MY FIRST POEM!! ^_^

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey everyone!!! This is shikha...Its my first poem...just an attempt !!!! 😳
N its really too short n simple!! 😛 ...n based on life...
Ok as its my first try...i would like to dedicate this to my best frnd yashi(--taareylove--)
N no doubt its even dedicated to all my 53 frnds till now!! 😆 😃

~~~SOMETIMES~~~

Sometimes we are stuck
Between the right and the wrong
Sometimes we make mistakes
But to realize we take too long

Sometimes we break the trust
Of the one's we love the most
Sometimes we hurt d people
For whom we care the most

Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar

Never let these sometimes affect you everytime
Cuz life's too short to regret and cry
Life is nothing without these sometimes
So put on a smile n to make others happy u should try!!!

😊 KEEP SMILING😊

I know ki it wasnt dat gud...bt pls tell kaisa laga ...n do give ur suggestions 😳😊
Positive as well as negative comments r welcomed!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/unres
awesome poem Shikha 👏
and it's true 👏
and this stanza is just out of the world
Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar
amazing 👏
Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shikha!! Thanks a lot for posting this poem, dear...
Trust me, I really loved this poem a lot..
It depicts the truth of every life in this world...
It shows the reality..
I really really loved it a lot..
I read it two times..
Once the way it is..
And the second time, imagining TaaRey..lol..
TaaRey are there everywhere for me..
Loved it, dear..
Keep writing more and more poems..
And also keep posting them..
I would love to read them..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful poem Shikha, this poem describe our everyday life and how we think

I love it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Shikha!! Thanks a lot for posting this poem, dear...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Trust me, I really loved this poem a lot..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">It depicts the truth of every life in this world...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">It shows the reality..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">I really really loved it a lot..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">I read it two times..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Once the way it is..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">And the second time, imagining TaaRey..lol..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">TaaRey are there everywhere for me..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Loved it, dear..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Keep writing more and more poems..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">And also keep posting them..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">I would love to read them..</font>


Awww...is it so...ayesha u really made my day yaar!!!
Aaj tak sirf sabko lambe lambe comments deti thi...first tym itna acha comment diya hai kisine muje...really feeling gud!
Ab mai sochne pe majbur hogayi hu dat isme taarey ko kaise fit karu 😆
Thankuu soo much!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha.

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff0099">Beautiful poem Shikha, this poem describe our everyday life and how we think</font>


<font color="#ff0099">I love it</font>


Thanks a lot natasha!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shikha its awesome wow i dont know what to say
Hatoff dude it has became a my fav poem now loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanaparveen

Shikha its awesome wow i dont know what to say
Hatoff dude it has became a my fav poem now loved it


Thanku soo much dear...it became ur fav poem?? Thanxx alot
Never expected such gud response! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful poem... continue to write dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waw yaar itna achha kaise lika
mjhe tohpoem ka o bhi nhi aata
nice poen loved it...

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