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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Chapter-3
I looked at Geet sleeping peacefully in my arms tired after our endless session of making love nothing could have been better than this she in my arms breathing softly hiding herself in me for the warmth for her body.
I kissed her gently making sure not to wake her up and then her heart that rose at my every single touch.
I looked at my phone that was vibrating at the coffee table it was not the first time it was ringing
I looked at the caller Id
Dad calling...
I looked at Geet who was sleeping peacefully on the bed and decided to take the call outside the room
Maan I heard my father scream as I picked up the receiver
I know he would be angry as the news of my marrying Geet will be all over media
How can you marry that filth he screamed making me flinch with the word that he used for my love
She is Geet dad I yelled back trying to control my anger
Geet or whatever maan she is not worth of being a Khurrana
Dad she already is a Khurrana I married her and now she is Maan singh Khurrana's Wife
I don't know man you choose her before me before your responsibility
I never choose her dad she choose she thought that I am worthy of her love
Ohh Maan stop such nonsensical talks , you had your share of fun now come back to me
Dad I screamed how could you talk like this
I love her and she is my everything if you want me back you have to embrace her respectfully too
Never maan never
My arms are open for you but not that opportunistic bitch
Dad I screamed and threw the phone away shattering it into pieces
Maan I heard Geet whisper clad in the white sheet wrapped around her chest she must have woken up with my yelling
I look at Geet with pain and remorse I felt so bad my own father didn't understand my love
Geet looked at me and nodded her head in a no indicating me not to feel bad
I looked at her with tears in my eyes and moved back I turned back and looked at the mirror that showed me my own broken self and Geet's tears
I smashed it right away hating the reality shown in it
Maaan I heard her scream and the very next moment she was by my side
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12


Beautiful FF.
Loved it. Maan n Geet r newly married.
Maan loving her with care. Geet worried
That she slept. But Maan assured her very
Nicely That made her worry all gone.

How this story will proceed ???
Continue soon
Inertia14 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Thank you so very much
I am still in the process of writing the story and all I can disclose right now that there liofe
Ain't gonna be like bed of roses

Originally posted by: crazydream



Beautiful FF.
Loved it. Maan n Geet r newly married.
Maan loving her with care. Geet worried
That she slept. But Maan assured her very
Nicely That made her worry all gone.

How this story will proceed ???
Continue soon

gurti30 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
maaneet had love marriage but maan's father dont want to accept her as DIL of khuranas
but how could he call her names😡
mmradhu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Fabulous update... loved it
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Awesome updates !!!!
Update soon !!
Inertia14 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Chapter-4

Geet looked at me and nodded her head in a no indicating me not to feel bad
I looked at her with tears in my eyes and moved back I turned back and looked at the mirror that showed me my own broken self and Geet's tears
I smashed it right away hating the reality shown in it
Maaan I heard her scream and the very next moment she was by my side
I love him Geet
I love dad but he doesn't understand my love for you
Geet held my hand in hers flinching as she took out every broken glass piece pierced in my hands
You don't love me maan I heard her ask me as her tears touched my wounded hand
Jaan I whispered and hug her close to my heart
You know I do I love you more than my life
No maan if you would have loved me you would have never hurt me Maan
I looked at her pained I knew what she meant hurting myself meant hurting her
I am sorry Jaan I murmured and kissed her teary eyes
I felt her hands pushing me and trying to move away from me
Geet please Jaan I murmured forgive your Maan
She pushed me really hard falling down in the process
Geet I screamed as I picked her up in my arms
I Hate you Maan she repeated again and again as I took her to our room and laid her down.
I looked at her messed up hair red lips wrapped in just a sheet and angry on me for hurting myself
I wrapped myself around her as I lay by her side you hate me Geet I asked kissing her earlobe I sensed her heart beat rise at the touch of my lips
Tell me Geet I asked her Do you hate me
Yes Maan I heard her say through her trembling lips
I smirked as I turned her towards myself then let me teach you how to love jaan
I locked my lips on her kissing her gentle lips making her groan in pleasure
Maan she mumbled again as I bit her neck and sucked the skin to sooth her
My hands gently opened the knot of the sheet that covered her making her gasp as reflect

Hello ppl here i am back again
Thank u for the likes and comments
though I am little sad with the number of likes
Plz let me know if you all dnt like the story or something in it
mmradhu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Beautiful update
Really loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
beautiful update dear
maan is hurting himself and geet is angry with him
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: mmradhu

Beautiful update
Really loved it
Continue soon


thank you for commenting means a lot Thanks

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