vb jagat uday or chachu ... uday ki car mai bethte hai ...

Uday car start karta hai par car start nhi hoti ...

M - ye khtara car hume ghar tak phochayegi ?

Jagat - oye ye khtara nhi hai !!!

J - acha tho ye start kyu nhi ho rhi

Jagat - kyu ki teri kismat khrab hai !!! fuljhadi !!!

C - beta car aaj ki date mai chale gi

Vb - ha kyu ki hume ghar jaldi phochna hai

Jagat - kyu teri gf tera ghar mai intzar kar rhi hai

Vb - ha meri gf mera ghar mai intzaar kar rhi hai

U - tere jaise ki bhi gf hai !!!

Jagat - koi pagal hi hogi naam btha apni gf ka !!!

Vb - kyu bthau !!!

Jagat - iska mathlab koi manhus ladki hai

J - mind ur language !!! agar vb ki gf hai tho tera kya jata hai

Jagat - mai genral knowledge ke liye puch rha tha par tu ithna jal kyu rhi hai !!!

J - what rubbish !!!! tumahri ithni achi kismat nhi hai mai tumhare liye jalu haa nhi tho !!!

Manyta gusse mai kheti hai

M - mujhe aaj ki date mai ghar phochna hai

U - ha tho kya godhi mai lekar jau !!!

M - ye car bilkul tumhari jaisi khtara hai

Tabhi car start ho jati hai

U - janta hu mai !!! ye meri jaisi hai !!! tu aai hai na aaj tho kuch zyada hi nakhre dikha rhi hai !!!

M - whatever ab ghar chale !!!

U - nhi yhi ruk jate hai ghar jake kya karegi !!!

M - agar tumne hume ghar nhi phochaya tho ...

U - tho ??

M - tho mai car se niche uthar jaungi !

U - abhi bhi car ruki hui hai uthar ja haa nhi tho

M - ha mai uthar rhi hu !! tumhari khtara car se texi better hogi

J - ha di mai bhi apke sath aa rhi hu

Jagat - thik hai jao !!! jagat vijay se kheta hai tujhe utharna hai

Vb - nhi !!!

Jagat - tu un dono ki team main nhi hai

Vb - mere pass sense hai mai un dono ki tarha pagal nhi hu

Jagat - oh sense !!!! hai tujhme mujhe tho ptha hi nhi tha

C - arey tum dono ruk jao !!! ab ye dono hume ghar chod rhe hai na !!! tho inke sath chup chap ghar chalo verna maa mujhe nhi chodegi manyta beta plz meri liye chal lo !!!

M - ok chachu apke liye ithna tho kar hi sakti hu !!!

Manyta - ghar chale

U - chalo

J - chalo !!!

Jagat - are chal bhi le yr

Vb - chalo !!!

U - sab yehi khe rhe hai !!!

Uday car chala rha hota hai vijay bhai window se bhar dekh rhe hote hai jagat j ko tang kar rha hota hai tabhi manyta uday se bolti hai

M - vese tum karte kya ho ?

U - jo normally log karte hai

M - what do u mean ?

U - car chalata hu, khta hu, pita hu, or raat ko so jata hu !!!

M - tum se yahi umeed thi

U - ha tho tu khati nhi hai piti nhi hai soti nhi hai boothni hai kya ? kyu ki insaan tho ye hi kaam karte hai tu anokhi hai kya ?

M - tum kabhi sidhe swal ka siddha jwab kyu nhi dete

U - maan nhi karta !!!

Jagat un dono ko bath karte hue dekh leta hai

Jagat - bhai line par dekh kar chance mar rhe ho

U - jab khud line aakar humse bath kare tho chance marne ki zaroorat kya hai !!!

Manyta uday ko gusse se dekhti hai !!!

Den manyta ke chachu uday or jagat se vese aap dono ka naam kya hai ?

Jagat - iska naam uday hai or mera naam jagat hai

C - dono bhai ho

Jagat - kyu apko bhene lag rhi hai

U - ha uncle hum bhai hai

C - vese mera naam ajay singhaniya hai !!!

Vb - or mera naam vijay hai !!!

Jagat - oye vijay is fuljhadi ka naam kya hai ?

C - fuljhadi ???

