Kriyaansh-Destiny //Happy birthday Sept babies :P//

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Well my september babies you know I suck at speaking and wishing!!

So belated happy birthday again to one and Happy birth day to one baby!! :P


hope you atleast like this stupid try of mine!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This may be filmy my lovelies!! But I wanna take off with the thing I am pro in!! emotional!! atleast I imagine I am somewhere near pro!!







Juda Hoke Bhi Tu Mujhmein Kahi Baaki Hai
Palkon Mein Banke Aansu Tu Chali Aati Hai
Juda Hoke Bhi




"Ahhhmmm" he sighed once. He clutched the cup more tight as window once again banged and went banged due to the air. He kept looking out as the raindrops sprinkled on him. He suconsiously sipped his tea. After few minutes he came to senses and saw the cup in his hand. He took a sip. It tasted horrible. No sugar. Large amount of tea powder. He just shrinked more into his shell.

" hmmm "he breathed in as the strong elaichi flavour hitted his nostrils. He closed his eyes taking the fragrance. Could anything be more awesome than the smell of elaichi chai? he inhaled deeply the fragrance of his favourite chai. But soon as to prove him wrong the cup was placed on the window bar and two hands wrapped around his neck from back and those jasmine frangrance from the hair hitting his face right now filled his nostrils. His ears alerted to not miss even a single breathe of hers and her laughter. He loved her fragrance more than that of that chai!! He simply pulled her in his lap. Her ever smiling face!! She is beautiful!! Very beautiful!! The way she looked at him with all love.

He smiled !! But soon his smile vanished.

" I trusted you soo much Rey!! " she cried shouting.

Tears welled up in his eyes!! His one mistake and everything was gone!! She was gone!! He is alone ...all alone. He looked at the cup and banged it at the wall in front wishing he could hurt himself but was more irritated as he knew he is a coward. He is a coward to hurt himself.

He walked to the bed and pulled his laptop to work and divert his mind. As he opened the laptop he found her blushing face. It was taken by him soon after they had their first kiss!! She is too shy to stand beside him!! How much he loved her. They why did he do that.


Waise Zinda Hu Zindagi Bin Tere Main
Dard Hi Dard Baaki Raha Hai Seene Mein
Saans Lena Bhar Hi Yaha Jeena Nahi Hain
Ab Toh Aadat Si Hai Mujhko Aaise Jeene Mein
Juda Hoke Bhi Tu Mujhmein Kahi Baaki Hai
Palkon Mein Banke Aansu Tu Chali Aati Hai

He shut the laptop and walked down to make himself a coffee!! He placed the milk on the burner and again got lost . He held the cup close to the stove and was about to pour the milk and in a subconsious mind he held the hot handle and resulted in spilling the hot milk over his hand. He winced in pain and immediately placed his hand under the tap. He wished just as the tap water cooled his hand his heart would be cooled too!!

"Rey chodo mujhe " she said with a stern voice as he wrapped his hands around her waist from back.

"kabhi nahi " he said nuzzling more into her hair and inhaled deeply!!

" u smell yummy !! " he said in a heavy voice. Her fragrance is enough to turn him on...

"rey !! "she again said stricktly and he like a good kid stopped those wet kisses on her nape and rested his chin on her shoulder.

She smootly made two cups of coffee and placed them on the kitched bar.

"coffee ready!! " she said smiling when he turned her to him in a swift moment and pressed himself into her taking her into a sweet kiss.

He came back to senses as the water stopped. He laughed at his fate. Even water doesn't want to accompany him.

" Stop pretending Rey!! You just don't care about me!! " she cried hard sliding down the wall.

Saath Mere Hain Tu Har Pal Shab Ke Andhere Mein
Paas Mere Hain Tu Hardam Ujale Savere Mein
Dil Se Dhadkan Bhula Dena Aasan Nahi Hai
Ab Toh Aadat Si Hai Mujhko Aaise Jeene Mein
Juda Hoke Bhi Tu Mujhmein Kahi Baaki Hai
Palkon Mein Banke Aansu Tu Chali Aati Hai

As he walked into the living room he saw that messy room !! How much she hated this. He never kept it clean .

