ArHi OS - If I Didn't Have You

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gah! That made me cry!!!

This is beautiful Anju! The way they met, I could totally picture a smitten Arnav and the ever so caring khushi! And then they got married and were happy and the. The accident... 😭

I could feel Arnav's pain quite literally, the way you described him! His anger, throwing things and doing physical damage to take out the anger he has against Khushi's condition. You could feel his guilt, his yearning for her, the hope that she will be okay! I almost thought the ending would be sad, but thank goodness you didn't do that *phew*

At the end, I had happy tears! What a lovely story, teaching us to always be grateful for what we have. We never know what will happen, and accidents such as these are inevitable and painful when it results in loss :( Thank goodness khushi is okay, and they have eachother <3

LOVED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's awesome girl.
Arnav's angry being the cause of his wife's situation, helpless , fear of losing her , his negligence, his love everything portrait beautifully. Good job.
Their first meeting. Shock with behavior of receptionist then her beauty ... like Diwali day he walked to her trance and complement. .. the way he asked her for dating that's so beautiful.
Their happy family small small quarrel. .. wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah that was painfully beautifully :') The emotions were so well written and your choice of words is beautiful <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! Just wow! It was beautiful..!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os
you've written it so beautifully
just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a sweet love story !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful os..arnav stalking khushi for 3 months..thats new.
otherwise arnav does everything in fast forward mode..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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šŸ‘šŸ¼ WOW THIS OS IN ONE WORD IS AWESOME NICE UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written you describes arnavs pain so well and the flashbacks were so cute except the part.

Would love to read more of your work on these two :)

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