love birds ... update pg 9

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hey guyz my name is kritika mai IF par first time ever apni story de rhi hu i hope u like my story meri story ka naam hai ...

LOVE BIRDS...


character sketch...


manyta :- manyta ek esi ladki hai jo london mai rheti hai !!! vo bachpan se london mai hi rahi hai !!! but uska sapna hai ki vo ek bar india jaye or apni dadi se mille !!! or vo chahati hai uski shadi india mai ho ...

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uday :- uday bachapan se india mai rha hai he is a cool dude handsome !!!! cute sweet jo bolu kam hai ab samajh hi jao vo apne dad ki company mai kaam karta hai use apne kaam se bhoth lagav hai jitna hi apne bhai or bhen se hai apne family ke liye jita hai jo wo chate hai jaisa chate hai vese karta hai !!!!

karan :- karan is a new entry karan wahi ko sab jante honge karan manyta ka mangetar hai ... n he is love her very much ...


priya she is new entry jenifer ko tho sab jante honge !!! she is uday's mangetar ...


j :- manyta 's best frnd ... zayada kam sis N YES ISME J (POSITIVE ROLE MAI HAI COUZ MAI BHENO KI BONDING NHI THODNA CHATI )


jagat :- uday's small bro... kam best frnd zyada


vijay bhai :- manyta's bro he is funny guy...


unnati :- j n manyta frnd...

tara :- uday's little sis ...


komal :- uday ki bua ...

gr :- uday ke dad

br :- uday ke phupha ji ...

maya :- manyta's mom ...

dadi sahib :- manyta ki dadi...

dr sahab :- manyta ke chachu !!!!

kritz ... ❤️

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I HOPE U LIKE IT ... !!! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi kritika, welcome to dek forum. I hope you'll enjoy a lot here. And the characte skech is awesome. Start the story soon dear. Btw, I'm archi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONCEPT...!!
a girl who was live in london she intelegent cute smart she have a one dream in her life to go india n live wid dadi but her mom alwayz said no ... couz many thing were happen in her mother's life she don't know her mother past she have a boyfrnd her boyfrnd name is karan she never love him she alwayz treat him like best frnd but he loves her alot n he proposed her she accept his proposal couz her mother force her ...
now tommorw she have a big day her eagegement day ...
she seat on her couch n thought some thing...!!
why i get accept this proposal ... !!
i didn't love him in my whole life but i accepted his proposal just for my mother ...say he is rich person ... !!
oh god if u exsist so just tell me wat is right n wat is wrong ...couz i need ur help !!
ya this story its about love ... love alwayz do unexpected things ... love is undifinable felling its like magical ... !!!
this story is funny love story... 2 love birds meet in one place n they fall in love wid each other !!
how? where? when ?
this in not correct question ... !!!
couz love is happen ...

guyz i hope u like it i m not a gud writer n i m not love guru😆 n all plz guyz joote chapal side mai rakhna ... !!!😆😆😆

kritz ...
😆

Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi nd welcome 2 our forum...nd ur character sketch was really nice...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guyz !!!

i m not very good writer actually first time i m write a story n i m very nervous

i hope u like my story !!!

and thanx for aprishet me n i m so glade 2 see urs comment ...🤗

guyz i will defo post soon 👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago
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  • love birds
EPISODE 1



aaj maya singhaniya ke ghar mai bhoth hulchul machi hai !!! mache kyu na akhir maya ki badi beti ki sagai hai '
manyta apne kamre mai hai thodi pareshan hai or apne balo ko bar bar comb kar rhi hai !!!
tabhi maya rum mai enter hoti hai '.

m- manyta mujhe yakin nhi ho rha ki aaj tumhari sagai hai '. Par manyta kuch react nhi karti she is little sad

m- beta r u ok ?? maya manta ke khande par hath rakhti hai !!!
manyta ' thoda dar jati hai !!! or darrr kar bolti h ha ma apne kuch kha

m- beta kha khoi hui ho !!! mai ithni der se tumse bath kar rhi hu jawab kyu nhi de rhi

manyta ' maa sorry wo maine suna nhi ''.😲

M ' koi bath hai jo tum mujhse chupa rhi ho kya hua kyu khush nhi ho aaj tumhari sagai hai beta or tumhe dekhar tho esa lag rha hai jaise kisi ne tumhe goli mar di ho !!!
Manyta ' maa goli tho marr di hai mere sapno ko or aap mujhse puch rhi ho ki mai sad kyu hu !!!😭

M ' of hho ab vo bath lekar shuru mat ho jana
Manyta ' maine aapse kha tha na ki mai shadi india mai karungi tho aap esa kese kar sakte ho !!!

