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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice. Caught up on the last few updates! Glad Tanveer is out and Asad and Zoa have embarked on their married life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
NO PROBS DEAR...GET WELL SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 11: LAST PART

Evening time at the KM:

asad and najma were sitting in the living area, najma was watching a movie, and asad was busy checking his phone... dilshad and zoya were in the kitchen making coffee,

dilshad:
zoya... aaj main bohot khush hoon.. itne dino baad is ghar main phir se khushiya aayi hai.. allah kare mere teeno bacche aise hi khush rahe..

zoya huggs dilshad and kisses her cheeks

zoya
: zaroor ammi... aajke baad is ghar main sirf aur sirf khushiya hongi...

dilshad: haan... inshallah aisa hi ho... aur haan tum dono honeymoon ka plans kiya ya nahi??

zoya blushes...

dilshad
: ya allah.. chehre dikhao toh sahi.. mashallah kitni khoobsoorat lag rahi hai meri baho, sharmate hue...

zoya: ammi...

dilshad: accha chalo.. ye lo coffee, main biscuits lekar aati hoon,,

zoya goes to the living room with the coffee... and offers it to asad...

asad: thank you :-)

zoya just smiles and gives the coffee to najma too and settles down next to asad with her cup of coffee... dilshad also joines them... najma and dilshad were glued to the tv screen and asad to his phone and zoya kept glancing at them... she hits asad by his elbow...

asad
: hmmm..

zoya: kya kar rahe hai aap..

asad:
messages check kar raha hoon..

zoya: kiska??

asad: business messages..

zoya:
allah miya!! what's wrong with you asad... aapke saamne itni khoobsurat biwi baiti hai aur aap aapke phone main busy hai...

he looks at her and smiles.. caresses her hair..

asad
: haan aaj toh bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho... kal raat ka blush aapke chehre pe abhi tak hai...

zoya blushes even harder...

asad:
itna mat sharmao... aaj raat ke liye bachke rakho...

zoya:
asad!!! ammi aur najma yahi hai aur aap...

asad
: unhe dekho toh sahi, kitne concentration ke saath tv dekh rahe hai...

both chuckle... asad putts his hand over her shoulder and pulls her close...

zoya:
asad!! wo dekhenge...

asad:
toh!! biwi ho tum meri...

zoya: allah miye.. aap toh bilkul badal gaye... mujhe laga aapse romantic toh statue hoga... lekin aap toh bade romantic nikle... waise pehle toh aise nahi the.. ab kya hogaya...

asad: pyaar insaan ko badal deta hai.. jaise tum badal gayi.. pehle tum bhi toh aisi nahi thi

zoya: matlab??

asad
: matlab... pehle main blush karta tha aur aajkal tum...

zoya blushes.. asad held her chin and points her cheeks

asad: dekho aisi...

zoya:
ab chodiye asad... kitna tease karenge mujhe??

najma and dilshad were still glued on to the tv... and finally the movie was over and they they looked at asya who were in their own world... both chuckle bringing asya back into their senses...
few months passed everyone were happy, zoya's aapi and jiju were happy for zoya... they were in newyork.. they spoke to zoya every single day.. zoya was the same, she never behaved like those typical wife's... asad was the same, over protective... he fulfilled every wish of zoya's... they never had complaints against each other, they were happily married.. but they kept fighting over small issues but they never stayed angry for more time, one minute they fight and the other minute they shower love for each other... najma and dilshad never really cared when they argued of fought, they knew that the next minute they will patch up.. but they enjoyed their bikering.. and laughed over it..
(im not including the SM story in this SS.. its only about asya and KM)
asad and zoya looked for an eligible guy for najma, she was married to a handsome guy and a good family... it was one year and 5 moths of marriage.. zoya realised she was pregnant..

zoya: allah miya... main.. main ammi banne wali hoon..(she covered her mouth in excitement and blushed hard) ab main asad ko kaise batau.. ya phir pehle ammi ko batau... nahi nahi.. asad ko batana hoga, lekin kaise!! google karti hoon... nahi nahi.. aise cheezon ke liye bhi net?/ allah miya whats wrong with me?! aisa kaunsa kaam hai jo mrs khan nahi karsakti!!

