ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 7 - COMPLETED - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww.. Dis is definetly my most favourite chapter of this story..
The Wait..
The dissappointment..
the restlessness..
the anxiety..
the misdirected apology..
The anger..
The urge to decrease the pain ultimately culminating into the most beautiful heartfelt confession by both the lovers witnessed by the stars followed by the ever consuming , passion filled kissess blessed by the nature.. :-):-):-)
I cudnt hv evr imagined such an amazing proclaimation of love By my Arnav n Khushi , Deeps.. :-)):-)):-))
u made my darling.. I love u dammit!!! :-D:-D:-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
A big CONGRATULATIONS on anothr thread...may u have many many more threads like dis...
Nd thanx fr updatng although being busy wit u work u updatd dear...:)

abt the update wat should i say...
It was fabulus,awsme,amazng...all adjctive fr this update dr...

Much much awaitd cnfessn nd their kiss...
Unique nd world best cnfessin i have evr read or heard...
U did a splendid job deepthiji...

those pics nd the lines written by laji nd tanuji was treat fr us...
Loved it...
Will be waitng fr the next update eagrly...
Becoz arshi the lovebirds night was still young...;)

"Ulfat Ke Mod Pe Aisa Waqt Aaya Hai
Zakhm Dil Ka Zuban Ne Sunaya Hai
Nahin Roye Jo Kanto Ki Chuban Se
Usse Phoolon Ki Khushboo Ne Rualya Hai..."
for januji...:)
Edited by Asiyamajeed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asiyamajeed

A big CONGRATULATIONS on anothr thread...may u have many many more threads like dis...
Nd thanx fr updatng although being busy wit u work u updatd dear...:)

abt the update wat should i say...
It was fabulus,awsme,amazng...all adjctive fr this update dr...

Much much awaitd cnfessn nd their kiss...
Unique nd world best cnfessin i have evr read or heard...
U did a splendid job deepthiji...

those pics nd the lines written by laji nd tanuji was treat fr us...
Loved it...
Will be waitng fr the next update eagrly...
Becoz arshi the lovebirds night was still young...;)

"Ulfat Ke Mod Pe Aisa Waqt Aaya Hai
Zakhm Dil Ka Zuban Ne Sunaya Hai
Nahin Roye Jo Kanto Ki Chuban Se
Usse Phoolon Ki Khushboo Ne Rualya Hai..."
for januji...:)


uff asiya wt a beautiful poetry...thank u so much dear...thanks a lot🤗...u have made my day :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh



uff asiya wt a beautiful poetry...thank u so much dear...thanks a lot🤗...u have made my day :)



m glad ke u like it dear...thanx to u too... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yes! They have finally confessed their feelings! New beginning of an everlasting journey.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mind blowing! Finally united and in what way!

Never expected this at all what eh kiss! I'm talking about the milk wala exchange! The after confession kiss was passionate no doubt!

Those lines in pink and blow outstanding!

Kudos for such a lovely update!

Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmmm! Your this update obviously tickles my senses.☺️😆
"Milk kiss Rabba Ve" ke bare mein aur Keya bolu☺️ hyperventilating ...

I loved their confession part. Now waiting for their sweet sensual Nok jhok😳 😉

It seems that next update is going to be hot.☺️ And already we knew that their car is all wheel drive 😉

You edited pool side kiss scene very well.

BTW how is your Trip going Deepthy? All the best wishes for your business trip.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hehehehhehe so cool finaly they told each other...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
unexpected update..
But worth reading and nice pics...

Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Missing u Di... Cum back soon...😭

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