SwaRon SS:Jodi Maker VS Dil Breaker [Completed]

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Super awesome end to the story marium I'm gonna miss this work of yours it is one of my favourites..😊
It was a perfect happy ending swayam and sharon married to each other.. I loved the date swayam had arranged for sharon it was simple yet so nice nothing fancy about it but yet lovely..❤️
The way swayam proposed to sharon in a spur of a moment wanting to spend all his life with her superb marium.. 😳
P.S thanx for the pm's dear..😊. I'll be waiting to read the updates of all the works u have decided to continue..

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

love the sweet & simple yet beutiful date.

the way swayam praposed sharon is my fav part.

nd perfect ending with the line 'their never ending fairytales begin'

loved it alot

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poonam

@shan.ss

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

finally u update :)

that is very very cute and sweet end!!

perfect ending :)

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

superb ending

wow !!!

👏👏👏

loved it

it was simply great

and really well written 👏👏

but tune khatam kar diya 😭😭

i really loved the tashan b/w swaron in this SS

gonna miss this a lot

thanks for the PM

update your other works soon

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

thanks everyone for the comments.

Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

I dont know how I missed the update!

May be because of I was temporary vanvas!!

Wonderful ending!! I remember how i hated swayam in the begining!

Their date was so perfect!

His proposal and marriage was quick and unique😆

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Awesome end :-)
Loved the simplicity of the date :D
And aaw loved how he proposed to her

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Rabina

@raveena2807

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#388

At the beginning of this story who would have thought it will end this way. After constant fights, countless misunderstandings, heartbreaks; coming together, sharing their life's tragedies, sharing love and finally sharing life.

The date was sweet and simple. Honestly, I was anticipating grand candle-lit dinner with flying curtains, lots of flowers and lights. But it was better than anything. Loved what Swayam said to Sharon during his proposal. Sharon, indeed, brought over total change in Swayam. Finally they are married. Happy ending!!!