she gets a plan... and starts to execute her plans!! asad was back home after a long tiring day... he went over to his room in search of zoya... only she could ease out his tiredness and stress, that was a daily routine for him to hug her tight as soon as he reached home, her warmth made his stress go away... even after more than a year's time of their marriage everyday seemed to be new and special, both still behaved like lovestuck teenagers... he went to look for her... she was busy in the garden area... she placed a table and decorated it with flowers and candles and inbetween was a chocolate cake... asad was surprised and went towards her and hugged her tight from behind...
she knew it was him... his scent made her go crazy... his touch sent shivers down her spine.. she still felt like this under his touch... she turned to him...

asad:
ye sab kya hai...

zoya:
surprise.. aapke liye.. lekin aap ne toh dekh liya..

asad:
toh kya... ab batao kis baat ki jashan ho rahi hai...

zoya: batayenge!! lekin usse pehle aap jayiye.. jaake fresh hoke aayiye, phir batati hoon...

asad gave a confused look and went to take a shower, he came out dressed in his kurta, zoya was busy struggling with her saree... asad smiled at her and went towards her..

asad:
main madat karun??

zoya:
aap?? aap rehne dijiye.. humeesha jab bhi main saree pehenti hoon toh aap aajate hai madat ke naam pe aur... (blushes)

asad: aur kya?? (smirking)

zoya: asad... waise aapke liye maine wo shirt rakha hai.. wo pehenlijiye..

asad: aaj saree aur mere liye wo shirt.. hum kahin bahar jaa rahe hai kya??

zoya: allah miya... sawaal karna bandh karenge aap... jayiye aur wo pehenkar garden area pe ayiye.. main jaa rahi hoon... okay

asad:
ajeeb ladki hai.. aaj kya hogaya isko... ab samaj gaya.. ammi toh najma ke ghar gayi hai... hum dono akele hai.. shayad isiliye mrs asad ahmed khan ye saare tayari kar rahi hai...

zoya lights the candles and writes something on the cake with cream... and smiles to herself... asad walks towards her.. she immediatly runs to him and covers his eyes..

asad
: ab ye kya hai...

zoya: shhh

asad: zoya...

she brings him near the cake and the removes her hand on his eyes,,, he gets a surprise reading the writings on the cake..."Happy birthday ammi abbu" asad is confused reading it and looks at zoya... zoya blushes...

asad
: "happy birthday ammi abbu"??? aaj nahi mere ammi abbu ka birthday hai nahi aapke ammi abbu ke... toh phir??!!

zoya:
allah miya aap toh buddhu hi tehre?? itna nahi samaj paaye aap... ye cake maine aapke liye banaya.. matlab hum dono ke liye...

asad:
matlab??!! hum dono... ammi abbu (tears in his eyes with full of happiness)

asad cupps her face...

asad: sach...

zoya
: aap abbu banne wale hai... aaj shauhar se abbi ban gaye aap...

asad kissed her forehead and both hug each other... during these days, asad took extra care of zoya... dilshad too pampered her, najma and her husband were in KM... najma wanted to spend time with zoya and help her ammi until the delivery... asad zoya always argued over whether it is a baby boy or a girl, zoya wanted a boy where as asad wanted a girl... zoya was moody at times, but asad was the only one who knew how to handle her and cheer her... finally the delivery day had come!! zoya's aapi and jiju had come to India... zoya delivered a baby boy!! and ya zoya won!! she wanted a baby boy!! asad had no boundaries of happiness... he was in joy.. the baby looked just like asad, he had made a promise to himself.. he would never repeat what his dad had done, he would be the world's best dad and zoya too made a silent promise that she will not let her baby go through what she went!! they named him zubi... he was pampered by him ammi and abbu!! asad and zoya had a baby girl after three years and named her nuha..
they lived a happy life ahead...
The END

huh!! sigh!! finally done!! i was so confused about what to bring out next... i wrote this in a hurry, sorry for any mistakes done!! thanx for reading!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update!!!!

Loved the ending!

Please start a new story soon! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful end to a beautiful love story...never satisfied with asya's stories...Ignore the current track of the shows and the disapppointments and continue a new asya script in ur own style again...so tat we can cherish asya and their luv story the way we want...
Waiting for a new script from u on this beautiful couple,
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ending
plz start new ff soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing ending👏
loved it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Love it. Please start another story soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx for your comments guys, you can check MY WRITING INDEX for my other stories too... Thnx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...This is totally awesome
Loved the ending so much

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