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Posted: 11 years ago

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Tu jab chahe update karde... 😊
Mee toh alwayz ready 2 read... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ranya01

AwesOme wALa part as AlwAys... Sorry time shortage next ud pe bada wala cumnt fo sure...



Thanks Ranya. :)
Its okay. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello everyone! I'm back.😎
Surprised? I hope so.
Iss baar, I'm back super jaldi because as I asked, the 15 likes was fulfilled!
So Yay for you guys. :D
Also, to clear some things up, Tanveer is a good character. She is NOT negative but I can't promise that her entry won't turn things around. Good for you, bad for AsMud. :P
Without more of my rambling, I present,


Chapter 7: History


"So Tanveer, what are you doing here? How's your job going? And when is the marriage fixed? You never introduced me to that unlucky guy." Asad told her with a grin on his face. Kumud let out a sigh of relief but not for long. Tanveer replied, "Actually, my marriage broke yesterday when I found him cheating on me with some other girl so I'm going to be leaving in a week and since I don't know anyone else in Bhopal, I thought you wouldn't mind me staying here. If you have a problem, you can tell me and I'll leave."

"No Tannu. I don't have any problem. You can stay here as long as you want. Who is this guy though? I'm going to beat him up as soon as I see him. The nerve of him! He has no idea what he has done." Asad told her, his mood suddenly changing from calm to furious.

"No Jammy. Don't worry. I already did something which will scar his memory and 'other things' for the rest of his life." Tanveer replied with a smirk. "Oh no, what did you do this time?" Asad asked her.

Flashback:

Tanveer opened the door of the room he was staying in for their office trip. She had knocked many times but there was no reply. On finding the door unlocked, she opened it. She saw him kissing her best friend in the office and they were up against a wall with her friend moaning. "No wonder they hadn't heard her knocking. It's a good thing the bell isn't working," she thought to herself.

She cleared her throat and not being heard walked up to them and tapped both of them on their shoulder. As soon as her fiance turned, she kicked him in his b***s and then told, "Huh, you won't be able to give birth to any babies and my so called bestie, your choice is really awful. Seriously, see his face now. It's moving in all weird angles. Come to think of it, you guys are perfect for each other considering you face is just as weird."

She laughed at the two of them and then stormed out of there. As soon as she reached outside, she gave a call to her friend and asked his help. He told her, "Anything for you. I'll do it. Just tell me the time and place."

Later that evening, when Tanveer saw him walk out of his room with some other girl, she called up her friend Imran to know that everything was set and he was to execute his plan. According to plan, Irfan went into the restaurant with that girl and Imran came and stood next to Tanveer who was hiding behind one of the pillars. When Irfan and the girl were seated and the waiter left, Imran winked at Tanveer and then walked up to the table. As soon as he reached there, the fun began.

"Irfan darling, why aren't you answering my calls? Are you so angry with me? All I said was no to the marriage. What can I do? It's not legal in India yet so I can't help it. Don't you remember the nights we spent together, our dates, and our fights? Please forgive me baby. Pretty please with a cherry on the top." Imran told him. Saying this, he placed a kiss on Irfan's cheek. The girl crinkled her nose in disgust and told him, "This is awkward! You are so disgusting Irfan! I can't believe you lied about your gender. I don't ever want to talk to you. Don't ever show me your face again you idiot!" She then stomped her food and walked away from there.

The other people in the restaurant started laughing and Irfan who was enraged asked Imran, "Who the hell are you? What is your problem?" Without waiting for a reply, Irfan lunged at Imran but Imran pushed him off when Tanveer told him, "Bye baby. Hope you like my gift." She then showed him his Facebook profile which was filled with comments relating to the incident just a few minutes back.

Together, Imran and Tanveer walked away from the restaurant and Tanveer thanked Imran, notifying him of her whereabouts.

Flashback ends.