" Rey ye kya karte ho aap bhi!! maine abhi abhi theek kiya!! jo cheez nikala wapas usi jagah pe nahi rakh sakte?? "she said irritated.

"nahi!! " he threw another pillow behind and it her right on her face.

"Rey!!!!! You!!!!!!"she ran back of him when both ran around her chasing him and after a 45 mins of chase he pulled her on the couch alng with him and she layed on him as he wrapped his hands around her. Thats when she looked around to find the whole house a mess. She glared at him when he simply leaned forward and took her lower lip into his !!

"Kabhi inta hi mere baare mei socha hota toh you would have agreed to this small thing Rey!! I love you soo much to loose you!! why don't you understand this?? well I have decided... Mujhe ab tum nahi chahiye "she said with a stern face and walked into the room shutting in before he could realise and digest what she said.

" You wanted everything to be perfect kriya!! But mai perfect nahi hun!! agar hota toh you would be with me !! in my arms... taking care of me...loving me!! I am a failure!! I tried but I couldn't fulfil the single wish you asked. I don't deserve you kriya " he said slipping onto his knees.


" Rey!!!" she ran to him as soon as she opened the door . Like always he is drunk!! To extremes.She got a hold on him before he collapsed.

As she led him in the house she pushed him and tears made their way out. She always is scared reagrding his excessive drinking, And more over to the fact that his body couldn't just accept alcohol.

"Rey!! u promised me u will never drink " she asked broken.

"Kriya !! baby sorry!! bas last time! ab nahi piyunga... plomish "he tried to get up but collapsed beside the couch again.

" how many last times Rey?? you have been saying the same for last three times. Can't you understand you can't handle it !! its harmful for your health?" she said walking to him.

"kriya whats the big deal itna kyun bada rahi ho baat ko? "he said in his slurred tone again trying to stand up.

"You promised me Rey!! I trusted you!! But today you broke my trust. Mujhse jyaada important hogayi aapkeliye ye drinking?? you left me all broke Rey!! "she said crying hard.

"baby please dont cry!! "he somehow managed to stand.

" Stop pretending Rey!! You just don't care about me!! " she cried hard sliding down the wall.

"nahi baby sachi!! Please don't cry I can't...can't se u crying"he said taking steps towards her balancing himself.

"Kabhi inta hi mere baare mei socha hota toh you would have agreed to this small thing Rey!! I love you soo much to loose you!! why don't you understand this?? well I have decided... Mujhe ab tum nahi chahiye "she said with a stern face and walked into the room shutting in before he could realise and digest what she said.

And even after his thousands of pleads she rushed out of the house.

" I love you soo much Rey!! and being away from you will the punishment I give myself for not able to change you!! and ab aapko pretend karne ki zaroorat nahi hai ki uss 1 bottle nahi mai aapki importance hun. " she said and rushed out crying.

Ab Toh Aadat Si Hai Mujhko Aaise Jeene Mein
Yeh Jo Yaadein Hai... (2)
Sabhi Kaatein Hai... (2)
Katado Inhe... (2)



He sat on the couch leaning back as tears made out. He knew alcohol takes a bad take on him. but still he kept drinking even after promising her that he loves her so much and can even stop drinking for her and will stop from that day!! But he just could't resist and broke her heart. He knew she is so sensitive when it comes to him.

"I miss you baby!! I know I am a jerk ...kaha ho??? I will die if I won't speak to you now!! "he cried hard thinking its been 2 months she is gone and he searched the whole city and all places he could but she is no where.

"i feel terible Kriya please wapas aajao "he said and slid into the couch drifting into a sleep.

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"hmmm!! " he sighed and hugged her by waist tight. As realisation struck himhe sprang up snap opening his eyes. There she sat in flesh in front of him!! He just hugged her and kissed her as hard as he can conveying the pain his heart gives when she is not with him.

