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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

Wow wat a amazing update... Bt wat da 15 yrs of age diff.. M amused to read this.. Bt sure this too mst hav sme interesting shade of its own... Fabulous work.. Likd lav and aman .

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arnavini

@arnavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#972

O god .. M droolingore and more with evry part towards this fabulous tremendous story... Its excellent... Asr isaking me fall more and more evrytym for him... Hats off for such a fantabulous story...

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kushi.raizada

@kushi.raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Read d first three parts..got hooked..Awesome description. Unique concept. Loved it

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Meeshaali

@Meeshaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Ohhh God it is wonderfulll but dis age
Diference has shocked me !!!!! But. Hope
It will be intsting to read :)

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

Started reading the story today
And I must say very interesting
Excited to read further
Keep writing amazing stuff

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Tapdance

@Tapdance

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Chapters 1 to 3...It is already quite a story...

I thought it was quite dark in the beginning..had quite the same level of anxiety as Khushi as to who they really where...and what they wanted with her...well they turned out to be a blessing in disguise for her...and her life did change completely...

Was quite a shocker to discover that she was 13 when saved and he was 28 already...

And then to the present...He is everything that she ever dreamed of..He is a knight, a saviour, everything for her..and much more...

Will he be shocked to know her feelings, brush them away as a foolish young heart, do something rash or marry somebody...He has promised her though but this promise might be quite difficult to fulfil on so many grounds...

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#977

What an amazing start.. loving the concept.

with each chapter will let you know what I think😊

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#978

Chapter 2

Is all action. Not much dialogs.

We dont even have much insight into the minds of the characters. its an action sequence of how ASR and Khushi will come together.

But wait, ASR-28yrs. Khushi- 13yrs. OMG!!

Do the math- 15 give or take few months adjustments!!

Moving on to next ☺️

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#979

Chapter 3

How beautifully you have detailed each scene. Her room and the reasons why the decor is still like that. Her clear desire and intent comes through. The story started with such an intense scene and it is still gripping...