Tabhi door knok hota hai or j ati hai '

J ' hiii manyta wow u looking so beautiful !! in this lhenga '.
Manyat ' thanx yr !!!

M ' aagayi tumhari bhen '''

J ' tho apko mai dekhi nhi de rhi kya ???

M- de tho rhi hai ..

J ' tho phir puch kyu rhi ho !!! vese abhi sham ke 6 pm ho rhe hai
par tere mhu par 12 kyu baj rhe hai shadi nhi karni kya !!!!

M ' chalo tum dono bathe karo or j ise sahi time pe niche le aai o

j - ok

Maya chali jati hai '''''..

J ' kya hua meri jaan mhu pe 12 kyu baje hue hai

manyta- yr puch mat mud off hai

j ' kyu karan se shadi nhi karni

manyta ' nhi yr karni hai agar mna karungi tho use bura nhi lag jayega

j ' mujhe ye btha tu shadi apne liye kar rhi hai !!! yaa uski khushi ke liye tu use pyaar karti hai ya nhi !!! tho shadi kyu kar rhi hai !!! tujhe ptha hai tujhe uske sath puri zindagi guzarni padegiii ''..
manyta ' yr vo mujhse bhoth pyaar karta hai '..

j ' or tu '''' ???

manyta chup ho jati hai😕

j - nhi karti na use pyaar '''..

manyta ' chod na ab sagai ho rhi hai ab sagai nhi thodungi '''
tabhi door knok hota hai vijay bhai andar aate hai !!!!


vb ' bheno agar aapki gossips khatam ho gayi ho tho kya ab niche chale kyu ki dhule ji badi der se iska wait kar rhe hai !!! 😉

m ' ha vijay bhai aap chalo hum aa rhe hai

vb ' ok

or vijay rum se bhar chala jata hai

j ' soch le manyta ek bar or soch le ''' agar tujhe sagai ke badh kisi or se pyaar ho gaya tho !!!

m ' esa kuch nhi hoga or agar mujhe pyaar hoga tho indian boy se or London mai unfortunately indian boyzz bhoth kam hai ''' or vo ye khe kar jane lagti hai

j ' thik hai manyta jaise teri marziii par ha mai ithna janti hu tu jis ladke se shadi kar rhi hai vo tera pyaar nhi hai jab tujhe pyaar hoga tho phir sochiyo ki mene kithni badi galti kar di

m ' chup rhe yr esa kuch nhi hoga !!!

j ' just wait n watch

m ' fine !!! or vo ye khe kar chali jati hai !!!!
...xxx

in next side kapoor khandan mai bhi aaj hulchal hai wha pe bhi ghar ke sabse bade bete ki sagai hai !!! sab khush hai ''''.
Par uday ko is bath se koi farak nhi padta ki uski sagai kise ho rhi hai uday apne laptop pe kaam kar rha hai

suddenly door knok...

uday ' adar aa jao !!!

Jagat ' mera bhai aaj tho teri sagai hai or tu laptop ke sath betha hai tu esa kyu nhi karta ladki ko chod laptop se shadi kar le shervani phene ki bhi zaroorat nhi padegi soch le bahi vese teri sagai aaj hai 1 saal badh nhi kam se kam shervani tho phen le shirt or paint mai sagai karega tu are mai tho ye puch rha hu sagai kyu kar rha hai !!!

U ' yr ruk 2 min ek deal karke shervani phenta hu !!!
Jagat ' sagai aaj hai 1 saal badh nhi abhi phen shadi nhi karni tho bol de '''

U ' time waiste hai ye sab sagai , shadi n all , family ki vjha se kya kya karna padta hai ''''

Jagat ' ha tho kaminy ye btha kisne kha hai sagai karne ke liye tood de sagai ''..

