CHENNAI EXPRESS...(KR &SS FF)chap 5 updatd - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Excuse Me!!!! Sorry to ask You are you a tamilian by any chance, because your tamil application is simply superb and fun to read for a SRK fan like me, In one of the most romantic sensations of this decade.👍🏼👍🏼
ALWAYS AND FOREVER A KRIYAANSH/SWARON FOLLOWER.
Your idea is out-of-the-box and therefore fun, exhilarating and exciting to read.🤣
PLS Update soon😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik


Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Update soon :)

thank u ...

yup wil update soon...:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkpearly

luv d update

action sequence was superb

tittli song in precap

update fast

thank u..

i wil try to...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

i think in chapter i must be movie a thriller movie... actions were superb and fabulous
... loved it... do continue soon and pm me

thank u...😃

yup will contnue and pm u ..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: trisha19

superb update with full filmy action action part!!!!👏

pls update fast fast...can't wait for the song sequence..

thank u ...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: austen4ever

good update

rey has become an expert in fight scenes😆
that scene was well described.
i have a request, it would be really helpful if you could write the tamil lines in a different colour. it would make it much easier to understand.
waiting for titli

thank u ..

yup he is..😆

okies...it will be done madam..😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Devil

res

unres...
nyc update...
temple fight toh totally filmy tha...
rey shouting on kriya for getting into trouble...
kuch toh shuru huva dono ke beech 😉
sharon also worried abt swayam..
waiting for titli sequence...
update soon...
thnx fr d pm..

thank u,,,

yup kuch tho shuru huva hey..

will update it...

its okay...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hades

Excuse Me!!!! Sorry to ask You are you a tamilian by any chance, because your tamil application is simply superb and fun to read for a SRK fan like me, In one of the most romantic sensations of this decade.👍🏼👍🏼

ALWAYS AND FOREVER A KRIYAANSH/SWARON FOLLOWER.
Your idea is out-of-the-box and therefore fun, exhilarating and exciting to read.🤣
PLS Update soon😊😊😊

well am half tamilian as am bron brought here but i orgnlly belong to mumbai...

thank u ..

willl update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
CH4: Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai
The next day sharon went to swayam's room with his bed coffee.she saw him infront of her still sleep like a kid smiling in his sleep..he was looking extremely cute."koi ethana cute bhi hosakthahey kya?"sharon though to herself.and went near his bed and place the coffee cup on table beside the bed and caressed his hair and his smile became wider.she bent down and placed a peck on his check and turned to go while she felt some one holding her hand .she was shocked and turn to see that swayam was holding her hand frm back."wo ..wo swayam"sharon said trying to loosen his grip on her hand and she sucessful."wo kya sharon?"swayam asked with a smirk on his face .."wo coffee..gud mrng "sharon said and ran out from dere.swayam placed his hand the place were sharon give the peck and fell back on his bed.
Here kriya was showing the city to rey and she was explaining about culture,things and everthing .while they came cross an blind couple who were selling some books but none was buying them.rey saw this and asked kriya to ask them how much the books cost ..kriyansh went to the couple and kriya asked the couple "ithu ennavilai irukkum?"(how much does this cost?) "iru nooru amma"(two hundred)."rey two hundred ..BTW kithaney books chahiye?"kriya truned and asked him."hmm char lelo "rey said giving her the money ."patti naal pustaha kodu"(granny give four books).the old lady give the books to rey and they moved ahead."le lo swayu ne bathaya ki tumey book padana bohat pasand hey "rey said giving the books to kriya."kyu tumey nahi chahiye?"asked kriya in confusion ."hmm me books nahi padatha"said rey keep book in kriya's hand."then why did u purchase them?agar help karana tho money dedithey simple."said kriya holding the books."nahi me esey kartha tho useka respect hurt hotha aur wo kabhi money nahi lethey..(turning back)ab dheko wo log kithana khush hey"said rey and moved ahead.kriya was by now is totally latu on rey now..
[Song:Titli
Movie:Chennai Expresss
Singers: Chinmayi Sripaada, Gopi Sunder
Music: Vishal-Shekhar
Lyricist: Amitabh Bhattacharya
Tamil Poetry: Saint Thiruppaan Alvar (8th Century A.D)]

Kondal vannanaik kovalanay venney
Unda vayan en, Ullam kavarndhanai (x2)

Andar kon ani arangkan en amudhinaik
Andar kon ani arangkan en amudhinaik
Kanda kangal marronrinaik kanave

(Meaning:
I have seen the One whose color is like dark rainclouds
He is the one with the mouth that swallowed the butter of cowherds,
He is the Lord of the devas,
He is Lord Ranganatha (Lord krishna)
He is my nectar, my life!
My eyes have seen my Lord and will not see anything else!)
(kriya startd walking with rey and she was jst staring at him all the while..)
Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai
Kahin dooor...
Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai
Kahin dooor...
Chal ke khushboo se juda juda juda hai
Kahin dooor...
Haadse ye kaise
Unsune se jaise choome adheron ko
Koi Nooor...
Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai
Kahin dooor...

