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kritika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Zina-
This FF is really cute.
I've already read this on your FB page.

KK ZINA ... KAL TAK NEXT CHAPPY UPDATE KAR DUNGI FB PE WHA SE PADH LIYO 😆😆😉😉

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Tanisha Mangla

@star91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

its like awesome fantastic mind blowing lovelu update ... i m wating for ur next epi 👏

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Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow kritz...
they are mind blowing...
i guess u posted few of these on fb right??
well i read all those but never cummented...
well sorry for that...
i love this story...
thanks for pm update soon...
and do pm me...

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: star91
its like awesome fantastic mind blowing lovelu update ... i m wating for ur next epi 👏

thanx tanu ya will pm u ... don't worry about it 😉😉

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Surish

thanx a lot luv u muhaaa 😳😳😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
wow kritz...
they are mind blowing...
i guess u posted few of these on fb right??
well i read all those but never cummented...
well sorry for that...
i love this story...
thanks for pm update soon...
and do pm me...

hwww mahi pada or comment nhi kiya had hai its kk babiee ... ya i will be post on fb thanx a lot mahi if u love this story ur welcome afcouse i will be pm u ... !!! 😆😆😆😉😉

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Love birds...

Episode 5

uday n jagat both go otherside..

manyta ' tubelight khi ka '

j ' gawar dekh tu abhi tho india mai uthare hai or abhi sare ghade mil gaye haa nhi tho ...

vb ' lakin vo tho sirf 2 the !!!

j ' shut up vb !! hume dekhta hai humari bhi akhe hai apko hi bhagwan ne akhe nhi di hai '..

suddenly one voice come ... !!!

MANYTA...

EVERY ONE TURN AROUND'.

m ' chachu !!!

j ' chachu '

vb ' ha chachu !!!

manyta N j they both hug him tightly

m ' chachu kitne pathle ho gaye ho

j ' nhi di mote hue hai '.

Vb ' mujhe tho vese hi lag rhe hai... jaise phele the

M ' apne akhe thik karwao vb haa nhi tho '

J ' nhi mai khe rhi hu na mote hue hai

Vb stair him n ache se gumte hai'
n than he said ..

Vb ' tum dono apni akhe thik karwao !!! ye waise hi hai '

J ' definitely apki akho mai defect hai chalo ghar chalet hai phir doctor ke pass chalege !!!

Vb ' ha us dr se mai khuga ki tera bhi ilaj kar de !!! mai karau na karau but tera tho karauga hi !!! haa nhi tho

J try to said something but chachu stop her n say

Chachu ' kya ye bhes bhadh mai ho sakti hai ki kon dr ke pass jaye ga phele ghar chale ?

M ' ha chalo !!!

J ' thik hai chalo !!!

Vb ' chalo '

In other side uday n jagat go to meet that person who shaut his name...

U ' ha sir tho app hai mr rajiv ?

J ' sir inthzar karte karte tho humari ache taras gayi

person' ji m..m..mai''''''''

U ' ab ye sab chodo jis kam ke liye aaye hai vo kar lete hai

person ' par aap meri bath''''''..

J ' nhi sir phele aap humari bath suniye deal tho apko pakki karni padegi

U ' ji sir karni padegi akhir maine ithni mhenat jo ki hai

person ' ji lakin ''.

J ' lakin kya sir bache ki jan loge

U ' subhe subhe Sunday ke din sirf aapke liye uth kar aaye hai esa kese bacho ka dil tood sakte ho

J ' haa nhi tho !!! sir deal tho apko pakki karni padegi haa nhi tho ''..

U ' ha sir deal pakki karni padegi
person now irritate n shaut (mai ye deal nhi pakki kar sakta) !!!

Jagat or uday ek sth lakin kyu ?

person - Kyu ki mai rajive arora nhi hu !!!

Jagat tu rajive arora nhi hai ?

uday angrily TU RAJIVE ARORA NI HAI ?

person ' mai farsi bol rha hu !!!

J ' tho tu bhai ka naam kyu chila rha tha ?

person ' mai rajive arora ki company mai kaam karta hu !!

uday pick his coller n said

U ' tu rajive arora nhi hai kaminey btha nhi sakta tha tujhe khama kha ithni respeact de di kaminey btha thera boss kha hai

J ' ha kha hai tera boss btha verna ithna pitunga apna naam bhul jaye ga

person ' vo tho aya hi nhi uski jga mai aaya hu une khi important kaam tha isliye unhone mujhe bejha aapko bthane ke liye ki vo india nhi aa rhe hai ab tho mera collar chod do

J ' idar aa tu kaminey !!! vo uday ke hatho se us admi ko coller se pakkad kar kheta hai !!! apne boss se boliyo agar us ne india mai kadam rakh tho vo gaya samjha

U ' or ye bhi khe diyo nhi sghn karani use koi deal jha hai na vhi bsa rhe !!! haa nhi tho

J ' use niche sharfat se rakh deta Hai or !!! use kheta hai bhag ja aa mat jaio

person run away '.

