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Posted: 11 years ago
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D way Arnav shielded Khushi 4m d rain was a highlight of d KISS... Simply proves hw much hez into her... *Nt in d actual sense, as of nw* 😉

D KISS ws beautifully written... I hvnt read such a beautiful yet sensual description of a KISS till nw... 4 tht a big round of Applause 2 u...




D KISS is still STUCK 2 my brains tht I cnt get ENUF of it n all i cud thnk abt is d KISS... Specially wen I c MILK... 😉 😆 😳




Upar se UR EDITS made my breath hitch every tym I read d chappy... Basically, I HYPER VENTILATE evry single damn tym...

Wat hv u done 2 me DI????? 😕 Aise hi mai kam pagal thi jo mujhe aur pagal bana diya hai itna HOT update de k...

I wonder wat wil happen 2 me wen u'll post 'IT'??? 😕 😕 😕 Tab to shayad forum p milungi hi nhi mai... 😆

I hv repeatedly told u tht U R AN AMAZING WRITER n d way u pen down makes me wonder hw cn sum1 get better day by day???? I deeply wish I cud write lyk u 1 day... I'll b contended tht day...

"U covered me" made me weak on my knees... Hayeee... I'm nw luknd 4wrd as hw dere relationship will proceed nw...

I cudn't keep my hands tied for 2 days n u dnt kept mum 4 so long... Dese lines touched me deeply... Reason is too personal 2 share here on IF... 😉

LOVE U DI... Aap mujhe aise hi update do, I promise 2 gv u more comments...

P.S. I cnt b very descriptive lyk RG bt wil still try, I'm a gal of few words wen it cums 2 express myself... 😳

KISSIE 4 u Di 4 d Update full of KISS (Sensual n Promising) 😉






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Posted: 11 years ago
i just read all the chapters in two days:-)
wow:) mind blowing concept u got here..
Awaiting for more romance between these two
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okie 1st question!! Did they? Or not? he he he... the ending does suggest they entered the room with the same intention! but again cant be sure ... in donon ka kuch bharosa nahin! he he he

Good one Deeps! Nice to see them together finally ... letting their heart out ... and getting to a stage which they were meant to be! ... together hamesha! :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
A great story. Loving this Arnav and Khushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Diii i knw u r busy bt any chnce of update or of a teaser pleeaaajj 😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
super duper update...
totally lost of words👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
THE dAWN OF THE dAWN
Chapter 32


Author Note: Friends, I will be very busy for next 3 weeks due to work pressure. The updates will be slightly off from the regular MON & THU routine. But I promise to give you update just not sure when the next update will be ready. I will try my best to not to make you wait longer. Hope you understand!

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Khushi looked around the bathroom and tucked her lips in trying to control her never ending blush with the thought that she will now share his every thing including this bathroom. She wondered why she didnt notice this tastefully done modern room when she used it this morning. The walls are artistically raised with black marble in semi-gloss finish paired with pure silver metal finishes creating a pure demure touch. She turned to her left and noticed the shower area completely enveloped in the black colored glass with white marble tiles inside the 4 walls. It was breathtaking and extremely seducing to just look at it. She turned to her right and noticed custom length porcelain spa tub. She dipped her fingers and felt the water warm to touch, constantly running in small streams. For a brief moment she imagined them together cuddling in the tub and blushed at her wild thoughts.

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Aman, cancel all my meetings tomorrow. Also Khushi's.

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hmm yeah we both are taking day off tomorrow.

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hmm.

Khushi came out of the bathroom towel drying her hair. She noticed Arnav ruffling his wet hair with towel in one hand while on phone facing his back to her. She dropped her towel on the dressing chair walking over and stood beside him. She gestured him to give her the towel which he silently obliged to her request. He took a brief look at her from head to toe before she turned her back to him. She wore deep purple satin night gown with no sleeves and the gown length ended at her knees (What did you guys think, she stood na**d dropping the towel...all besharmis...😆). Her mesmerizing pearl beauty soon took him into different world ignoring what Aman was saying. He simply replied with his HMMM answers to Aman without really paying attention..

Khushi took the towel and climbed up the bed pulling him out of his sensous thoughts. He gave her his signature Excuse Me look, trying to understand what she is doing. She then pulled him holding his shoulder and made him stand infront of her with his back facing her.

Thats when he realized their HEIGHT difference and she wanna access his hair in a better way ALL of it. He noticed her every move in the mirror infront of them while she failed to realize the same.

She took a brief moment and blushed shyly before laying her first finger on his hair. She tucked her lips controlling her blush.

Hmmm...postpone it to next week. He had no idea what he was saying but he didnt fail to witness that beautiful moment she hesitated to touch his hair. As she laid her first finger, his eyes closed momentarily completely willing to shut from the outside world. Admiring her flushed face, he wondered how she will react if he go beyond a kiss and he smirked at his own never ending wild thoughts.

In these 8 years, he never felt the urge to touch or feel a woman the way he is thinking of her at the moment. Many times his friends doubted him if he is even straight. He proudly prompted himself Yes He very well is and his senses are all aroused with her simple touch.

They touched and felt each other more closer than this before but they didnt know what relation they shared then, which restricted their lust feelings for each other. Now that they knew what each one feels about the other, their hormones started dancing peppy and constantly twisting their stomachs with excitement.

Hmm...came his another absentminded reply to Aman. He tried hard to concentrate what Aman is saying but all his eyes are on her. He loved the way her soft fingers circled around the roots. And more than that he was amused at the way she was giggling softly and mutely like lovestruck teenager.

He noticed her deep pink cheeks turning into shy smile in the mirror reflection and grinned proudly at his own handsome features. He never realized he is that handsome to make someone go weak. And he is witnessing his own caliber in that department for the first time and that too in her twinkling eyes.

As she brushed her fingers in his soft hair, a breeze of his hair gel scent intoxicated her and she became curious to smell it closer. Without realizing that he is noticing her every move in the mirror, she leaned carefully making sure to do without his knowledge and smelled his hair.

Arnav ended the call but pretended to be on it not to disturb the beautiful moment, his wife's amusement.

She closed her eyes and took a deep breath sniffing the most pleasant smell filled with rosemary scent. He raised his eyebrow smirking what effect he had on her and he silently observed what she was doing. She did it again. She dipped her nose and smelled his hair relishing the aroma with her eyes closed. He twisted his hand back and pulled her carrying her in his arms.

She tried to scream his name with sudden jerk.

Achaa laga? [Did you like it] He asked raising his brow with a tease in his eyes.

Kya? I dont know what you are saying? She looked all flustered and tried to get off his arms.

Oh really? He asked with a mocking tone. Pehle lips [first lips]..he looked at her quivering lips intently... Phir paanv [then feet]....he titled his head and looked at her exposed slender feet...Phir che [then che]...she slapped his cheek without allowing him to continue as she knew where his eyes are going to land next.

What the? He looked surprised with her sudden gentle slap that landed on his cheek.

She took advantage of the moment and wriggled her feet getting off his arms. He quickly twisted her arm and pulled her closer colliding their chests together.

She closed her eyes nervously with the way their chests moved up and down in rhythm in unison. Dont you think your slaps are getting way out of control these days without proper apology? He whispered smoothly lingering his lips on hers.

Sorry. She whispered slowly lifting the veil of her eyelids to read his lips.

Apology not accepted. He mumbled brushing his lips on hers, teasing her with subtle chuckle.

She creased her forehead into frown. Without giving her any chance to reason out, he kissed her, punishing her, nibbling and tugging her lips gently. Giving in, she relaxed herself against his body allowing him to take control and punish her the way he wants to. She never knew a punishment like this existed before and it could be so enticing. That same thought brought a blush smile on her lips, which he didnt fail to notice with the way her lips curved within his. He knew what she must be thinking and he couldnt help but chuckle as well at their newly found kissing games. They both ended the kiss giggling like teenagers, as if they are compensating their lost teenage love.

