ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 7 - COMPLETED - Page 22

Kya baat hai RG, badi shayari aa rhi hai aajkal... Kahi judai ki wajah se to nhi?? 😉

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

Kya baat hai RG, badi shayari aa rhi hai aajkal... Kahi judai ki wajah se to nhi?? 😉

mne abhi tak comment update nhi kiya hain...iss Saturday pakka..

It was owsome
Brilliant

What a beautiful confession , really like arnav's care

Thanks for writing early and brilliantly

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Okayy i m cmnting on part 2 also loll

dnt knw wat all to say aftr such a awesome update

Finallyy idiot ko reality krgyi and he qiestioned her Ye sab ..?? kab se..??😳

And khushi as always never knew anythng bt i m lgad she opened her heart to him dis tym and said her feeling for him asked him bt his feeling how cn he hide he it for 8 long yrs

I liked the fighting khushi who did fight for her feeling and also fighted wid him for being quiet

I feel sad for arnav I loved his dialogue d way he expressed d way he opened up and suddenly stopped realising nk name to be said

He said his heart out dii in dose few words his heart was a open book to khushi his pain his love for her his distance his jealousy everythng was dere d arnie who use to love his cookie whom he named khushi widhout knwng her real name was khushi he said it ol *waisa dii i hope u wil make him cnfss dis also ki he named her khushi bfr knwing it dat it was indeed her name khushi bcz till nw dat part hasnt come yet dat tym also u didnt revealed it her*

You knw dii dis line make me cry . "Kaha thi Khushi? Itni der kyun kardi? Mein bilkul akela padgaya tha."

and later dis lined made me laugh "I thought you were married and probably had kids by now"

I still feel bad wen khushi introduse nk to arnav as f i felt litreally angry cursed khushi how could she bt ltr everythng chngd

Diii u r very bad lolll sriously i mean pehle itna awesome emotional update diya ho uparse pura cmnt chaiye itni tarif kahan se karu apki u hve bcm a greedy soul nw u so u better give us kiss in each update samjhi aap😡😡

Goshhh dii i was litreally crying reading rnav opening his heart the way he said "People that I used to love turned to hate with my parents death except you Khushi. I tried very hard but my heart didnt allow me to forget you nor hate you and I promise that will never happen even after my death...""I truly mean it. You are my everything and only YOU will be my everything. I dont need anything else Khushi. Dont need anything else."

The hug was really heart southing it was a prms to be never left alone , dat she is his forever and no one cn apart dem nw

That dey were meant to be together

I was so damn impressed wod khushi diii the way she respected his love and moreover the way she thought his feeling are much more pure den those thee words wich every lover die to hear she stopped him saying that dey cnt be compared to his feeling for her i appreciate her for dis

He said her wooo hooo diii he said her tee words she was longing for the words frm which she thought og strting her relationship finally she heard it and moreover he said dose words so perfectly dat even i wanna hear dose perfect frm my mr perfect nw sigh kab ayega mera arnav

dam dey r so desperate souls for for those three words and the way u penned dere feeling i m soo tell u diii i m in love wid dem the way khushi praised arnav feeling for her the way she said he chngd love meaning hayeee it was awesome dii

The pics are perfectly edited dii dey r lovely lolll i m falling for ur updates more and more nw seriouly wala sach

The kiss wich strtd wid a ogliong turned to be a promise , a longing for each other , a way of expressing dere love , a passionate one and most iomportantly a perfect kiss wich i was waitng for ur perfect moment

And hayeee d way she said "You covered me" Waaahhh mazaa agya diii i love u so dammn much damnit kaise bataoo ab

Btw dii apkje readers loll hmlg greedy souls hai plzz thoda update de do na

nd yess tanu ur shayri was perfect yar exact describing the situation ufff kasshh main v likh pati aise 😆😆

Lo dii de di detailed cmnt ab aur kuch chaiye 😡😡

i so loved dis lines

"Tum aisa kyun ho Arnav? Aur kitna der karoge?

I couldnt keep my mouth shut and hands tight for 2 days, how could you keep quiet for so long. How long will you bury your emotions? Kuch bolte kyun nahin?

What do you wanna hear, how I fell for you the very first moment?
Or how I tried to convey my feelings every moment we spent together in college
Or how painfully I distanced myself from you when I learnt...

Stiilll trying a new one and dii pleaaj dnt use my dii crap in ur updates lolll readers will kill me

"Jabse teri mohabat ka ehsaas hua

Dil na jaane q teri haar baat soch kar hi khush hua hai

Ye anchaha ehsaas pehla na hua tha

Teri mohabbat ne humein nayasa kar diya hai"

Originally posted by: deepthiya

,Pooji,,,what wrong dear...all shayaari..I love it but didnt understand the meaning of "anchaha"[/DIV]

Yes I become greedy when i give intimate scenes. :) you better be prepared with such detailed updates as u r goign to see more romance. I will give detailed feedback once I am done with office.

I am giving from lunch time..Love ya

Nthng wrng Dii anchaha means unwanted loll may be lettering was wrng
Have a grt lunch dii

That was a beautiful way to make them realize their feelings. Loved it.

The first part was emotional..

Finally the much awaited update and it made me so happy...!😊 Loved the part with milk😳 Only Khushi can do something like this without realizing what it means...😆

Suoerb story. Reading from yesterday...its so superb forgot food and sleep 😊
Finished reading 29 chapter. ..you mentioned u r not planning maha story which means are u finishing this marvellous story in upcoming few chapters?????

If I may request pl dont finish it. .vese hi aache wale Arshi story ya to finish ho rahi hai ya writer gayab ho gaye hain... consider our Arshi fansss

Thanks for amazing story.