Somethings Missing (poem) (Swaron)

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Rohan, awesome poem. 👏

Swayam's feelings are beautifully penned. 👍🏼 ⭐️

N yes this was not at all a torture. 😵

I felt amazing reading it.

Why don't you write more?

Like OS/SS/FF??

U can try your hands on them also..😊

Quote

BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome and romanticly written!
Truely express the feelings of a person who is away from his lover!
Yeah u are right u feel this! So was this😳
do express more!😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: *Dev.*
veryn nice poem rohan!

thnx dude...even ur poemm was vry nice...

Originally posted by: swaron9113
wow awesm poem.
Do write more.
U hv gud writing skill

thnx for the appreciation...i dont abt writing more or not...i will think abt it...anways thnx a lot

Originally posted by: cenation123
wowww nice poem
loved it
loved how you described swayam's emotion
loved it totally it was swayamish do write more and thnx for the pm and kep pming me

welcum for the pm...and thnk u so much...i m glad u liked it...

Originally posted by: nami2811
Nice one and apt for the current situation.. :)

i wrote for the situation...ao apt to hona hi tha :P...thnx a lot...

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Maybe thats y u come across as sn fab writer

i m definatly not a fab writer but yaa that cud be the reason...thnx but...if u thnk so.. . :)

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Awesome work dear..loved the way u portrayed his feelings..

Well-written..u should write more often 😊

thnx a lot deepika...its gud that u liked it...being liked by a fav writer like you is like a privilege... :P :)

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha
wow nicely done , again loved it .👏

thnx for both...i m glad seeing people liking my work...thnx

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu
Rohan that was awesomely beautiful 🤗
Loved it ❤️
You should start writing more often yaar 😉
Aakhir hume bhi toh opportunity mile aapka kaam padhne ka 😉

hey bholi bahli bacchi...

u really liked it????

hmmm

itna jhut nahi bolte...woh bhi aik hi post main... :P

jokes apart...thnx for liking it...

and thnx...for unknowingly inspiring me wid ur works...thnx...

Originally posted by: Anindita91
Rohan, awesome poem. 👏
Swayam's feelings are beautifully penned. 👍🏼 ⭐️
N yes this was not at all a torture. 😵
I felt amazing reading it.
Why don't you write more?
Like OS/SS/FF??
U can try your hands on them also..😊

thnx...torture wali baat...toh jst like dat...

its nyc that u felt amzing... :)

thnx for the reply...

and writing more...i ll see and try... :)

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Awesome and romanticly written!
Truely express the feelings of a person who is away from his lover!
Yeah u are right u feel this! So was this😳
do express more!😃

its true i felt it...by on behalf on swayam...

so actually credit goes to him... :P

thnx for liking the poem...