U ' nhi yr nhi tood sakta family ko bura lage ga !!!!

Jagat ' yr tu apne liye shadi kar rha hai ya apni family ke liye

Uday ' apni family ke liye

Jagat ' agar sagai ke badh tujhe koi or pasand aa gayi tho

U ' chal na esa nhi hoga !!!

Jagat ' agar esa ho gaya tho

U - tu chup rhe yr !!!😡

Tabhi door knok hota hai ''

Tara andar aati hai

T ' agar bathe khatam ho gayi ho tho sagai ke liye niche chal loge !!! kyu ki mummy bula rhi hai mhurat nikkla ja rha hai !!! or kya irada hai aapka shirt or pant mai sagai karoge ? ya shervani phenoge ?

U ' ja 5 min mai aya

T ' thik hai jaldi ana

Jagat ' ha ja na

Uday jaldi se shervani phenta hai or niche bhagta hai !!!
In next side manyta bhi niche jati hai '''

Karan use dekh kar smile karta hai manyta use dekh kar fake smile karti hai !!!

Or udhar priya uday ko dekh kar blush karti hai or uday use dekhta hi nhi rha vo apne mai mast hai or mundi niche kar ke khda hai !!!

jagat - are kaminy mundi uppar kar

uday - chodna mud nhi hai !!

jagat - kaminy sab tujhe dekh rhe hai

uday mundi uppar karta hai !!

jagat - good ab smile kar

uday - isme ithni khush hone wali konsi bath hai yha meri sagai ho rhi hai or tu khe rha hai mai smile karu kesa dost hai yr tu !!

jagat - teri bhalai ke liye khe rha hu dekh humara baap hume kese ghur(stair) rha hai jaise kabhi insaan hi nhi dekhe ho !!

uday fake smile karta hai or jagat ki traf dekhta hai !!😃

jagat - good boy !!

Tabhi karan apna hath aage bdata hai !!!

Or manyta uske hatho mai hath rakhti hai

Karan use anguthi (ring) phena deta hai

Sab bhoth khush hai sab clap karte hai

Den manyta apna hath age bdati hai or karan uske hatho mai hath
de deta hai

Or manyta use anguthi (ring) phena deti hai

In next side uday bhi apna hath age badata hai or priya apna hath uday ke hath mai de de ti hai

N vo bhi use angoothi (ring) phena deta hai

Or piya bhi esa hi karti hai

Sab bhoth khush hai uday n priya sab bado ka ashirvad lete hai

In next side karan or manyta bhi sabka ashirvad lete hai

Precape :- karan manyta ko gift deta hai ...

kritz ... !!!

manveer rockzzz ...

guyz thats it... if u like this epi so plz press like button n do comment

love u guyz !!!!

i hope u like it 😊
Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago
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love birds...
EPISODE 2


Manyta or karan sab ka ashirvad lete hai in otherside uday or priya bhi sab ka ashirvad lete hai !!!

Tabhi jagat ek announcement karta hai '.

Jagat' bhaiyo or unki bheno aaj mere bhai ki sagai hai tho sagai bina music or dance ke achi nhi lagati so mai apne bhai ko song
delicate karna chata hu ''.. 😉

Sab log clap karte hai !!!👏

Tara ' bhai gana tho aata hai nhi song khak delicate karoge !!! 😆

Jagat ' ha teri jaisi fatichar awaz nhi hai meri '..😡

U ' ha ptha hai hume ki teri kesi awaz hai

Jagat ' kaminy tu chup rhe vese bhi tu kuch dino ke badh katne wala hai 🤪

U ' saale koi mujhe hath bhi nhi lga sakta 😲

T ' nhi bhai jagat sahi khe rha hai kuch dino badh aap kat jaoge

U ' kyu kon katega mujhe kiski himat jo mujhe kate 😕

Jagat ' kaminy dhula hamesha bakra hota hai shadi ke din tho use katna hi hota hai 😆

T ' jagat is ri8

J ' tu kyu ithni khush ho rhi hai iske badh tera hi number hai samjhi

T ' mera number ??? tho aap kya najayas aulad ho ??? is ghar ke bte nhi ho jo inke badh mera number hai 😕

J ' mai tho shadi karunga nhi !!! 😉

T ' tho kya zindagi bhar kuware rho ge !!!

