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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

~lucky again~.. I did get the chance to be on the 1st page!

This update was really interesting..

Khushi's thoughts have their single epicentre at Arnav! Her whole life revolves around him!
Truth to be loved, isn't it a sort of obsession..? And fanactism..? Just like Super hero's are to kids, Arnav is to Khushi..

The feelings though changed through the course of 10 yrs, and she became a women from a kid..

Arnav's single line : whatever Khushi wants! It mesmerizes me and amazes me till no end..! Why is it that watevr she says has to happen..? Something dat involves past?

And why ain't MR. Charming, handsome, rich and influential Raizada married till yet? And Nani doesn't even forces him for it! Why?

You gave me all..
Evrythng Big n small..

A final thing i ask for..
That forver let me be Your.. :)

Edited by aashi12 - 12 years ago

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rupamudra

@arshirupa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

fav update

wow 10 year leap

Khushi is grown and turned out to be a beautiful and intelligent woman

khushi graduation dress & the breclet are beautiful

khushi loved arnav & arnav had no idea about her love

i want to see how will arnav reacting

loved the update

egerly waiting for the update

Edited by rupamudra - 12 years ago

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

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10 year leap 😊

The graduation party dress by Khushi is super 😉
Arnav doesn't like other men eyeing Khushi, whats up
ASR?

Khushi gets a princess room in which all the things
with the things in it selected by Arnav. Khushi loves
him and asks him to share his name! The bracelet is
lovely, and the dove and A in it makes it even better.

Loved the way you made ASR understand what she
Wants. Arnav wouldn't have imagined her to ask
Him 😲

Since the last part I couldn't stop myself from imagine
this story to be a backdrop of 'Lamhe' where there is
a lot of age gap between the leads(Anilkapoor and Sridevi).

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Farah

@farah53

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Unres'd

OK.. So, I know I have said this before, & I will say it here again, just for the record.. Thank you for a bathroom befitting a tycoon, ZZ!!! The one that the chindi chor PH produced on the show was like 🤢 But you proved once again, ZZ, that you are not only creatively richer, but maybe imaginative-monetarily too😉

The leap was so necessary.. ASR was the man of Khushi's dreams from the day he gave her a new life..But Khushi was far from a woman for ASR..& I doubt he still sees her that way... But it will be hard for him to ignore her, if she slaps it on his face like this..in that dress..😉

Coming to the dress.. The first ever time I saw it.. I was like...

SO, yeah, our Khushi... in that dress... in front of our ASR.. *Sigh* These are the stuffs Rabba Ves are made of

But on a serious note, his concern for the girl he had once rescued from near destruction is so touching! His relationship with Nani is very adorable & does show him in a tender light, but his concern for a girl who is apparently no one to him, is what makes him shine like a knight to me.. It shows that he's not just the hero who saves lives..He's that hero who takes responsibility of the lives he saves..

& lastly, ASr.. he isn't all that unaware of Khushi, the woman, as he would like to portray, is he?? I mean, if IPK has taught me anything at all about love, then it's the fact that, if there is jealousy... Then, 'what the-!' Samjho ASR ko kuchh kuchh ho raha hain..& that is NOT crap!😉

So, ZZ, please, with a bit of Sunny on top, bring the next update on faster!

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

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agaya update.. i hv been refreshing both the pages like crazy with an excessive force on enter.. god bless my enter key 😆

1st thing 1st. the cool bathroom did matter, I was so irritated with the bathroom they showed in the show of the mighty asr..😉 yahan dekho khushi gets a gigantic bathroom..😃

10 years leap.. greattt.. 😃 it was needed for me to start imagining rabba ves to which i had put at stop to afterlast update..😉 not tht i didn't wanted awww wala parts..😳

khushi turned out to b a perfect raizada lady haan? wonder how a certain Him will b able to stay away from him.. now tht even she plans to change the status soon..😛 DId i even need to mention how much i am loving this khushi who is soo sure in love and also determine and bold enough to take active steps..hayee too gud..😃

If Khushi wanted something, she will get it, no matter what. "Whatever Khushi wants, Nani" err apparently she wants u babua..😆

never invite some boys who were eying khushi?? jealous much asr? 😉 or is it the possesive and caring arnav who cudn't let nything effect khushi after all wht happened to her in the past? koi bhi reason so i can hayeee on him for either or both the reasons.😳

oh so the truth was out tht why did nani help khushi but still its remarkable of nani to actually stand up to mend the mistakes..👏

but yeah i can see the history is not over and what is arnav's past???

why did he was sooo adamant in making sure khushi got everything she wanted??

ps the guy khushi was talking to was named nk so tht means u plan to make him a frequent character?? but again this was supposed to b arhi only right?

Ps i don't mind NK. he has been the perfect friend bhai devar and mostly cupid.. 😉

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Aaj samajh aaya ki kyun kabhi hume 1st page nahi mila update k baad. Bade-bade diggaj hain yahan. Kheir, hum jaante hain ki humari baatein aap takk pahuch jaati hain, toh hume 1st page pe na aane ka koi gamm nahi :D

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parjay

@parjay

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Oh my god.. im sure dis is nt my part of imagination. ..wat a concept dear.. I mean hats off.. sumtimes I feel , wat if I cud meet u in persn.. im a fan of ur creations.. luved it.. an entirely nw concept...thanx for ur awesome story..

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parjay

@parjay

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

You took leap of 10 yrs...

Now Khushi an educated beautiful "woman" and she loves him.

From that day she trusted him

she likes him now loves him...

From very beginning she started to select things designed by him, his favorite color ...

Arnav didn't get marry why? no girlfriends...thats weird He is 38 now

He is not attracted to her... only brotherly feeling

I like Khushi's boldness and the way she confessed

He tried to correct the wrong thing his grand father did to Khushi's grandfather

His bachelor status why????

Awesome update

Can't wait for next update

Hope you had better time with your niece

Edited by riafna - 12 years ago

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#600

for part 1...

its wonderful start dear...arnav win khushi over a card game...its interesting...and aman is helping him in the game...and shyam is more bad in this story thn the real one...and khsuhi is really very poor yaar...i feel sad for her halat...

well written...