He grabbed the towel from the bed and he said aloud walking towards the bathroom. For your information, I use Sisley Paris on my hair. Thought you would be interested to know. He walked towards bathroom leaving her smiling sheepishly.

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She sat infront of mirror and started moisturizing her skin delicately. As she put on her night cream on her face, she smiled shyly as her fingers touched her lips remembering how how he kisses her magnificently. As Arnav exited the bathroom, she put on straight face and carried on with her night routine. Arnav turned to look at her and he could smell lavender scent from few feet away. He forgot to blink gazing at the way she twisted her hands pinning her hair up carelessly to put the lavender oil on her nape followed by her hands and feet.

He stood froze staring at her long nape while her hands trembled sensing his heat around. She stood up and walked towards the other end of the bed, stumbling upon her feet nervously. He shook his head smiling at her nervousness and stood before the mirror combing his hair.

He sprayed cologne and got ready for the bed all the while observing her trembling state. His eyes then fell on the sindoor box at the corner of dressing table. He thought for a moment before turning towards her.

Waha kyun khadi ho? Idhar aao. [Why are you standing there? Come here!] He tried to ease her.

She fidgeted with her fingers nervously thinking whats about to happen but she didnt move an inch.

He walked upto her and brought her to the mirror holding her hand. He turned her to face the mirror.

He walked around her and grabbed sindoor and took a pinch of powder between his fingers while she watched every move feeling emotional. She understood whats about to come, the moment her eyes met his.

He stood behind her and they both looked at each other in the mirror. Both remembered the circumstances they got married, the unknown feelings they had that moment, their heart to heart conversation and the unbearable painful emotions they went through together in last 5 weeks. While tears escaped her eyes, his eyes turned moistened. He raised his finger and filled her maang looking at her in the mirror while she made sure her teary eyes stayed locked with his. He turned her to face him and kissed her on her maang silently promising that he will guard her in every possible way.

She leaned against his chest and they both silently embraced the most beautiful moment of their life. She cupped his face and spoke lovingly, I would re-live this moment million times compared to that painful lavish wedding. I am so glad you forced me into this marriage without walking away this time.

He wiped her tears and kissed her at the corner of lips licking away her tears. He was too overwhelmed to say anything. He picked her up in his arms and carried her to their bed. She started shaking nervously as they approached the bed unsure of what to expect.

Relax, I am not going to eat you. He said mockingly and made her sit comfortably in the middle of the bed. He took position next to her and laid on his tummy resting his body on his elbows.

He rested his chin on his fisted palms and admired her every single feature on her face. She became extremely nervous with the way he is staring at her. She had her eyes lowered and tried her very best to avoid his gaze. Despite knowing him for several years, she felt she is married to a stranger. She felt like a newly wed bride from the arranged marriage.

He witnessed the way her skin turned white to natural pink blush right infront of his eyes. It was a treat to watch and he felt as if he is watching THE DAWN (beginning) of his happy life, that he missed for so many years.

Her lips started getting dry and quivered lusciously. With subtle frown on her forehead, she expressed discomfort of feeling cold and rubbed her arms with her palms.

Khushi! He called her name huskily in very lower voice just audible to her. He took her fingers in his. Slightly massaging the back of her palm, he spoke looking lovingly into her eyes, I have my whole life to make love to you. Tonight, I just want to hold you and feel you. So I want you to relax without any worries. I will not force myself until you feel comfortable to my touch. Hmm? He asked contracting his eyebrows.

She nodded positive flashing a sheepish smile and met his eyes yearning for something from her. Millions of butterflies at once fluttered in her stomach with the way he looked at her. Nobody looked at her the way he is staring with all the passion and volcano intensity. Moments passed, He didnt touch her differently nor said anything but she became extremely weak and vulnerable in his line of sight.

He inched up his body resting it entirely on his one elbow. He slipped his other arm cradling her nape and pulled her gently to a smooth wet kiss. He made her lay on the bed without breaking the kiss. He smoothly caressed her cheek with his thumb which is the most she loved everytime he does it, the way he caresses her as if giving utmost attention to every inch of her skin.

