Somethings Missing (poem) (Swaron)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hola!!

Every Swaron fan is missing Swaron and Sharon/Vrushika these days...so i thought even our Majnu wud be missing his Laila a lot...during this long time of separation...i know it was only for 10 days but for a couple like Swaron who are madly,crazily,unconditionally,eternally,heavenly,cutely,romantically, and i lost the words...it is like more than even a few centuries...both are craving to see each other...and also because of the deadly disease...they are apart...in this time of staying away from each other...Swayam thought of writing a poem for Sharon and here it goes...

I can see your pics..
I can hear your voice...
As long as i want...
Billion of times...
Still sometimes I feel...
Somethings missing...

I live only for you...
And know that feeling's same..
I sleep every night...
So that i can dream of you...
That deep eyes..
That sweet smile..
Those blushing cheeks...
Those twirling brows...
That caring look on your face...

I always feel this way...
So what you are not in front of me?
Your place lies somewhere else...
In the depth of my heart..
I know only one thing...
My love for you doesn't depends..
Because it is for what you are...

Still sometimes I feel...
Somethings missing...

and he finished...

Rohan :)

P.S.: Poem credits to me myself..:P

Edited by rohanmalhotra15 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesm poem.
Do write more.
U hv gud writing skill
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww nice poem
loved it
loved how you described swayam's emotion
loved it totally it was swayamish do write more and thnx for the pm and kep pming me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one and apt for the current situation.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow amazing...i feel glad to be torture by such update loved it lol 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Wow amazing...i feel glad to be torture by such update loved it lol 👍🏼


hahaha...actually someone told me dat self criticizing is fun...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rohanmalhotra15



hahaha...actually someone told me dat self criticizing is fun...😆



Maybe thats y u come across as sn fab writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome work dear..loved the way u portrayed his feelings..

Well-written..u should write more often 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nicely done , again loved it .👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rohan that was awesomely beautiful 🤗
Loved it ❤️
You should start writing more often yaar 😉
Aakhir hume bhi toh opportunity mile aapka kaam padhne ka 😉

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