"kaha chaligayi thi ?? I was scared " he broke down!! He looked soo terrible to her.

" aapse dur rehna chahti thi!! par do mahine se jyaada aapko dekhe bina nahi rehpaayi "she said looking down.

"I am sorry!!! really sorry "he canted for a long time hugging her tight.

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Ab Toh Aadat Si Hai Mujhko

"Rey!! mujhe ye gaana hamesha adhoora lagta hai pata hai " she spoke playing with hims fingers as his other hand held her waist possesively under the sheets.

"mai complete karun tumhareliye?? "he asked making her naked body stick to his similar ones.

"hmm! "she played with the hair on his forehead.

"tere saath rehne ka!!

Tujhe apne paas mehsoos karneka

Tumhari pyaar paani ka

Tera banke rehne ka !! " he spoke lovingly when she smiled wide and hugged him tight..



I know bakwaas hai!! next OS will be up soon! It will be a contrast one .. so you can be happy!!

Do review babies :*
Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 12 years ago
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She ran till her legs pained. She felt a need to stop and take rest. Her huge and heavy dress is not helping her either. the highly worked lehanga is too heavy for a person to even walk and she is here running in that heavy lehanga and adding to that her heavy jewellery. She wondered why are these the only gang behind her. Seeing the jewellery on her , who ever sees should be back of her. But she thanked her God for that. She couldn't run anymore. Her breathe missed. She felt almost blank. She looked here and there and found a small path between two buildings. She thought that would be a help . As she entered that she was lucky to have a small wall attached to the building. She wondered for what it was but for now its the most safest place she could get. So she rushed in there . The space was illuminated by the street light but for her luck the shadow of the wall gave her a bit of dark sapce in the corner to hide.


She saw the gang following enter the path and looking for her. She stuck to the wall praying they won't see her and somehow her prayers were heard. But as they vanished she felt a very strong thing hit her back.Both jumped and turned around to see who it was. and in the process kriya screamed a bit but the man in front of her pressed his palm over hers.


"please don't shout they will catch me . "he whispered. Her eyes went wide. Sudden excitement filled in her .


"tumhare peeche bhi gunde pade hai ? " she asked excited . He made a are you serious face!!


"isme khush hone wali kya baat hai?? "he groaned. Where has God brought him ??


"arey mere peeche bhi pade pata hai?? mere gunde chale gaye . nai milungi mai. Briyani khake mast se soyenge , arey nahi nahi "


"will you please SHUT UP?? " he raised his voice a bit.


" suna tumne? " he heard a voice.


"shit!! wo log pakdenge toh bas gaya mai !! "he glared at her . But the thing which she did next shocked him. She held his collar and pulled him close.


"woah !! kya kar rahi ho?? " he asked shocked.


" jyaada khush mat ho!! ab ek doosre ke saath dena padega ! see there my gang is also here.

"f**k!! " he whispered high.


"I hate slangs "she narrowed her eyes.

"whatever "he said and moved a bit front but she placed her arms on his chest and glared at him warning him not to take advantage . But as she saw her and his men nearing she pulled him to her making him bang into her . He placed his arms on the wall behind and looked back. He saw both the gang's talk and coming together.

"ab donon mei se koi bhi dikha toh donon ko problem" he said as she feared more seeing the two gangs combine and come towards them.


"trust me for one "he said looking into her eyes once. She is so much feared to object. She felt him press himself more into her flattening anf crushing her between the wall and him making them both dissapear in the tiny shadowed space.


After what felt like eternity the men left and Rey pulled back immediately.

"I am sorry koi aur option nahi tha to save us both. "he said with a sorry look.


"arey koi baat nahi!! well its really strange of me to trust a stranger but aajki raat keliye mere saath reh sakte ho??"she asked nervous.He looked at her wide eyes.


"what?? wait... you!! I didn't mean that way "she flared up.