He slipped his arm behind her back and pulled her closer to his waist. He again cradled her nape tilting his head deepening the kiss. She caught his tee very tightly at his chest as her whole body shuddered with his new torture.

When he realized that she is becoming too weak without enough breath, he slowed down and pulled away ending the kiss with small pecks on her lips. She instantly leaned towards him and buried her face at the bottom of his collarbone hiding her shyness.

Kya hua? He asked in extreme seducing manner. Until yesterday, in fact until this evening you were acting all bold following our traditions. He teased her and immediately landed a pat on his chest.

Shall I ask you something? Will you tell me truth? She asked drawing circles on his biceps.

I dont have any reason to hide anything now.

On our last day, the day you asked me to...She stopped as her voice cracked and a lone tear escaped but she managed to continue, You addressed me Khushi. How do you know my name? I never told you and Payal said she never shared it with you or Akash. So, how?

Will you believe if I say truth? He asked wiping her tear.

She nodded yes.

He took her hand in his, and spoke playing with her fingers, Do you remember the night you landed in NY, Me and Payal were giving stage performance. When you came backstage to meet Payal, that was the first time I saw you. I couldnt see anything but your eyes. You have no idea how gorgeous your eyes are. He leaned in and kissed her eyes.

You just need an excuse. Tell me further. She slapped his chest.

He chuckled and continued, So that night we were supposed to sing some other song but I changed it in the last min without informing Fatty.

Why? She asked curiously.

Because I wanted to sing something that conveys my feelings as a message to you. Its a different story that your tiny brain didnt get it. He patted her forehead smilingly. So naturally, fatty was angry with me and she refused to tell your name. And our Akash dumbo didnt remember what your name was except Khu..so we searched entire online database for the name thats starts with Khu.

Phir? She asked with her eyes wide-opened.

Then we found the name Khushi. I fixed my mind then, no matter what your real name is, you will be Khushi for me, always.

But Why did you chose only Khushi?

I felt very happy the moment I saw you. I felt I have known you for ages. You looked so familiar as if you were some lost part of me. Thats why I could relate to you so well.

Her eyes welled up and she hugged him tightly. How could you love me from the very first moment.

I told this to make you happy not to make you cry.

She chuckled wiping her tears. I never believed love at first sight concept.

Me neither until I met you. He confessed looking seriously into her eyes.

Stop it. You are making me all emotional today. Whats wrong with you? She wiped her tears.

Wait let me get tissues, looks like you are going to continue this saga for tonight. He reached over her to the side table and in the process his chest and flat belly brushed over her lips and her whole body tingled with the new sensation.

Kya hua? He asked observing her all flustered.

N..Nothing. Thanks. She took tissue and wiped her dried up tears.

Are you ready to complete your promise?

Kaunsa promise?

To take me out? He asked fluttering his brows.

Sure, shall we go coming weekend?

Nope, we are going to tomorrow.

Tomorrow? But I have meetings.

All sorted out. Nothing to worry.

Why didnt you tell me before? I need to plan where we are going.. God..tumbhi na. So carelesss Arnav. She tried to push him away and tried to grab laptop.

Excuse Me? I am careless? He sat up feigning distress.

Haan nahi tho. Where will I take you tomorrow? I have to plan properly.

Arnav grabbed the laptop from her hand and spoke teasingly, Someone is trying hard to impress me. Waise, be assured that I dont get impressed very easily. He winked.

Arnav?

First tell me are you going to be my date or wife? He asked trying to keep laptop from her reach.

Your enemy. Khush [happy]?

Even better. I love to torture my enemies. He teased.

Arnav, doo na, please. She asked every sweetly like a typical lover knocking his senses off.

He leaned in and pecked her lips, This is for asking so romantically, but I am not giving laptop. We are sleeping. He pushed the laptop under the bed. He turned off the lights in a swift turn and pushed her onto the bed.

Chodo mujhe. I dont wanna sleep. Chodo naaa. She screamed like a kid.

Shut up and sleep Khushi. We have long day tomorrow. He wrapped his arm around her waist.

She tried to turn away and get off the bed. But he pulled her strongly making her back collide with his chest and he swiftly arrested her in his hold wrapping his arm around her waist. They both froze realizing what just happened in last few mins.

Lights off. Moon light peeking into the room. The subtle noise of rain drops patting on the floor. Crickets chirping through the dark night. Their cold bodies hugging and giving warmth to each other for the very first time on the same bed in the same room. They both laid still as they knew one subtle move might just distraught their senses. Khushi closed her eyes nervously fisting her palms at her chest.

Arnav firmed his grip around her waist and pulled her closer sensuously making her back touch his belly but careful enough not to touch her with his aroused manhood as he didnt wanna embarass her or put her in uncomfortable situation. The lavender smell on her nape lured him creating havoc in his senses. He leaned in and took a deep breath sniffing the oil that spread generously on her slender nape, stimulating his senses that he thought were very much under control. He leaned in further closer and tried to brush her tresses with the tip of his nose.

Khushi flinched with the tickle and pulled her knees together feeling something totally out of this world.

He whispered brushing his lips onto her nape thoroughly enjoying the way his wife planned to kill him. What did you put on here? He whispered placing a deep wet kiss on her nape.

Lav..lavender Oiilll. Her speech bumbled initially and as his lips made contact she drawled last few alphabets trying to assess if she will survive his bitter sweet torture.

He smiled naughtily feeling her helpless frozen frame. I love it. I want you to wear it on every night. Hmm? He said nudging her nape with his nose tip.

She nodded and he understood with the way her hair ruffed on the pillow.

I guess if I make one more move your brain will freeze. He teased her. She couldnt help but giggle rather loudly at her own sweet distress.

Hey, he called her as if he remembered something suddenly. She tilted her head back to face him.

He just stared at her soft skin shining under moonlight.

She turned to him laying flat on her back and jerked her head subtly sighing him what?

This is the best night of my life and will always be. He said huskily leaning for a kiss.

And you are the best besharam any girl would die for. She reciprocated to his breathtaking kiss.

She laid on her back and he laid on his tummy with his face almost buried in the crook of her neck. He wrapped his arm around her belly possessively while she placed her hand on his assuringly.

And they both kissed the much awaited first night in their lives, sleeping together, holding together, breathing together and dreaming together as one.

On this night after 8 long years, Arnav Singh Raizada is taken to a dream land and slept like a tired baby in her warming embrace. And a man who used to toss around at least an hour before his eyes closed, soon went into deep slumber in matter of secs which explains how tired he was in his turbulent and treacherous life.

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At the sound of chirping birds, Khushi woke up breathing onto his chin. She tried to rub her eyes but her hands are tied and held firmly under his paddle palm. She tried to get up but she was tightly held in his embrace wrapping his other arm possessively around her shoulders.

She took in a moment to let the sleep fog clear her eyes and she tried to understand their sleeping posture. Her mouth wide-opened in shock with the way half of her body rested on his body so closely without letting even air between them. Her left hand resting on his belly, protectively cupped by his masculine palm. She blushed looking at the way all her sensitve parts pressed against his hard frame. Her left leg tucked between his 2 legs in a very awkward position just few inches away from his manhood. She closed her eyes biting her lips mischievously. She tried to move away but she couldnt feel where her right arm is. Her entire right side felt numb due to sleeping on that side for prolonged times.

She tried to wriggle her way out of his embrace, but he lazily shifted and tightened his grip. She chinned up and looked at the handsome face sleeping peacefully. Her nervousness vanished as she started boring at his masculine features. She smiled coyly thinking what a sexy man he is.

She inched up and kissed him under his chin. The feeling of his stubble against her skin tantalized her senses and she got more curious to taste his other features. She inched up a little more, her hand putting pressure on his belly, she managed to move upto his jawbones. She pursed her lips and kissed him at the corner of his lips.