Jagat - I mean ye jo vijay ke side mai bethi hai unka naam kya hai

C - acha j ??

Jagat - ye kesa nam hai j ?

Vb - are iska naam hai jaynandani hai !!! hum sab ise pyaar se j bolte hai

Jagat - dire se j se mai tujhe pyaar se fuljhadi bolunga

J - acha tu mujhe fuljhadi bole gat ho mujhe bhi tere liye naam sochna chaiye

Jagat - ha pyaar se kamina bhi bolegi na vo bhi pyaara lage ga

J - kamina tu phele se hi hai !!! tera naam hai ... lallu !!!

Jagat - lallu ?

J - ha mujhe pasand hai mai tho lallu hi bulaungi

Jagat - thik hai par ek shart pe

J - kya ?

Jagat - mujhse dosti karni padegi !!!

J - soch ke bthaungi !!!

Jagat- plz

J - thik hai lallu frnds !!!

Jagat - frnds !!!

Manyta window se bhar dekh rhi hogi !!!

U - is mobati ka koi naam hai ?

Vb - hai na ?

U - kya hai ?

Vb - mombati !!!

U - ha or tera naam bihari !!!

Vb - mai bihari !!!

U - puch rha hai ya btha rha hai ?

Vb ke alawa sab haste hai !!!

M - mera naam manyta hai !!! tubelight

Jagat - bada pyaara naam hai !!! mombati

M - thanx !!! lallu !!!

U - naam tho tera bada pyaara hai !!!

M - janti hu !!!

U - kya janti hai ?

M - ki mera naam bhoth acha hai !!!

M - vese tubeli8 !!! tum har time ithne nakchade hote ho ya aj kuch khass hai

U - nhi aaj kuch khass hai

M - kya khass hai !!!

U - aaj apne type ki ladki milli hai nakchada hona tho banta hai

M - acha !!!

U- ha !!! vese mai chau na tho us ladki se dosti kar sakta hu par
kya vo meri dost banegi ?

M - shayad ban jaye kyu ki us ladki ko bhi na aaj apne type ka koi mila hai !!

U - so frnds ?

M - frnds but ek shart hai !!!

U- kya ?

M - tumhe mere hath ki ek cup chaye pini padegi

U - mai chaye nhi pita

M - nhi pite na!!! ab pio ge

U - zabardasti hai

M - ha !!!

Tabhi manyta ke chachu ruko ruko humara ghar aa gaya ... uday stop the car !!!

Sab car se niche uthar jate hai !!! jagat or uday bhi

Jagat - chal bye fuljhadi

J - bye lallu !!!

Jagat - bye mombati

M - bye lallu !!!

M - bye tublght

U- bye mombati!!!

Tabhi uday or jagat ja rhe hote hai tabhi manyta ke chachu aate hai !!!

Cha chu - are kha chale chalo ghar mai chaye tho pini padegi !!!

U - nhi uncle hum chaye nhi pite
Tabhi manyta kheti hai ye chaye nhi pite par aaj mai chaye pilaungi or tumhe pine padegi uday par mai chaye nhi pita manyat mujhe nhi ptha tumhe chaye pini badegi

J - di is ri8 !!!

J jagat se chal na adar !!!

Jagat - ithne pyaar se khe rhi hai tho andar chalet hai

U - chal phir !!!

Jagat - thik hai hum chaye piyenge !!!

J - ok tho chalo andar !!!
Wo log andar jate hai tho ds ati hai ds aa gaye tum log mai tho darr gayi thi !!!
Manyat na idhar dekhti hai na udar dekhti hai ds ko jake hug karleti hai

Ds - manyta kya hua ?

M - apki bhoth yaad aai !!

Ds mnayta ko 4 head kiss karti hai !!!

Ds - meri pyari bachi !!

Uday manyta ko pyaar se dekh kar smile kar rha hai

Ds uday or jagat ko dekhti hai

Tabhi jagat idea hai bhai bade buzurk ke pair chua tho ye log pat jate hai

U - ha yr suna tho maine bhi hai chal try karte hai

Uday jake ds ke pair chuta hai jagat bhi vesa hi karta hai

Ds - tum log kon ho beta !!!