He laughed hard at her reaction.


"Yes Madame "he bowed. " Being the sincere Indian I am I will protect you for this night. "he said dramatically.


" Indian men never does that "she said making a face.


"Hey not all men are alike. "he was offended.


"sorry !! just this topic irritates me a lot ki kuch bhi boldeti hun " she said and walked as he accompained her.


"hmm!! I understand. But I can assure you that you can trust me. Waise who is the guy?? "he asked sliding his hands into his pockets.


" who guy?? "she asked clueless.


"wahi jiskeliye bhaag ke aayi ho ! "he said looking at the beautiful bride in front of him.


"maine suna dil wale dunhaniya le jayenge !! yaha toh dulhan khud apne pyaar ko bhagane wali hai lagta hai . "he chuckled as she glared.


"Oh please!! waise mera koi boyfriend nahi hai "


"toh line clear hai "he popped in middle. She gave a smack,.


"stop flirting!! Mujhe shaadi pasand nahi that toh bhaag ke aagayi !! "she said and he stopped and looked at her shocked.

"kya hua?? "she was confused again. He nodded a no silently and started walking again.

"wo log jo mere peeche pade hai.. mai unhe jaanti hun!! humare hi workers hai ! *she winked* aur mera bhai bhi tha unme !! " she giggled.


"you are insane!! " he exclaimed.


"what?? why so?? " she asked stopping.


"shaadi pasand nahi isiliye bhaag ke aagayi aur wo bhi itni raat ko!! ek ladki hoke. "he said .


"what?? ek adki hoke?? kyun sirf tum ladke bhaag sakte ho raat ko "she started her how dare you think a girl is weak topic.


"ohhkk Miss. Defence lawyer I am sorry!! can we walk ?? they may be back. " he said irritated of her continuous talks.


"waise tum kyun bhaag rahe the?? " she asked .


"arey wo?? galti se jhagda hogaya unse aur sabmujhe maarne chale! isiliye mai chup gaya! u see mumbai ke gunde?? " he looked at her with hope ful eyes.


"yeah I know "he sighed.


"toh aaj raat keliye hume kahi rukhna padega , aur kal subah apni apni raaste dekhenge "he declared . She agreed and both hired a double bedroom as they dont have much to pay for two single rooms.


" suno toh!! "she called him when he was almost asleep.


"ab kya hai Miss . Talkative?/ " he groaned.


" naam nahi bataya humne ek doosre ko "she said as if they had done the biggest crime.


"Oh God!! Kill me or her!! itni raat ko .. arrgghhh!!! Rey! "he groaned and pulled the blanket over his head.


"Mera naam kriya hai !! oye sun rahe ho?? arey tumhe hi bata rahi hun "


"Okay princess kriya will you sleep and let me sleep now?? "he rose up and glared at her.


"mujhe neendh nahi aaraha wo bhi iss dress mei!! "she said sadly. He is highly pissed with her but he can realise what she felt seeing her dress, He feels irritated with a single shirt on . So yeah he does understand.


"dekho I don't know if you feel it right or wrong. I promise I am more interested in my sleep than you!! you can use my this sweat shirt for this night. Her mouth fell open.


" Oh hello blanket leke toh soyegi na !! and its your wish,. Now please don't wake me up I am hell tired. "he fell back and in no time he is already snoring. She sighed, She had no option. She is more than tired to say . So she changed into his extra large sweatshirt which can serve her as a dress ending up at her mid thigh. She sighed . It felt so light now. As she slept pulling the blanket over her and turned side as her usual sleeping position she felt his fragrance. Gosh he smelled the same when they were hiding. She inhaled deeply. The strong manly frangrance. She sighed peacefully. It smelled awesome.


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She felt some ticklish feeling. She pulled her legs close to her .


"utho madam!! Kriya!! "he shouted for the nth time.


"Kriya utho please!! I can't go out with my only jeans on. For God's sake get up!!