(there is a festival coming up everyone was preparing for that.all gals mehandi lagrahethey.aftr that kriya was feeling thirst she went to kitchen but was not able to drink water.so rey came there and helped her to drink water..hamarey swayam babu rey si bi aga hey eseliye wo sharon ko kana kilaratha...😆)
Sirf keh jaaun ya
Aaasmaan pe likh doo
Teri taarifon mein
Chashme Baddoor..
(swayam climbed a small rock and stretched his arms and point one hand towards sky and then pulled sharon towards him and rubs her nose with his..)
Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai
Kahin dooor...
Chal ke khushboo se juda juda juda hai
Kahin dooor...
(kriya was jumping and rotating her hand in circular motation indicating a butterful..then she takes a turn,if u didn't get the step its the same one which deepika does in the original version)
Kondal vannanaik kovalanay venney
Unda vayan en
Ullam kavarndhanai
Andar kon ani arangkan en amudhinaik
Kanda kangal marronrinaik kanave
(kriya is shown doing some clasical step with a group dancer in the background while rey joins her and in the musical bit rey will helping swayam while kriya staring at him)
Bhoori bhoori aankhein teri
Kankhiyon se tez teer kitne chhode
Dhaani dhaani baatein teri
Udte-phirte panchhiyon ke rukh bhi mode

(sharon's eye are shown and then sharon will be talking to swayam but he is jst lost in her)
Adhoori thi zara si
Main poori ho rahi hoon
Teri saadagi mein hoke choor
Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai, kahin door
Chal ke khushboo se juda juda juda hai
Kahin door...
(all the grl are lighting diya and leaving them in the river .and here kriya diya jalnki kosish karahithi but he was not able to then rey come to her help.both krisha went to the river and left the dep and in the river and were praying to god while reyam were standing at there back and staring at there lady love respectively .and in musicl bit both grl comes boy and give them parshad and put tilak on the boy's forehead)

Raatein gin ke
Neendein bun ke
Cheez kya hai khwaabdaari hum ne jaani
Tere sur ka saaz ban ke
Hoti kya hai raagdaari hum ne jaani
(swayam in his looking sings the frst line seeing sharon pic in his mobile , next sharon was putting rangoli while swayam is staring at her sing the rest of the lines)
Jo dil ko bhaa rahi hai
Woh teri shayari
Ya koi shayarana hai fitoor..

(sharon sings looking at swayam who is already staring at her and they share a eyelock)
Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai
Kahin dooor...
Chal ke khushboo se juda juda juda hai
Kahin dooor...
Haadse ye kaise, unsune se jaise
Choome adheron ko, koi Noor..
Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai, kahin door.
(kriya is carring a basket full of flowers wit her while rey was coming infrnt if her on a tractor and join his hand and wished her "vannakam" and moved a head and she was jst smile at him sharon is running and swayam is chasing her in flower fields and gets hold of her hand and pulls her closer to him.and held her by her waist and both are lots in each other )
Kondal vannanaik kovalanay venney
Unda vayan en, Ullam kavarndhanai (x2)

Andar kon ani arangkan en amudhinaik
Andar kon ani arangkan en amudhinaik
Kanda kangal marronrinaik kanave

(reyam were sitting with few kids and eating sugar cane and krisha were staring at them and lastly they both looked at eachother and smiled)
the next day rey was serching for swayam as he was still confusd in the rooms thing he was checking one by one..and suddenly he entrs into kriya room here kriya gve took shower and came out in her bathrobe.she saw rey and let out a shout.rey closed his eyes and said her sorry she was about to come near to him but unfortunately lost her balance and was about to fall and rey caught her and saved her from falling but swayam's dad and swaron were coming were fear as what happend her and were coming to her room ..kriyansh were still in the same position
precap:
swaron and kriyam dady saw kriyansh in that position and will misunderstand them.
guys i had put a lot of effort to wrte the song sequence .i hope u people will like it ..and guys pls avoid commnting in one wrd or one lins nce, awsum,thanks for the pm and update soon. such stuff.pls do wrte what u really feel abt this chap..criticisms and suggestns are always welcome ...slnt redear to if possble do comment.pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce typo's mistke...and for pm's add me...
love,
renu
Edited by 123renudrlng - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
rey Was so kind
he help couple
jinse unki selfrespect ko chota na pahuche
so sweet
n swaron sceane
in which sharon kiss swayum was so cute
love song sequence
love each nevery bit of update
n atvlast kria in rey arm
hope nothing goes wrong
Edited by kriapatel - 11 years ago

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