M - actually humari car khrab ho gayi thi ds tho in logo ne hume lift di

Chachu - bhoth pyare bache hai

J - in dono ko thanku bolne ke liye chaye ke liye kha hai

Ds - uday or jagat se bhoth pyaar se bath karti hai

Ds - thnx beta thanku very much app dono agar nhi hote tho ptha nhi kya hota thanku

U - aap thanku ku bol rhi hai thanku jagha hum dono kuch or lege hum dono ki dadi nhi hai kya hum apko dadi bula sakte hai

Ds - zaroor beta !!!

J - thax dadi !!

Ds - mujhe dadi nhi ds bulao !!!

U n j ek sath ok ds !!!

Ds - tho chalo mai tum logo ke liye chaye bna kar lati hu !!!

M - nhi ds chaye tho mai bnaungi

Ds - nhi beta aap abhi aaye ho !! mai khadus dadi yo ki tharaha nhi hu tu aaram kar mai bna kar lati hu

M - tho mai bhi un ladkiyo ki tarha nhi hu jo dadi ko kaam karaye

Ds - par ...

M - par var kuch nhi chaye mai bnaungi !!!

Ds - par beta humari bath tho suno !!!

M - mujhe kuch nhi suna !!! bas jo mene khe diya so khe diya !!!
chaye mai bnaungi

Ds- ab mai kya karuis ladki ka ok chaye tu bna le !!! khush !!!

Manyta bhoth happy ho jati !!! uday manyta ko dekh kar smile kar rha hai uday thought kitni pyaari hai !!!par mujhe kya ho rha hai !!! uday apne aap se uday tu pagal ho gaya hai !!!! manyta kitchen mai jati hai !!! uday ds se kheta hai ki vo 2 min mai aya !!!! uday kitchen mai jata hai dape mai chini khatam ho gayi thou par se nikkal ne ki koshish karti hai par uska hath nhi phochta !!! uday kitchen mai ja hi rha hota hai tabhi uska call aa jata hai uday pic the call !!!

U - hello !!!

Person - hey !!!

U - who's this ?

Person - aaa...

U - gungi ho kya bol kon rha hai

Person - hey !!! mai mai

U - tumhara naam may hai ?

Person - nhi tho !!!

U - tho bakri ki thrha may may kyu kar rhi ho !!!

Person - mai priya bol rhi hu !!!

U - priya tumhare pass mera n.o kha se aya

P - vo aapke chote bhai jagat ne diya

Uday jagat ko gusse se dekhta hai vo j or vb ke sath bate kar rha hai

U - kamina khi ka !!!

P - sorry !!! apne kuch bola

U - nhi !!!

P - mujhe esa lga apne kuch bola uday !!!

Uday irritate hoke !!! tum apne kaan ka cheak up krao !!!

P - tum mujhse gussa ho uday ?

In other side manyta vo china ka daba stool pe chad kar uthar rhi hai !!! or uday kitchen ke bhar khda hokar bathe kar rha hai manyta ka pair fesal jata hai manyta chilati hai

M - aaa...

manyta close her eyez titly suddenly some strong arms catch her she is really scared she slowly slowly open her eyez she luk that those brown eyez ... that brown eyez luk at her wid full of love she luk at him n he luk at her n they both r in full eyecontact ...
manyta close her eyez he also closed his eyez thier lips just few eanchies away ... but

suddenly

Jagat - oh teri mombati tu thik tho hai ?

J - ha di khi lagi tho nhi !!!

suddenly they both got sepreated now she relised wat she doing she try to kiss uday ...she thought wat the hell wat i m doing !!!

in other side he thought wat the f**k wats wrong with me i try to kiss her ... i think i m going mad !!!

they both r not listening wat jagat n j said they both r in own thoughts ...

Jagat chik kar - BHAI !!!!

Uday : ha !!!

Manyta she feels embarrassed she is not luk at uday she luk at down n uday just luk at her reaction smrick appear on uday face ... !!!

Ds - maine chikne ki awaz suni kya hua kon chialaya !!!

Vb - sara sceen miss kar diya !!! ab aa rhi ho !!!

Ds - mathlab !!!

Jagat - ds vo yha par abhi kissing screen chal rha tha

Ds - kissing ?

U - are ye log pagal hai

Jagat - kyu bhai chupa rhe ho !!!

