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pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Awww...

She must be like an angel...a fairy...or butterfly 😊

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barikaa

@barikaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Enjoy your time with your niece. Update when you are free

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

This story reminds me a bit of Daddy long legs.

Only the last line!

Beautifully written.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Yaha bhi update milega kya????

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

👍🏼

I loved everything, the dress, the relationships but one thing that I need to know...

Why is he not married? 😲 Rishte toh bahut aaye honge...yah bheejoon...line lag jayegi! ❤️

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

~Edit~

You don't have to Make us Love this story, Zee. We already love it! 😃

The premise is so novel and I think this is so far your very best in terms of writing. First the scene you described at Shyam's haunt in Chapter 1.. Khushi room here, her holding on to everything that is touched by Arnav, his God-like stature in her mind.. his aged yet attractive looks.. and how he has managed to fully seep into Khushi's being.. just stunning! This is superlative story-telling. Bas!

I loved the relationship between Nani and Arnav, great fun! And a refreshing change from the usual stuff.

Now she has asked for him to make her a part of himself. How will he react ? And I will wait for you to tell me more about what happened in these 10 years.

You gimme the next update FAST. Till then, I I shall Spam-Aveyy 😛

Edited by vgedin - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Another beautifully written update...loved it...So its after 10 years...now Khushi is a matured young woman...she is a very lucky girl to have Arnav and his family-friend with her...from nightmare her life turned into dream...and is head over heel in love with him...I will not say its a crush of a 13 year old,that doesnt last for ten years...is it near the line of obsession also...dont know,mujhe aisa laga...its like she almost worship him...but whatever it is,her feelings for him is very much real...but what about Arnav...It feels like he never sees her anything more...its natural only...but why didnt he get married in all these years...38 is later than high time for settling in life...and now that he realizes what Khushi is saying,what will b his reaction...cant wait enough to know...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago