CHENNAI EXPRESS...(KR &SS FF)chap 5 updatd

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hie buddies...renu here.. .i am here with a new idea of makng an ff...i got dis idea wen i was watchng SRK's chennai express trler..so am namng dis ff as chennai express... but de stry is gng to be totally diffrnt frm dat..and its no where relatd to the show...hope u guys lyk it...pls don't mind any grmmcl or spllng mistkes...

PROLOGUE

i have been live wid my chachi and chachu ..i lost my parents when i was 4...snce then my chachu and chachi took my respnble ..not wid love on me..but wid love on my proprty... . my chachi and chachu had nevr been bad wid me.."well all thanks to my grand maa in dat matter!!!!!!!"as it was her cndtn if dey do anythng to me for de mony dey will nvr evr get the proptry...if dey want the prprty dey shld be all sweet and lovly wid me..so i nvr xprsnd any hurdls ..i have evrthng in my life...life bohat smoothly aur khushi ke sath gujarahithi...but as sum people say life is nvr de same...well i thnk dats true..der will be atleast one big twsts in evryone's life...meri life me be ek twst ayatha...aur us twst ne meri life ko hilakey rakdi...but meri life me jeski vajesi twst ayehey wo chize bohat hi beautiful aur smart thi ..jesi muje pyaar huvatha.. wo twst ka naam "KRIYA SWAMI IYER" hey ..ye ladki meri best friend ka behan hey... es se mera frst metng tab huva jab me apani dosti ki sat uska home twn chennai gayatha hldys keliyegayatha ..metho chutiya mananey gayatha but muje kya pat tha ki meri vaha sach me chuti hojayegi?

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"vanakkam sharon(hello) "said swayam with big smle on his face

"vanakkam..Eppadi i rukkinka? ?(hello ..how are u ?)"sharon repld him

"nalla irukkinren...(fine )."swayam said

lo muje yeha akela chodi kara wo vaha apani majnu giri me busy hogayahey..gosh muje hi isi log mujehi kyu milthehey yaar...i was feel hell akwrd as i was new to the place ..and the cherry on the cake was that here no one undrstnds my languge...oh tab muje lag me yeha kaha pisgaya yaar...i was lukng here and dere to remove the akwrd ness in me...so i strtd to listn the convo of MR majnu ji and his laila...but sad thng is dat i was not evn able undrstnd what they were talk but trd to get it...but jst then i felt a hand tapng on my shldr and i trund to look the most beautiful gal i have evr seen.. i don't knw who she is...i thnk wo meri manju ki family membr hihey i thnk so...i gve her a smle...

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"kya?"i shutd at swayam

"ah dude meri dad yehaki land lrd hey puri villge unki bat manthihey.."repld swayam..

"agar nahi manitho?"i askd

"tho smple uskeliye nxt mrng nahi hogi"he said with least intrst..

"matalab?"i said with a cnfusn look😕

"arey uska mudr hojayega smple.."repld swayam.

the ff will be in hindi only but few convo will be in tamil for wch i will gve the meng in the brckt... so bolo how was dat? acha tha ya bura tha ya wrst? ..let me knw if u want me to wrte it furuthr or not...pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment... no tomato's & eggs pls...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
another new FF by you
this is exciting
i loved it
it was wow
nice prologue
waiting for both the FF's to start...
ek swaron pain 😳
and another one on KR + SS ☺️
thanks for the PM
update soon 😆😃
and do PM me


P.S. well i have just one request
i know it is CHENNAI EXPRESS
supposed to have tamil and all
but try to keep it till a minimum
it would be much better 😃😃😃
sorry if you got hurt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mast he so jaldi jaldi update krna
N agar nai kia to mind it 😆 😆
Please continue soon
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-

wow

another new FF by you
this is exciting
i loved it
it was wow
nice prologue
waiting for both the FF's to start...
ek swaron pain 😳
and another one on KR + SS ☺️
thanks for the PM
update soon 😆😃
and do PM me


P.S. well i have just one request
i know it is CHENNAI EXPRESS
supposed to have tamil and all
but try to keep it till a minimum
it would be much better 😃😃😃
sorry if you got hurt

well ya anthr ff by me...

thank u ...

will update vry soon...and will defo pm u ...

and yup okay ...i will keep it to minimum...thanks for the suggstn...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumimita

wow..

keep going...😊

thank u ..i will...😃

Originally posted by: arsha_vrushan

wow wow!!!

awesome!!continue soon!!

thank u..will cntnue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zk456789

Mast he so jaldi jaldi update krna
N agar nai kia to mind it 😆 😆
Please continue soon

Thnx for the pm

yes madam ji..i will mind it..😆

no thanks abt the pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept...
chennai express my fav SRK n DEEPI
wanna read more...
start was tooo gud...
update soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikkreyarshafan

awesome concept...

chennai express my fav SRK n DEEPI
wanna read more...
start was tooo gud...
update soon n do pm me...

thank u..

those are my fav too...

will update soon ..for pm's do add me..that will be esy for me..hope u undrstnd...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 123renudrlng

thank u..

those are my fav too...

will update soon ..for pm's do add me..that will be esy for me..hope u undrstnd...

i have sent buddy request, add me...
by d way whats ur name???

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