"kya hai?? "she said as only her face till her nose was peeping out.She is still sleeping.


"mere kapde"he said sighing.


"mere lelona! "she said in sleep never realising.


"WHAT?? "he shouted standing up shocked making her jump and sit on the bed.


The bedsheet fell away. He being a man, his eyes without his permission went to her thighs gawking at them.


"Hey!! "she grabbed the sheet covering herself .


"uhh!! sorry " he turned around.


"madam its 8 in the morning and mera 10 ko flight hai mujhe nikalna hai please meri shirt do.


" sirf sweat shirt pehan ke ghoomte ho?"


"its none of your bussiness ! now will you give me my shirt? "he turned around.


Oh girl she is too sexy. She felt her cheeks heating up already. Her dirty mind alredy started their dirty imaginations of him crawling upon her pushing her onto bed and


"arghh"she shook her head.


"Get lost. " she shouted irritated with her imaginations.


"what?? ek toh meri shirt pehna aur mujhe jaane keliye bol rahi ho?? "he narrowed his eyes.


"arey not you!! wait up!! "she said and ran into the washroom and came out in her clothes after freshening up.


"we should leave now!! I have a flight to board."he said and she nodded sadly. She now is blank where to go.


As they came out of the hotel he called a taxi and got in and bid a bye to her. She saw him leave and sighed.


"Nice time with you Rey!! I will remember you forever. " she said and turned around and walked aimlessly.


Rey had taken amount from ATM and did his basic shopping along with a backpack for him. He need the minimum to survive. He grabbed a burger and a coffee and walked out to the cab when he froze. He saw her walking in the hot sun in that heavy dress head hung down all sad. He frowned. What is she doing here?? didn't she plan anything before running?? He frowned realising. He felt himself fuming Somewhere he got connected to her in this 8 hours of time. He walked to her and tapped her shoulder. She turned feared expected her family members.


" don't tell me tum aise hi bhaag ke aayi?? "his voice was already rude.


She sighed and looked down and nodded a no.


"till the last minute I didn't think of running. so "she trailed off. She looked up suddenly as he caught her wrist and pulled her along with him.He opened the cab door and she looked at him confused.


" get in "he said and left to the other side . She followed him with no option.


"driver railway station leke jaana" he said to the driver.


"railway station kyun you have a flight right??" she asked innocently.


" Hum shimla jayenge!! I am a software eng. So waha koi kaam dekhlunga!! Papers nahi hai par no problem I will grab one and.. "he was cut


"Rey you don't need to do this!! I will manage. meri wajah se tum.. "


"sshh!! no worries kriya!! kal raat ko ek dusre ki help karke we became friends and I won't my friend all alone in troubles."he smiled.


She looked at him for soome time. He didn't get why she is looking like that.


She leaned and pecked his cheek and said.


" Thanks!! "she said right from heart.


"hmm!! car door open karne keliye ek kiss?? toh ek aur baar utharna zara fir se door kholunga "he winked.


She bet him on his head.


"that was for helping idiot. aur kal raat ko meri help karne keliye and meri trust na thodne keliye "she said.


He laughed. She got lost in it. He was a God!! He looked so divine,She kept looking at him.


"hey !! are you drooling over me?? "he winked.


"oh please!! apne aapko itna mat samjho "she rolled her eyes and looked away. Hell she is actually drooling over him . She scolded herself and looked away. Rey looked at her. Aah how he wished he could just cup her face and fell her skin. He fel for her at the first sight. But he is strong enough to control his feelings.


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Its been a year since they are living here. The house which he said was his as he long back buyed it with his own money.She wondered why he never called his home , never ever he is in contact. She was even confused why he left mumbai at the first place. It isn't like he is also running away like her, and the biggest confusion that how he grabbed a very decent position in the company where he works now.


The answers from him would be like this "I had my reasons Kriya to leave that city, I had a talk with the manager he interviewed me and realising my talent he hired me, I just dont feel like to call them and all.


