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Simran

@Simran.22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Beautiful os!

Loved it.

Thanks for the pm!

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

that was great

good job

glad that Khushi's ok

thanks for the PM😊

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Phewww. . She survived. . Awsum . .
And the sexy scar ,here turned out to b a result of the horrible accident
Thanx fo d pm

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

That was so touching and beautifully written piece!!!

Could feel ASRs hurt and helplessness in being left alone in this world without his 'khushi' around. You brought it out effortlessly.

And as always khushi opens her eye at the right time to reassure her arnav.

Thanks for the PM and loved reading this OS.

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Such an awesome OS

his pain was so heartbreaking

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

This was beautiful.
His pain, anger at himself for the condition of Khushi was so well portrayed.
I was afraid if it could have unhappy ending but I'm glad that she is alive and now in her senses.

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Wow, what an emotional update and such a beautiful story depicted in just one chapter. Its was heart wrenching to see Arnav in that state, fear to loose someone close, immense guilt and his love for Khushi. Fantastic OS dear, brilliantly written 👏

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Oh that was emotional and very beautiful!!

Brilliant!!

👏

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binimoti

@binimoti

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

this was brilliant loved it

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

A thoroughly moving story... the love between the two permeates the story and the fear of loss is palpable. Arnav's sense of guilt is understandable but the strength of their love seems to have pulled Khushi back from the very jaws of death!

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