Can anybody fool Arnav Singh Raizada? No one not even in his sleep. If she didnt understand this fact then she is going to be in serious trouble. Fully aware what she is doing, he pretended asleep trying hard to control his urge to touch her. Pretending to be shifting his position, he pulled up the covers upto his belly as he didnt want to embarass himself displaying his peeking manhood. Thinking that he is very well asleep, she kissed his jawbones and barely touching his ear lobes. And that was it, he couldnt tolerate her sweet bites. He swiftly rolled her onto her back and fluttered his eyebrows.

What are you doing? He asked completely arresting her between his arms.

She was totally taken back, feeling extremely embarrassed for getting caught. She opened her mouth to come up with excuse but nothing concrete crossed her lips.

2 options for you Mrs. Raizada. He said with huge smirk on his face.

Her new name on his lips sounded extremely sexy and inviting. She cursed herself for having such bold thoughts since morning. She wondered if she is nearing her chums date, which is when she often gets wild in her thoughts. His husky voice pulled her out her deep concerned thoughts.

Option A, explain in detail what you were doing. Option B, demo it once again what you were doing.

Arna..Arnav. She stuttered.

Yeah that is my name. He battered her lids.

Kyun itna pareshan karthe ho? [Why do you tease so much] She spoke shyly with her downcast eyes.

He always heard women who go wild in bed are treat and most alluring but he is finding that statement not true at least for himself. The way each time his wife pouts, lowers her eyes as the blood reaches her cheeks flushing them into deep red, is sending electrifying signals through his entire body making his partner in crime stand up in attention. Unable to control his desire anymore, he looped his hands around her back and arched her up against his chest, squeezing her hard, in a way showing his desire. Her hands slip up his chest, then his shoulders, finally making it into his morning ruffled hair obeying to his urgent touch. He looked even more delicious with messed up hair.

He leaned in but stopped midway and raised his eyes from her lips to her eyes and asked huskily for confirmation, Is brushing a pre-requisite? She blushed mischievously nodding her head negative. Without waiting any further, his lips soft and gentle pressed against hers, moulding them into utter perfection. The kiss from his end got deeper, passionate and bit rough. It was very different unlike the way he kissed her all gentle yesterday. The way he manipulated her tongue screamed his stiff hold and his urge, urge for something more thats beyond Khushi's understanding. She frowned a bit with his sudden rough bites to understand what he needs more, but her aloofness for a fraction of sec only deepened the kiss, warning her to stay connected and marking his name deeper on her lips. She started feeling short of breath but he did not attempt to stop unlike last night.

She pulled back for air, barely able to breathe. She pouted her lips and licked them to soothe the pain and looked at him accusingly. He paused and curved his lips into a smile. He unwrapped his arms around her and watched her letting a sigh of relief as she adjusted her head on the pillow. He soothingly traced his thumb on her swollen red lips and whispered, Sorry. I will TRY to be more gentle next time. He started pecking her lips whispering sorry for each peck until she gave in and chuckled at his sweet pamperings.

That is how the first morning of their new journey, in each other embrace, marked THE DAWN OF THE DAWN (The beginning of the Sunrise) in Arnav Singh Raizada's life, promising to get only brighter and shinier with each passing moment.

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Pre-cap: Milk Kiss, Nutella, Ice Cream, Water...Now let your imagination go wild and decode the pre-cap

Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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res fr me
Lobe u diii

Itne busy hone par u listen us and give us so beautifulss upddate😊 😊 😊 😊

Now she is ogling on the bathroom also lolll arnav kaam tha kya jo bathroom ko takna strt krdi well i dnt have a prblm par jab arnav ko pata chalega den he wil be hell jealous wid the bathroom also nw😆😆

Wooo guttery thoughts in bathroom dii u made my expectations high nw ☺️

Mjhe woh scene jaldi chaiye u get dat😡😡

Kitna awesoe scene hoga woh padhene mein arnav and khushi cuddling in eachother rubbing soap and wat not ☺️

He was talking to aman and baat krte karte khushi agyi and gt disctracted grt raizada ab baat v mat karo only stare at ur wife 😆😆