U - idar aa kaminey speaker du !!!! loud speaker laga ke chilata rhe kaminy

M - ds aap hi chaye bna lo mai rum mai ja rhi hu !!!

U - chal jagat kisi or din chey piyege !!! aaj mude nhi hai

J - are ye kya bath hui di !!! jab apne kha hai inke liye chaye bnaugi tho kya prob hai

Manyta kuch bolne wali hoti hai tabhi uday kheta hai nhi j tera lallu or mai kisi or din ayege !!! bye

J - acaha dosti ki hai apna n.o tho dedo

Jagat - ha mera n.o lele

Vo j ka mob leta hai or apna or uday ka no feed kar deta hai
Jagat jab bhi man kare tho cal kar liyo raat ke 3 baje bhi mai free hu!!!


J - ok

uday luk at manyta n she not luk at him

U - bye mombati ?

M - bye

she is not luking at him n he luk at wid naughty smile ...

Uday or jagat chale jate hai !!!

In night !!!

Manyta thinking kitchen incident !!! car incident !!! airport incident n biggest kissing incident how she try to kiss him
n she is smile !!!

In other side uday remember how she react when he said bye ...

Bg music !!!

Man hai lfanga bda apne manki kare ...
U tho mera hi hai mujhse bhi na dare ...
Vo beege bheege khyalo mai dooba rhe ...
Mai smbhal ja khoo fisalta ... rhe !!!
Ishq mhega pade dil bhi soda kare ...

(manyta pic a cusion n dance n she is smile )

Man hai lfanga bda apne manki kare ye ye ye ...

( uday cusion ko titly pakad kar smile kar rha hai )

Oh jane kyu udasi isko pyari lage ...
Chahe kyu nai si koi bimari lage !!!

( uday or manyta ko nind nhi aa rhi bas vo ek dusre ke khyalo mai khoye hue hai )

Becheni nindo ki rato mai akhe jage ...
Lmha her lmha kyu boj sa bhari lage...
Oh bhwra sa manke machalta hai ...
Bas tere piche piche chalta hai junun sa lovemai ubharta hai
Khud bebak hi uchalta hai !!!
Bighe khyalo mai duba rhe !!!
Mai samal ja khu vo fisalta rhe
Ishq mhenga pade dil bhi soda kare !!!
Manhai lafanga bda apne dil ki kare ye ye ye ye ye ...

( manyta ke rum mai j ati hai tho manyta cusion ko chod kar j ke sath dance karne lagti hai )

Oh ambar ke par ye jane kya tak ta rhe ...
Badal ke gaao mai baki bhtak ta rhe !!!

(uday ke kamre mai jagat ata hai cusion ko ek dusre pe marne lagte hai )

Teri hi khushbu mai ye tho mhekta rhe !!!
Dheemi si ach pe ishq sa pakta rhe ...
Teri hi batho se pighalta hai ...
Cahaye mai chini jaisa ghulta hai ...
Dewana esa kha milta hai ...
Pyaaro mai yaro sab chalta hai ...
Bheege khyalo mai duba rhe mai
Sambhal ja khu vo fislta rhe ishq mhenga pade
Dil bhi soda kare !!!

(manyata cusion ki sari rui nikaal kar use se khelne lagti hai she is very happy !!!)

Manhai lafanga bda apne hi dil ki kare ye ye ye ye...

J - ithni khush kyu hai

M - ptha nhi par aaj acha lag rha hai esa lag rha hai jaise mai hwa mai hu !!!

J - u need secatriest !!!

M - chup rhe yr !!!

Precape :- uday meet manyta !!!!

kritz 😳😳


guyz this is funny story n love story i hope u like it ... plz do like n comment also ...

Kritz 😳😳😳
Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
nice update...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
dear...😛
4 Pming me dear..😛.
ur updates r just .⭐️..
me just .😳...
keep the job up dear..👏..





keep ing dear...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Amazing update
loved it
manyata uday car scene very gud..loved their nok jhok
who is priya??
liked all the characters
uday jagat scene whhile meeting ds..was funny hahah
kitchen scene Awww!!! bichare dono
wrong time jagat..
ManVeer in love...great !
loved their chemistry
update soon n do pm me

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