She sighed. She did absolutely nothing !! She cooks, does some handicrafts and sells them in the tiny shop she had opened. By the year passing not everything is the same between them . They started maintaining distances as with time their feeling grew strong. It was hell for her to stop herself from gawking at him silently when he does a work out and stop herself from kissing him. And he?? he is in the most vulnerable situation. Whenever he sees her automatically his heart beats high and he gets aroused. Her cute and innocent face is the main victim and her carefree dressing sense. Hell he hated the person who invented these shorts and tank tops. Doesn't she have the minimum commen sense to cover her whole body atleast in front of him.?? She is perfectly carved . Perfectly perfect body. And her actions, soo cute to hug, too sensuous to kiss her sensibly.


But both had a great success in pulling off their relationship with sanity and safety mainating a feet distance always.


"Kriya !! "he called throwing his bag on the couch.Not hearing a reply he went to her room to find her asleep. Strange she never sleeps at evenings. She hated it. but soon her owound grabbed his attention. the half did bandage on her right palm.He quickly slipped on his knees and held her palm and gently removed the dressing. She winced in pain and woke up. She had burnt her hand.


"what's this?? " he gritted his teeth.


"Sorry wo puri bana rahi thi tab jal gaya "she made a sorry face.


" dhyaan se nahi kar sakti?? "he scolded her and did her dressing.


"Rey!! "she called as he was leaving and he turned back.


"maine khana nahi banaya "she said sadly looking down.


"how about we eat outside today? " he cheered her up. She grinned and got excited.


They had a gala time having the food and all. . He had brought her to this special dhaba. Yummy spicy food that both had tears but ate as its very tasty. They washed their hands and were walking down the street . It was so silent and alone.


As they took a turn she was shocked. Rey was still behind removing the stone in his shoe. She saw her father standing their with his car having a break down. He saw her and in a split of second she ran back pulling rey with her into a small corner.


"hey"


"sshhh!! " she whispered. She saw her dad searching for her already.


"kya hua "he was about to turn when she saw her dad unknowingly headin towards her . She was highly tensed and with a confused mind pulled rey even closer covering herself.


He is having a really hard time. She is on her toes looking back of him her lips right in front of his making him loose his control. She looked at him in between but froze seeing how close they were. His breathe mingled with her's . before she could do anything he moved a step ahead . Damage is already done. He placed his hands on both side of hers and leaned in. She looked at him wide eyed but closed her eyes as she felt his lips on hers caressing them. With each second they drilled more into eachother kissing passionately while rey almost covered her face with his arm and kissing her with all his might and all the 1 year wait he did.


Kriya's dad saw Rey from back. He could just see two people kissing. He turned around quickly.


"aaj kal ke bache..sharam bhi nahi aati , jaha dekho wahi shuru hojate hai . "he said disgsusted and left.


After a long passionate kiss he pulled back and looked at her who is deeply blushing now. He wanted to kiss her more. but he realised its not the right place. He silently took her to the house and kissed her again finally letting his feeling in front of her.


She mirrored his feelings. They cuddled into each other talking sweet nothings and kissing in between . Soon they drifted into sleep.


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2 months have already passed with them being in a relationship. They love it to core. They knew and even conveyed to each other that they love the other to core.


"Kriya !! its time, I want a wife sweety!! " he said playing with her hair when she was leaning back in his arms and playing something in the mobile.


"what?? how dare you think about another girl she turned back furiously in his arms and he quickly sealed her lips with his. She melted totally into the kiss . He smiled " against her lips.


"baby!! I was asking you to be my wife!!" he said once he pulled back.


She blushed for being dumb and hugged him tight and said a yes.


He said they will be going to his hime the next day and after having a talk with his and her parents they will marry.


Rey had already informed his dad but only that he is coming back.He thought this matter should be spoke face to face not on a phone.


As he entered the house with Kriya hiding behind him getting nervous his dad greated him.


