virman os: Emptiness

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

I will unres it on page one
check it haan sisi😉 😆

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

wow awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart and thanks for the pm dear😊😊

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@anu0555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

awsome duperbbb...fab..

lovley..

plz update soon n thnks for pm

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Trings Shring (Mishi rehman)

@Liarzstayaway

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

mumaa😲
when i start reading i was like awww inna cute os starting was dam cute
i love that choti mannu eeekkksss u explained her character so beautifully
deda n deda ki princess i personally love this bond alott cz me n my deda is also like this
me badi hu but my deda always treats me like im choti bachi😆nyways mum deda n princess ka relation apne bhut hi beautifully likha*clap*clap👏
afta sweet n cute relation what i read my gosh mum😲manvi mar gai😭it was dam emotional os mum i swear😭
n uper se song bhi rone wala i loved manvi n virats convo in hosp
mum ap situation kitni beautifully describe krte ho mum hats off to u👏
mumaa i was seriously crying during reading this os😭
but i really loved each n every bit of this story❤️
loved it to the core
n i love u mumaa🤗apne meko sachi mein rula dia
my mumaa rocks👏

p.s mumaa thanku for imagining me during writing choti manvi part😃

love
mishi(mumaa ki guddu)😳

Edited by ashishi - 11 years ago

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Strikhedonia

@Strikhedonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Hello di!😛

I'm back with my comments!😆

This os is superb di... it was mind-blowing...👏

Virat's emotions and Manvi's emotions were expressed really well...😛

I personally loved the concept...because i'm a person who want live in the present... I'm a person who don't want to spoil my present life worrying for the future which is not permanent!😆

Coming to the os, I had tears rolling down my cheeks while reading it! It was really emotional di!😭😭😭

Good job! Kudos for it!👍🏼

Take care!😛

Love you!🤗

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awsm os dear... a very emotional one, loved how u described virats guilt... his pain... loneliness... emptiness. You made me cry... Manvis death scene was the most heart-wrenching one... thnks fr th pm..

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Shivi !! 🤗
This was sooo awesomeee n heart touching !!!❤️
Amazing os !!! Dil choo liyaaa !!!! ❤️ really reallyyy superb !!! No thanks for the pm 😆 ❤️

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itsfate

@itsfate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

awesome os

very well written

loved it

very emotional

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nahaananya

@nahaananya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

diii am bak
dis was super cute and emotional
i loved the father daughter duo
awww mannu is sooo cute
and virat finally realised stuffs
virat's emotions wer well portrayed
good work
love ya take care
ananya ..aka... anne