J ' or kya apni freedom ko esa thodna jane dunga haa nhi tho !!!😛

komal - ha bas hogi tum dono ki ladai or jagat gana gane ka koi plan hai ya phir ladai hi karni hai or vese bhi abhi tara choti hai iska number bhoth badh mai aaye ga tu btha mrs parmindar ki beti pinky ka rishta dhund rhi hai khe tho use bath chalu 😉

J ' vo bhais ??😲

K ' jagat esa nhi khete ithni pyaari bachi hai 😡

J ' vo or bachi !!! kisi bhi angal se nhi agar vo bachi hai tho fir tho mai dud pita bacha hunga haina !!😉

U ' agar tu dud pita bacha hai phir tho mai paida hi nhi hua !!!😛
Sab haste hai !!! 😆

brij - chal jagat ab ga bhi de '. Jagat thik hai gata hu
Jagat gana shuru karta hai

Sare dancers aaj aajata hai '.

Song start...
ek kuwara phir gaya mara
phas gaya deko ye bechara
ek kuwara phir gaya mara
phas gaya dekho ye bechara
do din ki hai ye chadni
phir kaali kaali raat hai
ab manja dhule raja'..

( jagat uday ko tang kar rha hota hai uday use bar bar avoid kar rha hota hai )

Ek side rani ek side raja
kal teri teri shaadi tera baj gaya baja'.
Ek side rani ek side raja
kal teri shadi tera baj gaya baja'.
Ek kuwara phir gaya mara phas gaya
Dekhooo ye BECHARA '..

( tara n jagat dono floor par dance kar rhe hai priya uday ko dekh kar has rhi hai or uday irritate ho rha hai😡 or uday ko dekh kar sab has rhe hai 😆 or phir jagat aakar uday ko floor pe le jata hai or floor par sari ladkiya uday ko gher leti hai jagat use tease karta hai 😈 )

Akhiyo ke pinjre mai band kar ke
lagayi jo tujhe ko pasand kar ke
sodi sodi mithi bathe chand karke
kismet apni buland kar ke '.
Akhiyo ke pinjare mai band karke
legayi jo tujh ko pasand kar ke
sodi sodi mithi bathe chand kar ke
kismet apni buland kar ke ''.
Sach kya hai zara jaan le
is chere ko phechan le'
unki galiyan main a ja '
ek side rani ek side raja
kal teri shadi tera baj gaya baja '.
Ek side raani ek side raja
kal teri shadi tera baj gaya baja'
EK KUWARA PHIR GAYA MARA ''.

( jagat ne uday ke khande par hath rakha hua hai vo use guse se jhatak kar apne kamre mai jane lagta hai 😡 than samne tara aa jati hai or uske kamre ka gate band kar deti hai tabhi jagat ata hai uday ko turn karta hai )

Aaj haslet tho kal rona padega
Sukh chain tujhe sab khona padega
jab vo khe gi jag jaye ga
jab vo khegi tujhe sona padega
aaj hasle tho kal rona padega
sukh chain tujhe sab khona padega
jab vo khegi jag jaye ga tu
jab vo khegi tujhe sona padega

( jagat priya ko dhakka deta hai uday ki taraf par uday cathch nhi kar pata or vo grijraj pe gir jati hai 😆 )

Karni hogi gulamiya '
Deni hogi sallamiya '
Aa lot ke bandhu aaja''
ek side rani ekside raaja kal teri shadi tera baj gaya baja (4) times repeat
ek kuwara phir gaya mara
phas gaya dekho ye bechara
do din ki hai ye chadni phir kaali kaali raat hai ab man ja dhule raja
ek side rani ek side raja kal teri shadi tera baj gaya baja

sab log clap karte hai ..👏

in other side manyta mhu latka ke khadi hui hai 😔 par vo sab ko fake smile de rhi hai karan ko feel hota hai vo khush nhi hai vo manyta k chiks ko upar karta hai or pyaar se kheta hai kya tumhe ye shadi nhi karni 😳 ?