J ' subhe uthna bekar gaya

U ' abhi mera maan kar rha hai us ullu ke pathe ka khoon karke aau

J ' oye tu mr singh ko call kar !!!

U ' kyu kis khushi mai ?

J ' tu kar rha hai ki nhi kar rha ?

U ' tere pass bhi hath hai na tu hi kar le

J ' de apna phone

U ' kis khushi mai?

J ' mere mai 0.159 rs hai

U - bikhari khi ka !!! le mera phone

Jagat mr singh ko call karta hai

Mr singh pick the call

Mr s ' hello

J ' kutte ,kaminey, ullu ke pathe, suar, ghade , balo mai rhene wale ju ''''. Abhi ke abhi office phoch

Mr s ' ye kya batmizi hai kon hai aap ?

U ' tera baap !!!

Mr s ' sir aap !!! ji lakin aaj tho Sunday office ki chute hai

U ' ha kaminey humari ninnde haram karke apne ghar mai beth kar chaye pi rha hoga

J ' abhi ke abhi office phoch !!! verna mai tujhe upar phocha dunga haa nhi tho

Mr singh ' ji sir aabhi ata hu !!!

Call cut '

In other side manyta j vb or chachu car mai beth te hai or chachu jaise hi car start karte hai vo start nhi hoti

Vb ' kitni bar kha hai ek new car le lo par aap tho sunte hi nhi

Chachu ' rhene de tu !!!

Manyta n j they both bizzy to talking each other n in left side uday n jagat were come toward

Jagat ' dekh mombati ki car khrab ho gayi '

Uday didn't see her ...

U ' kha hai ?

Jagat ' are kaminey idhar udhar nhi samne dekh

U ' samne dekhta hai tho manyta khadi hoti hai

Jagat ' chal help kare

U ' chod badi chalak banti hai na !!! khud hi kisi se lift mang legi

Jagat ' tujhe mombati pasand nhi hai !!! tho mere khatir chal le kyu ki mujhe fuljadi pasand hai

Uday think something (kuch tho bath hai is ladki mai )..

Jagat ' kya soch rha hai chale

U ' chal thik hai !!! chal

they both go that side where j n manyta standing '.

jagat manyta ke chachu se ji aap ki car khrab ho gayi

vb ' dekhai nhi deta kya ?

jagat ' nhi deta !!!

chachu ' ha humari car khrab ho gayi

manyta n j they staired both of them

uday manyta ko dekh kar kheta hai !!!

u ' chahe tho aap sab humari car mai chal sakte hai !!
jagat ' ha aap log humari car mai chal sakte hai

m ' koi zaroorat nhi hai !!!

j ' ha hum koi dusri car dudlege

jagat ' vese tumhe yha car kon lift karega ? karega tho uski niyat khrab hogi ?

m ' tho tum log bhi tho hume lift de rhe ho tho iska mathlab tumhari bhi niyat khrab hai

u ' hum ache khandan ke ladke hai !!! lift leni hai tho lo verna bhad mai jao chal jagat yha se

j ' jao yha se hum kisi or se lift mang lenge

jagat ' chal bhai shrafat ka tho zamana hi nhi hai

jagat n uday they both go other suddenly chachu stop both

u ' nhi uncle ji app koi or lift dud lena

jagat ' haa nhi tho

chachu ' ye dono tho pagal hai plz aap hume lift de dijiye

u ' phire thik hai ek shart pe aap humse bade hai tho aap hum dono ko beta bualayege '..

jagat ' ha uncle ji

chachu ' thik hai beta chalo

manyta n j they get angry now

suddenly she felt her phn is buzzing '.

she picked the call

Ds ' kha ho tum log

M ' aa rhe hai dadi !!!

Ds- jaldi aa

M ' ok dadi

Jagat ' kis ka call tha

m - ds ka call tha !!!

Jagat ' ds ???

M ' humari dadi

Jagat - oh !!! tho chale uncle ji

Chachu ' chalo !!!

precape mnaveer nok jhok

kritz... !!😳😳😳😳😳