"God Tannu, you will never change will you? I can only imagine how the poor guy's situation must be. Now, I can't wait for Ayaan to get here. This is going to be so much fun!" Asad told in a childlike voice.

Kumud, who was feeling left out asked, "Why? What will Ayaan do?""Wait and watch Kumud. You will laugh so much today. Come on Tannu, I'll show you your room." Asad said and walked off. Kumud was now feeling very lonely and was also jealous to see that Asad had already forgotten her and gone with Tanveer. This was going to be one long week!

Just then, the doorbell rang and Kumud jumped. She saw the time and was startled to see that it was already 3 hours since Tanveer had come. She wondered how time had passed so quickly. She opened the door to see Ayaan and Nuzhat fighting like small kids. "Ayaan and Nuzhat, stop right now. What's wrong? By the way Ayaan, do you know who Tanveer is? She just came and she's gone up to her room," she asked them.

Ayaan and Nuzhat immediately stopped fighting and Ayaan froze while Nuzhat started laughing very loudly. The others had come too and asked Kumud why Nuzhat was laughing. Nuzhat told them, "Tanveer is here." Hearing this, everyone burst out laughing except Kumud and Ayaan. "Before I forget, Kumud, your family has gone for shopping in the market nearby. They'll be here soon." Dilshaad told her and resumed laughing.

"Aunty, what's going on here? Why is everyone laughing? Asad was also laughing." Kumud asked her, now completely confused. "Let's go in, I'll tell you everything Kumud." Rashid told her, still laughing. They all went in and everyone went to freshen up except Ayaan and Rashid. "Ayaan, shall I tell Kumud?" he asked with Ayaan nodding at him.

"Well Kumud, it all started back when Ayaan, Asad and Tanveer were in college. Ayaan was a junior while Asad and Tanveer were seniors. Ayaan and Tanveer were partners for a senior-junior project so Tanveer used to come over every day. She also used to scold Ayaan and make something or the other if we weren't at home so our dear Ayaan became infatuated with her and thought Tanveer loved him back. On the day of submission, he proposed to Tanveer and she rejected him saying she already had a boyfriend and Ayaan was never able to see her in the eye after that. But the main reason we were laughing is because he took permission from us, Asad and Tanveer's parents before proposing so now we always have a good laugh at his expense." Rashid told her. Hearing the story, Kumud couldn't help but laugh and Ayaan just looked at her accusingly.

"Sorry Ayaan. I can't help it. It's just too hilarious. I'll stop laughing though. I wish I had been there." Kumud told him in between laughs. Just then Tanveer and Asad came down together. Ayaan turned away blushing and Asad whispered something into Tanveer's ear.

Kumud thought to herself, "Once again, I repeat, this is going to be one long week."


There.
I hope you guys liked this chapter though this is one of my worst. What can I say, I suck. :/
Anyway, this time, I'll be posting after 20 likes so get your mouses and asking skills ready people. 😎
For now.

Love,
Ananya.😊

Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲 Tannu is devil... ANd thank god she is not bad billi here... 👏 And yeah that hotel scene 👍🏼 Aww poor kumud misses out... Asad bhi na... And hehe lol 😆 Ayaan and Tannu wala scene mast tha,... He had crush on tannu... Future mein Ayaan or Tannu ka tanka toh nhi fit hone wala???? ❓ hehe main bhi na... Waiting for next wala update... Tc
Edited by ranya01 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
And sorry for not commenting on last part
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a nice one Ananya!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part annu
Next part baad me padh lungi
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part.
thank God Tanveer is not bad in this story(at least now).
OMG...the Irfan scene was hilarious...Tanveer is such a devil but he deserved that.
poor Kumud...she felt left out...
oww..Ayan had a crush on Tanu...
cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
such an awesome update!!!😛tanveer did a fabulous job😆but my asmud bechaare!!!their stor is going to be disturbed now😭and ayaan's story,felt bad for him lol,thanku for the pm and update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
V nicee Ana

likee it v v much

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