m ' esi bath nhi hai mai khush hu !!! agar khush nhi hoti tho smile nhi karti or agar shadi nhi karni hothi tho sagai nhi karti haa nhi tho !!!

kARAN ' tumhare chere se tho esa lag rha hai ki mai tumse shadi nhi kar rha jaise maine tumhare sath zabardasti ki ho or tumhe goli mar di ho

m ' sab ek hi dieloge kyu bolte ho

karan ' kya mathlab ??😕

m ' nhi kuch nhi !!!🤪

j ' karan actually manyta isliye udas hai kyu ki use india mai shadi karni thi par mom ne uske sapno ko goli mar di 😊

karan ' ok !!! tho phir iska ilaj dudna padega !!!

j ' ilaj iska kya ilaj hai iska ilaj kuch nhi hai 😕

karan ' hai !!

karan apne pocket se envelope nikal kar manyta ko deta hai

m ' ye kya hai ?😕

karan ' padh nhi sakti

m ' tum btha nhi sakte 😡

karan ' jab khud padogi tho samajh jao gi

manyata us envelope ko kholti hai tho usme flight ki ticket hoti hai

karan ' tho kya dekha tumhe

m ' tum ye flight ki ticket kyu laye ho

karan ' tumhe india jana tha na !!!

m ' ha 😕

karan ' agar tumhara sapna hai ki tumhari shadi india mai ho tho hum apni hone wali wife ka sapna kese tood sakte hai humari shadi india mai hogi lakin mujhe yha kuch kam hai 2 months ke badh hi india aa paunga ok !!

or phir ek acha sa mhurat dekh kar hum dono shadi kar lenge

m ' thanx karan 🤗

karan ' love u manyta

vijay ' ye akeli india jaye gi ?😕

j ' nhi mai bhi jaungi !!!😡

maya said to karan

maya- beta mujhe pura yakin hai ki tum manyta ko khush rakhoge 😭

v ' maa phele ye decide karo ki ye akele india jaye gi ya mai iske sath jaunga

j ' maa mai india jaungi mujhe nhi ptha

manyta ' thik hai j tu mere sath india chalegi khush or vijay bhai aap bhi khush !!!😊

j ye hui na bath haa nhi tho 😉

precape :- manyta meet uday...
❤️kritz... ❤️
Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago
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nice start dear...
manveer got engaged at same dates good concept how will they fall in love...
Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i will update bhen !! dekh le !!!

kritz ...
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love birds...
episode 3

Sab raat mai sone jate hai uday apne kamre mai sad betha hota hai tabhi jagat door knok karta hai

J ' bhai aaj bhoth maza aaya na !!!😃

U ' ha tujhe maza aaya na tho ja tu hi shadi kar le !!!😡

J ' mai ne tho aap se kha tha ki us ladki se shadi mat karo laptop se shadi kar lo par tu hi nhi man rha tha !!!😉

U ' ha kaminy bda maza aa rha hai na mujhe tho us ladki se shadi karne mai !!! 😡

J ' maza nhi aa rha tho kaminey shadi kyu kar rha hai konsa vo tujhse pyaar karti hai abhi bhi waqt hai ja use shadi ke liye mna kar de !! 😡

U ' nhi kar sakta 😭

J ' ha tho kaminy kar le shadi 😡

U ' kesa dost hai yr tu advise bhi kya ghatiya deta hai😭

J ' ha tere jaise logo ke liye esi advise deni chaiye !!!😡

U ' chup rhe yr !!! yr chal tu advise nhi de sakta tho koi nhi chod mujhe tujhse ek kaam karvana hai 😈

Uday jagat ko upar se niche dekhta hai jagat dr kar apne shirt ka first botton band kar leta hai 🤪

J ' esa kya kaam karene wala hai ?😕

U ' oye kaminy teri tharha nhi hu mai !!!😲

J ' mathlab kya hai tera !!!😕

u - mathlab mai vesa admi nhi hu !!

j - kesa admi nhi hai tu ? 😕

U ' mathlab ki mai gay nhi hu teri tarha!! 😆

J ' ha nazare tumhari gay wali hi hai 😉
Tabhi ek call ata hai !!! uday phone uthata hai

U ' hello

Adami ' hello sir mai mr singh bol rha hu

U ' ha mr singh boliye apne mere mobile pe
phone kyu nhi kiya ?