I didnt thought guttery of towel drying 😛 loll dat u made me realize dis oderwise i was going straight on the track 😳

Only hmmm wat if he was saying asr i m overtaking ur company and wat all arnav saying is just hmmm 🤣

Hayyeee hair drying session chal rha tha yaaa romance tym i was so lost in dat world kya kr diya dii apne

U r aking me guttery nw



U better srtr updating guttery stuffs
😡😡


I cn see guttery coming next week 😆😆

His frnd doubting him omg really😲😲

Lolll dats height she is smelling his gel nw and he is all enjoying mannn he is so bad finding point ot teasse her raizadas are really mad😆😆

Hayyeee uufff pehle lips phr feet phr cheeks d way he was teasing was damn freaky awesome 👍🏼

Aisa punishment toh mjhe bht pasand hai and arnav giving such a pleasureable punishment to khushi ufff kya hoga hum becahre readers ka😛

She was applying mostirizures and he was ogling her trying to smel her 😳😳
how sweet

The sindoor part was awesome

Relax i m nt going to eat you loll 🤣 the part were frm where he carried to the bed was so beautiful i feel it was d best

He understand her so well and widout saying much he undrstd her discomfort how sweet a husband cn be

Finally mera jawab de dii aap mjhe d question i asked u abt the identity i wnder did u planned it or it was my cmnt u answered 😳😳

Diii d last part was awesome

Goshhh no words to describe wen he cnfssd his heart out for the history of her name i loved dat part i hve already made many cmnt abt dat part in my previous cmnts 😆😆

Damnnn u r evil very evil 😡😡

Itna acha update diye aap den dere kiss ufff it was hot and bina brush kiye hi kissing strtd lolll 😎

Precap itna teasing wala

Helll u are busy no jaldi jaldi updates possible😭😭
Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago
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Unres by Astha dii

I was lyk dis after reading d Update...



Lyk expected I had a sleepless night after reading ur update... 😉

N U knw wat hapnd???

I woke up early in d mrng bt ws lying on bed wid my eyes closed n thnkng abt ur update... N My mom caught me red handed smiling wid my eyes close... N I was lyk dis...



Itne mai ye haal to socho Di, aage mera kya hone wala hai... Mom is surely kicking me out soon... 😛

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Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES MEE😡
I dint Unres my prev comment... Sorry di Having exams.. I ll do it tomorrow Pakka... coming with my MOnkeys😆

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Hi Deep Di..

Another Unexpected Update Di
Nice time I peeked in n knew that U r updating.
Ok Now.. enough of my blah blah

Coming to the Update

Again a beautiful one.. Loved it Di

(What did you guys think, she stood na**d dropping the towel...all besharmis...😆)

This line.. made me laugh like hell
But What do u mean by Besharmi di?
U knw I am a Small Bacha in these things😉


Arnav was out of his mind
He was just hmmm to Aman who was explaining all dam things to him
Bechara Aman dint know that his Lover Boy boss was ogling at his wife

But then Khushi
Ahh this girl is more than Arnav
She was also drooling
but went one step high.
she went to smell the gel he used in his hair?

Uhh Khushi..

Caught Red handed

Ye lo.. another Kissi

These both are so in Love

now Arnav's turn..

He lost himself in her lavender oil

Uhhh.. Di.. You are driving me crazy

after reading your update, I had a sleepless night and sleepful day in college that in home My amma was so angry with my Mad smile that she asked me to sleep alone in other room and My prof in coll threw me out of the class

But Loved the Update like anything


Atlast Khushi knew the mystery behind he knowing her name

Stop it. You are making me all emotional today. Whats wrong with you? She wiped her tears.

Wait let me get tissues, looks like you are going to continue this saga for tonight.


Well that was my state too reading this update that My sister came with tissue box for me


Huh

The morning Kiss

No better way to start a morning with


again Khushi caught red handed


Is brushing a pre-requisite?


Hahaha


THE DAWN OF THE DAWN (The beginning of the Sunrise) in Arnav Singh Raizada's life


A beautiful Dawn




Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 11 years ago

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