" Rey finally tu wapas aagaya beta. " his dad smiled. Rey saw some people standing upstairs coming out of the guest room/.


"papa wo?? "


"arey samdhan ji hai!! tumhareliye ladki dekha haina "his dad was cut by Rey as he spoke when he felt her grip his shirt . He knew she is hurt.


"papa mujhe kisise shaadi nahi karni hai!! maine apneliye ladki dhoondh li, aur usi se shaadi karunga. "he said determined. He is still standing at the entrance and none had keenly noticed to find her behind him.


"Rey!! shut up!! sab kuch final hochuka hai aur tum .. I decided , maine jo choose kiya wohi meri bahu banegi.


"dad! No!! never ye mera life hai!! aur mai "he pulled kriya to his side when she shivered looking down tensed . He held her by waist and said "isi ladki se shaadi karunga. Aap ki marzi ho ya na ho "


All are shocked to core. Vicky , Rey's brother is the one to recover fast.


"rey tu isse shaadi karna chahta hai?? " he asked when rey glared at him as kriya is already loosing confidence.


"haan "he replied rudely. All of them present there burst into laughter leaving a confused KriYaansh. When all controlled themselves none is able to speak but vicky somehow spoke.


"abey wo usi din usi moohrat pe karleta!! Isise toh shaadi hone wali thi teri!! "again everyone broke into fits of laughter when these two had gone pale.


What a joke they had made of themselves. But to rey's surprise .


"aapne jhoot bola mujhse?? "Kriya flared up and all stopped laughing.


"baby maine kya?? " he was cut


"aapne ye kyun nahi bola ki aap bhi shaadi se bhaag ke aaye??"she demanded


"arey ladka hoke shaadi se bhaagna .. bolne keliye acha thodi hota hai "he pouted.


" oi laila majnu, paagal hai dono shaadi karli hoti toh ab tak ek bach bhi hota "he teased when Rey glared and Kriya blushed deeply. Kriya's dad walked down and she hugged him crying. She missed him badly!!


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As he entered the room he expected her to be sitting like a typical bride. But with first two steps he tripped over her lehanga but bakanced himself. He saw and was shocked to see her clothes scattered on the floor. He quickly looked at the bed where layed his wild seductress wearing his same sweatshirt .


"I thought uss din jo sapne dekhe wo poora karun "she winked. He was shocked at first but realised that he said what he imagined to her. The night ahead had a lot stored in it for the them.



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Thats it for today!! Guys !! 😆

Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am so gonna post it... ^_^
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that was cool dee..

well thought of...

arc mast tha...

the after effect of leaving kinda enhanced the effect dee..

amazing...

chal ab mere liye bhi kuch likh.. ;) :P
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Meri pyaari didu :-D
i luv u 2 :-D <33
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unress :-D
Gossh di. . . .
U r 2 guddd. . .kya os likha hai. .i mean seriously itta emotional bt yet awsm. .
Beautifuly written :-D
oucch. .rey ko aise dekh ker dil mein thoda pain hua tha. .haiyeee
ek dum simple n clear tha. . .lovd it di. .
And yupp kya ekdum sahi song pe likha hai. Superb.
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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resss

unress...

mast tha ye dee.. :D

and above all.. bht bht dhanyavaad aapka ki aapne finally hum sept babies k liye kuch likha... hum dhanya hogye :P

honestly i like this song very much.. aur ussi pe OS... is like cherry on top :$

u described it all very briefly.. straightforwardly... and tht is wat i liked the most...

but at d end.. as alwaz togethr forever :D :$

Lovely OS babe.. Loved it sooo much... *huhs*
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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^ akku shayd isne tm logon ke liye upar res karke rakha..
haina dee??? :/

agar nhi toh am happy... my first comment,..

agar haan ara FB msgs pe aana... ;P
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hawww.. tht ws for us??? :O

shitt.. i didnt knowww... :'(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was not for you people akku!!! :P
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superb deethu di
loved it
it was fabulous and beautiful😊

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