Mr s ' sir apke mobile par phone nhi lag rha tha

U ' tho aapko kuch kaam tha ?

Piche se jagat bolta hai

j- kaam nhi hota tho phone kyu karta kya ghatiya sawal hai ? 🤣

uday sofe se ek pillow utha kar jagat ke mhu par marta hai !!!

mr s ' sir I know ki aaj apki sagai hai par ye kaam zaroori hai !!

u ' ha boliye mr singh ?

mr s ' sir text company ke malik Rajeev arora aa rhe hai unhone kha hai ki aap unhe pic up karne jaye vo app se milna chate hai or deal final karna chate hai ' or sir ek or zaroori bath hai apki deal jo malthotra text company se hui thi vo deal ho gayi hai!!!!

uday ye bath sunkar bhoth khush ho jata hai 😃

u ' really !!!

mr s- yes sir 😊

u ' sach mai

mr s- yes sir

u ' aap sach khe rhe hai na ?

j ' ha kaminey 10 bar poochne se words change nhi ho jayege !!! 😆

u ' yr tu 2 min shat rhe !!!😡

u ' thik hai mr s mai kal airport chala jaunga

j ' esi kesi deal thi jo tu ithna khusha hai ?

u ' bhoth naam hai malhothra ka usne sab deal reject kar di or meri deal sing ki

j ' haa vo bhagwan nhi hai 😛

u ' chup rhe yr tu !!!😡
in other side manyta room

manyta apne rum mai hai or vo bhoth khusha hai '
m ' mai ds ko call karke ye khush khabri deti hu ki india aa rhi hu ya india jake unhe surprise du
nhi mai abhi unhe phone kar rhi hu'..😃

vo ds ko call karti hai ds pick the call

ds- hello!! ji kon bol rha hai ?

manyta 'mai police station se bol rhi hu 😉

ds ' police station se???😕

manyta ' apka naam mirnanli devi hai na ???😉

ds ' ji ji ha mera naam hi mirnanli devi hai kyu kya hua ?😕

manyta ' mirlali devi ji aap par kisi ne case kiya hai i mean arop lagaya hai 😆

ds ' mujh par case kiya hai maine kisi ka kya bigada hai ? 😕 mai tho kisi ko tang nhi karti infect sab ki madad karti hu !!!

manyata tooda dhire dhire has rhi hai 😆

manyta - issi pe tho case kiya hai !!! 😉

ds ' kya ? akhir bthaiye tho sahi mera jurm kya hai ? 😕

manyta aapka ye y jurum hai ki aap apni poti se bath nhi karti or is bath se apki poti bhoth naraz hai or usne hi aap par case fine kiya hai !!!😉

now ds know that who is on the phn !!!

ds ' acha tho meri poti ne case fine kiya hai vese jab kuch log khud bath nhi karte tho hum unhe ignore marna pasand karte hai 😉

manyta ' aacha ji tho abhi bhi kyu bath kar rhe ho ? kisne kha hai bath karne ke liye ? 😊

ds ' phone tho apne milaya hai tho ab app hi bthaiye apne kyu phone milaya hai ?

manyta ' ds had hoti hai ab app chati ho ki mai apko phone bhi na milau ? 😡

ds ' haa aa gayi line pe ? vese mai mazak kar rhi thi !!

m - janti hu 😊

ds ' vese aaj meri yaad kese aa gayi !!!

manyta- aapko yaad karne ke liye koi vjha thodna chaiye hoti hai vese aaj phone karne ki ek vjha hai mai aapko esi bath bthane vali hu jise sunkar app bhoth khush ho jao ge

ds ' esi kya bath hai hum bhi tho sune kahi koi dhud tho nhi liya ?

manyta thought ( dadi ko karan ke bare mai bthau nhi maa ne kha tha ki wo dadi ko india akar bthayegi chodo )

ds - are bath tho btha ? 😕

manyta - dadi esi bath nhi hai ye london hai yha indian boyz nhi milte n u know na shadi tho mai
kisi indian boy se karungi 😉

ds - acha agar bath nhi hai tho kya bath hai ? 😕

manyta ' dadi mai india aa rhi hu !! 😃

ds kya ??? sach mai mazak tho nhi kar rhi na ?

manyta ' nhi Mazak kar rhi hu are baba sach mai india aa rhi hu mai 😃

ds - par teri maa ne yha ane ke liye ha kar diya ?
manyta - ha !!!

ds - tu janti hai vikram ke jane ke badh maya ko yha kithni ghutan hoti thi or bawjud vo man gayi ?😲

manyta - janti hu mai maa bhoth tut gayi thi !!!😔
ds - hmmm !!!

manyta - par ab vo bilkul thik hai or ds aap mujhe rulaya math karo haa nhi tho !!!

ds - mai rulati hu ithne saalo se tu mujhse nhi milli mujhe rona chaiye vo tho bhla ho is phone
jaisi cheez ka tu mujhse bath kar leti hai !!!

manyta - ha ji usi ka bhla hai !!!

ds- jaldi aa ja tujhe dekhe hue arsa bit gaya

manyta ' ha dadi or ha j or vijay ko bhi sath la rhi hu

ds- acha ji unko bhi le aa jaldi aao tum sab tum logo ke bina ghar suna suna lagta hai

manyta ' hum sab aa rhe hai 😃

ds- ok 😊

call cut

tabhi piche se awaz ati hai maa kis ka call tha ds turn karti hai

ds- tu aa gaya manyta ka call tha


ds ' vo india aa rhi hai kal !!!

chachu' kon india aa rha hai ?

ds' manyta j or vb

chachu- sach ma mai use lene chala jaunga

ds ' thik hai or ha sath mai vijay or j bhi aa rhe hai

chachu- maaa ab is ghar mai fir se khushiya aa jaye gi bhaiya ke jane ke badh bhabhi tho yha rhe hi nhi pai thi par ab ...

ds- ha beta ab fir se is ghar mai khushiya aa jaye gi '

chachu ' vese maa vo abhi nhi aa rhe kal ayega abhi tho so jao raat kafi ho chuki hai

ds ' ha beta chal gud night 😊

chachu- gud night

In next morning''.

Uady apne bad par hai or cusion ko pakad kar ek babby ki tarha so rha hai '

Tabhi jagat enter his room or vo bhi nind mai hai'

j- bhai uth yr subha ho gayi 🥱

uday- ja na sone de !!!🥱

j ' thik hai vo uday ke side mai jakr let jata hai or uday ki chadar apne upar le leta hai

u ' yr mujhe tad kyu lag rhi hai 😕 🥱
tho uday uth kar dekh ta hai jagat ne uski sari chadar le li hai tho vo gusse mai akar use bad se niche gira deta hai 😆

j- oye tune hi tho kha tha so ja 😡

u ' kaminey maine kha tha mujhe sone de 😡

j- nhi tunhe kha tha so ja 😡

u ' kan ki mashin lagwale kaminy haa nhi tho vese tu mujhe utha kyu rha tha 😡 🥱 😕

j ' tune hi kha tha tune kisi ko lene jana hai 🥱
uday ek dam se time dekh ta hai

u ' shit man 9 baj gaye kaminey utha nhi sakta tha 😡

j ' tune hi tho kha tha sone de 😡🥱

u ' tune tho kha tha maine kha tha ki so ja ?? 😡😕

j ' irritate hokar ja na tera boss tera intzaar kar rha
hoga uska sir kha subhe subhe mai hi mila hu kya ? 😡

u ' ab tujhe bhi mere sath chalna padega 😡

j ' mai nhi ja rha haa nhi tho !! 😡🥱

uday use pitna shuru kar deta hai !!!😡

j ' thik hai bhai chal

u ' ha kaminey chal 😡

precape :- uday meet manyta '..

❤️ kritz ❤️
Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago

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